Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Penname: GravityAlwaysWins [Contact]
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Hi there!


I'm relatively new to the world of fanfiction, but I hope to become more involved in the future.


Feedback on my stories is always welcome and greatly appreciated :)


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Name Calling by Flossee Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

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What’s in a name?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Bdsm, Brian/Justin, Humor, One-Off Fic Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Drew Boyd, Emmett, Justin, Michael, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: Fun with Brian and Justin
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 426
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2012 Updated: November 15, 2012


Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: November 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was wonderful - funny and surprising!  Very well done :)



Author's Response: I love your sign on GravityAlwaysWins. Thank you for those wonderful words; I’m so pleased that I have been able to surprise people. I really appreciate you taking the time to review. Cheers

 
Point of View by Flossee Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Whose P.O.V.

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 2320
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2013 Updated: July 19, 2013


Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: September 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Hi Flossee! :)

I just read through your entire P.O.V. series.  I had great fun trying to guess whose point of view each chapter was being told from.

But I must admit, Blake overdosing and dying...My poor Ted and Blake lovin' heart :(  You warned me and it still hurt. 

All if forgiven though, because this fic was so lovely and unique :)  As I read it, I laughed and I nearly cried.  I love when a fic can makes me feel so much.

Thank you for this wonderful treat :)

~Sarah



Author's Response: Hello Sarah What you have written makes this my best review ever; as you said it made you laugh and nearly cry. I’m chuffed that I could get both those reactions in such a short fic. I’m really glad you enjoyed the guessing and I apologize for Blake’s demise. I’ll just let you know, I never kill off a character more than once, so Blake is safe now. Thank you so much for letting me know you read this and I really appreciate you saying it is lovely and unique. Cheers

 
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for September 2018***

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Begins 2 years after 513.  Justin has moved back to the Pittsburgh area, and he and Brian are established partners. Life is full of changes. There will be multiple chapters and additional characters.  Banner by Marny


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama Characters: Brian, Jennifer Taylor, Joan Kinney, Justin, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: Together Forever
Chapters: 100 Completed: Yes Word count: 457475
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2013 Updated: September 02, 2018


Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: October 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Bill,

So, saying that I’m late to the party is the understatement of the century.  I’ve been meaning to read your story for quite some time. 

I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter!  Poor Brian – the flu is never fun, but he’s got a very good caretaker in Justin.  Also, $25,000 for a roof?  Something seems fishy to me. 

Love it so far!  I look forward to reading more :)



Author's Response:

Hope you continue to enjoy the story.  I am working on chapter 51 so that is a lot of story to catch up on.  I hope you make it through.  I hope this reading time doesn't delay any updates for "The Visitor" that would be bad.  Thanks,  Bill

 
Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: October 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another wonderful chapter, Bill :)  I loved Jennifer mothering Brian, and Brian's reaction was so sweet.  You also have me quite curious about Claire. 

I always loved the scenes in the show featuring the Kinney family members.  I'm happy to see Joan and Claire being included here - not that I like them as people very much, but I always find their relationship with Brian to be interesting :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  Lots of Claire and Joan in the subsequent chapters. I agree that while they are hateful people the whole Kinney family dynamic is interesting.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story, it is cool to hear from someone starting back at the beginning of the story.  Bill

 
Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: April 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi Bill :)

What a wonderful chapter!  I must admit, I laughed out loud at the "Justin, GOOD SUIT!" line :P  

Then, I melted at this beautifully written bit - "Brian woke up the next morning, shortly before the alarm went off, with a blonde head nestled on his shoulder and an arm, not his own, resting on his stomach. He found his feelings of love and contentment almost overwhelming. Brian ran his fingers through Justin’s soft blonde hair causing his partner to wake up and smile. “Morning Sunshine."

I can't wait to see where you're taking this.  I have a long way to go, but I'm sure I'll enjoy the journey :)



Author's Response:

Hope you continue to enjoy the story, yiu have a bunch of chapters to get through.  Thanks for letting me know you are reading.  Bill

 
Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: May 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hi Bill!

This was excellent!  I loved the way Father Bolton handled the incident with Joan.  It was so satisfying.  I'm off to read another chapter :)



Author's Response:

You have a lot of reading to do, there are bunch more chapters to get through. Took me a minute to realize you were commenting on an early chapter it's been a while since FR Bolton has been heard from. Happy you are enjoying the story, hope you continue to enjoyt it. Bill

 
Choices by Alois Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

This is the prologue of "Consequences" - Two men have to say good bye...Post Season 5

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other Characters: Brian, Justin, Michael
Challenges: None
Series: Choices and Consequences Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1291
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2014 Updated: June 15, 2014


Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: October 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bonjour, Alois!

I finally got a chance to sit down and read something of yours.  This story is so, so beautifully written :)  I’m really having an incredibly difficult time believing that English is not your first language.  Sentences like this one had me savouring every word: “He seems paralyzed, lost in thought, grounded to the asphalt of the sidewalk, though if one looked closer, they would notice that his line of vision never alters.”

Your writing is so wonderfully descriptive.  I can picture every scene and every moment.

I also love you for daring to split Brian and Justin up - something not many are willing to do.  Thank you for writing such a lovely prologue.  You definitely have me intrigued!  I look forward to more about Brian’s ability to love :)

*hugs from Canada*



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!

