Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For A Stitch in Time
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2021 11:46 AM · On: Epilouge

Last week I re-read these series and I'm again totally hooked. Thanks again for writing. After all these years and reading many many QAF stories this is one of my favorites.

 

* big hug *



Author's Response:

*big hug* back at ya!  It's so heartwarming to know people are still enjoying my stories after all these years.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2019 02:56 PM · On: Epilouge

Loved it, thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Flo3241 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2017 02:28 PM · On: Epilouge

I know I'm 8 years late and you'er probably bot gonna see this but It has been a pleasure reading this series. So gutted it's the last one. Is absolutly brilliant. 



Author's Response:

I do check this site occasonally.  So glad to see this review.  Even after  8 years, it's nice to know people still enjoy my stories. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Gravenimage (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2017 09:01 PM · On: Epilouge

These stories have been such a pleasure to read! You're a fantastic writer. I hope I'll get to read more of this universe in the future! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for you kind review.  I haven't written in years now. :-(     I hope to be inspired to revisit this universe. These two boys will forever have my heart.......

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2016 05:47 AM · On: Epilouge

Wonderful end to a great series -just as good the 2nd time around. I don't doubt I will return again in the future. I love this AU:-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  It's so wonderful to hear people are still reading, and liking my story after all this time. I hope to one day write another as I will always love B/j!

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2014 08:13 AM · On: Epilouge

Please write a sequel to this. I want to see what happens with Randy and Justin. Also, can't wait to see if Andy and Elliot will be involved.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  I thought about writing a sequel, but sometimes you need to know when to stop.  Kind of like Godfather III. They should have stopped at Godfather II!  lol

 

I'm so glad you enjoyed it though. Thank you for commenting

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2013 04:18 AM · On: Epilouge

Love that little ending about you at the end. Love this series.

You need to do more. Maybe Brian and/or Justin can save people with their abilities. Instead of Rage they could become real life Super Hero's. How Brian can turn his abilities on and off, as can Justin. It would be interesting to see them help others whom they don't know. Not just people that have to do with their lives in someway. Plus, you need to address Jagger and his Mom. We also need to see how Jack makes it to Heaven.

Good job and great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!   I thought about writing another series, I'm waiting for inspiration to hit me.  :-)  Work is usually slow in the winter, maybe I'll pen something down.

Again, thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 12:51 PM · On: Epilouge

LOVED the ending...You know how SHE is....LOLOL

I want another one! I want a story with Richie/Randy in it!! Maybe with his art development. Oh and maybe, the journey to his getting his memory back of who Justin is and who he was...Well, maybe not entirely but of something.



Author's Response:

I thought of doing a story with Richie/Randy.  Some day...when I have time!  So glad you enjoyed this series. Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 03:33 AM · On: Family Ties

omg what a time twister! There evidence in the past that they changed the past which they have not yet done but will do in the future! phew!!!! (goes a little nuts)



Author's Response:

lol.  I see you're following it perfectly!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 01:40 PM · On: Revelations

WELL! Half brother's and sister's are bustin out all over! Who's next I wonder!



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 11:58 PM · On: Richie

Because that s not our daughter...DUM DUM DUMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!! <==spooky music<< Ohhhhh NOOOO! Creeped out here....annnnnd i have to go....such a good cliffie to go out on!



Author's Response:

this sequel is a little 'out there', but I had fun writing it. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 02:22 PM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

This chapter was rather confusing. But the lady  who looks like "Jessica Rabbit ROFL and secret gay Chino cracked me up. And so did all the nicknames.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  :-)

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 09:29 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Very nice start. I m all a-creeped out!!



Author's Response:

lol this one is a little creepy!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 02:15 PM · On: Epilouge

Just reread again... I love rereading fic...

sometimes I am just so eager for what's going to happen next, when Im reading it the first time, I don't really appreciate all the little details or don't remember some favorite parts...

the ending (and MaryJane) was a fun re-discovery. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  :-)  So glad you liked it enough to read twice!

Reviewer: viceleah (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Epilouge

I just want to take the time to tell you that you've done a fantastic and superb job on writing this series. I loved every part of the 3 parts and the love and journey that Brian and Justin travel on always gives me the most wonderful and refreshing feelings. I love all the plots and storylines and the supernatural, mental, physical, psychological, etc. aspects of the story. I love every single bit of it all.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed my stories! It means more than you can imagine.

 

Gina Marie

Reviewer: Kati (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 03:37 AM · On: Epilouge

Hi! I love your stories!! Your imagination is amazying!! You should consider going pro :) so far ur work is my favorite B/J series :D keep up the good work

and the best of luck in the future

Katia



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Katia!   If I'm good, it's because I have such amazing characters to work with!   My love for B/J is so great, and I'm glad it comes across in my writing.

 

thank you for commenting.  I'm so happy you enjoyed this series!

Reviewer: Brileigh (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Epilouge

loved this whole series- you truly are an amazing author!! I cant wait for what else you have in store for them :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this lovely review!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this series.  I don't know if I'll continue in this universe, but stay tuned....my muse has a particular fondness for this series.  :-)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Epilouge

Fantastic stories!  I really enjoyed these stories, and had a good giggle at the very ending - which was nice because I am usually a bit sad after reading such an involved saga, sad that I will miss the AU and the characters too much.  I also enjoyed a number of quotes at the beginning of each chapter. 

So, ms 'writer', (which you truly, and very talentedly, are), ARE you going to lead our character's on another merry chase thru the halls of heaven and hell?  I'd like more on Jennifer and her boy-toy, or on Greg, Justin and Brian's growing relationship, and/ or on Jagger's wedding and child with Corrine in France. Or on Viv and Tom and Shane and Adam along with their progeny.  Maybe a peek into Peter's life where ever he is.  Justin's school and Brian's business.  Oh, and how is the twins' surrogate mother and kids doing?  I just thought I'd mention, just in case...you know...you wanted to know if your fans wanted to hear more or was having trouble with inspiration.  LOL.

Thanks for persaverring and completing the story!

Michelle



Author's Response:

lol  you know Michelle, reading your comment made me realize that I can indeed keep writing in this AU! So many character's (old and new) life's I can delve into!  I will consider it, and I thank you for this wonderful review!  So glad you enjoyed this series, (didn't start out that way, btw, lol)  Right now however I've started a totally new alternate AU called Broken Open.  I do hope you give it a shot.  Let me know if you do!  Again, thanks for reviewing!   I LOVE hearing from readers.

Gina Marie

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Epilouge

One word.  WOW!  I've never read a story like this in my life.  It opened my eyes to things that if you believe, it could happen.  A Stitch In Time, like the 2 stories prior, shows that through love and faith you can accomplish anything.  The key word in this trilogy should be faith.  Faith tested the characters.  In all 3 stories we are introduced to a world of good and bad, where the good had to fight to save the people and life they love.  Thank God, the good always won, with a help from some unbelieveable but loveable characters.  This was a great  trilogy, I loved it, it completely warmed my soul.  I'm so glad I discovered your writing.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely feedback!  Nothing is more satisfying to a writer than knowing that their work was enjoyed.   Thank you for letting me know how much you enjoyed my stories!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Epilouge

!!!Crackaliciously fun read. The spiritial twist was so well thought out and delivered. The ending tied up all loose ends and left me with happy tears and a smile.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:32 AM · On: A New Day

Now I remember why I loved this series so much and it inspired me to try writing.



Author's Response:

This is one of the greatest compliments any author can receive imo.  *hugs* Thank you.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:40 AM · On: The Meeting Place

Well I wasn't expecting that; I wish Richie could have lived.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Missed Connections

Will read the next chapter after changing my shorts.

