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Brian and Justin meet in a different way. Justin is the older one this time. The brunet wants to form a family and once he has it he will protect it no matter what just like Justin would. This starts with Brian wanting to be the stud of Liberty Ave. The gang is just forming. Hope you guys like it. Thanks to my betas. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Humor, MPreg, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 190942 [Report This] Published: March 21, 2008 Updated: October 03, 2022
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Date: December 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Truth Is Out Thank you for the update. I like your story, it's different, OOC but good :) Summary:
Brian has planned on getting married to his boyfriend but then again things don't always go as planned. Would he be able to get his wishes, or will life throw him in a new direction? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Humor, MPreg, Out of Character, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 189998 [Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: August 25, 2022
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Date: December 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: I Want You To Be In My Life Great chapter :) Thanks so much. There will be more soon. Hope you like it too. Summary:
Life is not always what it seems and people are never what they appear to be. An AU hybrid S1/S3-ish romance. Brian & Justin. Of course.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 76989 [Report This] Published: April 24, 2011 Updated: July 30, 2013
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Date: May 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 So happy to see an update. Thank you! Author's Response: You are most welcome. And there will be another update in a few days as well.
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Date: May 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Oh...:( poor justin. I love this story! Author's Response: I know; I feel so bad for Justin. He's surrounded by bad luck it seems. Thank you so much for reviewing and sticking with the story. I can't tell this enough to my readers/reviewers. I'm going through some terribly tough times right now, and your reviews and support have been so amazing and have brought light to such a dark period in my life.
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Date: May 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 I'm hurting for Justin so much right now. Another great chapter. I can't wait for more. Thank you Author's Response: No, thank YOU for reviewing. I feel bad for Justin too... Writing the next chapter, the latest it will be updated is by next weekend. Summary:
Justin inherits a bar on Liberty Avenue from his uncle. He is rather young for taking over that business and there is this problem-regular, who seems to not like him very much but is quite sexy and who he can't get out of his mind. His name is Brian fucking Kinney and he is a real plague Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance Characters: Craig Taylor, Debbie, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Vic Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 16092 [Report This] Published: October 28, 2011 Updated: November 09, 2014
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Date: December 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Haha. Nice chapter. Thanks ;) I'm sure you'll like the new one just as much Summary:
Brian is a nineteen-year-old, rebellious young man who runs afoul of the law and is sent to live with an aunt and uncle he doesn't even know in a last-ditch effort to straighten out his life. Will his experience there - and who he meets along the way - change his life for better or for worse? Teenage Brian/Justin AU story. *THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE* Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Craig Taylor, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s), Vic Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 367668 [Report This] Published: February 11, 2012 Updated: April 10, 2016
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Date: January 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Town Social I don't think I took time to review your previous chapters. I'm so sorry Kim. Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading and for the comments! And don't apologize; I'm just grateful that you take the time to read and review when you're able to.:) I'll try not to let your worst nightmares come true in the next few chapters. I think we're actually heading in the right direction (believe it or not). First we have to get these two stubborn boys back in each other's arms. I think Aunt Sarah is about to help with that.;) Thanks again for all the support you give me; I appreciate that more than you know.:) *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
Brian has met someone he thinks could be different from all the others, but this person has a boyfriend. He quickly decides to try and become friends with Justin but is that all they can limit themselves to with their quick connection and sexual tension? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Debbie, Gus, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 34313 [Report This] Published: February 22, 2012 Updated: November 16, 2012
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Date: November 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 It was short but good. Thank you :)
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Date: November 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I actually danced when I saw you updated your story. I love it. Great chapter. Will really need to stop interrupting our Boys...grrr. Summary:
In this A/U, Brian is filthy rich and he believes people are only interested in him for his money... even Justin???!
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 196 Completed: Yes Word count: 506607 [Report This] Published: March 12, 2012 Updated: August 01, 2013
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Date: January 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail Ah you're eviiiiiiiil! Oh wow! Pacagirl; here's 128 for you. I hope you like. LOL! At least it puts Brian and Justin inside the same room for a few minutes. LOL!
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125: Get Bruce Lee Back Here! Damn It! I can help you with your problem Brian. 'I can help you with your problem Brian.' WOMAN! GET IN LINE BEHIND ME LOL! But I can't gaurantee you that there will be much left over after I finish with lol! I actually met Gale Harold in person once. It was in New York at a play he was acting in. It was Tenessee William's "Suddenly Last Summer", but I was a horrified damn kitten. I just got his autograph and stared at him. But my bold sister struck a long conversation with him. She asked him a bunch of questions but I was completely tongue-tied the entire time. he was so handsome in real life; and I've been told some many stars aren't as good looking in real life as they are on the screen. But that was hardly the case with him. Boy! He looked good and had the nicest personality. He was the only person (in the play) who stayed around until the very last fan left. He even stood around after he had signed all the autographs and a few people just wanted to talk to him. He was so down to earth. He didn't seem like a celebrity or star at all. He just seemed like one of the guys/common folk. What a thrill it was to be around him. Sincerely, Delores.
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!) WTF Justin? Pack your suitcases and leave that psycho! YOU GOT ME LAFTING SO HARD, I'M DROOLING ALL OVER MYSELF!
Thanks, Pacagirl, for taking the time to comment often and let me know you're still with me. It's a ROARRRRRRR pleasure. Sincerely and later.
