Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2019 06:08 AM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

good one

Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 41: He's A Monster! (I Want My Brian Kinney Back!)

Another chapter that I just scrolled through without reading, please stop the maddness!



Author's Response:

You sound like the mad one... move on... will you.

Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 39: There In Spirit

Skip this entire chapter.



Author's Response:

Just skip the entire story if you're that frustrated with it.  Bye.

Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 37: Oreos, Chips Ahoy, Gummy Bears...White Bread and Mayo!

Frustrated as hell with this dream world crap!



Author's Response:

What's your problem?  This story was written five years ago.  What do you want me to do... rewrite for you...!  Get real... will you, and it's just a story... either you enjoy it or you don't.

Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 36: What's In A Dream (Dream On)

Real world, please..



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2012 01:03 AM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

Yay! Finally a REAL happy ending! Thanks for writing this series. TAG

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Oh by the way my response for your comment just before this one was lost.  There seems to be a problem with my responding to comments when I uses Internet explorer browser vs. Firefox.  Sometimes the comments don't show up but occassionally I forget to use Firefox.

 

My answer was:  Yeah, back then I was so full of angst.  I think I might have calmed down a bit.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 33: A Hole In His Heart

Boy, these boys just can't seem to get a break, can they! TAG

Author's Response:

Reviewer: sxynbtful (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

i was wondering did you do a continuation to this story with another title



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting.  And, please forgive me for taking so long to respond but I didn't see your comment until October.  However, to answer your question: this is the last one in the series.  There's Cherished (No. 1), Cherist the Moment (No. 2) and this one Cherished III (No. 3).

Thanks again, Delores; and again I apologize for not seeing your response right away.

 

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 44: Justin Wakes Up

"Hmmm," Justin suddenly felt terribly confused"

Me too...



Author's Response:

don't worry; it'll make sense after awhile.  Hav Fun!  And thanks again.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 25: Where Did Brian Go?

I love your reporter... ha, ha, ha

Later ~ Kathleen



Author's Response:

Yah, that's funny!  Believe it or not this things like that just come at me at the spur and I use it for a little comic flair.  I'm glad U liked it.

Thanks again 4 commenting.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 22: A Soft Ear

I'm loving this Brian ~ Ben friendship... Sweet!

Poor Justin... don't blow it...

Later Baby ~ Kathlen



Author's Response:

Thank U.  I'm have a sore spot 4 Brian and Ben.  In fact, I won't one story named Penetrate (I don't know if you've read it or not) where they're more than just friends.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 9: No Fury Like Gay Men Scorned (Sweet, Sweet Revenge)

He's a very Spunky Boy!!!

One you can't take home to mother...

Super Freak!!! He's Super Spunky!!! ha, ha, ha

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

 



Author's Response:

Yah, but we gotta consider who brought the FREAK out in him!  Ha-ha. 

Thanks so much 4 taking the time to comment, Kathleen... I'm lovin' it.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 7: Sunday Breakfast At The Diner

He's doing so good being honest with himself and expressing his feeling towards Justin. So this is the test can he continue to allow himself to grow and experience what it feels like to be truly loved; or will he let the gangs preconceived ideas of what he should be influence how he really feels...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen



Author's Response:

So, unlike Brian, isn't it?  LOL

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

What a wonderful, complex story.  Loved how you wove the 2 dreams into 2 realities.  Very imaginative and refreshing in its originality.  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I loved that you like it and appreciate so much that you took the time to express it. 

As you can see, I don't write hear any more but I hope to return someday and finish all that I started here.  RL is just a little congested right now.

Thanks again.   See U later.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 06:19 AM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

well crikey!...well done on this latest edition...enjoyed it lots!

bah humbug and merry xams to ya!

later x



Author's Response:


And Xmas 2 U 2, where HAVE U BEEN!  SO HAPPY 2 HERE FROM U, MISSED u SOMETHING TERRIBLE.  HAV U BEEN AT LIVEJOURNAL ALL THIS TIME.  I STILL CAN'T FIND CRAP AT THE SITE LOL!