Reviewer: Annie85 (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chosen Paths

I've missed a few chapters, but now that I'm caught up, I'm trying to put the pieces together.

So Ritchie is Justin's half brother, which explains why he looks so much like Justin. And I'm pretty sure I know who Ritchie's 'Sir' is as well, though I am curious as to how he met Ritchie and his parents.

Poor Brian and Justin, they're always caught up in some kind of drama, aren't they? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting Annie!  You're right on track with your conculsions. Things are coming to a head in the next chapter. I hope to get it up quicker then I did this one!  Thanks for sticking with me.

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chosen Paths

Dying for this capter but it was really worth it. Now Emillian is in the mix now shit this story is turing into one hell of a ride. So this spectre is near the ending is it separate and apart form Joffith. Crazy crazy crazy.

 

Excellent chapter more soon when you can



Author's Response: Thanks so much Vision!  I do apologize for the long wait.  I'll try to do better.   The spectre in the shadows is joffith.  He overheard Brian saying he was going OOB and decided to direct him to Prom night where he has some plans for him.  But will they be twarted?  I'm working on the next chapter now.  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chosen Paths

I am glad you updated! Now Brian went back in time to the night of Justin's prom. This should be very interesting. I wonder if Brian would change things from that night? Looking forward to find out what. Great chapter.

Author's Response: That is going to be a dilema for him.   Now that he has the chance to change things, effectively changing the course of their lives, will he?  I'm glad you liked this chapter. Again, so sorry for the long wait. I'll try to get the next chapter up in a more timely fashion.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chosen Paths

such a great update .... please update soon :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thanks rose!  So glad to see you're still with me.  It was murder getting this chapter up. RL really sucks lately.   Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: camm76 (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Do The Right Thing

I guess I'm the only one who doesn't want a Brian/Justin/Chino. I don't want to see them with anyone else. Isn't there some other way you could get the boys to help him "come out", without them having sex? 

B&J haven't been with anyone esle in so long I would love for it  to stay that way. I figured with all they been through they would be past that.  I know this is just my opinion, but I really hope you change your mind about the 3 way. thanks 



Author's Response:

I totally respect your opinion, and have been struggling with how I'm going to write it precisely for the reasons you stated. This is the third in my series and I've never shown B/J having sex with another. I've implied it in BTWYTWY, (when B/J were at the club and Justin wanted to take a trick home. I didn't write the sex scene, but dealt with the consequences the next morning) So this is difficult for me. However, I think I can write it and still show that it is all about B/J.  In BTWYTWY, Justin says' to Brian the morning after they shared a trick "Thank you for making me feel like I'm the only one in the room no matter where we are, or what we're doing".  I'm going to follow that line of thinking for the sex scene.

 I'm slow posting chapters.  Life totally sucks, and well...I haven't exactly been inspired. But please let me know when I do write the scene how you like it.

Thanks for commenting. 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Do The Right Thing

gina, why do i keep coming back to emilian? jack would know if he was the other demon wouldn't he?

Author's Response: Jack would know if he saw him....He only knows right now that Joffith is conspiring with a demon on the lowest level.  Jack won't dare go down that low, he's afraid with his past human life, they would let him go!  LOL  You're soooo on the right track...:-)

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Do The Right Thing

This is a nice development /justin and Molly apparently had another sibling which seems to be Richie. I can't believe it I feel for Craig Taylor I understand his reasoning now  and I hope his telling Molly the truth will open doors for him and Justin b/c not having his father's love does hurt Justin. Another fucking demon shit double shit. Brian-Chino-Justin oh my that is going to be one hell of scene
.

Excellent chapter

 

Hope things slow down and get better for you



Author's Response:

Hey Vision! You summed up the story so far perfectly!  I always like to delve into the 'thinking' behind some of the characters actions. What makes them tick? I believe this is what was going through Craigs head concerning his son.  I am worried about writing the sex scene with chino and the boys, but  I'll give it my best shot!  Who is that other demon?   hmmm....

Thanks so much for commenting! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Do The Right Thing

absolutely loved this chapter. those two are sooo good together. chino will have the night of his life... or maybe not. with your cliffhanger I am not so sure :-)) rose

Author's Response: LOL Yes, Chino is going to have one hell of a night!  I just don't know if it will be in the next chapter or not.  So glad you like this story! Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Do The Right Thing

Hot chapter! 

I am looking forward for more. :D

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks Lynn!  I'm glad you liked it!  *hugs*

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Do The Right Thing

It is nice for Brian and Justin to help out Chino and I was so glad to see the demons taken away, but what of this other, hmmmm..

Author's Response: The other is the 'real' problem.   Though we won't find out who he is for awhile.  Thanks for commenting gerri!  Glad you're enjoying this story!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Do The Right Thing

so craig is living a life of regrets. why don't i feel bad for him? i can see that in the future he and justin will once again be on speaking terms. whether justin accepts him back into his life fully is another question. molly is a doll to put up with him. so now there's another taylor sibling out there somewhere. so will it help or hinder justin?

chino is in for the best night of his young life so far. justin trying to appease and angry brian while kissing another man, oh how cute. brian reversing the tables, so brian.

jack warning brian about another demon out to get him, i hope jack finds out who and why.

four hours of hot b/j sex? what a way to spend the day.

i hope rl eases up on you gina.



Author's Response:

Yes, Craigs got a lot of regrets. At some point he and Justin are going to have to talk. He holds the key to some very important questions.  We know where the sibling is, 'Maude Talbot', was the woman Craig had an affair with.  In the last chapter, Richie told Brian his parents name. Maude and Harold Talbot.   Justin has no clue yet, nor does Brian.  That valuable piece of information will be coming out soon.

Chino is going to have one hot night with the boys! I'm nervous about writing that scene. I was never good at writign the sex scenes, but I'll give it my best shot!

RL is going to be hell for the next several months, but that's just how it is....*sigh* Thanks for commenting sjmpets!  Love your reviews!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Do The Right Thing

So that's why Richie looks so much like Justin! Trip out!!

Two demons after Brian, that's crazy! I'm glad Jack told him about it and that he's still looking into things.

Justin, Brian and Chino! Didn't see that coming. By the time those two are done with Chino, he'll be an out and proud gay man...shouting from the roof tops.

Oh no, what's going on with Richie! Another great chapter and we understand about rl issues. We all are just thrilled when we see a new chapter of your stories =)



Author's Response:

Yep, you got it Kat! Craig had an affair with Richie's mother, Maude Talbot.  'If' she didn't abort the child and 'if' it's Craigs, that would make him Justin's 1/2 brother. I intend to write a hot sex scene between Chino/Brian and Justin, I'm just not sure if it will be in the next chapter. That should be fun to write but I'm sooo bad at writing sex scenes!

Richie has Justin's impulsive nature and we all know how that 'impulsiviness' always seems to land Justin in trouble.  :-)

Thanks so much for commenting, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Richie

The question still is sitting out there – just who is Richie.  We now know what happened to him and whyhe is where he is.  But why did Andy choose him as Brian’s Spiritual Advisor?  In this chapter it was saidthat since Brian and Richie and even Andy shared similar awful experiences, Brian would certainly be willing to help Richie. Then again, who is helping who?  Why does he look so much like a younger Justin?   What does that mean? Were Richie’s  parents in an accident or were they murdered?  That is, how come Sir was thereto rescue him?  Also Brian warned Richie several times not to go down and see Jack.  Several times.   Just where is Sir now?  I guess somewhere below Jack.   Now that we have Richie, can Sir be readyto raise his ugly head?  It is no longer clear if Sir is dead or alive.  I had thought Richie killed him, butI am no longer sure.  Anyway, James is now involved.  We will soon find out. Let  the chapters come, as they will answer all my questions.  Eventually.. As always, thanks for the story, it is really terrific. DavidR 

Author's Response: Thanks DavidR! I'm glad you're enjoying this one.  Lots of questions! I hope to answer them all in upcoming chapters. The next chapter will give you a clue as to who Richie is...Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Richie

Woah!

