Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2016 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
Just discovered the story and love it. I hope you finish it.
Author's Response: i'm going to finish it. i'm thinking maybe one or two chapters left.
Reviewer: nere- fus (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2016 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
That's quite a cliffhanger to end on.
Author's Response: i'm guessing ur enjoying this.
Reviewer: nere- fus (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2016 05:40 PM · On: Discoveries
I just found this story.
Interesting twist with Ben. So did Ben get close to Michael on the plane to get near Brian again, or is it just a huge coincidence?
Author's Response: a huge coincidence. i'm glad u just found this story. i'm updating my old stories as well as my new ones. Something new everyday. Awesome right?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh dear. Where will you take us next?
Author's Response: i'm totally excited that you are enjoying this story. You're feedback is keeping me going. Thankz for reading.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 05:51 PM · On: Birthday Party Part 1
Melanie hitting Brian was not a good thing. Mikey saying he thought Ben was going to say he was in love with Brian was closer to the truth than he knew, I'm thinking.
Author's Response: i'm glsd that you are reading this i'm also glad ur enjoying it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 05:33 PM · On: Shock to the System
Oh dear. Will things get better? What did Ben do to Brian? How does Marty know about it?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 05:25 PM · On: Discoveries
Hahaha! Lindsay and Anita? That's too funny. Ben and Brian - well we knew they'd met at the white party but the rest? Nope. Need more.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 05:16 PM · On: Taking Your Life Back
Happy to see Jennifer standing up to Joan and slapping her. Good job.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 05:08 PM · On: Graduation
Your story got a little confusing. Was Brian going? What was he going to wear? Or should I say what did he finally wear? Now what's going to happen?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 04:48 PM · On: Freaking Out
It's nice to know that Claire cares. Brian and Justin just missing each other wasn't fair, but it makes for nice angst. But who is the voice in the corner?
Author's Response: voice in the corner? Now you got me confused and i'm the writer.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2016 04:38 PM · On: The Damage Done
Hopefully all this is theraputic for Brian. It didn't take Mikey long to find someone new.
Author's Response: yea i know but i wanted Ben for this story and come on that's pretty much how fast he showed on the show right? by epiosde 3 of season 2 he was on the scene. Glad to see new readers or old i can't remember which one you are. Glad ur back.
Reviewer: KIM136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2015 09:32 PM · On: Birthday Party Part 1
R U GOING TO FINISH THE STORY PLEASE DONT LEAVE IT WIP THANKS KIM
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Something's Off
Poor Brian! I hope you fix this cause there is no way that Brian could be hideous. This is not a critacism(excuse my spelling) This chapter is so good that I'm hoping future chapters are not quite as suspenseful. ;)
Author's Response: Glad that you are enjoying the story. Of course Brian won't be hideous
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:22 AM · On: The Awakening
Very interesting. This could be the Brian we should have seen. Thank goodness Justin went to see him.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:09 AM · On: The Twist
Now that's what I call a twist. You had me fooled write up to that last sentence. Good job!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 06:48 AM · On: Shock to the System
This story is good. I really hope that you will finish it. Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Shock to the System
Poor Brian..... I hope he doesn't do something crazy... and that he will go to a Counselor or a Psychiatrist ...because he needs more help than Justin can give him.....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Discoveries
I knew that Brian would want to keep his eye.....even if he could only see a little bit.. why have it removed??? as for the Dr. how could he have the BALLS...to tell Justin "You're a young man, you may want to get out while you have a chance"..... what kind of a way is that to talk to a patients loved one???
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 05:31 AM · On: Shock to the System
good story.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Taking Your Life Back
WOW....I am thrilled that Jennifer slapped that S.O.B. Joan in the face.... and that she told Brian off.... lol...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 04:55 AM · On: The Damage Done
I am sooo glad that Justin realized what Brian was doing and came back...lol... they need and love each other too much... to ever stay apart for very long....