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:53 AM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

Woo hoo!! What a journey for those two, but they learned to love and chersh each other in the end. Great story, thanks for sharing it with us!

Author's Response: And thank U for sharing it w/me and all the other stories you have.  Hav a great holiday, I hope 2008 was a good year for you and I wish U an even better year in 2009.  You've definitely made 2008 a good year for me at this site.  Thank U so much, Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 47: Magically In Two Places At Once

Yea, Zen Ben! So glad he was able to help Justin clear things up.

Author's Response: Yah, U know how I just LUVVVVV my Zen Ben!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 46: B. K. Jr.'s Promiscuous Adventure

What a mess! Brian needs to talk to Justin about that. That kid is so confused.

Author's Response:

Welcome back, I hope your trip was a good one. 

Confusion LOL.... Brian could at least relate to Justin if they ever get to the core of the problem.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2008 02:34 AM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

Great ending! Have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Author's Response: Thank U, so much, Lynn, I'm so glad U enjoy.  And happy holidays and a Great New Year!

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 05:26 PM · On: Final Chapter: It Ain't Necessarily Complicated!

Thank you for this beatiful story, full of all kind of thing, I love it the 3 part, and enjoy to much reading it.

 kisses and great job.



Author's Response:

Kayitt, you are so sweet.  Thank you so much for staying until the very end. 

And kisses to you too.  Thank you so much.  So glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2008 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 46: B. K. Jr.'s Promiscuous Adventure

Poor Brian. Justin is being an ass to Brian. And the way he treated and talked to Brian like that! He could of at least told Brian that he was going to trick at the club and instead of just being an insensitive ass and flirting with men right in front of Brian! *shakes head* Looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Poor Justin is confused.  He still  thinks that Brian is the selfish-Brian. and he thinks that Brian was there to do the same thing that night.  He might even think Brian was with people while he was in the backroom.  He's been in the backroom so long he has no idea when Brian arrived at the club.  He's not even sure when Brian left the club as far as he's concerned Brian was home when he got there because he made the curfew, and had taken his shower before Justin got there.  Justin still thinks his dream was reality.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2008 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 45: What Is It Like???

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, Lynn... but I think in a way that chapter was so sad (I almost cried writing it).  Hav Fun!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 44: Justin Wakes Up

Girl! Justin's mind is all jumbled up poor thing! I knew you might throw that curve!

Flying to my hometown tonight if the weather doesn't delay my flight. So if you don't see me on here for awhile that's why. I'll have to come on here with my sister's computer in a few days. 



Author's Response: Enjoy your flight hav fun.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 43: Going With The Flow

LOL!!! So close, but Deb still managed to interrupt them without even being in the house.

Glad those two worked things out. Wonder if Justin will remember that talk when he wakes up. 



Author's Response: Worked it out???? Will Justin remember??? Hmmm, here's the next chapter... let's see how all that works out (shall we).

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2008 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 43: Going With The Flow

I am glad Brian and Justin worked things out. Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Worked things out, hmmm... is it a compromise they BOTH can live by????  LOL, thx, Lynn... enjvy, hav fun!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 42: Two Steps At A Time

Now has dream Brian come to his senses? :) I hate that he hurt Justin so much! But Debbie is right and he knows it. And yea, when Justin wakes up he will cherish the real Brian, his Brian all the more.

Author's Response: :... has dream Brian come to his senses?'  Will someone tell me where the BOMB went off LOL!  Here's the next chapter, dear.!  Hav fun!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 41: He's A Monster! (I Want My Brian Kinney Back!)

Wow, Justin got to see the old Brian Kinney up close and personal! Well in his dream of course.

Author's Response: Can you imagine how much he'd appreciate/cherish his "Brian" when he wakes up.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2008 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 40: Brian's Baby Boy

Aw. Brian being with his son Gus is so adorable. :D Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Lynn, I'm glad it touched u.  Hav Fun.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 40: Brian's Baby Boy

That a boy Justin, show Brian who's boss! Nice to see Brian coming around. I mean how can he not when he's around Sonny Boy and Sunshine.

