Ich weiss nicht, ob Sie dies lesen, aber ich wollte (musste) etwas sagen. Ich habe jetzt viermal gelesen and es wird nie langweilig. Ihr Englisch ist nicht perfekt und es gibt ein paar Fehler aber es macht nichts. (This is where my German fails me.) In fact, the mistakes, such as they are, only add to the story, as it suits Justin's view of the world.

There are some words (like "of course") that I would love to know what word you'd use for it in German, as I know it would make more sense in German but can't for the life of my figure out what word would be used.

Neil Patrick Harris in a room with Brian and Justin? I think I might have just exploded with fangirl happiness.

I saw your name with "new" next to it and got really excited. I then realised it was an old story I'd already read and my excitement disappeared, as something I've already read is not nearly as fun as a new story. 

But it did make me realise I haven't commented on the last two chapters of tame the wild stallion, which is very amiss of me. And as I'm too lazy to do two reviews, so here's two-in-one. :) (I don't think I ever commented on this, but without re-reading it, I don't remember enough of what happened to be able to comment on it. apart from yay jealous!Brian!)

I'd had my suspicions (obviously) that whatshisface had something to do with Brian's cousin's death (as you can see, I'm great with names) and it was wonderful to have them confirmed. But I do feel really bad for Will and Sarah having their son's death dragged out in the open like that and having to think about it. I never believed (again, obviously) that Jared had anything to do with Justin's accident, but it's nice to have it confirmed for the other characters.

For some reason, I didn't get an email that you'd updated this (for here and ff), so I was delayed a day in reading this. (I also blame the start of the new seasons on tv for distracting me so I didn't check earlier.)

Anyway, the whole chapter got a fangirl squee from me. And I'm happy Justin's finally gotten over himself. And damn you for your secret Daphne/girls plotting.

Just what I always need; yet another story I've become addicted to. Surpisingly enough, I haven't actually read that many cancer stories where Brian's cancer comes back (and I've read a lot of B/J stories), so I'm really enjoying reading something different. And I love the flashback style of your writing and both Brian and Justin's viewpoints of some scenes and I really really hope you update this soon. (But I understand where you're coming from. I'm not a slow writer (once I start a story, I'm usually finished within an hour or so, as I don't write particular long ones, but I am slow at getting motivated to write. Which is why I don't write multi-chapter stories.)

I like the amount of detail you're putting into Justin's eating disorder/body dysmorphia. I hate when authors give a character an illness etc and then they're over it way too quickly. 

And I love Brian coming to the rescue, as that's one of my favourite types of stories. 

I was just lamenting the lack of new QaF fics and was about to resign myself to reading angst filled House fics when I saw this. So I thank you for saving me from far too much angst. :)

I love the image of Justin and Brian riding a motorbike together, especially with Justin in charge. And I love how smitten (because smitten is a great word) Brian is with Justin in general. So I'm really hoping that the next chapter/one after that will include the confrontation and everyone finding out about everything?

I have no words to describe how freaking ass happy I am right now.

But this means Gus is gonna hook up with Tristan, right?

And that's the worst possible place to end the chapter. But I can't be annoyed, as I'm so happy it's finally happened.

No! Gus does not get to act like the injured party. Justin met Brian first and made it perfectly clear to Gus many a time that all he was interested in was friendship, so Gus has no right at all to feel betrayed or issue that ultimatum. Brian and Justin did nothing wrong. Gus acting like a spoiled teenager resulted in Justin getting hurt. I want to punch him for being a dick. 

And Owen? That's too much drama to handle at once. 

I knew it! Tristan to the rescue. :) And Gus realised how good he's got it and finally hooked up with Tristan and Justin's going to be okay. And he knows Brian loves him. This was a great chapter to wake up to.

NO! It can't be finished. I refuse to accept it.

I'm having a crappy day and the pictures of fat Justin made me laugh, so thank you for that.

I love the plot of this story and can't wait to read more.

