Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2019 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 18
fucking Lindsey, always hated that bitch
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lovely beginning. Interesting to see Justin as the more affluent one in this scenario
Reviewer: Sabine4 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2017 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 20
I can't even begin to explain what this story meant to me, you are such an amazing writer, it was definitely a roller coaster of emotions, like at some parts my heart hurt sooo much and at others I couldn't stop smiling.
Thank you for bringing this story to life.
Ps. To be honest I didn't have an account but I just HAD to make one to be able to leave this review.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2017 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 20
I Loved this story so much. Please say that you will give us a sequel I would love to read how the Taylor-Kinney family and the rest of the gang has living. I have added this take to my favorites.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2017 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 20
That was a great ending. Will there is any more to this cool story?
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2017 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 19
That was great. Can't wait to read the final chapter.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2017 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 18
That was terrific!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2017 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 17
Wow so many things in this chapter. Love how protective Justin and Jennifer are of Brian. Both of them trying to get Brian's parents to be civil at the awards ceremony.
Love the new relationship with Emmett and Mike.
A baby with both Brian and Justin DNA I am sure the baby will be gorgeous.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2017 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 16
That was amazing!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 15
That was terrific!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 14
This was terrific!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2017 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was terrific!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2017 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
This was great. Love how much Brian and Justin love each other even when one of them messes up.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow that was terrific! I am glad Justin is painting again.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2017 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 10
That was amazing! Love how Justin turned the big house into a home and helped out his tennants as well.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2017 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
That was amazing!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2017 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
That was awesome! Love how Brian is trying to be the perfect husband to Justin.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2017 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 7
That was amazing!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2017 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was terrific!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2017 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 5
That was fantastic!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2017 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
That was fantastic!
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2017 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 20
I really enjoyed this whole story. I love how you brought some of hte canon characters into the story. Jennifer and Harry being Justin's parents was very ingenious. And you kept Brian's parents in character as well- even if they were still snarky.
I lovd Kormari and the Admiral as characters and Brian and his team and loyalty- all wonderful characters
I would love to see more of this story- the girls growing up- Gus growing up- maybe one of them following in the footsteps- whatever
thanks for sharing
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2017 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
The guys are soooooo sweet together. I live how open Brian is and Justin has him wrapped around his finger.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2017 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lovely beginning to your story. I like the way you allowed the guys to meet and best of all they are equals. I can't wait to see where you take us with the remaining chapters.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2017 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 2
That was terrific!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2017 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start to this story.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2017 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 20
What a wonderful ending, but is it the end. We need to learn what the two little girls names are and how the family deals with 3 children.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2017 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 19
Well you fixed the mess Lindsay made and nicely too. Now you have Brian up on charges, where is Mysterious Marilyn when you need her?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2017 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 18
I hope that Justin does sue the pants of Lindsay and Mel and gets custody of Gus. They don't deserve him.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 17
Emmett and Mike! It's nice that Emmett has someone. Brian a godfather and soon to be a father if they have their wish.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 16
Such a sad chapter.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 15
While it's wonderful that Jennifer is so loving of Brian and Justin, I hope her and Harry make a go of it. It's amazing what problems keeping things to yourself can cause. Now figuring out who the baby mama is going to be will be difficult. You make a good case for both of them.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 14
This is getting interesting what with the Jennifer and Harry connection. Baja is going to be very interesting. I just hope that Debbie doesn't do something to mess it up.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 13
Deb's on my shit list. She's not understanding at all. I love Vic and Emmett and Ben is growing on me. So Jennifer is Justin's real mother? And a proficy made by Mysterious Marilyn comes true.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2017 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 12
Michael and Deb appear to be more trouble than they are worth. Love how Emmett keeps everything on keel and Mysterious Marilyn is a stabilizing influence.
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2017 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 20
I enjoyed reading this story, glade it all wrked out for the boys. did you ever write a squeal to the story I would love tho read it.
