Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 10:12 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

Oh

Reviewer: Lissa (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

Amazing! Are there other chapters after 10? Can't wait !

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2012 08:14 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

HI DARLING

WHERE ARE YOU??????

IT IS VERY HARD TO WAIT FOR YHIS BEUTIFUL STORY

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2012 01:43 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

so nice update update

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 03:10 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

dear i know it is very hard to update fast but please try and update sooner than befor it is hard to wait

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 02:55 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

it was very very very  good

we learn alot of thing from this story itis not only a story it is usefull

please another part dear

 

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

OH M Y GOD IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL PLEASE CAN NOT WAIT FOT TOO LONG UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2011 05:01 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

I love this fic!!! so so happy that you updated.

Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

OH!!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR AN UPDATE FOR 7 MONTHS, BUT I KNOW HOW THAT IT WAS WORTH WHILE!!! PLEASE,  UPDATE AS YOU CAN!! DO NOT LEAVE ME WAITING FOR ANOTHER 6 MONTHS!!! YOU MUST KNOW THAT I LIKE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH AND ALSO I LIKE YOUR ENGLISH AND YOUR FOOTNOTES IN ARABIC!!!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 11:02 AM · On: The journey begins

I'm ashamed to say I had not reviewed. This is a favorite of mine. I can't believe I hadn't. This starts off well.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

I kept rechecking this. I could not believe you undated. I had given up. This is my favorite Justin/slave story.  Thank you!!!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 01:59 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

I love the story so far. Definitely a twist. Good job.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2011 11:09 PM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

oh my god !!!! I really love your story please update sooooooooooooooooooooooooon.

 

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 12:48 AM · On: Everyday life in the Topkapi Serail

:) Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Charles (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2011 09:57 PM · On: The journey begins

Oh, I am so glad you gave us another chapter to this story. Thanks!

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2011 07:26 PM · On: A Harem night

OH  MY DARLING .............PLEASE PLEASE IT IS A LONG TIME PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN I WANT TO KNOW END OF THIS STORY

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2011 02:14 PM · On: A Harem night

HI ZAHAR I HOPE YOU UPDATE VERY SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN BEACUSE I CAN NOT WAIT ANYMORE

WHEN A PERSON WRITE A HISTORICAL STORY IS VERY HARD IF YOU WRITE ABOUT ANOTHER CUSTOM IS MUCH HARDER

I AM VERY GLAD YOU WRITE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND HISTORICAL STORY I LIKE A WORD END OF EACH UPDATE PLEASE COUNTINU THIS STORY LEARN US ALOT OF NEW THINGS

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 03:23 AM · On: A Harem night

Ok..your story is very lovely... and I enjoyed every word while reading it...but you are making a list of some words at the end of every chapter and you label them as Arabic words without any exceptions...I'm very eloquent in Arabic language maybe even more than my native language and I can assure you that some of those words not related to arabic language in any way, like (odalisque, seraglio or serail, kizlar agasi, Janissares, divan, Topkapi, ) maybe they are pure Turkish or maybe they are derived from another language ..anyway Turks and Arabs have the same religion and some times they use the same religious names such as (Ali ,Brahim,Mehmed,Mikal).

Later.



Author's Response:

Hello Dilia,

 

you are correct of course, the words that you mentioned are Turkish of Persian. I didn't want to trouble my readers too much with historical or linguistic information. I have never claimed to write a story that's historically correct and will never do so, I just write because I enjoy it. Since I'm a professor in ancient languages, I will keep the scientific approach for my teaching hours. Thank you!

 

Reviewer: Misha (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2011 03:52 PM · On: A Harem night

Hey! Beautiful chapter. Can't wait to see the rest! :)

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2011 06:18 PM · On: A Harem night

HI A ALONG TIME MY DEAR ZAHAR PLEASE UPDATE THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY

Reviewer: sansa (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2011 10:17 AM · On: A Harem night

I really like your story so far... hopefully justin is attracted to brahim soon... cant wait for more, update soon please!!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 09:55 AM · On: A Harem night

So very excited to see an update... Loved the new chapter :o) I'm glad to see that Brian was understanding to Justin's situation. More please!

Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 09:21 PM · On: A Harem night

i come every day and i hope  you update

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 04:33 PM · On: A Harem night

very nice chapter ........ i can not wait until sultan say his love to justin

Reviewer: BRI (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 02:43 AM · On: A Harem night

WOW WOW .SULTAN SPANK HIS SLAVE VERY NICE ITWAS AGOOD CHAPTER . I ONLY HOPE WE DONT WAIT VERY LONG

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2011 02:14 AM · On: A Harem night

i only hope justin belive itis his life now poor justin god help him

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2011 06:24 PM · On: A Harem night

hi zahar

iam glad for your update but please update faster beacuse itis hard wait for 3month to read another chapter

have nice day

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2011 01:44 AM · On: A Harem night

OH MY GOD IT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL ...........

A SPANK OH VERY NICE

I LOVE THIS STORY BUT PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNNNN

Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 04:58 AM · On: A Harem night

thank you very much for the new chapter!!! it was excellent!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 04:41 AM · On: The gift

PLEASE, UPDATE !!! IT CAN'T STOP LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!! I WILL BE WAITING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 04:39 AM · On: Brahim ibn Ali

YOU JUST TOOK MY BREATH AWAY WITH YOUR STORY!!!! I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT .....I SIMPLY LOVE ARABIC LANGUAGE AND CULTURE ( I  LIVED IN LIBYA FOR 2 YEARS WHEN I WAS 12, THEN I WORKED IN DUBAI) AND WHEN I READ IT FOR THE FIRST TIME I FELT THAT SOMETING WAS GOING ON.....SOMETHING VERY BEATIFUL.... 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2011 07:51 AM · On: The journey begins

Please, Zahar, update soon! I love your story :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2011 04:44 PM · On: The gift

HI ZAHAR .... WHERE ARE YOU?

PLEASE COUNTINU THIS STORY

Reviewer: stbobolin (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 06:28 PM · On: The gift

Dear Z, I love your story very much!

They finally meet each other at this chapter!

and I can't wait for next one.

please go on~

^_^I am your big fan~

Reviewer: petal (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:14 PM · On: The gift

your story is very amazing and i am intersting for more chapter

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2010 01:27 AM · On: The gift

ha ha ha  i am aevil i cannt wait for firsth sex betwen sultan and justin

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:10 PM · On: The gift

OH DARLING PLEASE HARRY UP ANOTHER CHAPTER

Reviewer: bri (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:29 PM · On: The gift

this story is amazing

thanks for arabic word

update please

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2010 03:58 AM · On: The gift

i love this story

Reviewer: b/j (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2010 02:36 PM · On: The gift

tankyou for update and tanka for this beautiful story but please do not wait us very update agin

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 09:59 PM · On: The gift

hi zahar iam very glad yourstory is update............ oh ihop sultan doesnot problem whit  his haram or miky ........... soon soon soon  updte update

Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 06:45 PM · On: The gift

the moment is gething close.update sooooooooooooooooooooooooon

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:10 PM · On: The gift

WOW WOW WOW .................. GO AHEAD SOON ANOTHER CHAPTER ICAN NOT UNTIL SOLTUN INVITED OR DRAGG HIS SLAVE TO HIS BED.......... HAHAHA   ...... LOVE

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 02:58 AM · On: The gift

OH DARLING TANCKYOU FOR UPDATE ........... OH OH PLEASE ANOTHER CHAOTER ICAN NOT WAIT FOR MEET BETWEN BRIAN AND JUSTIN IAM WAIT ANOTER CHAPTER

LATER

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 10:19 PM · On: The gift

Loved the chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter and the meeting Brahim/Justin... And the night, god, just to think about it give me shudders of anticipation... =)

Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Journey to the East

i absolutely adore this story. Please update it soon :)

Reviewer: Kora (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Journey to the East

I'm so happy I've got see another chapter for this story! Short though, but interesting.