This is such a shocking twist. I am looking forward to what will happen next.

Great chapter! 

 



Author's Response: Thanks Lynn! More shocking twists coming up!  Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: vanilla18@hotmail.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Richie

you took this story in a ran with  so so different from the first one

Author's Response: Yes I did. I hope you like it.

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Richie

Oh shit I knew something like this was going to happen Joffith always has a backup plan. Richie looking like Justin this mystery just keeps getting more peculiar by the chapter damn. Excellent writing hope you feel better I knew it had to be something you usual release a chapter a week. Hope your business is successful.

 

 



Author's Response: Hey Vision!  You're right, Joffith is an evil little bugger who'll do whatever it takes to get to Brian.  There is a connection between Justin and Richie...the next chapter should give you a clue.   My business is slow right now, but its a lot of work, and I've been sick   :-(  But I'm on the mend  (crossing fingers)  Thanks for commenting!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story.  More surprises comming up and some answers.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Richie

Oh no if some demon fucks with Brian Kinney's daughter it's as good as dead. Hang on that may be a good thing, demons are in so much trouble now!

Author's Response: Hey gerri!  Nasty demons aren't they?  Brian is not going to be happy, lets just hope he doesn't do something stupid!  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: josie (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Richie

love your story

never commented before

I see your story on your live journal

read about your medical issue, it sounds like diabetes, have you been checked for that /or volvus cancer.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear from you josie!  Thank you for commenting, it is appreciated more than you can imagine.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

Doc has me on nerontin now, (just started last night) and already I feel a tad better.  She diagnoised me with vulvodynia.  Nasty condition, but I'm dealing best I can.  And you are right about my sugar.  I need to cut it out before I do get diabetes.  I'm border line now. 

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Richie

no no no ... you can´t stop here. what a great chapter. you did wonderful. I hope you get better soon :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thanks rose!  I worked hard on this one. Lots of loose ends are going to start coming together, and more surprises up ahead. So glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Richie

Girl, I don't even know where to freakin begin!! Another amazing chapter!

Richie's story is so sad, I wonder who "Sir" is?!

I'm trying to hard to figure out this connection. What year was Jagger born?

And OMG! Lizzie was posessed??!! I was so happy to get an email that this story was updated, I just giggled like a 10 year old. LOL!

I hope you are feeling better, sorry to hear that you were sick. What kind of business do you have? We understand that RL gets in the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat!  I know, Richie's story is so sad, and that's a very interesting question, with a very interesting (shocking) answer. Who is Sir? Hmmm....

 I'm on the mend (crossing fingers)  But my business needs me. (not to mention my health, and my daughter's health. She's still dealing with Lyme)

I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thanks for your patience, and for commenting!  I'm soo happy you're enjoying this story. It gives me such pleasure to write.

Reviewer: pfodge (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Richie

Gina! you can't do this to us. 

"Because that's not our daughter." Are you going to update soon?  

Richies story is very intersting, and I am curious about the connection with Justin.  Please Please Please!!! update soon. 

Hugs

Patty

 

 

 

 



Author's Response: Hey Patty!  *hugs*  I know, I'll try not to leave you hanging too long!  There is a connection between Richie and Justin. But Richie also has a connection (of sorts) to Andy and Brian....Some more surprises coming up, and hopefully, some answers!  SOOOOOO glad you're enjoying this story.   Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Richie

NO! How can you end it like that!!!

"Because that's not our daughter." Brian said.

That last line has me sitting my big ol'butt in my chair unitl the next chapter!!

LOVE IT!! LOVE YOU bunches!!

Shauna

 



Author's Response: Thanks Shauna! *hugs*  I just love cliff hangers.  lol.  I will be working on the next chapter this week.  Though please be patient, I've a lot on my plate right now.  More surprises coming up, and some answers. Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Richie

richie is there to help brian and brian is dead set to see that he gets into heaven. maybe andy had the right idea after all. they'll need to help each other. maybe if brian gets jack involved, then jack can take care of 'sir'. no matter what he did to brian growing up he never sexually abused him.

as for who is in lizzy's body, it must be joffith or one of his minions. gets him into the house and closer to brian with no one suspecting a thing.

sorry you still aren't feeling any better. my only other suggestion is to try dreft detergent. it's mild and gentle enough.



Author's Response:

Right, right and right!  I'm so glad you're following the storyline. I know it's a tad confusing, and about to get more confusing soon.  Though I promise it will all add up in the end.

Richie is there to help Brian, and Brian's mission is to help Richie.  Andy knows exactly what he is doing.  There is a connection Richie has to both Andy and Brian, though that's a secret.   Jack will be of help and you are right about Jack. as mean and cruel as he was (is), he never sexually abused his own son!  If you remember, when Brian told Jack he was gay, yes, Jack freaked, but later he sought brian out to give him a picture of him holding Brian as a baby, so there is evidence (though slight) of a heart in Jack.  But dont expect any father/son reunion anytime soon!

Joffith is now using Lizzy to get to Brian.  His goal is still to lure Brian away, but to where?  hmmm...

Doc gave me nerontin and I took it last night and got a full nights sleep for the first time in 25 days!  And I'm feeling a 'tad' better. (keeping fingers crossed)  Thanks for commenting sjmpets! So glad you're enjoying this story.

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:55 PM · On: The Intruder

His new spirit guide is Jack!?!?!?!

Oh my!!!

This chapter is surprising! :)

 

ciaoooo



Author's Response:

I thought that ending would raise a few eyebrows. lol.   Brian is going to have issues, to say the least, with having good old Jack as his spirit guide.  There is a common theme here. Parent's.  Jagger and his mother, Justin and Craig, and now Brian and Jack.   I'm working on the next chapter this week. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 11:38 AM · On: The Intruder

I don’t know what to say.  Jack?  I really didn’t expect him as I have long forgotten about him.  Ok then, it should be very interesting to see where you go with this.  You do know of course that I do not like Jack, Craig, and Jagger’s  Mom.  I can accept that they need

the help of Jack and Jagger’s Mom as ‘Spirit Guides’, but I don’t  see how Craig fits in there except as an unresolved

issue of Justin.  We shall see!

 

It was so nice to get a quick visit from Elliot.  I don’t think I got a chance to thank you for saving him.  I was so happy he became an Angel.   So here it is – THANK YOU for saving Elliot.

 

Once again we see Brian’s playfulness.  It was funny when Brian briefly described  ‘gaydar’ while directly looking at Chino.  That it soooo Brian.

 

As always, thanks for this terrific story though I do have to say that this B&J Fic is waaaay out there.

 

DavidR



Author's Response:

LOL yeah, this one is way out there!  I was going for something different. I hope you enjoy it though, I don't want to turn readers off!

  I know Celia, Jack and Craig are not likeable characters, and I don't intend to make them any different then they are, BUT, and big but here, Like I did with Joan, I try to find reasons for why people behave so badly.  In Jacks case, he was affected by the curse. It in a way, made him crazy.  As for Jagger's mother, she was a weak person. Why did she  turn into an addict? What is her story? Point is, everyone has a story, and I like exploring peoples stories. Brian and Jack will never be loving father/son but maybe we (and brian) might learn something about Jack that may make us understand him better, if not like him. As for Justin, you are right about him. Craig has no real involvment in what's going on, but Justin needs to resolve his feelings for him, only then, can he truly understand Brian's feelings for his dad.  everything in my imaginary B/J world is connected. 