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Date: January 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You *happy dance* I'm 'happy dancing' right next to you, Pacagirl. You welcome and here's 3 more chapters 130, 31 and 32, I truly hope you enjvy. Later & sincerely Delores
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Date: January 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130: You Are Not Better than Him Yeaahhhhhhhhhhh! I think it's safe to think the bigot won't stand anymore between justin and brian. Justin is back to his senses. Yeahh! And Brian calls Gus! Yeaaahhhh. "Justin back to his senses" Hooorahhhh to that LOL! Hi, Paca so glad U enjoyed the chapter. Like promised here's 131 and 32. I hope you still enjvy. later, Delores
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Date: January 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131: Later... And You 've Better Behave! Thank you :) You are so welcome, Pacagirl. And here's chapter 133 & 34 for you have fun.
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Date: January 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why? No he won't marry you. Justin can't marry a psycho, racist, violent man.. That is just a no! Go away Jensen. Wow! U're so right and here's chapter 133 & 34 to prove it. Hav Fun, PacaGirl, so glad 2 C U R still w/me. Later Delores
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Date: February 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134: No Matter Whom You Are Ever With I'll Always Be there... But Why is Michael Here! I love the titles of your chapters! Justin's dreams are crazy. Thanks Author's Response: Thanks, Pacagirl, for the statement that you love the titles of my chapters. I use several methods to come up with the weird titles, sometimies I steal lines from the original QAF series like in the chapter, but most I write the chapter first and then take sort of a catchy line from the dialogue in the chapter and name it that, or take a old saying but twist it a bit. so, instead of saying Gone With The Wind, I might say Ran With The Wind or something, LOL. "Justin's dreams are crazy." LOL - so are mines - but I guess readers here probably guessed that already, LOL! Thanks a lot, Pacagirl.
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Date: February 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135: Please, Brian, Please!!! Happy to know that you're going to update a few chapters. I hope my dream will be as nice as the one justin made in this chapter :) Author's Response: I'm glad u liked that one. Now here's 136 and I'm adding 137 and then some Later. Delores
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Date: February 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142: Is There Any Particular Reason That You Called? Thank you for the update. Hi, Pacagirl. You are so welcome and I apologize for being away so long... real life been quite demanding (in a good way though). Later and here's 143. Summary:
A QAF Fractured Faerie Tale! Following the storyline of Beauty and the Beast with QAF characters inserted. A bit of a darker tale here folks! Spookiness and scary imagery inside! Reader Beware! There are no dancing dishes or talking teapots here! Rated PG 13 for now. Thanks to the very talented artist who did the banner. I've been informed that her name on LJ is Tatjana_Yurkina. If she has a handle on here, please let me know through a review or at fanfic.net. I'm the same nic on there as well. Thanks to Predec2 and JTSecrets who helped with technical advice on getting it posted. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Bdsm, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Out of Character Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: Beauty and the Beast Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 107825 [Report This] Published: April 07, 2012 Updated: January 17, 2013
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Date: September 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Greed I just read all your chapters in a row. I'm sorry I did not take time to review each of them.
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Date: September 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Death of a Dream :( :( your tissue warning was not enough from crying (sometimes when I'm prepared I can't stop the tears).
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Date: September 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Wards are Released Justin is right...where is brian?^^ Summary:
Banner is by the amazing foreverbm on LJ! Summary: AU. Brian Kinney did a lot of stupid things when either drunk, high or both. Those things usually and somewhat surprisingly ended up changing his life in some irrevocable way and affecting it for years afterword. But he never thought that taking Japanese as his required foreign language in college on a drunken dare from his equally drunk/high college roommate would have such far-reaching consequences and would eventually, over a decade later, completely change his life. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 8070 [Report This] Published: September 02, 2012 Updated: April 14, 2013
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Date: September 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Bet Great plot! Can't wait for more :) Thank you very much, Pacagirl! I hope the next chapter won't disappoint. Cheers, Vin
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Date: September 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Justin Craig is such an ass! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Thx Author's Response: Thank you, Pacagirl! Working on Chpater 3 as we speak....er...write. :) Cheers, Vin
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Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Promise That was really great, thank you. I love your writting style :). Thank you very, very much!
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Date: April 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: The Training Happy to read another chapter. Thank you. Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you are still interested. Cheers, Vin Summary:
Summary: Brian asks a question. Author's Note: What do you do when you are plagued, PLAGUED, with ideas? You just have to write them, I guess. I was on a bit of a writing spree/roll/bender this entire weekend. Couldn't help myself and couldn't stop myself, and I have no idea why. So this one-shot sort of poured out of me and here it is. Enjoy! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1235 [Report This] Published: September 04, 2012 Updated: September 04, 2012
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Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: With My Body... That was cute and funny. Thank you Thanks very much! Very happy you liked it. Cheers, Vin Summary:
Justin is one year older than in canon QAF, what impact does this have on the story and the events that may or may not occur. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 4334 [Report This] Published: September 19, 2012 Updated: August 06, 2015
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Date: September 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Great first chapters. Looking forward to reading more.
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Date: September 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Great first chapters. Looking forward to reading more. Summary:
Justin narrates his own version of the B/J love story in this AU version. He meets Brian the day that Jason Kemp’s body is found. (S2, E10). The timeline is adjusted in that Justin has completed a 4 year art degree. He’s 22, has had to hustle for survival and is tougher than he was in the series. Brian is slightly OOC. Inspired by the movie “Boy Culture” (X=J).
