Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Penname: zsadistwhore [Contact]
Real name: Nikki
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Member Since: August 22, 2012
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Kiss me alright by jerksbitch Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 182]
Summary:

 

Autistic Justin Taylor (18) gets transferred from the children and youth psychiatry/Harrisburg to St. James, an institution for mentally ill people in Pittsburgh....and Justin is really concerned because the new tower is so much higher than the last one and how should the prince ever be able to find him now? A story about the love for a very special person and how to look at the world with different eyes.


Categories: Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 150093
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2008 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time

Ich weiss nicht, ob Sie dies lesen, aber ich wollte (musste) etwas sagen. Ich habe jetzt viermal gelesen and es wird nie langweilig. Ihr Englisch ist nicht perfekt und es gibt ein paar Fehler aber es macht nichts. (This is where my German fails me.) In fact, the mistakes, such as they are, only add to the story, as it suits Justin's view of the world.

There are some words (like "of course") that I would love to know what word you'd use for it in German, as I know it would make more sense in German but can't for the life of my figure out what word would be used.

 
From the inside by rromantic Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Feature

fEATURED STORY FOR AUGUST 2013

Fic starts at end of Queer as Folk 307, and continuous with a different way 308 could have happened.

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Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Could be Canon, One-Off Fic, Romance, Spoilers, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5961
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: August 07, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this forever ago on fanfiction.net, and have been wanting to re-read it for a while now. Except my desire to read it never came at a convenient time for me to attempt to find it. So I am very happy it's a feature story, as it allowed me to finally (I mean likes months of wanting to read it) re-read it.

 
Jealous Much? by Wildsweet_angel Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Brian works with actor Neil Patrick Harris on an ad campaign. Justin is jealous, especially when Brian starts spending nights with the grown up Doogie Howser, who is super hot, and also happens to be gay.
Categories: Brian/Justin, Humor, One-Off Fic Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2392
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: January 03, 2009


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: September 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Jealous Much?

Neil Patrick Harris in a room with Brian and Justin? I think I might have just exploded with fangirl happiness.



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Timeless by cynical21 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 858]
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for June 2018***

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Brian and Justin try to cope with life apart - with the marriage that did not happen and the love that would not die


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other-Relationship, Romance, Violence Characters: Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 784049
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2018


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: November 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I was listening to As I Am (from The Big Gay Musical) as I was reading Emmett's conversation with Brian, completely by accident, but it was the most perfect coincidence and combination.

As much as I love quick happy ending fics (you know, where after like a month of being apart, one decides they can't live without the other and move to whether they are to be together forever), I love yours (from what I've read so far) because it's more true to how I believe Brian and Justin would actually act. (But I do have to admit to skipping right to the end, just to see, before starting to read properly.)

 
Summary: Feature

**Featured Story for September 2014** (by bob)

Do Brian's rules apply to his lover as well?  A client sets his sights on a certain intern. Post 308 Story/AU.

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Cynthia, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 16387
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2011 Updated: September 14, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: September 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

I saw your name with "new" next to it and got really excited. I then realised it was an old story I'd already read and my excitement disappeared, as something I've already read is not nearly as fun as a new story. 

But it did make me realise I haven't commented on the last two chapters of tame the wild stallion, which is very amiss of me. And as I'm too lazy to do two reviews, so here's two-in-one. :) (I don't think I ever commented on this, but without re-reading it, I don't remember enough of what happened to be able to comment on it. apart from yay jealous!Brian!)

I'd had my suspicions (obviously) that whatshisface had something to do with Brian's cousin's death (as you can see, I'm great with names) and it was wonderful to have them confirmed. But I do feel really bad for Will and Sarah having their son's death dragged out in the open like that and having to think about it. I never believed (again, obviously) that Jared had anything to do with Justin's accident, but it's nice to have it confirmed for the other characters.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki - sorry to burst your bubble, my friend. The featured story is always a completed one; that is one of the requirements.;)  I hope you enjoyed it the first time around, though.

Thank you for the comments about "Stallion."  It was bound to be painful for Will and Sarah to learn the truth, but I think in the long run they would have preferred that to being kept in the dark.  His death HAS been an integral part of the story, but is only one component of it. There is still the question of what will become of  Brian at the end of the summer. That will be resolved eventually, with a few surprises along the way.

Thanks for reading both stories. Oh, and if it helps, I DO have a new story coming that I've been working on behind the scenes. It's almost done, so I should start posting it soon.  I've just made myself a promise to try and not post anything else new unless it's done first. Not sure I can always stick with that, but I'm going to try, at least until I have both of my other WIPs done first.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Summary: Feature

Loose adaption of the movie - Justin and Brian are living separate lives in different cities, raising one twin alone; what happens when their two daughters meet unexpectedly as pre-teens?  **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!**


Categories: Minor Character Death, QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Drama, Humor, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 388729
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2011 Updated: February 20, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: July 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Mother, May I?

I had an issue with Daphne saying twins run in her family, as I was going on the assumption she'd been implanted with fertilised eggs. I then thought it was probably more like that Brian/Justin (I forget if you said which one it was) jerked off in a cup and squirted it up her, seeing as she's both the egg donor and carrier.

Also, Brian did manage one time to fix a lamp, so he can't be completely hopeless.

I also hope Katie and Kaylee have planned what they're going to do once they've gotten Justin into the house, as there are other bedrooms for him to sleep in.

(These are the types of reviews you get when I want to review, which is all the time, but can't think of anything to say. And I know I don't have to review, but I feel bad if I don't. So you get rambling reviews instead of anything coherent.)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Well, a 'rambling review' is better than none at all.;)  And you're right about Daphne; it was more of the same type procedure that Mel and Lindsay used to get pregnant.  Brian isn't totally inept, but I don't think his talents are too much in the mechanical area (unless it involves bodily functions - ha!).  And I'm not so sure that Justin actually needs to be in the master bedroom; that hasn't prevented him and Brian from engaging in a little bit of hanky-panky already, despite being in separate living quarters.  I think just being under the same roof is going to be hard enough; that, plus, some other issues that will spring up to create a little conflict will actually prove to them that, while they do love each other, they HAVE led different lives and will need to work through some things before everything is the way they want it to be.

I hope you are continuing to enjoy the story. Thank you again for reading and for the feedback.  ~Kim

 

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: September 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 33: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

 

For some reason, I didn't get an email that you'd updated this (for here and ff), so I was delayed a day in reading this. (I also blame the start of the new seasons on tv for distracting me so I didn't check earlier.)

 

Anyway, the whole chapter got a fangirl squee from me. And I'm happy Justin's finally gotten over himself. And damn you for your secret Daphne/girls plotting.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Thanks for reading this update and for the comments.  It WAS feeling a little lonely here.;)  Perhaps the email notification system isn't working. Sometimes it seems to do that.  I keep getting review notifications, too, when there aren't any, or duplicate notifications for the same review. (Ghosts already??).  Anyway, glad that you liked this one. I suspect the girls and Daphne will be caught in their scheme at some point, but I think the boys are finally on the right track here.  I'm going to enjoy taking them out on 'dates.'  Not sure if Brian's idea of a 'date' will be a conventional one, though.;)

I will work hard to update this again soon. I see maybe two (?) more chapters of this before it's done. Thanks for all the support, my friend; I truly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Breakneck by methylethyl Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Feature

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Breakneck

Justin watches the last vestiges of support crumble beneath his feet, sending him into freefall. He can only close his eyes and pray he’ll land somewhere soft. 


Categories: FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Drama, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 107817
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2011 Updated: August 20, 2011


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: September 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: cling

I am so glad I found this on here, as I'm currently following it on fanfiction.net and it's so frustrating waiting for you to post the next chapter, as I am totally hooked.



Author's Response:

Lol. Yeah, I love it when stories that I'm following are fully posted on other websites. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

 
Stronger by q_dicted Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

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Summary: That which does not kill us..

Timeline: Post 513. All canon assumed. Spoilers for all seasons.

Warnings: Strong language. Explicit sexual content depending on the chapter.

Disclaimer: I own nothing except my thoughts, and even then sometimes, I rent. All recognizable characters are the property of CowLip and Showtime. 