You're very welcomed!  I couldn't let Elliot go.  I loved that character, but as you can see, we now have one very pissed off demon on our hands! 

Please let me know if things get a little confusing. There are a lot of issues to deal with in this storyline, and sometimes things can get lost, or convoluted in the process. I am a stickler for details so everything has to connect, and be tied up in a nice package at the end so it all makes sense.  For now, we have Joffith causing trouble for Brian by using his son to lure Brian back to his past. ( we still need to find out what evil plans he has for Brian)  Brian discovering his new powers, (though are we surprised? In my last story he was psychically connected to Justin, and they always had this cosmic connection with the otherworld) and we have some new characters thrown in to help solve the mystery of what the heck Joffith is up to, and who is this mystery man that Jagger attacked....hmmm....it's already getting complicated!  LOL

Thank you so much for commenting DavidR! I love hearing from you.

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 11:19 AM · On: The Intruder

Oh hell I can't believe it Jack Kinney, Joffith and Celia damn. This is just too much I would have called in the towel what pure bad luck poor Brian has. I am glad that Celia appeared at least it will let Jagger come to terms with his mother even if it hurts for a time. I am puzzled by the man that Jagger had the brawl with.

 

Excellent chapter you just keep coming with full force.



Author's Response:

Thank you Vision!  That man who Jagger attacked is VERY much connected to Brian, and Jagger, courtesy of one nasty demon.  But that won't come out till almost the end.  Let's just say Joffith brought him in as back up plan to get Brian.  Jagger will have the opportunity to come to terms with his feelings for his mother, as will Justin, with his father Craig, but the center stage for the next few chapters will be Brian and Jacks relationship.  As you know, that relationship was poison from the beginning, and now Brian is going to need him. This will not  sit well with Brian. 

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: Patty(pfodge) (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:08 AM · On: The Intruder

This chapter had a lot of information in it.  and am I seeing a theme here with our boys and their parents?

Jack as Brians Spiritual Guide is going to be interesting.  I hope your not going to be keeping us waiting to long.  This is getting really really good.



Author's Response: Thanks Patty. And yes!  You are seeing a theme.  Jagger and his mother, Justin and Craig (will be dealing with that down the road)  And now Brian and Jack  (yes, that should prove very interesting!)  Lots of twists and turns ahead!  Thanks for commenting, I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 06:24 AM · On: The Intruder

Oh no! Brian's father is Brian's spirit guide? This should be good. LOL. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Lynn! Jack will bring a whole other dimension to this story.  Parent's is the theme.  Jagger and his mother, Justin and his father, (who'll be coming in down the road) and now Brian and his Dad.   Hopefully, between them all, they'll defeat Joffith!  Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:11 AM · On: The Intruder

oh gina, as intense as it was it was also very ehjoyable. justin has elliot, jagger has his mother and brian, omg i knew it would be jack. i don't feel for joffith, not only will he have to battle brian and his powers, once he gets them undercontrol. but now he'll have to battle jack. will jack stand beside his son or lead him to joffith for the taking? jagger's mother is going to try and redeeem herself to him. will jack? i can't wait to see where you take us next.

Author's Response:

Hey sjmpets! I thought you'd like this chapter.  :-)  You know where I'm heading.   Joffith is in for a battle cause as strong as Brian is, it takes a mother fucker like Jack to deal with that fiend!  Brian will need his help, and considering their history, that won't be easy.  Much friction coming up with those two. How ironic is it that not moments before, Brian was lecturing Justin on how he has to deal with his unresolved feelings for Craig, then Jack shows up, as his spirit guide no less!  The theme here is parents. Jaggers' mother, Justins' father (will be bringing him in later on) and now Brian's father.  And between them all, they need to defeat this demon! 

I'll be working on the next chapter this week.  The fun, and angst, is about to begin. As always, it's so great getting feedback from you!  *hugs*

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:39 AM · On: The Intruder

I F-IING knew it! As soon as they started channeling Brian's spirit guide (after learniing who Jag's guide was) I said I bet I know who it is!!! OMG!! Of ALL the people, of all the people!! I'm so glad no one else was in the office when I read that, cuz I did jump out of my seat and squeal a bit. LOL!

Wow, Brian, Justin and Jagger have to deal in some way with the parent that wronged them! LOVE IT! 

Now I'm trying to figure out what Joffieth is trying to get Brian to do. OK, you need to get the next chapter done girly!!



Author's Response:

lol I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter!  You got it right too!  Of all people, Brian's farther is his spirit guide!  Talk about rocky relationships!  Fireworks are coming, you can be sure of that. And I"m glad you got the theme. Parents.  Jaggers mother, Justin's father and now Brian's father.  All three have to deal with their parents. 

As for Joffith, aw well he want's Brian soul, and his got some devious plans in store for him.   I'm working on the next chapter now. So glad you commented!  Thanks.

Reviewer: pfodge(patty) (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Awakenings

This was a very insightful chapter.  I love jealous Brian. His denile is so cute.  I've always loved the way you write Brian. 

This was a great chapter, and I can't wait for your next update.  

Patty



Author's Response: Thanks Patty.  I like a jealous Brian too.  so far, I've kept this story light, (stretching my comedic muscle) but I feel my muse is yearning for angst.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story, and as always thank you soo much for commenting!  It is so much appreciated.

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Awakenings

I have been away for  awhile and I came back to find

6 Chapters of ‘A Stitch in Time’.  Lucky me.  I read them and it was so nice to meet many of the characters I have gotten to know.

I liked that Brian, when he thought he had some powers

to return  or relive some history he chose to relive or

or try to relive a hot time with Justin.  He is a father,  a husband, a successful

business, and a man well known and respected  in some circles, but  Brian is still Brian.  Some things don’t change!  I thought that was a terrific idea.

 

Anyway, I am so happy to see you continue this story, well not  quite the story, but the same characters 3 years later.  I look forward to the rest of the story.

 

Again, thanks for writing this and sharing with us.

 DavidR

Author's Response:

It's so great to hear from you DavidR!  Welcome back!  I hope you enjoy this one.  I'm testing my comedic side a bit, but the angst is still there, (coming up soon)  I'm glad you understand Brian in my stories. Though I took him through the years, made him grow up so to speak, he will always be, as you say, Brian.  At heart he is still a boy, an impish one at that! (As Justin told him at the end of RTM when he presented him with the pony on his 40 birthday, to remind him, should he forget, of the little boy inside.)

In my stories, he will always maintain his sarcastic wit, narcassitic tendenacies, and his sexual mischeivious nature.   I just can't change those things in him! 

Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Awakenings

Such a fascinating story and I lvoed how justin is learning to block Brian when he wants to. Your stories always have such twists and turns and keep me on the edge of my seat.  can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks sfscarlet!  I'm so glad you're liking this one. It's a  bit different then my last two, (not as angsty) I'm trying to tap into my comedic side a  bit, but I can sense my muse already stirring up some angst for future chapters.  lol  Thank you so much for commenting.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Awakenings

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Lynn.  I'm working on the next chapter now.  The boys are going to wittness thier first seance.  I'm glad your enjoying this one. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Awakenings

Your imagination keeps me coimg back time and time again.

Author's Response: Thanks gerri.  I've some interesting scenes playing around in my head for upcoming  chapters. I hope you enjoy them!  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Awakenings

First: I love jealous/Brian!