DISCLAIMER: Queer as Folk and its characters are the property of Cowlip and Showtime. No copyright infringement is intended. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Out of Character, Romance Characters: Blake, Cynthia, Debbie, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 19463 [Report This] Published: September 19, 2012 Updated: September 19, 2012
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Date: September 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things I loved reading your story. It was easy to read, nice plot, OOC but it did not bother me because it matched your story. Dear pacagirl, It's so cool to hear that it was 'the kind of fic' you needed. I know how that goes. Sometimes we get in a mood and the only thing that works to appease us is a good story. I'm glad that this one worked for you. Thanks for the great comments. Jackie Summary:
The men take a road trip with the green eyed monster. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Humor, One-Off Fic Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: Fun with Brian and Justin Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1134 [Report This] Published: September 22, 2012 Updated: September 22, 2012
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Date: September 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I really enjoyed your story. Funny and cute. Summary:
Justin Taylor is a 19 year old hustler who was brought into a new world when he was 17 by a man he thought he trusted, but a betrayal sent him reeling and he was forced to survive on his own. Brian Kinney is a 28 year old man with everything he could possibly want and more. A thriving business, friends he calls family and the legendary status as The Stud Of Liberty Avenue but it’s all starting to be monotonous. What happens when just wanting some company turns into something more? A/N: Hi guys, for those of you following my story, i'd just like to point out that I changed the POV from 3rd person to 1st person. I'm sorry if 1st person POV's aren't your thing, it's just that it's easier for me to write and really get into the characters heads when i'm using 1st person. So, everything after chapter 2 will be in 1st person POV. I hope this doesn't discourage you from reading my fic. and, don't worry, I won't be editing the first two chapters as that would ruin the flow of it and I don't really want to ruin that. thanks for reading! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Violence Characters: Craig Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8062 [Report This] Published: November 02, 2012 Updated: November 29, 2012
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Date: November 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Great chapter, I liked it. I guess Carter is not the really nice guy he seemed to be saving Justin from an unknown future. Summary:
What happens when the life you know is all a lie? Much love to Predec2 for the wonderful banner xoxoxoxo Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Abuse, Angst, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, Addiction Characters: Blake, Craig Taylor, Daphne, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 15873 [Report This] Published: November 14, 2012 Updated: May 24, 2014
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Date: November 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Life Interrupted You got my attention :)..
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Date: February 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: A Father's Hate I read the last 4 chapters in a row. I really liked it. I did not know what Alateen was. Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it. I hope I was able to effectively give a clear explanation of exactly what Alateen is More as soon as I can~JPAuthor's Response: Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it. I hope I was able to effectively give a clear explanation of exactly what Alateen is More as soon as I can~JP
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Date: March 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Guess Who's Coming To Breakfast Drunk!Brian who starts a musical carreer is one of my fave lol.thank you for this chapter. You're welcome my dear I'm glad you liked it :) I just posted the latest chapter and hope you enjoy it as well. Thank you for reviewing~JP
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Date: May 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Weekend Bromance Whoa nice car lol. The last 2 chapters were really great. Can't help wanting to kick jennifer's ass. Thank you
Author's Response: Haha I have to tell you, it always made me laugh whenever I would see the Krekelcaddy riding around town. (the car is an actual attraction in my hometown of Decatur IL) You have my permission to give Jennifer the ass whoopin she deserves for choosing a loveless marriage over her only son. Maybe it'll knock some sense into her head and make her realize that if she doesn't truly try to mend her fences soon, she stands the chance of losing Justin forever.....that is if she hasn't already Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) more as soon as I can~JPSummary:
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Bdsm, Brian/Justin, Humor, One-Off Fic Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Drew Boyd, Emmett, Justin, Michael, Ted Challenges: None Series: Fun with Brian and Justin Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 426 [Report This] Published: November 15, 2012 Updated: November 15, 2012
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Date: November 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I had a few pet names in mind while reading your story but not these 2. Very funny. Summary:
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Major Character Death, One-Off Fic, Thanksgiving Characters: Brian, Debbie, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 364 [Report This] Published: November 18, 2012 Updated: November 18, 2012
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Date: November 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I'm a big girl, I did not cry... Well, there're tears in my eyes but nothing on my cheeks.