Reviewer: Feet526@Comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2017 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, thank you for a wonderful chapter; I feel every emotion! Be still my heart.
I could see them in the water...feel it, as well as B. running on the beach! Wanted to see the sweat, but it didn't work!!! I can dream, can't I ??? oxoxo
And of course, thanks so much your work wonderful thoughts.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2017 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
This chapter was fun to read and you bring the old characters into the story. Deb and Michael I'm not sure about. Especially if Michael starts pining for Brian. Emmett will be a godsent and so will Mysterious Marilyn. Which begs to ask, doesn't Marilyn have any thing to say when Brian is declared missing?
Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2017 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow, it was one hellava roller coaster ride. Was I bad flailing and dancing around when the lesbians died? I thought Lindsay, for once, would be the best friend that Brian needed. Then, bam! She got crazy and tried to break BJ, I really wanted to throttle her for manipulating Brian. Oh well, at least Gus wouldn't grow up being the bait, he'd grow up in a home where he would be loved and cherished.
I have read most of Moonshadow's fics here and I have to admit this was one of her bests. I just wished she has written the sequel. Nevertheless, I loved it!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2017 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 9
And so they got their Avalon. Hopefully Brian does get rescued and come home to Justin.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2017 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
Be still my beating heart. Is Brian alive? This back and forth is confusing me.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2017 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 7
Skin diving, sky diving. Justin's going to do it all. But at least his paintings are getting the attention they deserve.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2017 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
Why am I not surprised that Justin decided to learn diving.
Reviewer: krussell87 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2017 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 20
Yes please!!! I'm obsessed!!
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 20
Omg....its over ....or not...hmmm....i love it...is there is a sequel too....omg...omg.....i am sure that will be awesome too..just like this one....i enjoyed ur story very much...thanks a lot.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ohhh god.......they are dead...soo sad....finaly brian is home....this is coming to end...soo bad...i love this story very much.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 18
Omg.....how could she do that ????? Bitch...i hate her....what will say to gus when he grows up that he was stolen ....gosh.....soo sad and great work by ur team...thank u.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 17
So sweet of them to name their baby name brian........very emotional chapter.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 16
Mindblowing story......👍👍👍👍
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 20
This is right up there with my most favorite Brian and Justin stories ever. I loved it and have spent the entire weekend reading it, just couldn't/wouldn't put it down - housework be damned! I truly would love to see this story continue, I'm not nearly ready to say goodbye to this one :-)
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 15
Amazing going...😍😍😍
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2017 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 14
Wow...what a twist in story......i love it.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2017 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 13
Omg...jannifer taylor ...justins mom is alive...and the kid in painting is justin...wow...its getting interesting.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2017 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 12
Awesome...they are soo good together.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2017 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 10
Awesome......the gang is coming in the fic..........superb chapter....d84;d84;d84;d84;
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2017 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapeter...👍👍😍😍
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2017 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 8
So emotional....... i love this fic.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 7
They are so good together .😁😍😍😍
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
Brian and justin are meant for each other.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 5
Justin is soo adorable...presusive little twat...soo cute.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 5
I see that even with Brian grounding him they still ended up with the penthouse.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
Fabulous...😍😍😍😍
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
Marvelous...chris is after brain in it and in show he was after justin...both time he is an prick..i hate him and brian's parents.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
Sooo romantic...lovely.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2017 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
Omg....such an amzing start...i love the plot very much....superb...thank u for sharing...😊a86;
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2017 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
Those books are not going to be the only thing Brian leaves I hope.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2017 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
He made it to graduation. And Joan and Jack show up? Someone at the academy has it in for Brian.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2017 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 2
The trouble is when people interfer. But Brian and Justin can't help but love one another.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2017 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
This story is sad yet compelling. It also fits in with the climant of our country at the moment.
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2017 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
This story was suggested by a member of our Whispers Facebook group to be the March 2017 Featured Story, and we agreed. Several excellent stories were suggested and they are being kept for future months' consideration. Thank you for your assistance selecting excellent reads for our audience.