Second: this power in Brian will make the story very interesting!

Another wonderful chapter!

*hugs*



Author's Response: Thanks kika! I love a jealous Brian too.  :-)  And yes, Brian's powers are going to make for interesting writing!  So glad you like it.  Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Awakenings

Well well both our boys have a little psychic powers within them this should be even more interesting. I'm glad that Brian saw Justin subconscious thoughts of his father b/c unlike Brian his father hated him from day one whereas Craig loved Justin up until he came out. It's easy to not care about someone if the didn't give a rat's ass about but it is highly different when they did it always makes you wonder what you could have done to make things right.

 

Dying for more

 



Author's Response:

Exactly Vision!  Brian's dad hated him from the start, no big loss there.  Justin had the love of his father for years before he came out.  He did everything in his power to make his father proud of him.  But once he came out, there was nothing he could do to make Craig proud again, and love him again. Justins never really dealt with that, and Brian is only beginning to understand.  (b/c like you said, his situation with his father was very different.) Kind of reminds me in the scene in S1 where Justin is at the loft on the phone with his mother asking her if she could talk to his father for him.  When he hangs up, Brian tells him he should forget his father.  Justin replies he can't, that he never could, that was his dad.  Anyway, I wanted to delve into that a little in this story.

 Next chapter however, the boys will be preoccupied with finding out who the intruder is, and what's going on with all these OOB's!  Thanks for commenting, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Awakenings

gina, this story is so different from the others. it's more comical, more at ease. i do hope that that is how it's to be preceived.

 howes and brian are the perfect foils for each other.

brian will never lose faith in justin. he just had a trick up his sleeve to protect them. as for his feeling for craig, brian has a long road ahead of him to make justin see any reason about craig. i don't envy brian for taking on that battle.



Author's Response:

You're right sjmpets, I am going for a lighter, more funnier theme. I think I've done enough angst in the past.  B/J are at the point where their love is solid, so it's a good time for Brian to take on Justin's unresolved feelings towards his father.  I hope you're enjoying this story, it is a diversion from my usual style.

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Awakenings

Although Brian was freaked out at the start, I had no doubt he would pull through for his family. Its who he is. Interesting about Justin's subconcious thoughts about Craig. I think just like with the bashing, Justin never really got any closure about the issue of his dad.

Author's Response:

My muse took me in that direction.  In my past stories, I never dealt with Justin's relationship with his father.  I'm going to touch on it here.  And yes, Brian always comes through for his family!  But he's got a lot to learn about his powers yet.  Things are about to get interesting.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

You are welcome...and you are right I am enjoying the story.  I have read and love the whole series.  Keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: :-)  I'm working on another chapter tonight.   Again, thank you for your input.  I appreciate the help.  I have no beta and though I try to proof read it myself, I can read it ten 100 times and still miss something.  Being a read, and lover of fanfic, I know how gramatical mistakes can interupt the flow of a story.  I am always grateful for constructive critique.

Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

Kama Sutra not Karma Sutra

Author's Response: Thank you. I just corrected that mistake. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

The bantering was hilarious! Love Justin's new nickname "Krypton"!

You gotta update soon, I want to know what this intruder thing is!



Author's Response: Hey Kat!  I'm glad you like the nic Howes gave Justin.  I thought it fit since he calls Brian superman!  lol   I'm working on the next chapter tonight. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

An intruder?

Who? What? When?

Oh my!  Sorry I'm speechless right now!

BTW The new characters are very interesting!

 

ciao



Author's Response: Thanks kika! You know I love developing new characters. I'm having fun with this 'paranormal crew'.  lol.  Yes, a ghostly intruder! Who is it? What do they want? Where will this journey take them, Hmmm... And what complications will happen along the way?  I'm sooo gald you'e enjoying this storyline! Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

great as always. you had to stop right as is was getting interesting.... how evil of you ;-)) rose

Author's Response: Hey rose! Sorry abou that, I actually did think of continuing on, but then this chapter would be like 10 thousand words!  So I broke it in two. Working on the next chapter tonight!  Thanks for commenting!  So glad you're liking this story.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

I think it is going to get ugly before it gets pretty again.

Author's Response: I think you're right gerri!  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

"Having experience with souls that have crossed over, it wouldn't be out of line to think that maybe Jagger's mother was trying to ‘right a past wrong', using Brian as a psychic conduit."

I think Brian is right about Jagger's mom. I am looking forward in seeing whether I am right on this one. Great chapter. 

 



Author's Response: Thanks Lynn!  Well we know one thing is for sure, 'someone' is pulling Jagger from his body.  But who? And why? Hmmm.... Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

Oh shit now didn't see that coming so Jagger is pulling Brian along with him but who is causing all of this damn so many more questions? Love the introduction of these new characters they seem like a riot. Justin has always been the one to pull Brian out of his funk and it continues to even to this story can't wait for the next chapter

 

 



Author's Response: Hi Vision!  I'm glad you like the new characters.   Some important answers revealed in the next chapter.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this one!   Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

Bugger, I was so into that chapter and it finished, please update soon

Author's Response:

thanks bksbracelet!  The next chatper will pick up from this one. I would have kept going, but I din't want the chapter to be 10 thousands words!  lol

I'm working on the next chapter this weekend. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Ugly Is As Ugly Does

well, i just adore this. of course brian is following jagger.how else is he suppose to protect ftom his past? i don't know about bambi, but chino and betty seem quite interesting.

i do love how justin pulls brian apart to get him to see things. he knows brian too well for brian's sake.



Author's Response:

YES!  (I sooo love when you get the plot!) Brian IS 'subconsciously' following Jagger to protect him. It's who Brian is.  He always does whatever it takes to protect his family.   BUT Justin is also correct, Brian revisiting 'their' past is fated.  Now they just how to figure out how everything is connected, and what started this chain of events...hmmm.

 This story isn't going as  well as the previous two. It's MUCH harder for me to write because I think I'm getting fatigued with this AU.  I'm so glad you find it interesting.  PLEASE let me know if I start veering off course and it's not a "gina marie" story anymore.  

As for Bambi, she may be a Bimbo, but for a reason....  AS for Justin, again you are right.  That's what he does, pulls Brian apart to get him to see things from his perspective. He's always seen Brian more clearly then Brian sees himself, and he always knows what is best for Brian.

Thank you so much sjmpets3! I was really worried how this chapter would be recieved.  *hugs*

Reviewer: pfodge (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Take Me Back...

Hi Gina, I'm liking this more and more as I read it.  It's definitely getting interesting now.  I am wondering what else Brian changed with his little trip to the past.  Looking forward to more soon.

Patty

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Patty.  I'm glad you're liking this one.  Some interesting developments coming up.  I hope I can get the next chapter up this week.  It's been a bit hectic around here.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Take Me Back...

The first part with 'Brian's experiment' is sooooo good...mh...minus the falling backwards! *shake my head*

Btw I would love to see Debbie reaction! LoL

Now their past has been altered and the other people too.

I hope Brian knows what's going on.

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Hey kika!  I liked writing that scene, I'm glad you enjoyed it!  Like one reveiwer wrote, 'brian let his dick get him in trouble again.'  lol.   Seems Brian paid the price to have a little fun with his boy!

I'm working on the next chapter this week.  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Take Me Back...

Even now Brian's dick is still getting him into trouble. I hope Jagger's 10 yr old pain is not too bad to live through again.

Author's Response:

I love the way you put that gerri!  LOL  You're right!  His dick always does get him into trouble!  But that's why we love him.    The pain Jagger is experiencing (or will be...) at ten will explain alot about his memories of his past, and his mother.   