Thank you so much for your kinds words. This story was the first I ever wrote in my life and I'm really thrilled you liked it! ***big smile***. I love to describe moments and emotions, so it seems we have something in common ;P

I was just about to read more of your story and I say it again, I love the way you write, the description of each passing moment, your obsession of the details. To me, you have a gift to describe things and you're an amazing author.

and thank you for actually supporting me about splitting Brian and Justin. I know it's not a popular move, but writing about it is really interesting for me, as it allows me to write a different story, even if I know it's not a story for every one. 

* big hugs my dear friend *

~alois~

PS: thanks for choosing this sentence and telling me you have savoured it, it's actually my favorite sentence too in this story :D

 

 
Consequences by Alois Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 376]
Summary: Feature

Brian and Justin have to say good bye when an opportunity takes Justin to Europe. Even if their love is the love of a lifetime, they have to move on. This story is Brian's journey, with his friends, his family and more...Post Season 5. Sequel of "Choices," which should be read first. Warning: Brian emotionally involved with another man

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A special thanks to Marny for the new, amazing/beautiful/incredible banner she created for me.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Justin/Other-Relationship, Real Life Issues Characters: Ben, Brian, Cynthia, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: Choices and Consequences Series
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 160452
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2014 Updated: January 29, 2015


Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: November 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooo, very interesting first chapter!  I can’t wait to see where you’re taking this.  I’m curious about this Aiden fellow :P   Also, I couldn’t help but giggle when Justin laughed at Brian’s story about being on the subway. 

I still love your descriptive style of writing, Alois.  It’s a real treat to read :) 



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!

Oh, thank you my friend :) I must warn you that the first chapter has been betaed, but I'm not so sure about the second and the third. Also, I feel like it was a long time ago when I wrote these chapters, when it has only been four months...Where does the time go?

I hope you will enjoy this story. Anyway, thank you for giving it a try!

I myself should have a little time today to read the following chapters of your story. I can't wait ;)

*big hugs*

~alois~

 
Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: November 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hi Alois!

Gosh, there are so many perfect things about this chapter that I want to mention, but I’m having trouble remembering them all because there were so many.  I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again – I LOVE your writing :)

You write the Michael/Brian and Ted/Emmett friendships *so* well.  Seriously, I am in awe!  The dialogue is just perfect and completely believable.  I also love that you included Debbie.  She’s definitely one of my favourite characters and you’ve captured her beautifully in your writing.

I can’t say enough good things about this chapter.  It was the perfect mix of drama and comedy.  I absolutely adored it.  Thank you! :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!

I'm so glad you like it ** smiling ** And I really love you for pointing that you like the scenes between Brian/Michael and Ted/Emmett :) Not to forget Debbie, who I love dearly too ;)

At the beginning of the story, I tried to mix some funny moments with the drama going on, but I think I failed at one point to carry on the fun... But I try too when I can :)

Thank you to read this story again, and I'm really happy that you enjoy it. I hope you will enjoy the following chapters if you decide to read them :) and I'm also thrilled you find it believable. Some readers can't imagine Brian with another man so they consider this story an AU (and I understand why they do), but I try to stay as close to the characters in canon as possible anyway.

*big hugs!*

~alois~

 

 

 
Believe by Judge Superwoman Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

It's a little ficlet about Debbie (and Carl) taking place in 2014. Someone on Tumblr sent me a prompt with my favorite QAF character and the word "believe" so I came up with this.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family, Romance Characters: Carl, Debbie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 474
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2014 Updated: November 02, 2014


Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: November 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes!  You posted it! :D  And you've already got reviews!  See?  What did I tell you? :P  Everyone on MidnightWhispers is wonderful :)

I still love this little ficlet, darlin' :)  Thank you for adding some beautiful and much needed diversity to the world of QaF fanfiction.  I hope you'll write and share more stories in the future.  This one will always be a true pleasure to read :)

 



Author's Response:

Awww thank you darling :) Yes, everyone is being a sweetheart here. It certainly makes me want to write more. We'll see! ;)

 
Introspection by Alois Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

*The first time you saw him, you wanted him. There was something about him that made him glow. And no, you weren’t stupid enough to confuse it with the light from the street lamp he was standing under. But maybe you were high. You did take some E that night…*

Brian finally talks about his feelings...to himself. 

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: Brian, Chris Hobbs, Craig Taylor, Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Michael
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4100
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2015 Updated: October 04, 2015


Reviewer: GravityAlwaysWins Signed
Date: April 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Season one

Hello there, my friend :)

I was so happy to return to MW after a long absense, and find a new fic from one of my favourite writers (you!) :P

This was simply beautiful - a true gem of a story <3   It was comical at times, and yet ultimately so moving.  What a wonderful and revealing trip through Brian's mind!  I'm so glad you shared it with us.  Thank you! :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah! I' m so thrilled to see you back here 😊. And sorry for the delay in my response, this week had been crazy! I'm very happy you liked this one, thank you so much for letting me know. I've seen you've posted a new story *happy dance* I'm eager to read it; I' m so beyond my reading now, but I'm going to have a little time to read in the next few days, hopefully lol. Anyway, thank you again and I can't wait to read your new story :) take care