Author's Note: This is a work in progress. I am a slow writer - there's no getting around that - but I promise that it will be completed. Comments feed the muse. Just sayin'.

4/8/22  So. That author's note was written a long, long time ago. I wrote it with the best of intentions, I swear. But life happened, and for reasons I won't go into here, I couldn't bring myself to continue writing a story with this subject matter. But that little folder has lived on my desktop for all this time, and I have never forgotten where I left our boys. And so, one day a month or so ago, I opened it up and spent some time reminding myself just how much I love Brian and Justin and Queer As Folk. I still have reservations writing about cancer for 'entertainment'. I am no medical professional, nor have I personally experienced anything like what Brian is going to go through. But I've done more research for this than anything else I've ever done, and I've tried to treat it with the sensitivity and respect it deserves. Please forgive any inaccuracies.

I don't even know if anyone will give it a chance again, but I owe to those of you who trusted me and read it all those years ago (and to the boys) to keep my word and try to finish this beast. I hope you'll join me.

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Lindsay
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 54988
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: April 09, 2022


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: April 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Part 4

Just what I always need; yet another story I've become addicted to. Surpisingly enough, I haven't actually read that many cancer stories where Brian's cancer comes back (and I've read a lot of B/J stories), so I'm really enjoying reading something different. And I love the flashback style of your writing and both Brian and Justin's viewpoints of some scenes and I really really hope you update this soon. (But I understand where you're coming from. I'm not a slow writer (once I start a story, I'm usually finished within an hour or so, as I don't write particular long ones, but I am slow at getting motivated to write. Which is why I don't write multi-chapter stories.)



Author's Response:

Hi there! I'm glad you're enjoying the flashback and different POV's of the same scenes. It's the first time I've done that. It's definitely a tough subject matter but hopefully the ride will continue to be interesting! I envy anybody who can write quickly, lol. I don't have that gene. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it!

 
Porcelain Angel by Sunshine92 Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

What if New York hadn't worked out the way Justin had hoped? 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 24290
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2012 Updated: October 15, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: January 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I just wanted to say that whilst your English isn't perfect, this is way better written than some stories I've read written by native English speakers.

Also, I love Justin having bulimia (or whatever he's meant to have.) It's an angle I haven't read about what happens after Justin goes to New York, so it's wonderful to read something different. I just hope Brian finds out soon and swoops in to save the day.

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I like the amount of detail you're putting into Justin's eating disorder/body dysmorphia. I hate when authors give a character an illness etc and then they're over it way too quickly. 

And I love Brian coming to the rescue, as that's one of my favourite types of stories. 



Author's Response:

I hate when authors do that to, because issues/disorders like this one isn't going away that quickly, so it makes it quite unreal. And yes, Brian to the rescue!

Thanks for the review. 

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: HELP (NOT A CHAPTER)

Talk to Luke first, as Brian will get a more honest answer from him than Justin. And if Brian has facts, Justin can't brush off his concerns. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! x

 
Summary:

B/J One-shot. Brian's own personal, public-service announcer is at it again.  Fluff.

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1366
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2012 Updated: November 22, 2012


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: November 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: PSA No. 2,145

I was just lamenting the lack of new QaF fics and was about to resign myself to reading angst filled House fics when I saw this. So I thank you for saving me from far too much angst. :)



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading and for commenting, Nikki; I'm so happy you enjoyed this one.  I thought it WAS a little quiet on here, too.:)  Must be the holidays.  Thanks again for the feedback; I really do need to write some shorter one-fics in between my other epic adventures  - ha!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

BTW- sorry about the typo in the last paragraph - had grateful instead of gratitude.  AARGH!  I changed it:)

 
Summary: Feature

Brian unexpectedly becomes a father at the age of 16.  What happens 16 years later when a certain 18-year-old blond unknowingly attracts the attention of both father and son?  Will Brian sacrifice his son's love for another's?   **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE**

*BANNER AND STORY IDEA BY STAR-SHINE GREEN*


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Minor's Sexuality, Romance Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 127715
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2012 Updated: January 17, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Movie

"For just one fleeting moment, he thought that this must be what Gus might have felt like as he waited for his own date to appear yesterday." That sentence amused me so much. 

And I love that Brian isn't hiding his feelings. Well, at least not to himself. 
And on top of waiting for the confrontation scene, I am now waiting for something to happen between Gus and Tristan. 

Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Well, at least we've given you plenty to think about now - LOL!  I sense some definite foreboding in this chapter; you know it's about to all come out fairly soon, and probably with disastrous results.  (Of course, we wouldn't have a story if we didn't throw the angst in there..).

And yes, I couldn't help including that sentence in there; how ironic is that??  If only he knew it was the same guy he and his son were pining over at the moment...

Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments, Nikki; we'll get this updated very soon - Michal tells me the ballgame is up in the next chapter!  Thanks again.  *Hug*  ~Michal and Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: April 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

I love the image of Justin and Brian riding a motorbike together, especially with Justin in charge. And I love how smitten (because smitten is a great word) Brian is with Justin in general. So I'm really hoping that the next chapter/one after that will include the confrontation and everyone finding out about everything?



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Thank you for reading and for the comments, Sweetie; Michal and I appreciate your support.  Michal is kind of the 'driver' here, since it was her idea, so while I think the game is coming up in the next chapter, I'm not sure if that will be leading to the 'great epiphany,' at least not just yet.  But I know you - and the other readers, undoubtedly - are getting anxious for the big reveal, and it does promise to definitely bring on the angst. So we'll see what we can do.;)  Thank you for following the story, though, and for bearing with us in the meantime.  We promise to get this updated just as soon as possible.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: May 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Perfect Shot - and a Near Miss

Seriously? They were so close! But I'm glad Tristan's feelings for Gus have been confirmed, because surely that means something's going to happen between them?

And more surprises? I'm not sure I can cope with the excitement of more surprises.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments! I know - soooo close!  But we needed to interject just a bit more drama here.;)  And yes, there WILL be a few more surprises coming up before the big reveal.  I'm so glad Michal asked me along on the ride for this one!  Thanks again for taking the time to leave feedback; she and I appreciate that very much.  We're getting much closer to the truth coming out now.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Here Comes the Boom!

I have no words to describe how freaking ass happy I am right now.

But this means Gus is gonna hook up with Tristan, right?

And that's the worst possible place to end the chapter. But I can't be annoyed, as I'm so happy it's finally happened.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  I know!  But I think there was really no way to get into what's going to happen now in this chapter - obviously everything's about to come crashing down first.  As for what happens next, there's the real dilemma.  What is Brian going to do?  He can't have both his son and his lover, can he??  Hmm....only time will tell here.;)

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the comments; Michal and I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Here Comes the Boom!

I may cry if Brian ends up without Justin, even if it is only temporary, because Brian saw Justin first and Justin made his intention towards Gus very clear, so it's Gus's own fault for being upset.

Also, I can now focus on Lindsay being a bitch and hating her.



Author's Response:

LOL! Well, you do have that to fall back on.;)  Michal and I obviously have a lot of loose ends to tie up here, between this triangle, Owen's hatred, Lindsay fighting for custody...whew!  Needless to say, it's going to heat up now!  We'll do our best to update as soon as possible.  Thanks so much for reading and for commenting, Nikki.;)  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Desolation

No! Gus does not get to act like the injured party. Justin met Brian first and made it perfectly clear to Gus many a time that all he was interested in was friendship, so Gus has no right at all to feel betrayed or issue that ultimatum. Brian and Justin did nothing wrong. Gus acting like a spoiled teenager resulted in Justin getting hurt. I want to punch him for being a dick. 

And Owen? That's too much drama to handle at once. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  I know - drama overload here!  Mica is evil.;)  And totally agree with you about Gus, but you have to remember that he had just gotten hopeful that things might be taking a positive turn with him and Justin, and now this.  On top of that Brian will now be wondering about 'that kiss.'  I think somewhere along the line that will have to be explained.  This will actually turn out to be a good thing, though. 