Author's Response: I am glad that you are continuing to read it. What I meant by nothing happened with Hobbs was that with Justin much didnt happen because they said he was flaunting himself. With Brian it was dfferent because people knew him and was established people would care because he isnt just a gay man he is known in the gay community as well as all around. does that make sense.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 04:16 AM · On: Something's Off
OMG...poor Brian...brain damage and no vision in one eye.... now that he knows what he looks like.... Lindsay will get her wish...she wanted Justin gone....and now Brian is going to "get rid" of him....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 03:57 AM · On: The Awakening
OK.... I understand the "Twist" is that if Brian had gotten there in time to save Justin...he would get bashed instead.....but... I don't understand why Brian is important enough to have Hobbs sent to prison for what he did...and if it happened to Justin nothing would have been done about it... why???
Author's Response: Justin was just a kid. A kid and so was Hobbs but Brian was an established member of the community, it didn't really matter that he was gay because he had money. Lots of people in town new him that were both gay and straight, more outcry would be made if he got off for Brian.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 12:24 AM · On: The Twist
Brian!!!!....why on earth would Chris Hobbs want to kill Brian??? off to read next chapter....
Author's Response: Its a twist to the prom. Brian got the bat instead. Its been sad but next chapter happy. Im glad u r a new reader cant wait to read ur commets.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Discoveries
I knew Brian would want to keep his eye. He'll look into designer Gucci eye patches and sunglasses before he let them take his eye. Wow, interesting back history with Brian and Ben and Anita...a lawyer! Love that you took the Ben and Brian fling from the show and upped it about 1000 notches. The fallout should be REALLY interesting!
Author's Response: Yup the fallout will be awesome.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Discoveries
well you certainly put the twist in this story. brian and ben had a fling. lindsay and anita had a fling. wow justin is going to stay and brian is going to let him. craig is going to be sued for lible and jennifer is divorcing him. brian will wear an eyepatch. how hot will that be. it will make him so much more sexy.
Author's Response: yea and lets not forget that Brian was with Anita too. yea i decided to change alot but a lot of the original stuff will be added to so thanks for reading and look for a new update tomorrow maybe.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Taking Your Life Back
LOVE, love, love Protective Mother Taylor! She's as feisty as Justin! Joan is an evil vile woman.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and yes Joan is a Bitch
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Taking Your Life Back
bravo jen and justin. i see where justin gets it from. joan, may she rot in hell.
Author's Response: yea i know right i'm thinking about killing her off in my version.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Graduation
yay brian that's one way to begin to get his life back. great chapter. i like how everyone was there to rally around brian and that justin did what he had to do and go graduate. i hope chris winds up in jail this time.
Author's Response: yea that's what i liked too.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Graduation
Chris is CRAZY!!! Can't believe that happened to Brian before!
Author's Response: yea it did and it was horrible and it'll explain why Brian doesn't love and you'll find it all ot.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Freaking Out
Michael really makes me want to kick the shit out of him. "Always have, always will". Idiot! I'm glad Claire showed up to see how her brother was doing, so unlike Canon Claire. Poor Brian, hate seeing him suffer like this.
Author's Response: that was the last chapter of scared brian. in the chapters to come he will be scary but a different kind especially when he seeks his revenge on one Chris Hobbs and then i'll be throwing in all the other stories of season two.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Freaking Out
brian needs help and i don't think justin is enough. this was a great chapter. i guess michael can't handle brian after all.
Author's Response: nope he can't
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 02:42 AM · On: The Damage Done
Now I hope Brian will still remember that Justin loves him, once he sobers up. I knew Justin wouldn't stay gone long.
Author's Response: of course justin wouldn't stay gone long. next chapter later today or tonight probably. one more chapter of torturing brian then the healing begins.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 01:08 PM · On: The Damage Done
in the begining i wanted to strangle him for the way he spoke to justin, by the end i wanted to hug him too. justin knows him too well and knew brian would need him. as for michael he should have stayed away. the family will rally around him, much to his dislike. lindsay was right in what she thought, but justin won't let that happen.