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Date: November 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I forgot the most important: I hope everything will be fine with your surgery. Summary:
B/J One-shot. Brian's own personal, public-service announcer is at it again. Fluff.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1366 [Report This] Published: November 22, 2012 Updated: November 22, 2012
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Date: November 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: PSA No. 2,145 Loved it. Thank you, that was so sweet. Thank you so much! I'm very glad that you liked it. I like Justin's form of 'research' - ha! Thanks again. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
Just a little something I came up with while watching episode 1 season 1. Just a typical Sunday morning at the Taylor-Kinney residence and the musings of a very much in love Justin. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 646 [Report This] Published: November 27, 2012 Updated: November 27, 2012
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Date: November 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday Morning's & Bed Hair Thank you Tori this one-shot, I liked it. An angst-free story is always good for the heart :) Author's Response: Yeah we all need a break from all the angst! ;) Summary:
It's New Years Eve, people are out celebrating and enjoying the festivities, except for one lone person sitting huddled under a blanket in their lover's loft.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Humor, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 712 [Report This] Published: November 27, 2012 Updated: November 27, 2012
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Date: November 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Fireworks So sweet. I liked it. Thank you. Summary:
Post-513, Partial Gapfiller for ep. 214, 406. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Canon, Gap-Filler, Hurt/Comfort, One-Off Fic Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5115 [Report This] Published: November 28, 2012 Updated: November 28, 2012
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Date: November 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Pride and Punishment I really liked your story, very well written. I love it when Brian and Justin talk. Thank you. Author's Response: I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it! I think Brian and Justin just talking is sometimes underrated - as Brian points out here, non-verbal communication can them pretty far, but sometimes it's not enough to get them the whole way... Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful review. It means a lot :-) Summary:
Brian unexpectedly becomes a father at the age of 16. What happens 16 years later when a certain 18-year-old blond unknowingly attracts the attention of both father and son? Will Brian sacrifice his son's love for another's? **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE** *BANNER AND STORY IDEA BY STAR-SHINE GREEN* Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Minor's Sexuality, Romance Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 127715 [Report This] Published: November 29, 2012 Updated: January 17, 2014
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Date: November 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: New Guy In Town Great start. I'm looking forward to reading more. Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading this first chapter and for your comments! Yes, we thought it wise to put that disclaimer on there so readers could be assured that wouldn't happen. There MAY be a few preliminary kisses sprinkled in there initially, but nothing more, we promise! I hope you will continue to give this one a chance. Thanks again for reading and for the feedback; it will be updated again soon. *Hugs* ~Michal (StarShine-Green) and Kim (Predec2)
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Date: December 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Don't Call Me A Chick! Yeah badass!justin. I like when Justin does not take shit. Great chapter. Thank you :) Hi, Dear - thanks for reading and for the comments! Yes, Owen and Justin are definitely NOT going to be 'best buds,' are they? LOL! So glad that you like our 'bad boy' in this one. We'll get this updated again very soon. Thanks again! *Hugs* ~Michal (StarShine-Green) and Kim (Predec2) **P.S. - I love to put a bad-ass Justin in my stories! ~Michal~
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Date: December 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Definitely! "A little competition never hurt anyone," Thank you, my dear, for reading and for the feedback. Yes, this just won't be a casual fling for Brian. And Michal and I have a feeling that once he figures out what's at stake - and who his competition is - Brian is really going to have a heartwrenching dilemma on his hands. Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback; we'll get this updated again just as soon as possible. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: January 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: So Do You Ride? Thank you both of you for this chapter. I really loved it. Gus was so adorable on the first part, I could picture the scene on the bike...so cute. Hi, my friend! Thanks for reading and for the lovely comments.:) It IS interesting to be writing from both the son's and the father's perspectives; it makes for some interesting changes in nuances regarding how they would speak and act, doesn't it? And I think you may just be on the right track regarding Gus and Tristen.:) We'll get this updated again very soon. Thank you so much for reading and for the comments! *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: January 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Are You Any Good? That was a really great chapter. I love your story. Hi, my friend; thank you so much for reading and for the feedback; that means a lot to both Michal and me. We're delighted that you're enjoying this. Michal's big test is tomorrow, so hopefully once that's out of the way the updates will be faster in coming. Thank you again for reading and for the review, and for all the ongoing support you give my stories as well. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: February 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Double Dates? ah the joy of waiting a sms. so cute. I can't wait for next chapter. Thank you Kim and Michal, U rock! Author's Response: Hi, my friend; you're always so faithful about leaving feedback, and I can't tell you how much that is appreciated.:) Michal is done with her test now, so hopefully we can update faster (in between my own stories; I will have to pay attention to them as well). So glad that you are enjoying this story! Thank you for reading and for the comments; we are very grateful:) *Hugs* ~Kim and Michal
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Date: February 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Jealousy, Thy Middle Name is Kinney... Justin is a lucky guy, 2 KINNEY on a mission to make him happy. Hi, my friend! Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments! Yes, wouldn't that be a nice position to be in? Lucky Justin, although I'm not sure how lucky he will feel when he finds out what's going on, but I'm loving the angst that Michal has set up here.:) We'll get this updated again very soon; thanks again for reading and for taking the time to comment - it is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: February 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Dream...Or Nightmare? Great chapter once again. Thank you so much for this story. Hi, my friend! Michal and I thank YOU for reading and for the comments! Obviously, we're heading for a showdown here eventually. That's when the real angst is going to flare up. How will Brian choose between his deep love for his son and his budding love for Justin? And how will Gus react? How will BRIAN react? Hmm...can't wait to see where Michal is steering this one.;) Thanks for the support; we will get this updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: February 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Stunned by You I review again because you both deserve it. I love your story and I'm looking forward to reading more. (the angst is cooooming ^^) Author's Response: Thank you for resposting a comment; that is very thoughtful of you.:) Michal and I are very glad that you are enjoying the story; and yes, major angst alert coming up soon! First, though, Michal and I have a little dinner date to take care of (wink, wink). We should have the next chapter up very soon. Thank you again for taking the time to leave another review; it is much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: March 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Movie This chapter was wonderful. The date between Brian and Justin, Mark (poor guy....), Tristan & Gus..perfect. Did you think about someone in particular for Tristan (actour, model, singer...)