Author's Response:

How can he not when he's around the both of them?  Girl, U put that perfectly LOL!  Hav Fun!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 05:00 AM · On: Author's Note

Cool!! Thanks!

Author's Response: You're welcome.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 39: There In Spirit

AWW! Brian and Gus had a picnic on the floor celebrating Justin's birthday! That is so sweet! And Justin heard him, love it!

Author's Response: Awwww! thx U, and again 4 give the typos (system problems), I know it made awkward reading the two chapters (38 and 39) difficult  system problems... I fixed them tho.  Thx enjoy!/.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 35: You're Awake!

Ok, I get it now! Very clever having a reality half and Justin's dream as part of the story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the 'clever' comment.  However, plz 4 forgive the many typos in 38 & 39, they site was having problems over the wkend which made updating/editing difficult but I did go back and fix all that I could find.  Thx, Kat.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2008 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 39: There In Spirit

I hope Justin wakes up soon. :( Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Lynn and plz forgive all the typos in chapters 38 and 39 (I went back and fixed them all.  Because the system was having problems over the weekend editing was extremely difficult).  Plz, continue 2 enjoy the story.  Thank U again.

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2008 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 35: You're Awake!

Hello,

Did you devide the story into two streams? You didn't put any note so I'm not sure what you're up to. I love this series very much.

Mariana



Author's Response:

You should get a full complete idea of what's happening in the next chapter (What's in a Dream.... Dream on) that is if I was clear in depicting what's going on.  If it still isn't clear let me know and I'll clarify it to you in the review.

Thank U so much, Mariana for taking the time to comment.  And I hope U stay w/me to the very end, and continue to enjoy the story?  Hav Fun.

Reviewer: Jcat (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2008 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

Did Gardner Vance kidnap Brian?  What reason would there be for him not to contact anybody at home?



Author's Response:

Hi, Jcat... GREAT 2 Hear from U!  Hmm, good question.... could be several reasons 4 that LOL.... Stay tuned!  Hav Fun!  However, I don't think Garner would be that sinister or have a reason to kidnap anyone.  Thank U agin.  Stay w/me and enjoy. 

However, if U recall Brian was concerned about how safe it would be to travel either but land or air.  But still there could be several different reason for what's going on.  Things R not always what they seem LOL.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 33: A Hole In His Heart

So glad Brian is ok, but in three weeks he couldn't contact the family?! Justin fearing the worst is heartbreaking, I'm glad Michael is there for him.

Author's Response: Hmm, how can we be so sure Brian's okay... he did fear all the chaos in the sky, LOL. (maybe/maybe not) Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 32: Always Take Notice of People Standing Inside Doorways

Oh, yra you are a little devil. I had forgotten for a moment!

Those poor boys, Brian in an earthquake (NO fun by the way) and I'm guessing Justin having a panic attack and crashing his truck. Oh the drama! Great chapter chica!



Author's Response: Hi, babe... here's the next chap... enjvy. Thank U

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2008 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 31: Slammed Dunk

It is a good thing Brian has Justin to help him out to get that job at Vanguard. :D Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Oh, Yeah, Lynn, definitely different from Cowlip's version.  LOL, continue 2 enjoy,plz.  Hav Fun. Thank U, sooo much, Lynn.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 31: Slammed Dunk

Now that was a Willie Mays style Grand Slam right there! Knocked it out the park, good for Brian. He got his groove back and then some. Now he's going to "go back home to his sweetheart"! LOVE IT!

Glad Justin stood his ground when it came to Brian and his pride. 



Author's Response: "now,he's going to go back home to his sweetheart!"  Now, Kat, dear you know me better than that.... U know what a little devil I am.  I can't make it that easy for our boyz.  LOL.  

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 30: Slammed

Not surprised Ryder blacklisted Brian. You can't do what he did and not have that follow and punish you. He seems excited about Vanguard, hopefully that will be something for him.