Will tell Mica to hurry up with her part of the story's next chapter!  Thank you for the comments, my friend, as always; we greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Mica

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: October 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Please, God...

You always update in the middle of the night my time, but as I don't have lectures tomorrow, sleep is less important than reading this.

So so very glad Gus man-ed up and realised what a dick he'd been. And Brian obviously loves Justin, how was that even in question?

Also, knowing there's no way you'd kill of Justin (right?) made reading this chapter, and the following chapters, easier.

I really want Tristan to be rushing off to save Kayla and annoyed at Gus for not being there for her, and then have a massive argument with Gus when he shows up at the house, before making up in the best possible way. Or going to beat up Owen for being such a dick to his sister. I could go on and on, but it's 2am, so I should really go to bed now.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  I know; why can't we all be in the same time zone?  Ha!  I'm glad you stayed up late enough to read this, though; hopefully it was worth the insomnia.;)  There's going to be a lot going on in the next chapter, but I do think that Gus and Tristan are finally about to bond here over Kayla and Justin's accident;)  Thanks for the feedback, my friend.  *Hugs*  Mika and Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: October 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: First Kiss

I knew it! Tristan to the rescue. :) And Gus realised how good he's got it and finally hooked up with Tristan and Justin's going to be okay. And he knows Brian loves him. This was a great chapter to wake up to.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend. Yes, things are slowly being righted here, although we still have Owen's fate and Lindsay's custody battle to handle.  I think we'll probably have two more chapters before we wrap this one up. Thanks for all your support!  Mika and I really appreciate that.  *Hugs* ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: November 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Sweet, Sweet Love

Here I am, super excited because Tristan and Gus are finally together and you have to go and spoil my fun by mentioning an epilogue. I'm not ready for this to end!



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Well, I consider that a big compliment.  Eventually all stories must conclude (even mine - ha!).  Mika and I will do our best to wrap everything up into a nice package in the next chapter.  If it's any consolation, I think it will be a long one.;) Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend! We greatly appreciate the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: January 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: A Dream Becomes a Reality

NO! It can't be finished. I refuse to accept it.

 



Author's Response:

LOL! Hi, Nikki! Well, Mika and I will take that as a compliment.;)  Thank you for reading and for all the support!  It's been a long time coming, and has been a challenge coordinating it between a co-writer who lives halfway across the world.  But look at it this way; if I can finish up "Parent Trap," which is close, then I might just see a Tricky reappearance on the horizon.;)  Thanks again for reading.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
In Too Deep by IcedCupcake Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

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Brian is a self made billionaire who wants and needs no one. Justin is a struggling artist who just wants to support his family. When Justin witnesses a murder these two very different men will find themselves thrown together deep into a conspiracy that neither of them understand.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Romance, Violence Characters: Debbie, Ethan Gold, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 99856
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2012 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: January 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Caught.

Just so you can hit your goal of 200 reviews. I originally started reading this over on ff, then saw you'd updated on here more than on ff.

Anyway, I totally love this and started to re-read it, but then real life got in the way (as it so often does).



Author's Response:

That is so sweet of you!!!  Thank you, I've never had such positive feedback in a story before so I really wanted to hit my goal.  *hugs*  Yeah I've actually stopped posting over there.  Not on purpose, but I always end up forgetting about it because this one has such dedicated readers that it just gets more attention.  XD

 
Summary:

Brian is forced to take dance lessons when he loses a bet.  But does his luck change when he meets his beautiful, blond, dance instructor?  B/J AU Romance. 

*STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!*

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance Characters: Brian, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Justin, Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 42256
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2013 Updated: January 11, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Getting to Know Each Other Better

I've been waiting patiently for you to update this on ff, having not realised there were more chapters on here. Discovering this has made me so very happy. :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  Yes, I normally update both sites at the same time, but in this case you're absolutely right - there are more chapters over here at the moment. I'm delighted that you came over here to read them. I should be posting some more chapters later tonight; there are 19 in all.:)  Thank you so much for reading and commenting; I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
300 Pound Beauty by Blanca Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

"This story is about an overweight gay who undergoes extreme plastic surgeries to become a pop sensation for the sake of love."



***Title of the story has been changed***

Thank you so much AL for being my Beta!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Carl, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Emmett, Ethan, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 38043
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2013 Updated: February 10, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: January 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Misfortune

I'm having a crappy day and the pictures of fat Justin made me laugh, so thank you for that.

I love the plot of this story and can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I am glad that I had made you laugh. Thank you for reading and for liking the plot. I am editing now the next 2 chapters, hopefully I can upload tonight. :) :) :)

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: February 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: The Transformation Part 1

Poor Justin. Stupid Michael always ruining things.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much my friend for making this story as one of your favorites. I appreciate it much.

Well.....what do we expect from Michael? I just hate his guts!

{{{Hugs}}}

 
Summary:

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Justin moves to the south of France to live after his partner dies in an explosion at a gas station. His paintings are a success and he’s quite successful after a year.
Someone that fits the description of Brian pays the price in full of €2000 for his ‘Love Lost’ piece, and Justin thinks nothing of it. Then Justin gets a phone call asking for a painting of a ‘Naked Guy’, which he paints Brian onto. After the ‘Naked Guy’ painting is passed onto its owner, Justin gets kidnapped – But by who?

Beta: Judy ( bigj52 on Livejournal) Thank you so much Judy for taking the time to proof read this for me,you have no idea how much I appreciate that <3 <3

Banner: Ali from Livejournal (britinkinlor) You have an amazing gift darling. I appreciate the work you did <3<3

***Completed***


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues Characters: Brian, Debbie, Jennifer Taylor, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 17119
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2013 Updated: March 05, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm a tad bit confused about the timeline. I'm assuming since Gus is only 6, Brian "died" at the end of season 1?

But I like the epilogue, as I felt the previous ending was a bit rushed and missed out of having Brian reunite with his family. Apart from Brian making up with his mom, I really liked the rest of it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Yea, I timed it to take place at the end of season one.

I guess when Brian was away one of the things he may have thought about was his mother. Everyone wants to be loved and excepted by their parents and since Jack had died Brian didn't really care about him anyway I imagine. But when joan showed up at Debbie's I thought straight away that since Brian was changing his life,if his mom accepted him, then he would give her another chance too. It just seemed to fit for this story I guess.

Thanks again for reading and commenting ~ Yvonne xx

 
Three Little Words by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 37]
Summary: Feature

Valentine's Day One-Fic, Post-513 AU. All it took was three words to completely change an uneventful day into an amazing one...

 

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Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance, Valentine's Day Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: Scavenger Hunt Stories
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10028
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2013 Updated: February 13, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: February 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Come Find Me...

I always seem to ending reading your stories at night when I really should be sleeping. But I'm not going to let something as insignificant as sleep deprivation stop me from reading them.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  You're so good to me.:)  Now you know I just couldn't let Valentine's Day go by without dragging Brian kicking and screaming into my sappy brain - ha!  You're very sweet; thank you for reading and for the constant support.  Sorry about the sleep deprivation; now maybe you can have some sweet dreams, though.;)  Happy Valentine's Day to you!  Thanks again for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kim

 
Mia San Mia by tweedie Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

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It's that age old Brian and Justin story only with a few twists and turns, dribbles and nutmegs. Brian is our much loved ad exec and Justin is a 17 year old semi-pro soccer player trying to find his way in a world that doesn't always accept his sexuality.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Humor, Real Life Issues, Romance Characters: Brian, Chris Hobbs, Craig Taylor, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Ted, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 13264
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2013 Updated: March 13, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The End In The Beginning

I loved this and am looking forward to reading more. :)

I have a couple of questions.

1) Where are you from? Because at first I thought you might be from Germany, due to you supporting a German football team. But if you are, your English is very good. And I figure you can't be English, as you spelt colourful without a u.

2) What's the context of your gif?



Author's Response:

Many thanks for reading and reviewing.

1) I am British, I just happened to fall in love with German football as a total fluke since I spent 18 years hating the sport! As for the spelling, I figure it's like writing with an accent lol.

2) The gif is of Lars Bender celebrating a goal with Miro Klose against Denmark at the European Championships last year.