And so Justin/Shapphire/Shamsy is gonna meet his next master...Poor thing, he's petrified.

 

Hope to hearing very soon from you on MW, Zahar. Keep up the good work!

 

Kora

Reviewer: jj (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Journey to the East

oh

iam very interesting to your story go ahead anoter chapter

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Journey to the East

Absolutely vivid!!! I saw it happening before me......at the end of my seat awaiting the next episode.

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Journey to the East

please please please ................. countinu countinu countinu ..... do not leave me in this part very long

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Journey to the East

hi comon girl ................ update very very very soon ......

kiss............

Reviewer: plucc@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Journey to the East

I enjoyed this story when you first started writing it and was sorry that you had not updated for a long time.  I am glad to see that you are back and hope that you finish.

Reviewer: bri (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Journey to the East

HELLO

Iam very lazy about review but your story is very special........

1 ITis beautiful story about b/j

2 THIS story say alot about muslim

3 we can lear arabic word ................... countinu ..... thanks

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Journey to the East

ah poor,justin.maybe brian mite free him.after he hears what happened.how he was taken.and yeappe an update

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Journey to the East

I'm really glad that you are continuing this story ;) Hope you'll be able to update soon again 

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Journey to the East

OHHHHHHHH ... DARLING ZAHAR............... IT WAS VERY SHORT OH NOW WE SHOULD WAIT FOR VERY LONG TIME UNTIL YOU UPDAIT AGAIN ....................... YOUR STORY IS VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL PLEASE COUNTINU SONNNNNNNN ..

LATER

Reviewer: Tabularaza (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Journey to the East

Update soon!

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Journey to the East

I really like your story (already) and I can't wait to read the confrontation of Brian/Brahim and Justin. The chapter was good, but short, thought. Anyway, update soon, please!! I don't know what will happen next but I have a good vibe about this story! =)

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Journey to the East

Please, update soon! Can't wait to read the rest

Reviewer: arven (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 02:08 AM · On: The journey begins

your story is really great! please update as soon as you can

i'm just dying to read about their meeting

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Journey to the East

great story

Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient

HI DARLING ... WHERE ARE YOU ? PLEASE UPDAIT 

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient

I really like this story so far... It's very original! I'm really looking forward to read following chapters! =)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Leyla

Thank you for answering my comment. It wasn't meant to be a warning but to alert you that there is much more interest in your story than the number of review comments or even read hits will show you. We all understand how real life gets in the way of writing which is something I'm experiencing now.

I hoped to encourage you and thank you for writing this. Since I feel better that you will finish the story I'll go ahead and start reading it soon. I'm certain from reading your review comments that this is going to be an excellent read.

bob

Reviewer: MARY (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient

HI . WE KNOW YOU ARE BUSY BUT  WE LOVE YOUR STORY AND WE WANT MORE  VERY SONNNNNNNN   PLEASE

Reviewer: Snow (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient

I'm so happy to see this story here on MW. I can't wait to read your updates!

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Introduction to the Orient

hi

Iam muslim ...... I read your story and iam very glad .ilove your story ........ update

tancksssssssssss

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Introduction to the Orient

wow.......... zahar this chapter was very nice ican not wait for another ............ please audate very very soonnnnnnnnnnnn

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Leyla

This story is on my must read list but frankly I've been burned too many times getting into a story that isn't finished. I'm very sure your excellent plot will be well read when you 1) post chapters more often, and 2) complete it.

A time period, foreign setting is always very popular and this one is very unique. I commend you for writing it with English not being your primary language as well. So I just wanted to say many are waiting to see how this story goes but 6 chapters in 9 months from a new author frightens some readers.

Let me alert you to the fact you will have a following for this story as more current postings and completion happens.



Author's Response:

Hi,

thank you for your review and warning. I understand your concern but I'm afraid I will not be able to complete this story quickly. My life with a full time job and a carreer as a bellydancer is just to hectic. Finding time to write is a luxury I often don't have.