 So glad you're on board for this one! Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Take Me Back...

Wow, look at me. I must be in a mood tonight. I am leaving comments every which way!!

 Eeekkkk, this doesn't sound good. Brian can say or do one thing that can change their future big time. Me thinks Brian needs to keep his OOB movements closed. All we need is for him to go back and mess up everything he and Justin have worked so hard to accomplish!!

But what's the fun in that for one of Gina's stories?

 

Shauna



Author's Response: Awwwww...Thanks Shauna! I'm so glad you reviewed!  And you're right about my stories.  lol No fun unless there is angst!   But I'll try to keep it at a minimal.  Thanks for commenting, sooo glad you're enjoying this story!

Reviewer: nazd (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Take Me Back...

Okay so these reviews never go  through for me anymore, so I've pretty much stopped reviewing, but this is just too good to pass up, so I figured I'd give it one more shot. After all, if not for one of my top 2 authors than who, right?

So anyway, I just got around to reading this (mostly because I knew if I started the second I saw you're first posting I'd be on the edge of my seat waiting for updates) and I've got to say I'm as impressed as always. The premise is fantastic and the plotline captivating. I'm hooked, just as I knew I'd be.

 And as much as I loved that you borrowed Fran, I've got to admit I almost died laughing when I realized that Dr. House would be making an appearance, albiet slightly altered. I think one of my favorite lines so far is when Howes told Justin that he had been checking him  out.  OMG, practically rolling on the floor!

 So, anyway, great work as always. Can't wait for chapter 5, (which I totally could have predicted! )



Author's Response:

Well I am soooo glad you got through this time!  Wow, I'm one of your favorite authors!?  *hugs* Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying this ride, and I can't thank you enough for this comment.  There is nothing more satisfying to me than sharing my 'little fantasy' world with others who also enjoy it.  I'm glad you like the Howes character (yes, based on House, I love that show!)  He's a trip, ain't he?

Again, thank you for commenting. I hope you're able to get through again!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Take Me Back...

gina, you're having fun with brian going into the past aren't you?

to me it seems that brian is taking jagger back to the time before his mother died or got into trouble.

but i can see what going back to the past can do. he marred his justin but that is now not then. he's opening pandora's box isn't he?



Author's Response:

Yes sjmpets3, having lots of fun!  LOL You know me so well!  And yes, he's going back to a time before his mother died. Remember her? And how Jagger remembers her? Much different than how Lizzy remembers her....hmmmmm..... 

Yes, he's marred his sweet Sunshine!  :-(  and you KNOW how he feels about that! But what he's going to regret more, is having to go back again, and not being able to change one damn  thing about the past.  That will kill him, cause he's going to see, up front and personal, just how mean and vicious he was to his boy in the beginning.  often, we can't see our lives or ourselves when we are in the middle of it. It's not till much later, with hindsight, that we can see our mistakes. That's hard enough. Brian is going to be 'reliving' his mistakes and not be able to correct them! That's going to be a real challenge for Brian.  (you know I love my angst!  LOL)

You pretty much said it all....."He's opening a pandora's box"  Yip.   Lord knows what's going to happen next!   Sooo glad you're enjoying this one! 

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Take Me Back...

Well I never thought his OOB experience would actually be affecting his current life but it is a great twist nonetheless. I was hoping for some consequences of Brian's abilities other than dragging Jagger into it but I am baffled by what Jagger is experiencing. I have got to go back and read the first in the series to see if I can figure it out.

 

Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Hey Vision!  There will be other consequences to Brian's abilities.  Howes still has to test him, see how strong his psychic abilities are.   That should be interesting. As for Jagger's involvment, well I can't say too much.  There isn't any *obvious* clue in the previous chapters, BUT (big but) When it's revealed how and why Jagger is being pulled back, and how Brian is involved, it will make sense because of something that happened in RTM.  I know it's confusing, (my stories tend to be at first, sorry.  :-(  ....  But hopefully it will clear up  by the end and you'll say "Ah...So that's why!" 

Thank you soo much for commenting.  I love hearing from you!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Take Me Back...

oh my god... what a beautiful chapter. you did a great job :-)) rose

Author's Response: Ah rose, thanks! *hugs*.   You always inspire me with your kind words of praise. 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Take Me Back...

OMG! This story just gets better!! I'm so curious to know why Brian thinks he's taking Jagger back to when he was a kid.

Now that he knows he can alter their current life by doing things differently in the past, I hope Brian is more careful. This time it was a scar on Justin's body that appeared, it could very well be worst next time. Wonder if anything did change with the family.



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat!  There is a reason why Brian is taking Jagger back.  A situation has emerged due to 'ahem' unforseen interference.  (ok, you know I always give too much away!  lol)  But it's all connected.  This is a sequel to RTM, and BTWYTWY, surfice it to say events happened in those previous stories that are responsible for what's happening now.  All Brian, Justin, Howes and Jagger have to do is figure out the how and why.    I'm sure Brian will be more careful, however it's going to be very difficult for him.  when he goes back again, and he will, he'll have to maintain his '29' year old persona, which as you know, wasn't always nice. It's going to kill Brian to have to hurt Justin all over again, should he find himself in that situation.  Ok, I've spilled enough beans for one day!  lol

Thank you sooo much for commenting! I'm so glad readers are getting invested in this story!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Take Me Back...

I just hope Brian knows what he is doing. Brian, Justin, Howes need to find a reason why Brian and Jagger having these OOB experiences. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

I think Brian got a rude awaking with this last OOB trip!  he'll be more careful from now on.  They have several things to accomplish to figure out what's going on.  First, they have to get a handle on Brian's OOB experiences. He's going to continue to have them, but now he knows he has to be extra careful not to screw things up.  Second, they have to figure out why Brian is dragging Jagger back to the same time frame. There could be dual purposes here, but time (and more chapters lol) will tell.   Thank you soooo much for commenting Lynn! I'm so glad you're still enjoying this story!

 

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

winced is the correct word, not winched

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll make a note to correct that.

Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Last one I promise...

What is going on with the Dr.? Checking J out? How is B going to feel about that? Although, I like a jealous B. And it is nice to see that not just B is desirable and easy on the eyes.

Will J be able to travel back with B? It might be nice for them both to be able to experience the past together.

 Thanks...sorry for the multiple posts.



Author's Response: Hey Sarah, Howes is just weird.  He's VERY observant, about everything. Justin's beautiful body was just one of them.  As for Justin accompanying Brian on one of his OOB experiences, I do have something in mind for that.. Much later on in the story!  And please NEVER apologize for multiple posts! It just shows me that you're truly interested in the plot line!  There is no greater compliment to me!  *hug*

Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Take Me Back...

I meant to say you CAN'T stop there...ooops!

Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Take Me Back...

You can stop there.

Is B trying to prevent Jag's drug use, prostitution, etc?

Is he trying to stop the bashing?

Will he change the future by changing the past again...causing bad problems?

There has got to be more to the impact of warning M off of D.

Hmm...this got even more interesting (how is that possible).

I hope you udate VERY soon.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah! I'm so glad your're invested in this story!  You are on the right track.  Brian is thinking these 'trips' might have something to do with Jaggers past drug/prostitution problems.  And No, he won't try to stop the bashing, but you know he's thinking about it.  That subject will come up in up coming chapters.  I think he realizes now that his actions  can have serious reprecussions. If he did stop the bashing, things for them could have turned out very differntly.  Justins bashing made Brian realize how much Justin meant to him.  Though they are soul mates, sometimes soul mates don't meet up in this life, or for several lifetimes.  Stopping the bashing could result in the boys going their separate ways.  And then their children (Andy,Maria and Elliot) may have never been born.  As for M and D, fortunately, Brian telling Mikey to dump the doc doesn't change a thing. In the begining, he was always getting inbetween their relationship. Remember Brian never liked the Doc.  So Brian telling Mikey to dump him wouldn't be something 'new'.  He often made his feelings for David known.