? Hi, my friend! Michal and I thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the comments. I would have to ask Michal about Tristan's character; I'm not sure if she had someone in particular in mind for him or not.:) He does sound pretty hot to me, though - ha! And I suspect you're right - I'm not sure if there will be issues surrounding the 'lonely' part, but I DO know that things will not be all rosy in this story; there will be some real issues involving love and devotion that will need to be addressed when the three discover what's going on. Thank you so much for reading and for going to the trouble of leaving your feedback; and if I have not told you before, thank you, also, for the favorite author designation; that means a lot to me.:) Michal and I should be able to update this again very soon. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: May 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo? I can't believe you updated weeks ago and I totally missed it. silly me! Anyway great great great chapter. I really love how Gus is a main character in your story and I can't wait for him to realize that Tristan likes him. Well, I guess Brian, Justin and Gus will be hurting like crazy when Gus knows the truth about his best friend's brother. Thank you :) Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! I'm glad you realized you hadn't read this chapter and got caught up.:) Michal and I thank you for reading and for the support with your comments.:) Yes, it would certainly avoid a big mess if Gus would just turn his focus toward what is right in front of him. Sigh...silly boy. We all know who will wind up with whom eventually. But you're right; in the meantime, I see a world of pain heading our way. But you know how much I enjoy the angst! Thanks again for reading and for the comments, my friend. Michal and I really appreciate that. We should be able to get this updated soon; in the meantime, I'm heading over to "Parent Trap" to finish up the next chapter.;) *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: June 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Heartsick Orgrgugfdcbj% $/&£€####asdfghhjkkl i think that is quite the transcription of the noise I just made. I read the last 3 chapters in a row, and it was so great! So many feels and different emotions... i had a goofy smile, a hand on my mouth and a sad face. Congrats, good job! :) If i had a doubt before, now it is sure I ship badly Gus and Tristan. The last chapter was my fave... bad lindsay is bad. I hope she won't be the one to reveal the identity of the kinneys men's crush or that she won't go after Justin to ask him to leave Gus alone. "You are so gullible," he told him as Justin's heart promptly broke in two. "But you WERE good in bed." " my heart also broke. I am happy,I, finally, had the time to read the last 3 updates. Thank you. Can t wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! I understand that first sentence loud and clear - LOL! My thoughts exactly. Poor Justin - and Gus. Justin is in such deep pain right now, while poor Gus is just simply confused by his feelings for both Justin and Tristan. I really don't think Justin, though, will encourage Gus despite his sorrow at the moment. I think that will get resolved pretty quickly. The big secret at last is about to be revealed in the next chapter, though, and that promises to open up even more angst! Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment; we're so happy that you're enjoying this story, and we'll work on getting it updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: August 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Here Comes the Boom! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if I love you or "hate" you right now. This chapter was so good but I need more. I can't wait to read next chapter. Hope Brian won't be too much of an ass with Justin who "shared a kiss" with Gus the night before and with the other things his son told him about his crush. Thank you so much. Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I know - poor Gus; the kid just can't cut a break, kind of like Tristan. He's so mixed up with his feelings, and this is NOT going to help one bit. And you raise a good point; just how much will Justin and Gus tell him about their relationship? Brian already knows that his son 'shared a kiss' with this other boy he's interested in, and now he's no doubt going to know that the 'other boy' is Justin; just what does that mean? You know "Mr. I Don't Do Jealous" Brian; he was already jealous before; how is he going to react when he realizes it's his own son? Will he even let Justin explain that it was innocent and didn't get anywhere? Or will Gus run out before any of them can even talk? This is going to be a mess, but you know how much I relish angst, and this one has it big time! I'm hopeful that Michal and I can update quickly; we'll do our very best. Thank you for reading and for the comments! We appreciate the support so much and we're both delighted that you're following and enjoying this story. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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Date: August 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Desolation Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! Yeah, major angst and cliffy overload here. Mica is very evil.;) This will actually be a good thing in the long run, though; father and son obviously still have lots of issues to address, in addition to everything going on with Kayla, Owen, and Tristan. Will work hard to get this updated quickly! Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; it is greatly appreciated.;) *Hugs* ~Mica and Kim
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Date: October 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Please, God... Reading this chapter at work was not a good idea. But I was so happy to see an update. I don't want Gus to leave his home :( Great, wonderful chapter. Thank you so much Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Well, Mika and I are flattered that you would be so interested in the story that you would sneak a peek at work.;) I guess you have to look at it from the perspective of this being a hornone-driven, 16-year-old boy with all the emotions that go with that. I have a feeling, though, that another young man may be about to provide some much-needed comfort here.;) And I can't wait to work on the bedside scene when a certain blond finally wakes up to find his love sitting by his bed (at least, I hope that's what Mika has in mind for me to work with).;) Thanks very much for reading and for the comments! We both appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Mika and Kim
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Date: October 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: First Kiss I'm once again the best employee of the week, reading your update at work. :) Great chapter. I loved it:) the end made me happy. thank you Author's Response: LOL! You're funny! I promise not to tell your boss about it.;) Mika and I are delighted that you liked this chapter. We see probably two more to go before it's all done. Thank you for reading and for the comments! We will get this updated again soon. *Hugs* ~Mika and Kim Summary:
After centuries wandering around the world, Justin Taylor arrives in Pittsburgh with the intention of staying there for a while. He's young, handsome, wealthy - and immortal. Nothing is what it seems to be with Justin, especially when he takes over Babylon, the same Babylon that is Brian Kinney's personal playground. But who plays with whom when Justin enters Brian's world? Can either one of them win the game when the stakes are bloodcurdling? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Minor Character Death, VAMPIRES!, Violence Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 23549 [Report This] Published: December 01, 2012 Updated: February 28, 2013
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Date: December 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Shades of Immortality Usually,I don't read vampire!fic but I was intrigued that for once Justin was the vampire.