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The End In The Beginning

That makes sense. I guess I'm just not used to people actually bothering to use the correct terminology/spelling for the setting of the story. (I just read a story based on Sherlock, where the author referred to trousers as pants and referenced blocks (as in, they were two blocks from the police station) and it really annoyed me.)

 
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for January 2017***

Set approx. 1 month post-series: An accident leaves Brian with responsibility for raising his son. He gets a little help from his friends along the way, but will he be able to handle his new role of full-time father and everything that comes with it?  

This is Brian's journey... 

Enjoy this playlist to go with this story;
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLl5Rl-ELYMPvF5FHiYb7-dKqasvMfgzZY


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Minor Character Death, Real Life Issues, What If Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Gus, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 216803
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2013 Updated: January 02, 2017


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Seriously, you're ending the chapter there? Guess it means I'm going to have to keep reading to find out what happens. (I am very looking forward to reading more. Brian Kinney suddenly becoming a full time father isn't something i can resist.)



Author's Response:

It's a prologue! You're only meant to get a taste! :)

Thanks for reading and commenting, I do hope you enjoy what's to come!

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: I Would Walk 500 Miles

I take back my complaint about you ending the prologue too soon, as I'm glad it made me continue reading because I love this. 



Author's Response:

:)

thanks for sticking with it!

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: July 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Naked Love

Based purely on his canon character, Brian is out of character, yes. But after everything he's been through in this story, I don't think he's too out of character. Becoming a full time dad, HIV scare etc, would change anyone and it's up to you as the author to decide how much. That's the beauty of writing.



Author's Response:

yes, canonically, he's definitely out of character, but I'm glad to hear you think he's behaving in character for the situation I've presented. 

thank you so much for reading and commenting! I appreciate it!

 
Summary:

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Mysterious Marilyn is up to her old tricks.  Offering advice to the Stud of Liberty Ave can cause the future to change in the blink of an eye when Mysterious Marilyn reads the cards and doesn't see a happy ending for Brian and Justin.  But is the future set up in concrete?  Not only will things be different for Brian, but just about everyone around him will feel its affects.  What happens when after Brian follows the cards written and later the reading changes?  Can the future be changed?  Should it be changed?   Where does Justin fit in?  You'd be surprised.  Watch as Mysterious Marilyn meddles in peoples lives to correct her mistake.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Humor, What If Characters: Brian, Debbie, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 14014
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2013 Updated: March 12, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm super bad at reviewing, which is why I'm only just getting around to doing so. 

I love the plot line of this (I'm actually following another story based on tarot cards, but they couldn't be more different). I have to admit, I wasn't really expecting much based on the summary, but I am so happy to have been proven wrong. And I love that it's different from pretty much every other post-5.13 stories I've read. And all the plots twists and snippets of information you include makes me want to keep reading. 



Author's Response:

What's the other story, I'd like to read it.   This is only my second QAF story and I'm very bad at summaries.  Any suggestions that would improve it?  Only two more chapters left!!!

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The other story is The Tarot Series by LJG on fanfiction.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9076269/1/The-Tarot-Series

It's AU after the end of season 2.

There's nothing wrong with your summary, it's just how I personally felt reading it. (You know the feeling you get when you read a blurb of a book or a plot of a film and there's just something it about that it doesn't really want to make you read/watch it. That's what it was. So it's a fault on my behalf, not yours.)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the link.  I'm going to enjoy reading this.  Did I mention I love your screen name?  I'm a JR Ward fan too and can't wait for the next book.  I have it preordered.

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: March 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No you didn't, but thank you. I've been waiting for the Blay/Qhuinn book since the end of Phury's book. I honestly thought that it would the next book after Payne, so was very annoyed when it was Tohr instead. I pre-ordered it on my kindle, but stupid Amazon have moved the release date from the 26th to the 28th, which is rather annoying.



Author's Response:

Did you get Lover At Last yet?  I'm almost afraid to read it cuz it sorta drives me crazy ~ I keep wanting the action to speed up. lol

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: April 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes I've got, and read, it. As I got it on my kindle, I got it at like midnight and was still reading at 3am, I was so excited. I just wanted to get to the Blay/Qhuinn bits, so kept missing massive sections at a time (which I did go back and read.) But you have to read it. It's so good. And sets up so much for the next book, which J R Ward has already announced who it's about and other bits about it.



Author's Response:

That means I need to preorder soon!  Thank God for Kindles.  Love Blay/Qhuinn.  Have you found any fics featuring them and Layla?  I know where I want JR to go with this but will she?

 
Lovesick by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

Gus comes to visit the boys for spring break; havoc ensues.  

Featured Story for April 2019!!  

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Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family, Brian/Justin, Challenges, Easter, Humor, Romance Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 20455
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2013 Updated: April 08, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: April 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Hankie Pankie Anyone?

I wish we had girl scouts selling cookes in England, as they sound so good. What are they raising money for anyway?

(I was so happy to see you'd posted, as I was getting a tad bit worried when you hadn't updated in a while. It's stupid. I get less concerned when I haven't talked to my sister for longer time periods.)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! So great to see you reading this.;)  Thank you for taking the time to comment, also; it is much appreciated.  I try to personally stay away from these cookies, especially the Thin Mints - my downfall - ha!  I'm trying to diet, and these are NOT low-cal.;)  I think the $ goes toward their camping programs, if I recall correctly.

And BTW - don't apologize for checking up on me; I'm very flattered that you were concerned.  It's when people DON'T miss my writing that I would be discouraged.;)  Thank you for all the support; I just posted the next chapter, and will get the rest put up very shortly.  Thank you again, Nikki.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
The First Month's Rent by LoveTheCoat Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Justin's thoughts, journal style, spanning the gap between episodes 3.07 and 3.08. What led up to the "most historic reunification since Germany"?

 


Categories: Angst, Brian/Justin, Canon, Could be Canon, Gap-Filler, Justin/Ethan, One-Off Fic Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4590
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2013 Updated: April 09, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: April 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The First Month's Rent

Damn you. I was just going to read this, then go to bed. I now have to (well, really really want to) watch the reunion scenes. And once I watch those, I'm going to want to watch more of my favourite scenes, but I can't seeing as I need to go to bed. (No, Nikki, you don't need to watch the 2nd proposal scene for the gazillionth time now. It can wait until tomorrow.) Again, damn you for writing so well and for including one of my favourite quotes.

 



Author's Response:

Ah! I'm sorry!! 3.08 is my very favorite B/J episode of QAF, so I understand your urge to watch it, or at least the scenes at the end...no matter how or why, my favorite moments are when those two come back together after being apart. 

I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Even if it did make you want to watch certain scenes from the show.... :)

 
Who Lies Beneath by Flossee Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Feature

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Brian is deceived. What will happen when he finds outs?

*****Please read the warning in the Story Notes*****

I would like the thank my awesome Beta – AL


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Anti-Lindsay, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hetero Sex, Humor Characters: Brian, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: Body Swap
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 5517
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2013 Updated: April 17, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: April 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Brian is going to be so annoyed when he finds out. 



Author's Response: Hey zsadistwhore, thanks for reading and reviewing, it really is appreciated. I hope he is annoyed, but then again it is Lindsay. Cheers

 
The Voyeur by LoveTheCoat Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Someone is watching Justin, and feeling regret. Set in Season 3


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Canon, Could be Canon, Gap-Filler, Justin/Ethan, One-Off Fic Characters: Brian, Ethan Gold, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1119
[Report This] Published: April 21, 2013 Updated: April 21, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: April 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Voyeur

I was quite happy remembering the scene in my head, but then you had to go and include the stills, which then forced me to watch the entire scene. (Not that I'm complaining. I'm ill and this cheered me up greatly.) I was kinda disappointed when Ethan just disappeared after the break up. I wanted him to try to win Justin back, only to discover Justin's back with Brian by seeing something exactly like this and realising Justin was only ever passing time with him. 



Author's Response:

I love that scene so so so much! :)

Yeah, I too was disappointed when Ethan just disappeared. Ah, well!

Thank you for reading!

 
Summary:

**THE STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!**

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This story follows the lives of Brian and Justin four years after Episode 513.