I always seem to ending reading your stories at night when I really should be sleeping. But I'm not going to let something as insignificant as sleep deprivation stop me from reading them.

That makes sense. I guess I'm just not used to people actually bothering to use the correct terminology/spelling for the setting of the story. (I just read a story based on Sherlock, where the author referred to trousers as pants and referenced blocks (as in, they were two blocks from the police station) and it really annoyed me.)

I take back my complaint about you ending the prologue too soon, as I'm glad it made me continue reading because I love this. 

I'm super bad at reviewing, which is why I'm only just getting around to doing so. 

I love the plot line of this (I'm actually following another story based on tarot cards, but they couldn't be more different). I have to admit, I wasn't really expecting much based on the summary, but I am so happy to have been proven wrong. And I love that it's different from pretty much every other post-5.13 stories I've read. And all the plots twists and snippets of information you include makes me want to keep reading. 

No you didn't, but thank you. I've been waiting for the Blay/Qhuinn book since the end of Phury's book. I honestly thought that it would the next book after Payne, so was very annoyed when it was Tohr instead. I pre-ordered it on my kindle, but stupid Amazon have moved the release date from the 26th to the 28th, which is rather annoying.

I wish we had girl scouts selling cookes in England, as they sound so good. What are they raising money for anyway?

(I was so happy to see you'd posted, as I was getting a tad bit worried when you hadn't updated in a while. It's stupid. I get less concerned when I haven't talked to my sister for longer time periods.)

Brian is going to be so annoyed when he finds out. 

I'm so glad you translated this, as it's really good. And if you hadn't said English isn't your first language, I wouldn't have noticed. I've read worse written stories by authors whose first language is English.

I want to write one of my normal rambling reviews, but I'm tired and somewhat in pain and want to catch up on all the other fics I'm following (damn lack of wifi), so it's just going to be, yay for Justin in trunks and sufer Brian. 

I knew it! I love jealous Brian. 

Pick one. New York or Ethan.

I like Missing better than I'll Come for You.

Also, Michael! What a dick. And poor Brian. So looking forward to reading more.

I must have missed something, as I'm very confused as to Justin losing his memories. First John kept acting like he had, then Sasha mentioned it in this chapter and some if your reviewers had figured it out as well and I'm just left here thinking, "when did this happen? and how did I miss it?" But I'm so happy Sasha got rescued and remembers everything. I really hope she's planning on finding Justin.

Gotta say, I'm a little bit confused (some of it is down to not remembering what happened in the previous chapter). But I'm confused in a good way. As it makes me want to keep reading to find out just what's going on. Far as I can make out, Justin, Connor and Ben/Brandon (I got lost there) are fuck buddies due to convience. And Ethan wants to sleep with Justin, and Brian, but so far hasn't been successful. Brian is toying with Ethan to make Justin jealous, as he wants to sleep with Justin. (More than once, I'm assuming.) And Connor, Justin and Ethan are all part of the same crew and Brian is the new guy filling in for the guy who had the affair or whatever. Is that right? (I'm also confused as to what their mission is, but I'm less bothered about that, as it doesn't seem to be central to the plot.)

(And in reference to your previous response, I initally didn't get the B1, B2 referene as I haven't watched Bananas in Pjyamas in forever. But once you'd mentioned it, I knew what you were talking about.)

Seriously? What is wrong with you? How dare you! Letting the doctor release Brian only minutes after he's woken up from a coma?! (I'm kidding! The doctor is obviously very inept and has no clue about actually being a doctor.)

And whilst I know the characters are OOC and their personalities are exaggerated from canon, I still hate how they think they can act like this. Especially Debbie, who seems to think she's entitled to know everyone's business. And what the fuck was Michael doing breaking a window, just because Brian and Justin wanted some time to themselves? And then being a whiny bitch about it.

Justin is going to be soooo pissed when he finds out Michael stole Brian away in the dead of night (okay, my imagination might be running away with me there) and that he did so despite Brian obviously having amnesia (I think Justin should sue the doctor for being the worst doctor in the history of the world). Please please say Justin punches him? (I'm not normally anti-Michael, I find him more irritating than anything, but the way he's acting here, he deserves to be punched.)

