Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Road Warrior
Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 09:20 AM · On: Standalone

OMFG, ROFLMM-FAO!! PURE COMEDIC AWESOMENESS! I laughed so hard I cried! THANX!

{Justin moved to stand next to Brian, who looked down at him with one raised eyebrow. Justin shrugged his shoulders and pointed to his hair."So you didn't like his hair cut?" Brian asked. Justin nodded.} In Justin's defense, it was a stupid haircut...

{Justin waved and smiled back. Brian turned around and growled. "Well, aren't you the little chatterbox?"} LMAO - Jealous Brian

{"So," Ted said, "Mikey and this Mel are going to repopulate the planet. The new Adam and Eve, if you will." "I wonder what implications that'll have in the years to come," Ben said. Justin looked out at the landscape and shuddered.} I could see where this was going - still fucking hilarious, though.

{All of a sudden, two horses arrived on the scene. When the astronauts looked up, they were shocked to see two apes, dressed in full military uniforms.} Bwahahahaha!! Damn dirty apes!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 12:46 PM · On: Standalone

I read this at work on my lunch break this afternoon. And when reading the ending, I was like cool a nod to Planet of the Apes. Then I ran to clock back in to work. About 20 minutes later while working on something for my boss, I started laughing almost uncontrollably. The ending ran through my mind again and I said wait, there was something about Michael being a monkey. Then it clicked! I was at my desk silently cracking the hell up!! Michael and Melanie started a lineage of half ape/half humans! LMFAO!!!

I had to turn my chair around so no one would see me laughing. 



Author's Response:

Some of my work is like that.  You'll read it and then about half an hour later it'll hit you and then you can't stop the giggles.  LOL!

Thank you Kat!  :) 

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