Brian and Justin are separated, but the love between the two has not been forgotten.  After finding success as a painter, Justin is back in Pittsburgh to be closer to his family and friends. Despite the love and the sexual tension between him and Brian, Justin decides to live his life without the presence of his great love, but a threat from the past returns, changing their plans.


Thanks to my wonderful Beta, Predec2, for the translation work and for the very special banner.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Carl, Chris Hobbs, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 95984
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2013 Updated: September 21, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: July 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Finding some answers

I'm so glad you translated this, as it's really good. And if you hadn't said English isn't your first language, I wouldn't have noticed. I've read worse written stories by authors whose first language is English.



Author's Response:

Whoa! Thank you for this!
But I have to Predec2 translation extraordinary that it has made my stories. The translation is great merit it.
I am very happy with your comment, your attention and for you to be enjoying the story.
Please forgive me any errors. I use Google to respond the
comments.

 
The Return. by IcedCupcake Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 128]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When Justin fails to gain the success he sought in New York he returns to Pittsburgh to be with Brian.  Soon after he comes home, though, Brian starts noticing strange behavior from his partner.  But what is Justin really suffering from? A failure as an artist?  A recurrence of his PTSD?  Or something else?  Brian is bound and determined to find out before something bad happens to Justin.  Will he find out in time?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 41469
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2013 Updated: August 10, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: July 31, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Familiar Spaces.

No! Michael! No! Is my reaction. Michael can't seriously be considering it, right? Does he not know how much it'll devastate Brian?

Also, I'm not the biggest fan of jealous!Michael, especially when it's post-canon and all the original jealousies were dealt with. But it is fun reading it once in a while, when Michael is OOC, like he is here.



Author's Response:

Personally I'm not a huge fan of Jealous!Michael either, but it fits my story so I'm writing it.  :)  Michael is, of course, going to weigh the pros and cons of his actions, we'll just see what he decides.  Thanks for the review!

 
Rescue Me by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 290]
Summary: Feature

Brian opens up a new ad agency in California and develops a new hobby in his off hours.  Little did he realize that he would discover another passion.

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Summer Fan Fiction Challenge Characters: Brian, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 71256
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2013 Updated: September 09, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Fun, Fun, Funnel...

I want to write one of my normal rambling reviews, but I'm tired and somewhat in pain and want to catch up on all the other fics I'm following (damn lack of wifi), so it's just going to be, yay for Justin in trunks and sufer Brian. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki - sorry to hear you're not feeling well! Thank you, especially then, for reading and taking the time to comment.  I really appreciate that, my friend, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.  Just posted another chapter - getting closer! Thanks again.  Feel better soon!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Paint It Black

And of course Brian's going to happen upon them and assume the worst etc. But I love that Brian's actually acknowledging he's missing Justin and isn't hiding behind his normal mask of indifference.

I'm going to be without internet until Sunday night/Monday, which means a very impatient wait for me. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  Now what makes you think that Brian would show up at a bad time? (wink, wink).  Let's just say that it could be worse when it DOES happen. I don't think it will impress Justin, though.;)

At least if you can't read until late Sunday, this story will have to be done.  I do hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: ...Only Love Can Mend It Again...

I knew it! I love jealous Brian. 



Author's Response:

LOL! Your internet connection is back!:)  I'm working on the conclusion right now; my simple, little 'epilogue,' though, is now up to 6,700 words - yikes!  But I'm trying to end it!  I'd better, since it HAS to be done by 9.;)

Thanks for all the comments and for reading, Nikki! I appreciate that so much.  One more chapter to go!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
No More Hustler by Predec2 Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Sweetest Day One-Shot. Post 513.  Has Brian changed?

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: Brian
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1193
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2013 Updated: October 20, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: October 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just in case you missed me, I'm here! And I did read this the day you posted it (obsessed or what?) but I just haven't gotten around to reviewing it. Stupid real life.

Anyway, I'd never heard of Sweetness Day, so had to google it, where wikipedia informed me it's an american thing, which explains why.

I love Brian doing romance in his own unique way. And Justin not being so annoyed after all.

(Also, the story I mentioned? It's currently in image form in my head, so I just have to translate it into words. And figure out where the hell I'm going with it, as I have no idea past the intial idea and first scene. But by telling you I'm going to write it means that I will sooner or later, rather than just letting to plot bunny annoy me to death.)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  Of course I missed you! Glad to see you back, though.;)  Yes, Sweetest Day is another American holiday in order to coerce yet more money out of us.;)  I'm glad you liked the way that Brian approached it.;)  Thanks for reading and for the feedback, my friend.

 

And I'm delighted to hear that you have a new story in the works! And you're right; now that you've mentioned it, you are now officially responsible for writing it.;)  If you want to bounce any ideas off me, let me know! I'll be looking forward to reading it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: October 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pick one. New York or Ethan.



Author's Response:

Oh, no, you're going to have to tell me more than that, you sneak! But if it involves jealousy of any kind on Brian's part, I'd have to pick Ethan.;) 

 
Ghost of a Chance by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Sequel to "A Haunting We Will Go."  Through a case of mistaken identity, an amorous ghost latches onto Brian and won't let go. Who you gonna call?  *STORY IS NOW COMPLETE*


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Humor, Jealousy, Romance, Halloween Characters: Brian, Emmett, Justin, Mysterious Marilyn
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 22036
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2013 Updated: November 04, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: November 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Soulmates

I have been reading this, honest! But real life conspired against me and didn't allow me time to review.

Anyway, I loved this (as per usual) and the inclusion of Emmett.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  That's okay, I'm just glad you enjoyed it and left a comment. Thank you for reading! *Hugs* ~Kim

 
Missing. by IcedCupcake Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

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Justin is targeted for trouble when he goes clubbing in New York after running away.  When Brian and the gang go looking for him all they find is his vacant hotel room and have to return home empty handed.  The longer Justin is missing the more Brian realizes how much he really cared about him and pomises never to stop looking for him.  Unfortunately, the man who has Justin intends to make him the perfect slave - and make him forget everyone and everything from his life before.  Will Brian find him in time to stop Justin from forgeting?  Or will Justin be turned into a toy for his sick master?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Abuse, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other-Relationship, Rape, Violence Characters: Brian, Justin, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 94930
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2013 Updated: December 20, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: November 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: NYC.

I like Missing better than I'll Come for You.

Also, Michael! What a dick. And poor Brian. So looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your vote!!

And yeah, Michael was being kind of selfish; but my goal is not to write a anti-Michael, so hopefully by the end you'll think he redeems himself.  Thanks for letting me know you liked it!  <3

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: November 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Cracks.

No! The pictures aren't okay. You can't have Alcide as the bad guy. And I care about Brian's behaviour. Whilst it's very OOC, it's very in character for the situation as Brian probably wouldn't know how to cope with the emtions he's feeling. I want to skip straight to the bit where Brian and Justin are reunited, I shall (im)patiently wait for you to progress that far.

 



Author's Response:

So, I never have actually seen the show that the man I picked for John is in, but I'm assuming he's a good guy...Sorry. I actually just typed the description of what I wanted into google and he came up.  I believe some of the words were hot, buff and dark hair.  XD  And, well, seeing as I'm putting a lot of chapters together you probably don't have to wait that long.  I mean, obviously not right away, but probably by the end of the week.  (No promises).  Thanks for reviewing!  <3

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Home.

I must have missed something, as I'm very confused as to Justin losing his memories. First John kept acting like he had, then Sasha mentioned it in this chapter and some if your reviewers had figured it out as well and I'm just left here thinking, "when did this happen? and how did I miss it?" But I'm so happy Sasha got rescued and remembers everything. I really hope she's planning on finding Justin.

 

 



Author's Response:

Well I wouldn't say you missed anything. The explanation for Justin's memory loss hasn't been released in full yet. There have been half comments about what has happened to him and what he forgot, so don't feel like you're missing something, we haven't covered it yet. Lol! Thanks for letting me know what you think! <3

 
Broken Open by LoveTheCoat Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 128]
Summary: Feature

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It's 2012, and eight years have passed since Brian Kinney and Justin Taylor have seen or talked to each other. Both men are living their own lives and are successful and happy; or so they think.

