Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 10:12 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
Oh
Reviewer: Lissa (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
Amazing! Are there other chapters after 10? Can't wait !
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2012 08:14 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
HI DARLING
WHERE ARE YOU??????
IT IS VERY HARD TO WAIT FOR YHIS BEUTIFUL STORY
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2012 01:43 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
so nice update update
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 03:10 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
dear i know it is very hard to update fast but please try and update sooner than befor it is hard to wait
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 02:55 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
it was very very very good
we learn alot of thing from this story itis not only a story it is usefull
please another part dear
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
OH M Y GOD IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL PLEASE CAN NOT WAIT FOT TOO LONG UPDATE SOON
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2011 05:01 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
I love this fic!!! so so happy that you updated.
Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
OH!!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR AN UPDATE FOR 7 MONTHS, BUT I KNOW HOW THAT IT WAS WORTH WHILE!!! PLEASE, UPDATE AS YOU CAN!! DO NOT LEAVE ME WAITING FOR ANOTHER 6 MONTHS!!! YOU MUST KNOW THAT I LIKE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH AND ALSO I LIKE YOUR ENGLISH AND YOUR FOOTNOTES IN ARABIC!!!
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 11:02 AM · On: The journey begins
I'm ashamed to say I had not reviewed. This is a favorite of mine. I can't believe I hadn't. This starts off well.
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
I kept rechecking this. I could not believe you undated. I had given up. This is my favorite Justin/slave story. Thank you!!!
Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 01:59 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
I love the story so far. Definitely a twist. Good job.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2011 11:09 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
oh my god !!!! I really love your story please update sooooooooooooooooooooooooon.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 12:48 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail
:) Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Charles (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2011 09:57 PM · On: The journey begins
Oh, I am so glad you gave us another chapter to this story. Thanks!
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2011 07:26 PM · On: A Harem night
OH MY DARLING .............PLEASE PLEASE IT IS A LONG TIME PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN I WANT TO KNOW END OF THIS STORY
Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2011 02:14 PM · On: A Harem night
HI ZAHAR I HOPE YOU UPDATE VERY SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN BEACUSE I CAN NOT WAIT ANYMORE
WHEN A PERSON WRITE A HISTORICAL STORY IS VERY HARD IF YOU WRITE ABOUT ANOTHER CUSTOM IS MUCH HARDER
I AM VERY GLAD YOU WRITE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND HISTORICAL STORY I LIKE A WORD END OF EACH UPDATE PLEASE COUNTINU THIS STORY LEARN US ALOT OF NEW THINGS
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 03:23 AM · On: A Harem night
Ok..your story is very lovely... and I enjoyed every word while reading it...but you are making a list of some words at the end of every chapter and you label them as Arabic words without any exceptions...I'm very eloquent in Arabic language maybe even more than my native language and I can assure you that some of those words not related to arabic language in any way, like (odalisque, seraglio or serail, kizlar agasi, Janissares, divan, Topkapi, ) maybe they are pure Turkish or maybe they are derived from another language ..anyway Turks and Arabs have the same religion and some times they use the same religious names such as (Ali ,Brahim,Mehmed,Mikal).
Later.
Author's Response: Hello Dilia,
you are correct of course, the words that you mentioned are Turkish of Persian. I didn't want to trouble my readers too much with historical or linguistic information. I have never claimed to write a story that's historically correct and will never do so, I just write because I enjoy it. Since I'm a professor in ancient languages, I will keep the scientific approach for my teaching hours. Thank you!
Reviewer: Misha (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2011 03:52 PM · On: A Harem night
Hey! Beautiful chapter. Can't wait to see the rest! :)
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2011 06:18 PM · On: A Harem night
HI A ALONG TIME MY DEAR ZAHAR PLEASE UPDATE THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY
Reviewer: sansa (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2011 10:17 AM · On: A Harem night
I really like your story so far... hopefully justin is attracted to brahim soon... cant wait for more, update soon please!!