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Date: December 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon Another great chapter. I think I'm gonna love this story because I enjoy your style very much. It's well writen. I can't wait for the vampire things to happen because I have the feeling you're gonna make me like it. Thank you :) Author's Response: Oh, you made me blush! Thank you so much for your kind words! I promise you, there's some fang showing in the next chapter ;) And more vampire stuff will happen more or less in every chapter.
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Date: December 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night "Brian was certain that the blond-haired guy was older than he appeared to be on the outside" lol. You're right Brian, so much older.
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Date: December 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today Great chapter, loved it. Thank you Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you loved it :) Thank you for your comment!
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Date: January 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Rules You Have to Obey I can't blame Justin for his decision to avoid Brian. One fuck with him is not enough. Hehe.
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Date: January 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: In the Middle of the Dance Floor Justin suddenly decided to leave with Brian did not surprise or bother me.
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Date: February 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin nice chapter. Thank you Author's Response: No, thank you for reviewing! It's nice to know that you liked this chapter, because I have to admit, I was quite nervous about this one.
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Date: February 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Unthinkable Actions I can't believe I'm actually feeling sorry for Justin after he killed a woman but I am. Great chapter. Thank you.
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Date: February 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Importance of Friendship I decided to repost my review :) That was a really great chapter, I like Justin and Rafe's friendship and I can't wait for Thane to be, physically, part of our boys' present life. Thank you. Author's Response: Aww, thanks for reposting your review, I'm very thankful of that! :) We'll have to wait and see when Thane arrives to make things even more complicated. I like their friendship, too, so I'm happy that you liked it. Anyway, thank you so much for leaving a review - I get a chance to read the first one and now this, I'm truly thankful. (I know, there was pretty many 'thanks' in one respond :D) Summary:
When Babylon is bombed, Brian gets caught in the crossfire and loses his memory. Reliant on his friends to explain his life to him, Brian realises he doesn't like the person he once was and begins to live his life with his eyes open for the first time. AU Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1787 [Report This] Published: December 04, 2012 Updated: December 04, 2012
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Date: December 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Babylon's burning Your storyline seems promising. I liked the first chapter. I'm curious to read more. Thank you :) Summary:
Post Ep. 309 AU. Justin's relationship to Brian is being kept private from his other employees. Will it remain that way when Christmas comes? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, One-Off Fic, Romance, Christmas Characters: Brian, Cynthia Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7404 [Report This] Published: December 15, 2012 Updated: December 15, 2012
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Date: December 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Sherlock and the Green Monster I love office!story when Justin's and Brian's relationship is a secret and I love jealous!Brian so your story was pure joy.
Thank you Kim :) Author's Response: Thank YOU for your kindess in reading and reviewing; I am very grateful for all your support. Hope you have a wonderful holiday and coming new year, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
It’s 1887 in England, and the Taylors move to London so young Justin can attend art school. A family who has everything ends up losing it all. Can Justin recover from a tragedy too horrible for one so young to understand? - A Novelette - This story is good if you are learning English. Short & Simple! Banner by Predec2. Categories: Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor, Minor Character Death, Out of Character, Romance, Violence Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 7931 [Report This] Published: December 19, 2012 Updated: January 13, 2013
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Date: January 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: London I don't know why but I wanted to read your story in a row, did not want to wait for update. So I was happy to see, this morning, that it was completed. I really like how this chapter turned out. I was smoking the good stuff when I wrote this one.
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Date: January 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Bobbie The last line is hard. I dated a doctor in my youth and trust me; t hey have a very warped sense of gallows humor about life. Paramedics are equally nuts too. Thank you so much for all these great review comments that made my day.
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Date: January 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: First Contact «love at first bite» :) hehehehehehehe
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Date: January 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Purchase When did Amber become Molly? I goofed and typed Molly. Thanks for pointing this out to me. My pleasure giving you this story too. Summary:
Justin's last christmas was nothing as special as this one..... Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1596 [Report This] Published: December 22, 2012 Updated: December 22, 2012
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Date: December 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was sweet. Thank you Summary:
When you marry into a family, you get the whole package deal... Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Drabbles, One-Off Fic Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 352 [Report This] Published: January 03, 2013 Updated: January 03, 2013
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Date: January 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Package Deal Oh that so sweet. Thank you, I loved it. Summary:
The story begins with Justin celebrating his 19th birthday. He's the second year college student, out and proud, with life full with faithfull friends, loving family, colleagues who admire him, and others who admire him from afar. When he encounters Brian Kinney, he soon realizes that not everything was set to stone in his life. How will Justin handle always-difficult-never-serious Brian? Will Justin prove to be an equal to Brian? Let's find out together :) An enormous THANK YOU to wonderful Kim (a.k.a Predec2) for making this banner. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Drama, Jealousy, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 24798 [Report This] Published: January 06, 2013 Updated: May 24, 2015
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Date: January 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Where you belong Great chapter. I love humor in fic. I was a bit afraid when Justin threw the paper. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I do enjoy writing this one :)
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Date: January 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue «Schmidt zone» lool. Thanks :) I hope I can deliver what I have in my head. Thank you again for reading my story.
Raine
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Date: January 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Family affair Really great chapter. I enjoy your style, and I like the canon elements: Justin nervousness and innocence, the interruption in order to rush to the hospital for Gus. They fucked behing the building and in the loft? way to go Justin Can't wait for the next chapter, thank you. Author's Response: Thank a lot :) Yes, I always try to incorporate canon elements just because they were so good! But why not give it a little lift? :) Justin's character deserves it
Raine
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: What I see great chapter, thank you. Author's Response: :) Thank you!