What happens when, in a bizarre turn of events and in a city far from either place the men respectively call home, the two run into each other? What happens when Brian finally admits to himself the huge mistake he made all those years ago and endeavors to get Justin back? What happens when Justin starts to question the path and the life he's chosen for himself?

Both men are very different then they were when they last saw each other; life's ups and downs have affected them to varying and shocking degrees. They're both older and arguably wiser, so will they find their way back to each other, or will they realize they're destined to always hurt each other?

Show canon through *most* of episode 5.1 before it diverges; alternating Point of View.

**NOW COMPLETE**

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Canon, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Drama, Justin/Other-Relationship, What If Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Michael, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 109543
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2013 Updated: February 21, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Intertwined

Damn you. If you'd posted this 20 minutes later I would have been in bed and wouldn't have seen the email saying it'd been updated. So now it's 1am, and I should really be in bed, but I couldn't wait til morning to read this. So damn you again for making me so addicted to this I choose reading it over sleep.

And despite the fact I'm pretty sure Brian and Justin will end up together in the end (at last, I'm desperately hoping they will) you're scaring me with the wedding talk and Justin and Aaron being happy together. But I do love that you've got Justin all tormented about Brian and wanting to keep him out of his life, rather than him just instantly forgiving Brian for everything. I love that Justin's grown up and isn't dependent on Brian anymore.



Author's Response:

haha! Sorry to keep you up late...but not that sorry! ;)

As for Justin and Aaron being happy together...it'd be far too easy to make Aaron a villian and give Justin an easy decision. Instead, I had to make this as hard as possible (on me!) haha!

Thank you for reading, and staying up to do so! 

 
Mission Are Go by Flossee Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

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When Brian and Justin meet the atmosphere changes.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor, Jealousy, Out of Character Characters: Brian, Justin, Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: Come Fly with B
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 6119
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2013 Updated: December 15, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

First off, I love the Big Bang Theory reference. 

Second, I know exactly what it's like to have tons of reads, but only a very small amount of reviews in comparison. Like you, I have no beta and rely on reviews to tell me what I'm doing right/wrong. 

Thirdly, I like your title. I used to love The thunderbird when I was younger (when they were still puppets and hadn't been made into a live action film). So your title totally makes sense and is grammatically correct if you're using "mission" as a collective noun. 

Fourthly, I have to admit I didn't realise who Connor was/wasn't. The Howard reference threw me and I assumed you were still talking about him. This is what happens when I read things too soon after waking up.

Fifthly, I read your response about being concerned that the knock knock jokes won't translate well. The whole point of knock knock jokes is the fact they play on words, so if I were you I wouldn't change consumption.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much for your help and the way you have addressed each of my concerns.    

I'm so happy you got the Big Bang Theory reference.  Also I'm pleased you let me know you thought I was still talking about Howard as that never crossed my mind and it only goes to show how having a beta could give a different perspective. 

I must admit, as the saying goes, I am making an ass out of myself assuming in the first fic most people would know B1 & B2 and in this fic I assumed they would get the Thunderbird reference.  I too love the puppets.   Thank you for your advice also about the knock, knock jokes as there are more to come so I will leave them as written.

I'm really ecstatic at how much help you have been willing to give me.  I appreciate all comments, but I especially like the ones where the reader is trying to help out and the ones that keep me on track.  Thank you so very, very much.  Now I know you don't have a beta I hope at some stage I might be able to do the same for you.

Cheers

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Gotta say, I'm a little bit confused (some of it is down to not remembering what happened in the previous chapter). But I'm confused in a good way. As it makes me want to keep reading to find out just what's going on. Far as I can make out, Justin, Connor and Ben/Brandon (I got lost there) are fuck buddies due to convience. And Ethan wants to sleep with Justin, and Brian, but so far hasn't been successful. Brian is toying with Ethan to make Justin jealous, as he wants to sleep with Justin. (More than once, I'm assuming.) And Connor, Justin and Ethan are all part of the same crew and Brian is the new guy filling in for the guy who had the affair or whatever. Is that right? (I'm also confused as to what their mission is, but I'm less bothered about that, as it doesn't seem to be central to the plot.)

(And in reference to your previous response, I initally didn't get the B1, B2 referene as I haven't watched Bananas in Pjyamas in forever. But once you'd mentioned it, I knew what you were talking about.)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for wanting to understand this fic.  You are correct with all you have said.  Justin, Connor, Ben and Brandon are fuck buddies for convenience.  Ethan has a crush on Justin and thinks he is amaaazing.  I had such a hard time letting Ethan say that word.LOL  Ethan wants his one-off fun time with Brian.  Brian is toying with Ethan as he is trying to figure out if Justin has any feelings for him, without asking of course.  Connor is part of the ISS crew and Ethan is part of Justin's shuttle crew.  Brian is filling in as the new guy of Justin's shuttle crew because of the cheating astronaut.  I have skipped a few of your observations as I don't want to give anything away, but they will be answered in the final chapter. 

Thanks for letting me know you have read "Flight Plan B" and that you got the B1 & B2 reference. 

I really appreciate your review, thank you.  I hope you enjoy the ending.

Cheers

 
Love Reawakened by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 147]
Summary:

Things have not been the same since a new addition arrived in the Taylor-Kinney household.  Will the spirit of Christmas help produce a much-needed miracle?  *STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!*

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Christmas Characters: Brian, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 37846
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2013 Updated: December 25, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: A Time of Miracles - Story Conclusion

I love that after Brian and Justin had Shay it wasn't instant happy families and that they experienced what it's actually like having a new born baby and the problems that arose because of it.

I tried to remember what happens in each chapter (as I'm far too lazy and it's kinda late for me to go back through all of them (there is also a cat sat on my lap waiting for me to go to bed)), but I wasn't successful, so I shall comment in general and the moments I enjoyed and can remember. 

Like the parade and finding the train set for Gus. And Brian finding out Gus is coming to them for Christmas. And them finally talking things through and getting back to how they were. So basically, I enjoyed all of it.

Life has been hectic, which is why I haven't reviewed before, but I have been reading it (there is an adjective I want to use there, but can't for the life of me think what it is), except for this chapter, which I've only just read. I somehow missed that it had been updated. (I only followed it on FF for some reason, so I can only assume I got the email saying it has been updated, didn't read it there and then, then assumed I'd already read this chapter when I saw it on here.

My spelling and ability to remember words is getting worse and worse, so I think it's time I give up and go to bed.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! So happy that you read this one; thank you for taking the time to comment, my dear; I do appreciate that.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  Thanks for all the support; looking forward to reading more of your own story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Summary:

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Everyone knows that Brian Kinney does not do Christmas. 

 

What happens if he's forced?  Will things get weird

Yep I'm afraid it will.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Humor, Out of Character, What If, Christmas Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Carl, Cynthia, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Joan Kinney, Justin, Kiki, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 12459
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2013 Updated: December 31, 2013


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Michael gets his wish

Seriously? What is wrong with you? How dare you! Letting the doctor release Brian only minutes after he's woken up from a coma?! (I'm kidding! The doctor is obviously very inept and has no clue about actually being a doctor.)

And whilst I know the characters are OOC and their personalities are exaggerated from canon, I still hate how they think they can act like this. Especially Debbie, who seems to think she's entitled to know everyone's business. And what the fuck was Michael doing breaking a window, just because Brian and Justin wanted some time to themselves? And then being a whiny bitch about it.

Justin is going to be soooo pissed when he finds out Michael stole Brian away in the dead of night (okay, my imagination might be running away with me there) and that he did so despite Brian obviously having amnesia (I think Justin should sue the doctor for being the worst doctor in the history of the world). Please please say Justin punches him? (I'm not normally anti-Michael, I find him more irritating than anything, but the way he's acting here, he deserves to be punched.)

One minor minor critisism. It's not even that, really. It's just in the first chapter, you had Brian recognise Mel's voice whilst they were in his Loft and then again when they were in the car.