Author's Response: yeah, that just might backfire... might hav done Bri a favor disguise as a misjustice.

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2008 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 31: Slammed Dunk

I am addicted to this story.  I anxiously await each chapter.  I like the developed relationship between the two and I love how they play off of eachother's energy.  I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

"...ADDICTED?!!!!???"  That is FLATTERY beyond FLATTERY..... I AM EATING IT UP!  THANK U, THANK U, THANK U, THANK U.

Thank U sooo much, Jay.  I have 2 go out right now but I do expect to update some time later today.  Thanks again, and I hope you stay until the end and continued 2 enjoy the story. 

Luv 2 entertain U.  Bye 4 now. Thank U again for that heart lifting and encouraging compliment. 

 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2008 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 29: Ain't Nothing Like The Real Thing, Baby!

Well at least Brian was being honest with Justin. Great chapter. 

Author's Response: Amen 2 that... Bri's definitely no snake in the grass like Ethan.  He'll lie it down like it is, and it's up to Justin if he wants to go with the flow or not.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

You can borrow it =) I'm thinking of writing one, I sorta have an idea floating around in my head. We'll see.

Author's Response: LOL!  U a sweetheart, dear Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 29: Ain't Nothing Like The Real Thing, Baby!

Oops! Justin was rockin it so hard the latex melted! :) Aww, the question of Brian being a one man man, he says no now, but we'll see.

Author's Response:

"OOps! Justin was rockin it so hard the latex melted!"..... Girl, when R U gonna write your story,LOL!  I am almost tempted to steal that one from you like I did the "beauty and the beast" thing.   Have Fun! 

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 28: Always Keep Your Enemies Where You Can See Them

Justin is lucky something horrible didn't happen. Brian's gonna have to keep an eye on BK Jr!

Author's Response:

" lucky indeed," Amen!  Kat, baby. 

BK, Jr.  ~~~~ Ted nicknamed him just right.... at least 4 that moment anyway. 

thax Kat Dear so much 4 always taking the time 2 comment.  Hav fun/enjoy.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 27: The R-Word and They Should Close Down Liberty Ave

Kinney Pain Management yet again. I know hearing about the job on top of being jealous of the guys surrounding Justin is not a good mix!

The conversation with the two tricks was soo funny! Honey Child! LOL!



Author's Response:

OH, yeah the old KPM.  

"Honey child"... at least there one of them had to be a 'queen'.

Reviewer: deb (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 27: The R-Word and They Should Close Down Liberty Ave

your story is great. i am looking forward to the next parts. 

thanks



Author's Response:

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!  That is soooooo flattery... I can't say it enough.... THANK YOU!

And Thank YOu soooo much 4 taking the time to say it.  Thank You!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2008 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 26: Already In The Bag

Brian shouldn't have his hopes up about getting that job. Since those two jerks Brian had an interview with is not even considering him. *sighs* Great chapter.

Author's Response:

... those two jerks... Girl, U got me laffing my sides out!

Thanks, Lynn. 

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 26: Already In The Bag

See, Brian's reputation preceeds him and not in a life affirming way. He's gonna be dissapointed, but I'm sure will bounce back.

Author's Response: Our, the further down he's pushed the higher he'd BOUNCE!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 25: Where Did Brian Go?

BWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!! Oh, that little devil!! Brian going around town creating havoc to those who have hurt Justin! LOL!!

Author's Response: Now, could U just imagine Bri let all that all go.  He had to take a bat to someone, as well glue somebody to a toilet seat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 24: Unexpected Union

Well, Mikey didn't shove his foot in his mouth, good boy! Its good he's working with Justin on his comic.

Author's Response: Yeah, ocassionally there are those rare Mikey-Justin moments.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 23: Talk To Me

I'm very glad that Brian and Justin finally talked about Ethan and the bashing!!

So Mikey is coming up. The next chapter will include many moments of him sticking his foot in his mouth, no? ;)



Author's Response:

Amen 2 that, LOL!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 22: A Soft Ear

I love Ben! I'm glad Brian talked to him, I just hope he listens to Ben's advice.