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 09:55 AM · On: A Harem night
So very excited to see an update... Loved the new chapter :o) I'm glad to see that Brian was understanding to Justin's situation. More please!
Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 09:21 PM · On: A Harem night
i come every day and i hope you update
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 04:33 PM · On: A Harem night
very nice chapter ........ i can not wait until sultan say his love to justin
Reviewer: BRI (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 02:43 AM · On: A Harem night
WOW WOW .SULTAN SPANK HIS SLAVE VERY NICE ITWAS AGOOD CHAPTER . I ONLY HOPE WE DONT WAIT VERY LONG
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2011 02:14 AM · On: A Harem night
i only hope justin belive itis his life now poor justin god help him
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2011 06:24 PM · On: A Harem night
hi zahar
iam glad for your update but please update faster beacuse itis hard wait for 3month to read another chapter
have nice day
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2011 01:44 AM · On: A Harem night
OH MY GOD IT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL ...........
A SPANK OH VERY NICE
I LOVE THIS STORY BUT PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNNNN
Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 04:58 AM · On: A Harem night
thank you very much for the new chapter!!! it was excellent!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 04:41 AM · On: The gift
PLEASE, UPDATE !!! IT CAN'T STOP LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!! I WILL BE WAITING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 04:39 AM · On: Brahim ibn Ali
YOU JUST TOOK MY BREATH AWAY WITH YOUR STORY!!!! I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT .....I SIMPLY LOVE ARABIC LANGUAGE AND CULTURE ( I LIVED IN LIBYA FOR 2 YEARS WHEN I WAS 12, THEN I WORKED IN DUBAI) AND WHEN I READ IT FOR THE FIRST TIME I FELT THAT SOMETING WAS GOING ON.....SOMETHING VERY BEATIFUL....
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2011 07:51 AM · On: The journey begins
Please, Zahar, update soon! I love your story :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2011 04:44 PM · On: The gift
HI ZAHAR .... WHERE ARE YOU?
PLEASE COUNTINU THIS STORY
Reviewer: stbobolin (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 06:28 PM · On: The gift
Dear Z, I love your story very much!
They finally meet each other at this chapter!
and I can't wait for next one.
please go on~
^_^I am your big fan~
Reviewer: petal (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:14 PM · On: The gift
your story is very amazing and i am intersting for more chapter
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2010 01:27 AM · On: The gift
ha ha ha i am aevil i cannt wait for firsth sex betwen sultan and justin
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:10 PM · On: The gift
OH DARLING PLEASE HARRY UP ANOTHER CHAPTER
Reviewer: bri (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:29 PM · On: The gift
this story is amazing
thanks for arabic word
update please
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2010 03:58 AM · On: The gift
i love this story
Reviewer: b/j (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2010 02:36 PM · On: The gift
tankyou for update and tanka for this beautiful story but please do not wait us very update agin
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 09:59 PM · On: The gift
hi zahar iam very glad yourstory is update............ oh ihop sultan doesnot problem whit his haram or miky ........... soon soon soon updte update
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 06:45 PM · On: The gift
the moment is gething close.update sooooooooooooooooooooooooon
Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:10 PM · On: The gift
WOW WOW WOW .................. GO AHEAD SOON ANOTHER CHAPTER ICAN NOT UNTIL SOLTUN INVITED OR DRAGG HIS SLAVE TO HIS BED.......... HAHAHA ...... LOVE
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 02:58 AM · On: The gift
OH DARLING TANCKYOU FOR UPDATE ........... OH OH PLEASE ANOTHER CHAOTER ICAN NOT WAIT FOR MEET BETWEN BRIAN AND JUSTIN IAM WAIT ANOTER CHAPTER
LATER
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 10:19 PM · On: The gift
Loved the chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter and the meeting Brahim/Justin... And the night, god, just to think about it give me shudders of anticipation... =)
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Journey to the East
i absolutely adore this story. Please update it soon :)
Reviewer: Kora (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Journey to the East
I'm so happy I've got see another chapter for this story! Short though, but interesting.