Author's Response:

I know, I know, this story has nothing to do with reality.  Mikey had to break the window, how else was I going to advance the story and stay in the realm of imagination. lol.  As for Justin, first he has to find out that Mikey took him - oops that's getting ahead of myself.  As for the critisim, I only write the story, I don't read it. <snicker>  Thanks for an enjoyable review

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!

I love that Michael thinks he can actually get away with this. And that he hasn't considered the implications of what he's doing.

And why hasn't Justin checked the Loft yet?

Also, I shall never use that hospital, as they seem unable to do the most basic of tasks.

 



Author's Response:

I think he's still in shock from the fact that the hospital says that Brian was never admitted.  I'm sure it would never occur to him that Michael could be that devious.  Can you tell that I don't like hospitals?

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: December 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-The shit hits the fan

I now know how you feel when I post short chapters complete with cliff hangers.

But yes! for Justin turning up and Brian realising there's something off with what Michael's been telling him.



Author's Response:

I suppose I could have posted the story in its entirety, but I love cliff hangers! <whine> 

 
Summary:

Justin walked out on Brian a year and a half ago, leaving Liberty Avenue completely. But a call from the hospital sends Brian to Justin's side, wanting to help. Justin doesn't want his help, doesn't want Brian around, to find out his secret, the reason he walked out that night. (Not good at summaries)

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Now Complete!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Challenges, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues Characters: Ben, Brian, Justin, Michael
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 31037
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2014 Updated: May 28, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: January 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast

I like that we don't know who infected Justin, mostly as I don't see it being important to the story. It also makes it more realistic in someways. I really like this so far but there is one bit that annoys me. Ben treats Justin's cut because he's already hiv+ positive and therefore can't be infected. That isn't exactly true. People who are hiv+ can be infected with a different strain of hiv.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hadn't about though that. I was just thinking of a way for them to figure it out without words and give Ben and Justin a chance to connect. I'll keep that in mind for future reference.

 
Summary:

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~~Thanks to Christie (clride) for the awesome banner~~

 

This AU story is a QAF version of the Breakfast Club. The story takes place over a single day of detention. The boys are the same age in support of the plot.

I own nothing but my imagination.

 

Story is now complete!!!!  


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: Ben, Brian, Justin, Michael, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 22664
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2014 Updated: July 31, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: May 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Hour 2, 8 to 9 am

Reading this was a terrible idea. Not because it's an awful story and badly written, but because it's completely the opposite and has made me want to re-watch The Breakfast Club for the gazillionth time when I really should be writing an essay due monday.

Also, one of the things I really love about fics based on actual books/films etc is seeing the parallels between them and so far I am very impressed with how you've written it and I'm so looking forward to seeing how you write the rest of it. (Some people completely screw up the characters and make them unrecognisable, but you've managed to make each character true not only to The Breakfast Club, but also to QaF, so I applaud your writing ability to be able to do so.)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind review.  I did change the "basket case" to "mamma's boy" but I am trying to keep the movie and the show personalities somewhat true.  Still get your essay done! 

 
Summary: Feature

Brian has to play the reluctant host when his cousin comes to visit.  What revelations will he discover, both about his cousin and about his relationship with Justin?  Post Ep 308, AU.  *STORY IS NOW COMPLETE*

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Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Jealousy, Romance, St. Patrick's Day Characters: Brian, Daphne, Emmett, Joan Kinney, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 33364
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2014 Updated: July 04, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: June 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The Ball Is In Whose Court?

I knew it! Even if Justin didn't. And stupid Brian. Does he not realise he'll now have to fight Liam for Justin's affection? Hopefully the jealously that's bound to happen seeing Justin and Liam together will be enough to spur Brian into action?



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  Yes, you were right.  Things are a big mess right now. And Brian's mouth was faster than his brain, unfortunately.  Things will get a bit sticky here for a while coming up with Justin, both between Brian AND his cousin.  It won't be smooth sailing for either of them. Poor Justin's heart is still in Brian's camp, but Liam is a charmer, though.  Will have the next part tomorrow. Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Nikki!  Much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: June 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Laid Bare

Stupid placement and Uni and life. But I finish my first year of Uni tomorrow, so I'll have plenty of time for reading and reviewing. :)

Go Liam for finally making Brian realise what was right in front of his nose. And yay! Brian for finally deciding to do something about it.

(Also, I'm loving the english-isms you've used, even though mate is more of an english, rather than irish, thing.)



Author's Response:

Hi, Niikki! Sorry that life sounds so hectic right now!  But glad you are finding time to read, and that you chose my story to do that; thank you.;)  And thanks for the tip; I wasn't sure if it was an Irish thing as well as an English thing, so I appreciate the info.  I should have the final part up either tonight or tomorrow. Thanks again for the comments and for reading!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: July 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue: Only You

Okay, so my plently of free time has been taken up with planning holidays and learning italian.

Shocking St Joanie is always fun and I'm oh so glad Brian got the last word.

And I love jealous Brian and Brian who is trying his hardest to show Justin just how much he cares about him. (Oh, who am I kidding? I love Brian full stop.)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Well, I'm glad you took time out to read this story; thank you. And I'm happy you enjoyed it. I so love to taunt Brian with his jealousy over his boy.;)  I tried to keep Brian fairly IC while still showing his desire to change for Justin and show him how much he cares.  Thanks so much for reading, and for the feedback, my friend!  *Hugs* ~Kim

 
The Bet by IcedCupcake Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 161]
Summary:

AU.  When Brian makes a poorly thought out bet with the guys, his life begins to be split in two; there's club Brian, who fucks whoever he wants, and there's family Brian, who plays with action figures and cuddles on the couch.  He tries to carry on both personas for as long as he can, but when the time comes to decide who he really is...which one is going to win?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Drama Characters: Brandon, Brian, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 49753
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2014 Updated: August 04, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: July 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Whataya Want from Me?

Not only have they changed save the last dance, they've changed the song playing before it! And the new song doesn't even fit their dance! And they've screwed up Justin singing in the parking garage! I am outraged! (I'm guessing it's something to do with copyright issues, but still.) Someone else on here had mentioned they'd changed tons of the songs used on Netflix, so I deliberately haven't watched it on there. (Doesn't hurt that I have all of the episodes on my laptop.)

I should feel like I've read/watched this a gazillion times because of the basic plotline, but the whole Brandon side plot has reeled me in and I can't not read until the end. Especially as protective!/possessive!Brian is the best.

(And I know it doesn't usually happen this way, but I'm really really hoping that Brian explains to Justin about the bet and him tricking, rather than Justin finding out for himself.)



Author's Response:

Lucky you with your original episodes.  I'm left with stupid old netflix!  Lol.  Well it's dumb, but at least it's better than nothing.  I'll just have to plug my ears whenever I hear anything I don't like.

Yeah, it is very common plot, but I really wanted to do one for myself, but not make people read the same thing over again...hence Brandon!  I'm glad the little twist kept you interested and I hope I don't let you down.  :)

(And come on...where's the fun in that?  Lol)

Thank you!  <3

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

  Updating our banner and beta list - please read Ch. 3 and respond if needed.

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, MIDNIGHT WHISPERS ANNOUNCEMENT, SEEKING BETA - TRANSLATOR - BANNER MAKER Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 928
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2014 Updated: March 05, 2015


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I unfortunately do not channel Justin in the artistic department, but I am very willing to beta. I automatically beta when I read anyway, so I might as well do it properly.



Author's Response:

Great! That's wonderful, Nikki!  I really appreciate that. With the response to my request, I don't think I will have to load anyone down too heavily with more than one story at a time, either; I can spread the requests out as they come in. Thank you for offering to help. I will put you down on the contact list.:)  ~Kim

 
Summary: Feature

Brian's trip with his son turns into much more than he realizes.  Will it be a temporary romance, though? Or something much more lasting?  *STORY IS NOW COMPLETE*

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance Characters: Brian, Daphne, Gus, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 122719
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2014 Updated: December 31, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: September 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Can I Have Some Cream with my Coffee?

So, there was me wondering what to do on a sunday night, home alone when I get an email telling me you'd posted a new story. After that, it was an easy decision to make.