Author's Response:

Bri's definitely learned many of life's less thru a dream but he's still jittery about his feelings.  It's refreshing to him to find the Ben in his dream is a lot the real-life Ben.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 21: It Hurts Really Deep

I knew all Ethan wanted was to get into Justin's pants! What an a-hole and to drug him too!

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's one snake in a grass... but his day will come LOL!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 20: Two Men and A Baby

How cute are they with little Gus! Making diaper changing such a chore!

Author's Response: "cute... making diaper changing...a chore!  Yeah, I should have titled it 'Two Idiots and a Baby' LOL... hav fun!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2008 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 25: Where Did Brian Go?

Hmmm, what was Brian up too? a job interview right ;-) Hilarious thanks

Author's Response:

'a job interveiw'.... now that is so funny got me dieing w/laughter.... Bri was out there setting that score straight 4 his boy LOL!  Brian don't go 4 anyone hurting his love ones.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2008 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 23: Talk To Me

I can't believe Ethan took advantage of Justin like that. *shakes head* I am glad that Brian was there for Justin when Justin told him what happened. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thank U sooo much, Lynn dear.  Ethan's a SELFISH jerk and he knew he was only it town for a couple more days and he figured he couldn't charm Justin away from Brian the charismic way, so the snake got him any way he could.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 19: Just Stared

Great chapter. I hope Brian can get through to Justin, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Thank U sooo much, Lynn.  You're a doll 4 taking the time to comment so often.  Hav Fun... and here's more 4 U.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 19: Just Stared

Hmm, wonder what is making him stare at Gus like that?

Author's Response:

Justin is mesmerized with Gus for several reasons 1) The baby's very presence is calming him immensely.  2) He's shocked by the baby being there... Brian never told Justin that he had a son; he wondering who is this child.  3) Because of Brian's reputation, he'd never guessed in a million years he'd fathered a child.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 18: Helping Hands???

Poor baby! He's gonna freak even more if Hobbs comes near him!

Author's Response: Yuck!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 17: You Are So Fortunate

I wish Justin would tell Brian about the bashing.

Author's Response: I'm suppose it would have to come to that eventually.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 16: What The...

Wonder who robbed Brian!

I still don't trust Ethan and I'm glad Justin ran off before things got out of control. How can Justin be confused about who he loves? I hope he doesn't let that weasel talk him into doing something stupid...i.e. leaving Brian.

I hope Daph follows her instincts when it comes to Ethan! Listen to that gut girlfriend!!



Author's Response: Sorry, I tho I answered this one.  I don't kknow how I missed it I definitely read it.   Well, enjoy and keep the comments coming.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 15: I Want You Back

Ethan is as much a snake as he's trying to say Brian is. He's trying to get into Justin pants and as he said "People often change their style when they're trying to pry into a pair of panties that isn't easy to pull down," 

Wearing that ring and trying to convince Justin he missed is such B,S! I hope Justin doesn't fall for it, keep his libido under control!!



Author's Response:

"Ethan, the snake".... Oh, don't we just LOVE 2 HATE HIM!  

Yeah, let's hope Justin's 'whack nymphomania' is especially reserved Brian... but he is a guy LOL, who only had one lover so far.  Curiousity... can be a killer of more than just the CAT.   (No pun intend, KAT, LOL).

Reviewer: minami77 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 15: I Want You Back

Why Michael is always in wrong place at the wrong time? and Why is all not going on like in the dream?  btw, I love your stories and I think this idea is very original ^_^  and of course I hope Brian will fix up everythings eheheh

see you. 



Author's Response:

Thank U sooooo much!  It's always sooooo wonderful 2 hear from someone 4 the first time.  Thanks for your comment, as well as compliments, and taking the time to comment. 

I hope you continue to like the story and stay with me until the end. 

'Why Michael is always in the wrong place at the wrong time?"  Got me laffing hard w/that one.... thx 4 that.  Hav Fun! Next update coming soon!