Author's Response: yea as always thasnks for reading. more later i promise
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Something's Off
Oh Justin, *sighs* your about to start fighting an up hill battle!
Author's Response: yea but he's up for it.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Something's Off
i loved this. debbie and jennifer, from one mother to another. lindsay, man i'm glad justin's on to her. omg, will his eye always be like that? if so, he'd be so hot with a patch. "He knew he’d have to get rid of Justin for sure now." he can try all he wants, but i don't think it's going to do any good.
Author's Response: exactly oh man brian with a patch woudn't that be cool.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Something's Off
Poor Brian! I hope the doctor explains to him what is really going on with his eye. And I know he will try to get rid of Justin, but I hope Justin fights to stay with him.
Author's Response: yea you know he's going to push justin to the curb. an update soon i promise.
Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Something's Off
what happen with his eyes? why he always think, that he must be rid of justin when he must need him. please more, great story kisses
Author's Response: soon i promise.
Reviewer: maddy_snape (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Something's Off
This was a bit confusing! At the end of the last chapter he couldn't move his arm, but now that seems fine, but at there is no mention of there being a problem with his sight until the big reveal at the end!
Author's Response: it's not confusing there's something wrong with both things.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:15 PM · On: The Awakening
Wow, a great chapter. Love the twist. Jen is there for Brian, kinda, while not helping Justin see its not his fault. Brian thankfully woke up and saw Justin. Hopefully this paraslis is short term. Love that both of the boys remember the dance.
Author's Response: Yay i decided i'd give them both that memory you know cause of everything else that's about to happen.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:21 AM · On: The Awakening
i'm glad you updated. i liked this chapter very much. especially how lindsay told michael to keep his thoughts about justin to himself. jenn sitting by his bedside was great. justin showing up and brian talking about his feelings was even better. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: more soon i promise
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 12:37 AM · On: The Awakening
I'm glad Justin went to see Brian and that Brian knows Justin is still alive. I'm really interested in seeing how Brian is going to be once he gets out of the hospital and back to his life...especially amongst the family. So happy Hobb's is getting prosecuted!!
Author's Response: oh yes Hobbs shall pay but will everything go as planned? you'll have to stay tuned.
Reviewer: kayitt (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 12:29 AM · On: The Awakening
I love this story, please go on. poor brian thinking thay his sunshine was dead. kisses
Author's Response: the story will be continued i promise. so will my others if ur reading them. But yea i love this story and i love throwing in the part wiht brian thinking his sunshine was dead didn't it just break ur heart.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 12:53 AM · On: The Twist
I REALLY didn't see that coming!! I'll say that's a twist!! WOW!
Author's Response: like Boom more to come i promise
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:07 AM · On: The Twist
now that's a great twist. hope this is going to be continued soon.
Author's Response: tomorrow will bring more.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:57 AM · On: The Twist
This is a definitely surprise twist. And a good one. I really do hope Brian wakes up soon. But will he remember Justin? That is the question. I am so looking forward for more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: tomorrow and longer.
Reviewer: Ethan (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:15 AM · On: The Twist
Pause Blink *runs to read again*
Author's Response: yea u read it right. i'll update tomorrow.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 02:52 AM · On: The Twist
Oooh. You got me. That last word threw me for a loop, and I had to reread the whole thing from a whole other perspective. Nice. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: sweet that's what it was meant to do.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 01:04 AM · On: The Twist
Can't wait to see how this goes. Was just expecting Chris to go to jail, suprised it was Brian.
Author's Response: sweet that was the whole point. To have the rug pulled out from under ya. Glad u liked it more soon I PROMISE.
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:27 AM · On: The Twist
Wow.... now this is going to be interesting!
Author's Response: that's the plan my man more soon.
Reviewer: aviana calle (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2009 11:07 PM · On: The Twist
o.o -blink blink blink- no words... lol
Author's Response: is that a good thing or a bad thing
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