I love love love AU meets (I sometimes feel with canon stories that I've read it a hundred times already), so I'm in love with this already.

Even knowing that Justin ends up living with Brian doesn't diminish from the story at all, as there's still the whole journey of how they got there and what exactly the deal with Brian and Lindsay and Gus is. So very excited.

(And Gus as a waiter is so damn cute.)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! I'm so glad you're enjoying this so far! I've been dying to post it, but didn't want to until I had it done.  I'm there now (with the exception of the epilogue), so I hope you like the rest of it.  I'm kind of relieved to write something without a lot of angst in it for a change! :)Thanks so much for choosing to read this one, and for your comments; I really appreciate that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: November 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Business Arrangement?

I utterly suck at reviewing. I have been reading as you've been posting, I just usually run out of time to review.

But I have time now, so here goes. (I can't remember the last chapter I reviewed, so I'll guess and do one big one now.) First, StrataG is a ridiculous name (sorry!) and Justin should be happy he never has to work for them and the miserable excuses for human beings who work there again. Second, I may have mentioned something about Palmer being a dick and trying to escape from the restaurant, but if I haven't, he's a dick and it was a dick move. But he really should have learnt by now he can't outsmart, or outrun, Brian.

Marcum being put in his place was great; indignant and pissed off Justin is always fun. Brian knowing the dean came as kind of a shock, but him orchestrating Justin interning at Kinnetik instead did not.

And regardless of how many times I read it, I always love when Lindsay and Mel meet Justin after Gus already has and Justin is kinda filling the boyfriend role in Brian's life. And Mel says something bad about Brian in front of Mel, Lindsay tries to calm the situation, but Justin gets mad on Brian's behalf. It may be predictable and overplayed (assuming you even go that route), but it still makes me smile each and every time.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki - well, the name is actually a real name for a start-up company I read about, so they apparently thought it was a good one, anyway.;)  I'm glad you liked the smackdown between Marcum and Justin, though; I couldn't see him reacting any other way in light of the man's homophobia.  You will see more interaction coming up between the two women and Justin. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikki.  *Hugs* ~Kim

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: February 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 24: A Surprise Visitor and a Surprising Revelation

So, I recently finally got around to watching Supernatural and as I may have become a tad bit obsessed by it, I've only just gotten around to finish reading this.

I can't remember the last chapter I reviewed, so I'll just do the highlights.

As always, I loved that Justin stood up for Brian against Mel and quite rightly put her in her place.

Brian/Justin/Gus at Britin is so damn adorable and Gus with his train is just perfect.

And I'm so happy that everything worked out for Justin with PIFA and his internship.

I'm sure there are more, but it's late and I can't think.

(I feel so bad for not reading it earlier; it was in the back of my mind that I hadn't finished it but Supernatural was too damn alluring and I just couldn't say no.)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Thank you for taking the time to comment after reading this story; I do appreciate it.;)  I'm glad you enjoyed the interaction between B & J and Gus. I wish they had shown more scenes with Brian and his son on the show; he was always so tender with him, and his face totally changed when he was holding him in his arms.  So poignant that one time when he questioned whether he was a good father or not; it showed that he cared a heck of a lot more than his own father ever did.  Thanks again for the feedback, Nikki; it is deeply appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Love-by date by Severus_divides_into_H Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Feature

They met, they fell in love, they built a life together. Now, twenty years later, Justin is sure Brian’s love for him has reached its limits, while Brian seems unable to let him go.

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Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Drama, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 22201
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2014 Updated: October 06, 2014


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: October 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Part I. Justin

I apparently managed to sign myself out whilst attempting to submit a review, so I'm not sure if the review was actually submitted or not. So here's attempt number 2.

Firstly, your English is so good. A beta reader might be benefical, mainly because you have made some minor mistakes (which are predominantly using the wrong word or missing out a word ("I want to divorce" should either be "I want a divorce" or "I want to divorce you". And in your first paragraph, it should have been "came to the realisation" or "came to realise")) which don't detract from the story at all, but it might be helpful to you to know what the mistakes are and how to correct them. I've actually noticed when a non-native English speaker makes these types of mistakes, it's because they're using their native language word order/phrasing and might not actually realise it's different in English. But I repeat, overall your English is ridiculously good, you're an amazing writer (I'm actually jealous) and it's better than dozens of native English speakers' writing.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you so much for your wonderful - and helpful - comment! I absolutely agree about beta reader - for my future fics I'll gladly look for someone, but the problem was, it's almost impossible to find someone who would edit an original book for free, while I couldn't afford to pay - dollar costs a ridiculous amount of money in my country. So I wanted to know if it's okay to publish a raw version, and now I know it is, I can finally relax :)  I was really worrying. 

Huh, the mistakes you've mentioned shocked me! I never thought it's 'a divorce' or 'to divorce someone' - you're right, in my language we say just 'I want to divorce', so I autimatically assumed it was the same in English. Thank you so much for pointing it out!  

Thank you again, I'm very glad you liked the story - and my writing style :) It means so much to me!

Katrin

 
Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: October 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Part II. Brian

Okay, so I'd figured out that Brian actually hadn't stopped loving Justin (I say figured out, I read your summary) but I hadn't figured out the reasoning behind Adam and the two years after marriage. It hadn't occured to me that Brian would suspect Justin of cheating (stupid Ted for putting the idea in his head), but it makes total sense. Especially as canon!Brian was convinced most of the time that Justin would leave him for someone "better".

And this, right here, is exactly why communication is so important in relationships. And thankfully your Brian isn't as stubborn as canon!Brian, and a bit more selfish, and knows a good thing when he sees it and does everything he can to keep from losing it.



Author's Response:

Hi again!:) Yes, I wanted to write something AU, but also keep some of the main Brian's - and Justin's - canon characteristics. I wasn't planning on writing about Ted, though, but he just came to me with his statistics and demanded to give him a chance to talk about them :) I thought it'd be a good idea.

Yes, Brian is indeed selfish, and he also loves Justin with all his heart, so of course he couldn't let him go like that. I enjoy angst, so I decided communication topic was a great solution :) Besides, I'm crazy about high school/college AUs, and this plot gave me an opportunity to explore them a bit.

I'm happy you liked the story and let me know about it. Thank you so much for that - and again, for pointing out my mistakes to me!

Katrin 

 
Summary:

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The slave trade is alive and well in our AU society.  The community is mostly split half and half on the issue; half of society is for slavery and half is against.  However, Brian Kinney had never put much thought to the subject, despite the fact that his best friend, Michael, and Michael's mother, Deb, were both major players in CAST, a group against the sexual slavery of men and women.  But this all changes when Brian accompanies Michael to a slave auction, where he is introduced to a beautiful 18 year old slave named Justin, just now coming up for bid.  Born a free man, Justin's life was turned upside down when his father sold him into slavery at the tender age of 15, only three years before he was to be sold.  Chaos ensues.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family, Alternate Universe, Abuse, Angst, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Rape, Romance Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Chris Hobbs, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Emmett, Ethan, Gus, Hunter, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Joan Kinney, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Molly Taylor, Ted, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 28486
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2015 Updated: January 18, 2018


Reviewer: zsadistwhore Signed
Date: August 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: An Explanation

I'm really really enjoying this so far. When I first read the summary, I thought it would be like another slave!fic I'd read (Companion by Julesmonster on fanfiction.net) but was pleased to discover it wasn't (not because Companion isn't good, which it is, but because it's always nice to read something different).

I love the your characterisations, especially Michael, and their interactions with each other. And I love how well written it is (it's always nice to read a fic where I'm not correcting grammar and spelling in my head).

And please please please let Brian keep Justin. I would threaten to stop reading if he doesn't, but there's no way I would actually be able to do that, so I shall have to settle with pouting in a corner if Brian gives Justin away.

(And if you've not read Companion, I really suggest you do, as well as her other stories.)



Author's Response:

I'll totally look that story up!  Thank you!  (Although I may wait a while so I don't influence my own writing during this story - lol.)  And thank you for your kind words about my writing.  And don't worry too much.  90 days is a long time to resist Justin's charms, don't you think?  ;-)