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Blame it on Thai food Haha I like when Brian makes a fool of himself.
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Date: January 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Doubts Great chapter, I liked it a lot.
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Date: January 17, 2013 Title: Oblivion - Reboot I liked this chapter a lot. I love your Brian/Justin relationship in this story. Ethan made me laugh with his attempts to catch Justin's attention/interest. Can't wait to know what he's planning now he knows Brian's name and address. Thank you. Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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Date: January 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: The Run Great chapter. Loved it. Thank you. Thanks for reading it :)
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Date: January 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: The Climax More more more more. :) Glad you like it. more coming soon...
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Date: January 27, 2013 Title: Oblivion - Reboot Hope Ethan will ask for help before destroying another couch. Maybe he will ask for help... yeah, maybe :) Thanks for your review :)
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Date: February 03, 2013 Title: Oblivion - Reboot Yeah crazy Ethan is back. Thank you :)
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Date: February 11, 2013 Title: Oblivion - Reboot I was afraid Brian might get mad at Justin. Brian can become a P.I ^^ Great chapter, I love your story. Thank you Author's Response: Well, he may still be in doubt...who knows :) Thank you so much Summary:
Brian is forced to take dance lessons when he loses a bet. But does his luck change when he meets his beautiful, blond, dance instructor? B/J AU Romance. *STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!* Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance Characters: Brian, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Justin, Other Canon Characters Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 42256 [Report This] Published: January 07, 2013 Updated: January 11, 2013
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Date: January 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Bet yeah a new story :) I'm sure I'm gonna love this story. Great start. Thank you. Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're very kind.:) I'll probably post another chapter later this evening to introduce the other contestants. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting the Instructors and the Competition «time and gravity hadn't been kind to her since then» lol. Hi, my friend! Well, I can certainly relate to Debbie's condition - ha! Thanks for reading and for the comments; I really appreciate that.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: The First Lesson Thank you, I like this story very much. Thank YOU for reading and for the support; been really quiet on here lately.:/ I'll post probably two chapters a day until it's done. Thank you again for reading and especially commenting; I am very grateful for that. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Getting to Know Each Other Better 3 new chapters!!! Thank you Kim. Picturing Brian dancing quickstep made my day. " I AM taller - and bigger...At least where it counts" Wrong Justin's ass is bigger ^^
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: The Lesson Continues So great, when I start a new chapter, you add another one. I love that game ^^ Nice chapter, I volunteer to massage Brian. Thank you.
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: A Personal Mission I was wondering what was Debbie's personal reason for agreeing to help with the benefit. Hi, my friend; no, Michael is mentioned, but I don't think he would have really contributed to this story, so he's just mentioned in passing. Thank you for all the reviews, BTW, and for reading; I really appreciate that a lot. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: An Unexpected Offer Italian restaurant after 7? wow 2 rules broken for litlle Justin. Great chapter, loved it, thank you :3 Author's Response: Hi, my friend; I just posted some more. I'll post some additional chapters tomorrow. Thank you again for all your support; it means a lot to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Ready ""He owns a grocery store?"""Not before I take a picture...."I made the most awkward noise laughing at these lines. I'm having a lot of fun reading your story, thank you.
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: First Date Thank you for your amazing update today :). love it.
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Date: January 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Kiss Me Goodnight Tha was so sweet and funny. Thank you, my friend, for all the comments and for reading; that means a lot to me! I will be adding some more chapters hopefully tonight; there are 19 in all.:) Thank you again for all the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Last Rehearsal I can't believe I'm getting anxious over a dancing contest. What have you done to me Kim? I'd love to see Brian in a dance costume. Are the costumes the reason they won't win (if they don't)? Thank you, see you next chapter.
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Getting Ready to Compete 4 chapters!! *happy dance* They can't lose! Nobody can beat Justin/brian's waltz ! Somebody is going to be hurt? I need to click on 'next'. Thank you, later :) PS: I forgot to submit my review, I was too in a hurry to read the next chapter..silly me.
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: May the Best Man Win Oh Emmet, don't tease the beast. next next next next thanks
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Shall We Dance? You can't leave me there. I want to know what Debbie is going to do or what she did. Did she use tylenol for Justin's costume? Thank you so much for your update. Later :) You're welcome, my friend; and thank YOU for all the reviews! I appreciate that more than you know.:) I'll update this again tomorrow. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: First Round Brian is so wrong when it's about Drew (and Emmett). Can't wait for him to know the truth. I think he won't be mad at Emmett because without the bet, no Justin.