And so Justin/Shapphire/Shamsy is gonna meet his next master...Poor thing, he's petrified.
Hope to hearing very soon from you on MW, Zahar. Keep up the good work!
Kora
Reviewer: jj (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Journey to the East
oh
iam very interesting to your story go ahead anoter chapter
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Journey to the East
Absolutely vivid!!! I saw it happening before me......at the end of my seat awaiting the next episode.
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Journey to the East
please please please ................. countinu countinu countinu ..... do not leave me in this part very long
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Journey to the East
hi comon girl ................ update very very very soon ......
kiss............
Reviewer: plucc@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Journey to the East
I enjoyed this story when you first started writing it and was sorry that you had not updated for a long time. I am glad to see that you are back and hope that you finish.
Reviewer: bri (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Journey to the East
HELLO
Iam very lazy about review but your story is very special........
1 ITis beautiful story about b/j
2 THIS story say alot about muslim
3 we can lear arabic word ................... countinu ..... thanks
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Journey to the East
ah poor,justin.maybe brian mite free him.after he hears what happened.how he was taken.and yeappe an update
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Journey to the East
I'm really glad that you are continuing this story ;) Hope you'll be able to update soon again
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Journey to the East
OHHHHHHHH ... DARLING ZAHAR............... IT WAS VERY SHORT OH NOW WE SHOULD WAIT FOR VERY LONG TIME UNTIL YOU UPDAIT AGAIN ....................... YOUR STORY IS VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL PLEASE COUNTINU SONNNNNNNN ..
LATER
Reviewer: Tabularaza (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Journey to the East
Update soon!
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Journey to the East
I really like your story (already) and I can't wait to read the confrontation of Brian/Brahim and Justin. The chapter was good, but short, thought. Anyway, update soon, please!! I don't know what will happen next but I have a good vibe about this story! =)
Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Journey to the East
Please, update soon! Can't wait to read the rest
Reviewer: arven (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 02:08 AM · On: The journey begins
your story is really great! please update as soon as you can
i'm just dying to read about their meeting
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Journey to the East
great story
Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient
HI DARLING ... WHERE ARE YOU ? PLEASE UPDAIT
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient
I really like this story so far... It's very original! I'm really looking forward to read following chapters! =)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Leyla
Thank you for answering my comment. It wasn't meant to be a warning but to alert you that there is much more interest in your story than the number of review comments or even read hits will show you. We all understand how real life gets in the way of writing which is something I'm experiencing now.
I hoped to encourage you and thank you for writing this. Since I feel better that you will finish the story I'll go ahead and start reading it soon. I'm certain from reading your review comments that this is going to be an excellent read.
bob
Reviewer: MARY (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient
HI . WE KNOW YOU ARE BUSY BUT WE LOVE YOUR STORY AND WE WANT MORE VERY SONNNNNNNN PLEASE
Reviewer: Snow (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient
I'm so happy to see this story here on MW. I can't wait to read your updates!
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Introduction to the Orient
hi
Iam muslim ...... I read your story and iam very glad .ilove your story ........ update
tancksssssssssss
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Introduction to the Orient
wow.......... zahar this chapter was very nice ican not wait for another ............ please audate very very soonnnnnnnnnnnn
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Leyla
This story is on my must read list but frankly I've been burned too many times getting into a story that isn't finished. I'm very sure your excellent plot will be well read when you 1) post chapters more often, and 2) complete it.
A time period, foreign setting is always very popular and this one is very unique. I commend you for writing it with English not being your primary language as well. So I just wanted to say many are waiting to see how this story goes but 6 chapters in 9 months from a new author frightens some readers.
Let me alert you to the fact you will have a following for this story as more current postings and completion happens.
Author's Response: Hi,
thank you for your review and warning. I understand your concern but I'm afraid I will not be able to complete this story quickly. My life with a full time job and a carreer as a bellydancer is just to hectic. Finding time to write is a luxury I often don't have.
