Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Out Of The Ashes
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2021 07:37 AM · On: Laina's Chapter

This story has me so confused. In the beginning chapters Brian has moved out of the loft and into a house, but later you only have hm at the loft. Also Justin meets the whole gang ay Woody’s and Babylon but in the last chapter Brian talks about Justin meeting the gang plus Justin and Michael are Hoth at the loft when Brian is puking. He also talks about the kids meeting Deb and getting used to her, but hasn’t she been keeping them at her house. Also, Deb mentions Mikey breaking up with a boyfriend when she calls Brian in the next to last chapter, but Ben has been in the picture through the whole story. The story concept is good, but all the details completely lack any continuity. 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2019 10:08 PM · On: Laina's Chapter

great thank you

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2018 09:14 AM · On: Laina's Chapter

I really liked this story, not sure how I have missed seeing it previously. Brian surely needs someone in his corner who doesn't think his real name is "Asshole" - something I grew very tired of in the series.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 05:05 AM · On: Laina's Chapter

I loved it!! I think I read this a long time ago, back when I didn't have an account here... I'm glad I could find it again and re-read it! ^-^ Hope to read you soon in another story! Kisses!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 12:43 AM · On: Laina's Chapter

great story

Reviewer: Shenova (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 11:58 PM · On: Laina's Chapter

I just read your story and I have to say that I loved it. You write really amazingly and you had me hooked. I started reading your story last night but I had to stop as it was 2am and I needed sleep. The story was so sweet and it was a new twist on the whole cancer issue and I liked that you had Justin just come in with a daughter to a new idea to them meeting. Brian can be such a pain and as usual he clicks that he needs to express his feelings instead of keeping them hidden. I will have to check to see if you have written anything else as I am sure they will be brilliant too. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: natosha (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2008 01:51 AM · On: Jessica's Chapter

I really liked this chapter I know exactly where the speech is from.  My favorite film that I've seen over a hundred times "Dirty Dancing"  Baby says this to Johnnie.

Author's Response: hehe, you're right. I love that movie as well. Thanks for the review. Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2008 02:24 AM · On: Laina's Chapter

i don't know, that ending line sounded like it was lefy open for a sequel. i too would love to know what's going happen next for the four of them.

i really enjoyed this story and hope the two of you are planning more.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, we're glad you liked it. Later, Jessica

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