~bob
Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2016 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 20
Maravillosa historia!!!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2014 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 20
I love, Love, love this story!!!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2014 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 13
Some of these journal entry's just break my heart, the so heart felt...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2014 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow, that was an painful and emotional chapter... Great story, I'm really enjoying it...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2014 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
Swoons...
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2014 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm loving this so far, and I usually don't read military fics... But you know what they say about a man in a uniform...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2013 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 20
YES TBC!!!
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2013 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wonderful Story!!!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
I read this story sometime ago and am sorry it has taken me so lomg to write a review. This was an amazing story and I am happy to have enjoyed it. I was hesitant at first but it grew on me.
Thanks for the story!
Author's Response: thank you so much
Reviewer: ErisFae (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 20
This is, without a doubt, the best story I've ever read on this site (and I've read many). Thank you, thank you, for sharing it! I'm terrible about leaving reviews (always mean to, but forget by the time I finish the story), but this one was so exceptional, I really had to write something. Honestly, just when I was about ready to give up and move on, this drew me back into the fandom. Much love! ^.^
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review
Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2011 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 20
wonderful story
Reviewer: Annie (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
I've been a long time fan of your work. I didn't realize you had a new long story up until the other day. I love the universe you created as much as it pained me to read parts of it. Congrats on stealing my hear away, hoping for a good ending once again. ~Annie
Author's Response: Annie this is an old story that Acacia and I wrote - but I'd forgotten to put it up - so glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 20
This story was fantastic!! I loved it! I hope you do a sequel!!!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it - not so sure there will be a sequel , but you never know.
Reviewer: LadyHarold (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 20
Oh my god. I needed 1 Week to read it. I just love storys about the Navy. I don´t know why but I do. That´s why I love GI Jane or Navy CIS so much. I guess it´s because of all the hunk seamen or tough SEALs and Marines. They´re so strong and good looking and well muscled. *lol* I hope you´re writing a sequel. I would love to see if Brian is an Admiral by now *lol*
Author's Response: LOL - must admit I have a soft spot for the Navy and Marines.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 11
LMFAO!!!! I don't know what was funnier, Brian feeding Michael to the sharks or Emmett yelling that Ethan touched him!
Reviewer: Riggershh6 (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2008 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Just wanted you to know that this is my ABSOLUTE favorite, all time, B/J fic. I have been a fanof this "ship" since the series started and this is the story, that no matter where I am in my reading, is always worth reading again. Thank you for all of your years of hard work in this fandom. I am sorry that I have not told you sooner that you are positivly wonderful. Please keep writing, I will keep reading!
Author's Response: thank you for your kind words elsarose
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh, that Justin! What is Brian gonna do with him! I love Brian and Justin in this story!!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2008 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is the BEST story I have ever read. I hope you write the sequel! Side note... I kind of felt like Justin became a little less independent throughout. He was strong, but much more needy...perhaps it was because his circumstances changed, but he seemed a lot different than he was at the beginning. I think I'd like a story where both B and J were in the military. Think you could write that one?
Author's Response: thanks for the review and the suggestions - I'll think about them both in the military - you never know.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
What an amazing start! Love this, they are so hooked on each other. Brian in a Navy uniform....YOWZERS!!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2008 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 20
BEAUTIFUL I LOVE THE ENDING IT WAS PERFECT PLZ DO THE SEQUEL SOON
Reviewer: SS (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2008 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'M SO HAPPY SOMEONE PUT THIS STORY BACK UP!!! THIS IS MY ALL-TIME FAVORITE STORY!!!
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Iam really glad that you posted here!!!! yeyeyeyeye It's a great story and the readers will surely love this. Thanks
Reviewer: Cookie69 (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2008 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
I´m so happy to see that you took the time to re-post this wonderful story. It surely is one of my all time favourites. Thanks, Cookie
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