 Wow! I'm so glad you are liking this story, and asking questions!  Thank you so much for this comment!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Dr. Howes

Very interesting take on Justin and Brian meeting the first time. Never thought that it was Justin who seduced Brian instead of the other way around. I like it!!

Brian with psychic abilities, this is going to be really interesting. Loved Brian asking Justin to keep his Bri-dar in tuned. So cute!!!



Author's Response:

I want to revist some of season 1 in this story.   Like that first meeting, and put my own little twist on it.  :-) I'm glad you liked it!

I think I'm going to have fun with Brian's psychic abilities.  He can be very childish at times, we know this. He's going to be like a kid in a candy store once he learns how to harness his pyschic powers. lol  Should prove interesting, and challening for Justin! Only our boy can keep him in line.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Dr. Howes

Well Dr. Howes is an interesting person. I kinda of like him. :D But I can see that Brian has a hard time trusting new people and giving up control to this new doctor. It will be interesting to see how Brian and the doc get along down the road. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Lynn. I like the dynamics between Howes and Brian, I'm glad you do too.  They are going to be spending a lot of time together.  Poor Justin is going to be the meidator.   Thank you for your comment, I'm so glad you're liking this story!  :-)

Reviewer: snvoigt (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Dr. Howes

Ok I love this, I love this series! But is Dr. Howes based on Dr. House? The cane, the bum leg, popping pills, and the snarky attitude? If so I love it!!!

 

Shauna



Author's Response:

YES!!!!  I was wondering when someone was going to catch that!  I love House!  Howes is based on him, with a bit of a twist.   I think you're going to like him.  And I'm sooo glad you like this series!  It started off as one story, then turned into a series.  I do believe this story however will be the last in this series, (though I said that last time. lol)

Thank you so much for commenting!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Dr. Howes

a riot of a  chapter.

dr. howes, the perfect foil for brian. i can't wait to see the powers howes finds in brian.

the dream, back to that night, him falling out of bed. yeah, he fell alright.



Author's Response:

Hey sjmpets! Yeah, you're right, he fell alright!  lol  I think I'm going to have some fun with this Howes character. And Brian is going to have fun on his 'nightly' excursions now that he's getting use to them.   Someone is going to have to keep him focused on his mission...which is to find out why he all of a sudden is having these OOB experiences, and how is Jagger connected?  Who that someone is, is yet to be determined.

I'm glad your enjoying it so far.  I'm working on the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Dr. Howes

Wow just wow . A telepath and a semi-weird fucked up one at that. This is turning out to be completely mental in such an excellent way. I am dying to see what is in store for them. This will eb a thrill ride and what about Lizzy and Corrine how will they explain.

 

EXcellent chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks Vision!  Lets just say Lizzy and Corrine are not going to be happy with Brian and Justin taking Jagger away for 'treatment' for awhile.   The Institute, as B/J are going to find out, is a very strange place!  I've some senario's in mind I hope you'll enjoy!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

LOL! Justin saying "Ghostbusters" is so like him!

So Brian and Jagger experienced those moments at the same time. I wonder why its happening to Jagger? 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! yes, both men's experiences are connected.  Finding out how, and why, is part of the journey of this story.  Of course I'll be throwing some road blocks along the way.  :-)

Thank you so much for commenting!  I'm glad you're enjoying this one.

Reviewer: TaraN (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Dr. Howes

Wow this is really interesting. Brian with psychic powers...very interesting. I would think that Justin had tapped into his psychic powers too since he also spoke to Elliot and the whole Alexander/Andy/Jonathan/Justin scene in "Return to Me..."

Keep up the good work. I am really enjoying this.



Author's Response:

Hey TaraN! Nice catch, and I was thinking the same thing as I was writing this chapter. I didn't put it in yet because I felt it was 'too' much, but Justin's own psychic powers will come up later on. You are exactly right, Justin had encounters with spirits/angels too.  He's not unaffected.  But his powers will come out when needed most.

I'm still playing with plot lines, you know me, I'm sure I'll throw some twists and turns in along the way, but I figured this was the natural course to take considering the themes to the previous stories.

I'm glad you're liking this one!  I'm haviing fun with it.  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Wow! A crazy doctor, Brian with powers and Justin in the middle! and it is only the beginning of this story!

I don't know how you do it but your wraiting is so much detailed and amazing but I'm really an happy reader! ;-P

ciao



Author's Response:

Thanks kika! I really appreciate this comment, because sometimes I think my story gets bogged down in too many details.   You see for me, I have to make sense out of everything and explain everything. It can at times take away from the 'feel' of the story. I'm glad you like the detail!  Please let me know if it becomes too cumbersome.   Too much 'detail' and not enough 'emotion' can be a very bad thing.  I'm trying for a happy medium!

Thank you so much for this wonderful feedback!  *hugs*

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Dr. Howes

Loved it! Sounds like Dr. Howe is quite a character, can't wait to read more, to find out why all this is happening etc. <happy dance, great chapter>

Author's Response: Thanks alys!  Doc. Howes is a hoot.  But he is good at what he does.  Once he finds out where Brian has been going on his 'nightly adventures'  things are going to get interesting!  Thank you so much for commenting.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Dr. Howes

It was already interesting, how the hell did you make it more...loed it!

Author's Response:

Hi gerri! I'm so glad you're finding it more interesting! I'm trying to weave a plot out of  all this.  lol.  I love mystery, and you know along the way I'll be throwing some twists and turns in.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

I'm so glad you starte another story with these characters ... poor Jag! I'm hooked!

Author's Response: Thanks Anno53!  I hope to have the next chapter up in a day or two.  Thank you for commenting.  Feedback is so important to me, and very much appreciated!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

Ah Gina here we go again and off course  love it. It is going to send me insane waiting for the chapters.

Who do I call, Ghostbusters lol great start thank you Chris



Author's Response: Hey Chris!  Well you know I couldn't resist!  I wanted to  do another AU story, but I just couldn't let of this one just yet.  I  think I have one more adventure for our boys in this universe.  Some interesting characters coming up.  I hope you enjoy!  thank you so much commenting!

Reviewer: pat-ace87 (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Hey there, I'm so glad you're posting another sequel to your story, I LOVE IT ^________^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was just wondering, will you be posting this over at LJ???? I don't remember seeing an update about this on my Flist???!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Pat!  I'm so glad you like this "3rd" sequel.  (I just can't seem to let the boys go from this AU!)

I am going to post to my LJ, but I wanted a few chapters done first .  thank you so much for commenting!  I hope you continue to enjoy this story!

Reviewer: pfodge (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

*waves at you*

Hi Gina I'm so glad you are doing another story in this verse.  I'm enjoying what you have so far and can't wait for more. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks pfodge!  I was worried this theme was getting played too much, but I think I've one more adventure for our boys in this AU. If I do another story, I promise it will have a completely different theme.  (still want to do that 'private dicks' storyline I was thinking about before I started this one)

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!  Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

oh gina this is going to be fun i hope, at least not as angst filled as last time. you gave me a fit of giggles with that ghostbuster line.

dr. howes sounds like he'll drive brian crazy. can't wait to meet him.



