Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 14

Thanks for the story. I'm happy you ended it if you weren't comfortable with it. Mixing universes is hard to do well.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

Now that the canon and the characters are established adding original ideas would spice up the story. Glad I stop to read you though before writing my next chapter of Embraced. I'll watch for your updates.

Love,

JTSecrets



Author's Response: thanks for all your comments. ive been trying to get more creative just been writers blocked for weeks.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 12

Good! they did the nasty, now they can fu*k like rabbits on speed.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 11

Humm.....nice foreplay but we some nasty girls.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

What now? 25 chapters of B/J angst?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 9

Time to slip the cold tube steak into the hot buns

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 8

More talking intros? And all that ad naseum canon? I still like the story though.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 7

Finally some action; Justin gets his vampire hybrid in the end I hope. One flaw in your plot; how did bro drive ethan home when he flew in?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

Interesting how you turn this.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm faged out with introductions. Action please!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

Transistion chapter, glad to get the introductions out of the way; on with the show.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

Nice chapter with several typos however. Glad to hear Ethan is doomed.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

Goodie Goodie! I hate Ethan with a passion. On to read more of your story. I hope a vampire eats Ethan; that would be so cool.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Although I don't know Dante's Cove this is an interesting story and well written. Hate Justin and Ethan though with a passion. Maybe you have a plan to fix that? hehehehe

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi lady. I'm enjoying the story so far. The only thing is I know about Qaf, and Dante's Cove. But I don't know anything about twilight or the Cullens. So if you don't mind, could you give us a short background on who they are. I would understand what is going on better. Thank you.

Author's Response: hi thanks for your comment i'll be working on telling tell a little about the cullens in chapter 9 i dont know much about them since i only read the first book but i hope what information i write down is helpful

Reviewer: dollparts (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is definitely a very fun and unique story line. I like how you have blended the campy and corkyness of Dantes Cove with The seriousness of twilight and QAF. Even though they never showed it in QAF I always felt Justin was very spiritually connected, I like how you have thrown that into the mix. I can’t wait until he meets the yummy Brian *wink*. BTW the banner is beautiful I liked the first one too.



Author's Response: oh thank you very much. i changed it because i just thought it was too many people in it and i wanted to make it simple

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