But thank you for the warning.

x Zahar

Reviewer: arven (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Introduction to the Orient

tnanks for updating!!

can't wait to read about J meeting the sultan

Reviewer: arven (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:33 AM · On: The dey of Algiers

please update as soon as you can! can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:50 PM · On: The journey begins

please, oh please update soon. I can't wait to see Brians reaction to sweet and innocent Justin^^

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2010 04:48 PM · On: The journey begins

hello

hurry up ... update very soooon

 thank ful

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2010 01:21 AM · On: The dey of Algiers

hi............. very cute and please update please

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2010 03:35 AM · On: The dey of Algiers

hi......... Ilove your story Ican not wait ....... what time sultan and justin meet together............ please moreeeeeeeeee

Reviewer: jus (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:24 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

hello........ hurry up zahar please update soooooooooon

Reviewer: anjela (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:55 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

hello......... I thinck your story is very nice Ilove it ........ why you do not update very soon I can not wait

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 04:23 PM · On: The journey begins

Very interesting idea!! I hope that you will update soon

Reviewer: bri (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2010 03:04 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

 hi ....  dear zahar ........ your story is very beautiful

update very soon

Reviewer: reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 11:53 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

Fantastic creativity!!! impatiently awaiting the next chapter......

Reviewer: Blu3BL00M3r (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:50 PM · On: The journey begins

Amazing!

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:41 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

darling.......

This story is beautiful ...... countinu

thank you

Reviewer: cat_sdgirl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 03:50 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

I love this story so much, thanks for sharing! Please update soon..

Reviewer: Bryonne (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:51 AM · On: The journey begins

Great plot :)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:50 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

Wow, cool concept.  Sapphire is a brilliant name for Justin.  Looking forward to seeing this develop.

Reviewer: drac (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:18 PM · On: The dey of Algiers

hi..........very nice very very nice Ican not wait to read continu . pleas countinu very very soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Reviewer: Green_is_the_color (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:16 PM · On: The journey begins

YAY! Thought you wouldn't update anymore. LOVELY! :D

 

 

Hey, go on, will you? Now I wanna know what's next!

Reviewer: DudleyB (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 04:49 PM · On: The journey begins

OMG! Finally another chapter, loved it. Please continue this storyyyyyy!

Reviewer: nancygirl (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:00 AM · On: The dey of Algiers

Oh my god I remember this story from before. I love this story and can't wait to finally see how it ends!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Vauvenargues (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:13 AM · On: The dey of Algiers

Wow, this is seriously cool. Hope to read some more chapters.

 

Keep up the good work, Zahar!

Reviewer: Zarina (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:10 AM · On: The journey begins

Please, please, tell me that you'll finish this story! PWETTY PUUULEEZE!

It's gorgeus, you know :D

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 02:56 AM · On: The dey of Algiers

Yaih!!! You're finally continuing this story ;) I'm really glad to see this one back and I hope you'll be able to finish it soon cuz I can't wait how it continues and how it ends
hugs

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:58 AM · On: The dey of Algiers

Soooo brilliant. Can't wait to read the rest !!

Ptitprof

Reviewer: lara (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Pirates!

please update soon Ican not wait

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Pirates!

hi this is very nice please continu very very soon

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Pirates!

I'm so glad you could update ! Been waiting for ages ! Go along with it , please.

Ptitprof

Reviewer: louise (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Brahim ibn Ali

so u going to cont story

Reviewer: BJfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Brahim ibn Ali

Hi there, Is there any chance you're going to continue your story? I guess now that BJFIC appears to be defunct, the rest of the chapters are not available. I was so hoping you would continue, I love this story..... and it was finally getting to the juicy parts!! );  It was so fascinating and educational too! Well, I hope all is well in your world, and I thank you for writing.

Reviewer: S.N.M (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Brahim ibn Ali

Hi there, I had been following ur fic from bjfic, I hope u gonna continue your story, such a fresh take from the rest of the fic, and not to mention the cliff hanger u left us on bjfic =( Love your work ;)

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Brahim ibn Ali

Mothers can be horid in any setting.

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