Author's Response:

Hey sjmpets!  Glad you like this one.  You're right, Howes will give Brian a hard time!  He's going to be quite a character.  A bit unorthodox, if you know what I mean. lol

As for not being too angsty, well, it won't be, BUT... I really never know where my muse will take me. I do know however that these little trips back in time that Brian will be having will be an eye opener for him.  

I'm soo glad you on board for this one!  I'll try to keep it interesting. 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

I like how Justin joking around with singing the ghostbusters song. Very cute. I am looking forward to what will happen next. Will Brian have another out of body experience? Great chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Lynn!  I'm glad you liked the ghostbuster scene.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  Yes, Brian will have another OOB (out of body) experience.  figuring out why they are happening is the plot line.  Also, he's going to learn a few things about himself on his OOB trips.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

Love the humour and the mistery around this new fics!

Brian bent his head and pinched the bridge of his nose.

 

“I swear to God Justin if you…” He started to warn, but was cut of by Justin’s enthusiastic answer.

 

“Ghostbusters!”

OMG!!! hahahaha!  

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

hey kika! I'm glad you like the humor.  and the mystery.  I was hoping people didn't think that last line too corny, but I just couldn't resist, and it seemed to me like something Justin would say! 

I hope you enjoy this story.  I'm working on the next chapter. thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

I love Justin's sence of humour and Brian's care for his family. It was so cool the way how in the middle of the phone convo with Rena, B/J just started to talk dirty and stuff, it was funny even in a serious part.

Author's Response: I just had to throw in that little bit of dirty talk. It's so our boys, isn't it?  lol  Justin loves to torment Brian, I love writing those scenes. I'm glad you're liking this one. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

I love the end of the chapter, so Justin.....    ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks Eileen!  I like writing an 'impish' Justin. I"m glad you liked it too!  Thank you for commenting

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Who Ya Gonna Call?

Wow just wow I just love the interaction between everyone and the mystery just continues. Question is why now and why Jagger.

 

Excellent chapter

Who you gonna call "Brian Kinney"



Author's Response: Thanks Vision!  That's a good question.  Why now and why Jagger? Hmmm....stay tuned!  And thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: ghfan (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Very glad to see this new story.  I really enjoyed the first two and am more than ready for the new ride.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you ghfan! I'm so glad you're liking this one. I was afraid it would be 'too much' after the last two.  But I think I got one more story left in me for this series.

Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: Eliana (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

I am so glad you are writing another story.  I love your writing and QAF.  Love all the new characters you have introduced as well.  Looking forward to reading more.  Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks Eliana! I hope you enjoy this sequel as well.  Old characters will return, and new ones will be introduced!  Thank you for your feedback. 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

You are the bomb!! I'm so glad you are continuing this series!! I can already tell this story is going to be fantastic!!! YEAH!!

Now, what is up with Brian and Jagger, so strange. Well its a ride you'll be taking us on, that's for damn sure! =)



Author's Response: Hey Kat!  I'm glad you're happy I decided to continue on with this series.  I wanted to write a different AU world, but I can't seem to stay away from this one.  I'm still forming the plot in my head, but I hope you enjoy it!  As always, thanks for your support and kind words!  *hugs*

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Trouble Sleeping

As always you are able to hurl me into the belly of your story in such a short but amazing manner that I am so involved that it is wonderful. I hope whatever the reason for both Brian and Jagger's dreams it is solved in a very lengthy manner with lots of twist and turns and my two fav men holding each other along the way. And no I do not know your fics at all...no preasure, lol!

Author's Response: lol no pressure!  I shall do my best.  I hope you enjoy this story, (haven't figured it all out in my head yet) Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

This is going to be a good arc, for sure. :D Great chapter, looking forward for more.

  



Author's Response: Thanks Lynn!  The storyline is still forming in my head.  I'm working on the next chapter tonight.  I'm sooo glad you're taking this journey with me once again!  *hugs*

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Once again excellent start. Another mystery in the Kinney-Taylor clan has appeared unfortunately it had to happened to the one  member of the family who finally is getting his life on track. Can't wait to see the myriad of family member showing up.

 

Next chapter please



Author's Response: Thanks Vision!   I'm glad you're liking this one so far.   I'm working on the next  chapter now.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

gina i can't see the banner on any site, is there one?

Author's Response:

yes it is.  Damn!  I had trouble posting it to begin with.  I can see it. I wonder if anyone else can?

I'm posting it here, in the response. Can you see it?

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Another Great Beginning. Love your stories, glad to see more.

Author's Response:

Thanks alys!  I hope you like this sequel. I was going to start a new story, and put this series to rest, but as you can see, I'm having a hard time letting go!  lol

Thanks for commenting.  And for your support of my stories.  :-)

I know a lot of people write for themselves, and in part that's very true for me, but in bigger part, I write for my readers.  When you guys are happy, I'm happy..

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Trouble Sleeping

OMG you're back! I'm so happy for this new fics!

 

ciao



Author's Response:

Hey kika! I was just telling rose how nice it was to be back!  I'm glad you're still with me!  *hugs* I hope you enjoy this sequel.  Thanks soooo much for commenting and always being supportive of my stories. 

GM

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Trouble Sleeping

oh my god, gina marie.... you are doing it again..... I am soooo hooked right from the start.... :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Hey rose!  LOL I'm glad you like the start of this one!  The storyline is still developing in my head, but it's coming together. I'll be working on the next chapter this week.

*hugs* 

 

GM.

PS - It's nice to be back...

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Trouble Sleeping

Okay, you've got me hooked.... again.....

Can't wait for the next intallment....



Author's Response:

Thanks Eileen! I'm glad I got you hooked!  The first chapter is always the hardest.  I have to lay ground work, AND get people interested. Sometimes the ground work can be 'unexciting' and readers wont' stick around for the rest of the story.  RTM was a hard story to  get off the ground because the first chapter had nothing to do with B/J, but eventually readers came around (thanks to all those who rec'd me)   This story starts off with b/j, but if you aren't familiar with BTWYTWY and RTM, it's going to confuse people.

I'm so happy you're still interested in this AU!  It's more like one long series...And I'm so grateful for readers like you who choose to go on this journey with me!

GM

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Trouble Sleeping

wonderful chapter gina. i can't wait to see where this story takes us. poor jagger. got his life on track and baby on the way maybe and a woman who loves him. what the hell is going on.

by the way, i loved brian's dream although he aged justin didn't. that has to be tied to jagger.



Author's Response:

Hey sjmpets!  You're right, it IS tied to Jagger!  You sooo get me!  <smile>  Something is happening to Brian, and Jagger that's connected in someway.  Brian's dream demonstrates that...or was it a dream?  Hmmmm..

 I hope you like this storyline. It's just coming together in my head. I know I said I was going to write something different, but I just can't let go of our boys in this world.  It's so much fun!

As always, LOVE hearing from you!  *hugs*

GM

Reviewer: TaraN (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Trouble Sleeping

I haven't been here in weeks and I came here on the off chance tonight. What a surprise to see a sequel to "Return to Me".

I thought you said that you were done with this series. I am glad it continues with yet another intriguing plot. I look forward to more.

And for selfish reasons I couldn't resist being the first to post a comment. LOL!!!



Author's Response:

Hi TaraN!  Yeah, I know, I was going to write something completely different, but I just can't let go of these characters in this setting.   I think I have one more adventure you'll like for our boys in this story.  It will tie into some events from BTWYTWY and RTM.  Someone has a score to settle...

Thanks so much for commenting! When people comment, it means the world to me.  Bad or Good.  (well, not mean bad, but honest critisim only makes me want to do better, though of course I LOVE it when people comment just to tell me they are enjoying my story.)  <smile>

It's good to hear from you! Hope all is well.

Gina Marie

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