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Misstep Poor Justin. Doctor/nurse!Brian will take care of him. Hi, my dear - funny you should say that, because the next chapter is entitled "Tender Loving Care." I'll be posting that in a little while.:) And I think it will make a lot of people happy.:) Thanks again for all the wonderful comments and reviews! *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Tender Loving Care *Goofy smile* Ha! It was a long time coming (emphasis on the 'coming' part)! Glad that you enjoyed it (wink, wink). Thanks again for all the comments; I love the feedback! *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: I'm the Winner Brian is the romantic sap. I should be the one thanking YOU for all the wonderful feedback! That is always what drives me to keep writing, so I thank you sincerely. I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
Brian finds something about Justin different. Here are his musings concerning them. Post 513. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 297 [Report This] Published: January 08, 2013 Updated: January 08, 2013
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Date: January 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loved it. Funny and sweet. Summary:
What was supposed to be the best night of Molly's life takes a turn for the worst when four young men fail to understand that No means No. in an attempt to help Molly through this difficult time, Justin seeks the help of Brian Kinney, one of Pittsburgh's most successful lawyers. Can these two head strong men keep their relationship strictly professional once they've met? Read and find out :) Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, Rape Characters: Brian, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 14784 [Report This] Published: January 09, 2013 Updated: October 29, 2015
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Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Graduation Night The Taylor siblings are not the luckiest people in the world... I'm very curious about this story, can't wait to read more. Thank you. Author's Response: The Taylor clan aren't very fortunate in the luck department are they? Although they will fight for each other tooth and nail when fucked with. More as soon as I can~ JP
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Date: February 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Fade Away Poor Molly. Your plot is not an easy one, but your writing style does not make it painful (more than necessary) to read. Thank you for this chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more. Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful compliment my dear :) I'm trying to keep the graphic images of Molly's suffering to a minimum until absolutely necessary. More as soon as I can~JPAuthor's Response: Thank you for the wonderful compliment my dear :) I'm trying to keep the graphic images of Molly's suffering to a minimum until absolutely necessary. More as soon as I can~JPSummary:
This was written for the QAF xmas gift exchange. The request was for a fic where one of them has cancer. It is NOT a death fic. It is one of the hardest fics I've ever written. Beta by the fabulous JustBeAQueen. Comments are always welcome. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3805 [Report This] Published: January 12, 2013 Updated: January 12, 2013
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Date: January 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sad and beautiful. Thank you Thank you for your thoughts. Glad you liked it. Summary:
Short One-Fic. Only in death does the truth shine the brightest. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Minor Character Death Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 638 [Report This] Published: January 14, 2013 Updated: January 14, 2013
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Date: January 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bigotry The joy of having a shitty father and the mixed emotion we feel about them. You did a great job. Thank you for reading and for the feedback, my friend; I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
AU: Brian loses a game of pool and, subsequently, a bet, but gains more than he imagined. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance, What If Characters: Ben, Ted Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2815 [Report This] Published: January 24, 2013 Updated: January 24, 2013
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Date: January 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Brian loosing a bet is my new favorite thing. Thank you so very much! I'm so glad you liked this. Cheers, Vin Summary:
A series of snapshots and scenes providing a glimpse into the journey of the post-series life of Brian and Justin. *COMPLETE*
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 37902 [Report This] Published: January 28, 2013 Updated: February 18, 2013
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Date: February 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing New Year's Eve? «you're home to me» oh so sweeeeet.
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Date: February 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: 39 Thank you for the update. It is really pleasant to read, love the maturity of their relationship.
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Date: February 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Scrabble That was perfect. so cute. thank you Author's Response: thank you! :)
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Date: February 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Halloween Lovely chapter. I loved it. Thank you.
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Date: February 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Gus That chapter was so beautiful. My favorite. Thank you. Thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed it! Summary:
Valentine's Day One-Fic, Post-513 AU. All it took was three words to completely change an uneventful day into an amazing one...
Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance, Valentine's Day Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: Scavenger Hunt Stories Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10028 [Report This] Published: February 13, 2013 Updated: February 13, 2013
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Date: February 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Come Find Me... Ooooooooh that was so good! Thank you. So glad that you liked it, my friend! Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave me feedback; that means a lot to me. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
They say the road to hell is paved with good intentions. Jack Kinney never gave it much thought but, at the end of his life, he no longer has the luxury of avoiding that kind of introspection. Now Jack is about to learn that putting your affairs in order is difficult, even with an angelic blond kid to guide him. But some damage is irreparable; some hurts, unforgivable; and some truths, impossible to accept. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death, Romance Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 41132 [Report This] Published: March 01, 2013 Updated: March 19, 2013
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Date: March 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter I It's a real pleasure to read you.
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Date: March 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter IV Thabk you for this story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Date: March 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter V Thank you for this chapter :)
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Date: March 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter VI Oh that was a very emotional chapter. Thank you
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Date: March 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter VII Molly did not find it strange that a 30ish men knew his brother who died when he (brian) was just a child or maybe not even born? Don't know why in my head, Molly is old. Anyway, this chapter was amazing. I love this story. Thank you so much. Summary:
It's that age old Brian and Justin story only with a few twists and turns, dribbles and nutmegs. Brian is our much loved ad exec and Justin is a 17 year old semi-pro soccer player trying to find his way in a world that doesn't always accept his sexuality. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Humor, Real Life Issues, Romance Characters: Brian, Chris Hobbs, Craig Taylor, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Ted, Vic Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 13264 [Report This] Published: March 03, 2013 Updated: March 13, 2013
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Date: March 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The End In The Beginning Thanks for reposting. Like I said before I'm looking forward to reading more :)
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Date: March 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: One-on-one I love that Justin named Brian «the guy». I find it hilarious. Thank you for this chapter.
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Date: March 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Against The Run Of Play I'm feeling so stupid right now, I did not pay attention to your title before. So little Justin will leave the Pitts for Munich? Interesting choice. Anyway, thank you for this chapter. Author's Response: He does leave, but not for Munich. I chose Mia San Mia as the title because of its meaning; 'we are who we are'. It's just a happy little coinkydink. :o) |
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