But thank you for the warning.
x Zahar
Reviewer: arven (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient
tnanks for updating!!
can't wait to read about J meeting the sultan
Reviewer: arven (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:33 AM · On: The dey of Algiers
please update as soon as you can! can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:50 PM · On: The journey begins
please, oh please update soon. I can't wait to see Brians reaction to sweet and innocent Justin^^
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2010 04:48 PM · On: The journey begins
hello
hurry up ... update very soooon
thank ful
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2010 01:21 AM · On: The dey of Algiers
hi............. very cute and please update please
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2010 03:35 AM · On: The dey of Algiers
hi......... Ilove your story Ican not wait ....... what time sultan and justin meet together............ please moreeeeeeeeee
Reviewer: jus (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:24 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
hello........ hurry up zahar please update soooooooooon
Reviewer: anjela (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:55 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
hello......... I thinck your story is very nice Ilove it ........ why you do not update very soon I can not wait
Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 04:23 PM · On: The journey begins
Very interesting idea!! I hope that you will update soon
Reviewer: bri (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2010 03:04 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
hi .... dear zahar ........ your story is very beautiful
update very soon
Reviewer: reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 11:53 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
Fantastic creativity!!! impatiently awaiting the next chapter......
Reviewer: Blu3BL00M3r (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:50 PM · On: The journey begins
Amazing!
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:41 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
darling.......
This story is beautiful ...... countinu
thank you
Reviewer: cat_sdgirl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 03:50 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
I love this story so much, thanks for sharing! Please update soon..
Reviewer: Bryonne (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:51 AM · On: The journey begins
Great plot :)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:50 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
Wow, cool concept. Sapphire is a brilliant name for Justin. Looking forward to seeing this develop.
Reviewer: drac (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:18 PM · On: The dey of Algiers
hi..........very nice very very nice Ican not wait to read continu . pleas countinu very very soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Reviewer: Green_is_the_color (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:16 PM · On: The journey begins
YAY! Thought you wouldn't update anymore. LOVELY! :D
Hey, go on, will you? Now I wanna know what's next!
Reviewer: DudleyB (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 04:49 PM · On: The journey begins
OMG! Finally another chapter, loved it. Please continue this storyyyyyy!
Reviewer: nancygirl (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:00 AM · On: The dey of Algiers
Oh my god I remember this story from before. I love this story and can't wait to finally see how it ends!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Vauvenargues (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:13 AM · On: The dey of Algiers
Wow, this is seriously cool. Hope to read some more chapters.
Keep up the good work, Zahar!
Reviewer: Zarina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:10 AM · On: The journey begins
Please, please, tell me that you'll finish this story! PWETTY PUUULEEZE!
It's gorgeus, you know :D
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 02:56 AM · On: The dey of Algiers
Yaih!!! You're finally continuing this story ;) I'm really glad to see this one back and I hope you'll be able to finish it soon cuz I can't wait how it continues and how it ends hugs
Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:58 AM · On: The dey of Algiers
Soooo brilliant. Can't wait to read the rest !!
Ptitprof
Reviewer: lara (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Pirates!
please update soon Ican not wait
Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Pirates!
hi this is very nice please continu very very soon
Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Pirates!
I'm so glad you could update ! Been waiting for ages ! Go along with it , please.
Ptitprof
Reviewer: louise (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Brahim ibn Ali
so u going to cont story
Reviewer: BJfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Brahim ibn Ali
Hi there, Is there any chance you're going to continue your story? I guess now that BJFIC appears to be defunct, the rest of the chapters are not available. I was so hoping you would continue, I love this story..... and it was finally getting to the juicy parts!! ); It was so fascinating and educational too! Well, I hope all is well in your world, and I thank you for writing.
Reviewer: S.N.M (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Brahim ibn Ali
Hi there, I had been following ur fic from bjfic, I hope u gonna continue your story, such a fresh take from the rest of the fic, and not to mention the cliff hanger u left us on bjfic =( Love your work ;)
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Brahim ibn Ali
Mothers can be horid in any setting.
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