One minor minor critisism. It's not even that, really. It's just in the first chapter, you had Brian recognise Mel's voice whilst they were in his Loft and then again when they were in the car.

I now know how you feel when I post short chapters complete with cliff hangers.

But yes! for Justin turning up and Brian realising there's something off with what Michael's been telling him.

Reading this was a terrible idea. Not because it's an awful story and badly written, but because it's completely the opposite and has made me want to re-watch The Breakfast Club for the gazillionth time when I really should be writing an essay due monday.

Also, one of the things I really love about fics based on actual books/films etc is seeing the parallels between them and so far I am very impressed with how you've written it and I'm so looking forward to seeing how you write the rest of it. (Some people completely screw up the characters and make them unrecognisable, but you've managed to make each character true not only to The Breakfast Club, but also to QaF, so I applaud your writing ability to be able to do so.)

Stupid placement and Uni and life. But I finish my first year of Uni tomorrow, so I'll have plenty of time for reading and reviewing. :)

Go Liam for finally making Brian realise what was right in front of his nose. And yay! Brian for finally deciding to do something about it.

(Also, I'm loving the english-isms you've used, even though mate is more of an english, rather than irish, thing.)

I unfortunately do not channel Justin in the artistic department, but I am very willing to beta. I automatically beta when I read anyway, so I might as well do it properly.

I utterly suck at reviewing. I have been reading as you've been posting, I just usually run out of time to review.

But I have time now, so here goes. (I can't remember the last chapter I reviewed, so I'll guess and do one big one now.) First, StrataG is a ridiculous name (sorry!) and Justin should be happy he never has to work for them and the miserable excuses for human beings who work there again. Second, I may have mentioned something about Palmer being a dick and trying to escape from the restaurant, but if I haven't, he's a dick and it was a dick move. But he really should have learnt by now he can't outsmart, or outrun, Brian.

Marcum being put in his place was great; indignant and pissed off Justin is always fun. Brian knowing the dean came as kind of a shock, but him orchestrating Justin interning at Kinnetik instead did not.

And regardless of how many times I read it, I always love when Lindsay and Mel meet Justin after Gus already has and Justin is kinda filling the boyfriend role in Brian's life. And Mel says something bad about Brian in front of Mel, Lindsay tries to calm the situation, but Justin gets mad on Brian's behalf. It may be predictable and overplayed (assuming you even go that route), but it still makes me smile each and every time.

I apparently managed to sign myself out whilst attempting to submit a review, so I'm not sure if the review was actually submitted or not. So here's attempt number 2.

Firstly, your English is so good. A beta reader might be benefical, mainly because you have made some minor mistakes (which are predominantly using the wrong word or missing out a word ("I want to divorce" should either be "I want a divorce" or "I want to divorce you". And in your first paragraph, it should have been "came to the realisation" or "came to realise")) which don't detract from the story at all, but it might be helpful to you to know what the mistakes are and how to correct them. I've actually noticed when a non-native English speaker makes these types of mistakes, it's because they're using their native language word order/phrasing and might not actually realise it's different in English. But I repeat, overall your English is ridiculously good, you're an amazing writer (I'm actually jealous) and it's better than dozens of native English speakers' writing.

I'm really really enjoying this so far. When I first read the summary, I thought it would be like another slave!fic I'd read (Companion by Julesmonster on fanfiction.net) but was pleased to discover it wasn't (not because Companion isn't good, which it is, but because it's always nice to read something different).

I love the your characterisations, especially Michael, and their interactions with each other. And I love how well written it is (it's always nice to read a fic where I'm not correcting grammar and spelling in my head).

And please please please let Brian keep Justin. I would threaten to stop reading if he doesn't, but there's no way I would actually be able to do that, so I shall have to settle with pouting in a corner if Brian gives Justin away.

(And if you've not read Companion, I really suggest you do, as well as her other stories.)