 

 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: What's The Big Secret?

Great chapter. I wish Justin be honest with Brian and don't cheat on Brian behind his back? Ew.. Ethan. This can't be good. Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: TU , Lynn... enjoy!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 14: What's The Big Secret?

Justin doesn't just looooove sex, he's obsessed with it.

Ethan! Ian is the secret caller! Man, I thought it was someone important! Rat chin is who he won't tell Brian he's talking to? Justin is like a dog in heat right now, hope he doesn't hook up with him!



Author's Response:

....he's obsessed with it"  ROFL.  Justin's a real trip here, LOL!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 13: Let Him Be

Has Justin never heard the phrase "too much of a good thing"? He's like a dog with a bone when it comes to sex! Brian really shouldn't let this continue, Justin wanting sex every second of the day is gonna wear thin fast...if it already hasn't. Something's not right and Brian needs to find out what's going on with Justin.

Hmm, secret phone calls, what is up with this boy? 



Author's Response:

.... like a dog w/bone... Let's just hope he's only that way w/Bri.   Thx, Kat.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2008 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 13: Let Him Be

What is up with the nympho Justin... feeling low in the self esteem dept about Brian and him? Seems to be a new problem.

I'm alittle suprised that Brian 1) let himself get sore 2) doesn't see something is wrong w/ Justin

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

'what is up with the nympho Justin..'  You got me shredding tears w/that one ROFL.  

Brian, let him get him sore... LOL!  Brian's never tho anyone would ever wear him out, so he was just going with the flow 4 a minute there, and he figures Justin's just excited about his first time, and it will wear thin after awhile.  Umm, make U wonder tho, LOL.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 12: Sixteen Years of Waiting

Well that was awkward! Good for Debbie showing up when she did.

Author's Response: Well, that was awkward!  Woman, U got me laffing my sides out LOL!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2008 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 12: Sixteen Years of Waiting

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thank You and there will be more.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

That Justin is a little Energizer Bunny isn't he!? Maybe Brian should still talk to Daphne about Justin's injuries from the bashing, just to be on the safe side.

Author's Response: Lol!  Next chapt coming Up soon.  thx U, kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 9: No Fury Like Gay Men Scorned (Sweet, Sweet Revenge)

The big F-You Brian and Justin style! LOL!!

Author's Response:

That was hitting him below the belt LOL!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Monday At Work

Kip is a weasel!! He wasn't kidding when he said he would get back at Justin and Brian. Well now Brian can start Kinnetik and kick Ryder's ass!

Author's Response: Amen, sista, amen!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 6: My Own Private Mentor

That rat bastard! I hope Justin will tell Brian about that phone call!

Author's Response: Not!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2008 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

Brian and Justin can't get enough of each other. lol. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Seems like Justin can't get enough of Brian... Brian's had enough a few times LOL.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 8: Monday At Work

Kip is such an ass. *shakes head* Brian and Justin can do fine on their own to start up Kinnetek. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Kip was quite a jerk there.  I'm sure he'd get his one of these days.

thanx, Lynn.  Hav Fun! 

 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2008 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: I Want You Around For A Long Time

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: thx, much 2 come very soon.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2008 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: I Want You Around For A Long Time

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thax again.  More coming up.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Volcano Erupts

Love that they connected on this whole new level!

Author's Response:

".... whole new level!' hUh!  Seems like after Brian's near death experience he has learned to derive as much pleasure (or even more so) from giving pleasure than being so gung-ho on receiving it.  I think this revelation has completely caught him offguard.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Volcano Erupts

Very hot, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thx U.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Best Homosexual You Can Be

I was hoping Brian had stuck around and its a good thing too. Craig is a major a-hole!

Author's Response: Hi, Kat, missed U... enjoy, darling! 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Best Homosexual You Can Be

I am so glad Brian got Justin out of the house. Brian so loves Justin. lol. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank U so much... next update later 2-day, stay w/me and enjoy.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2008 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Best Homosexual You Can Be

thanks and more update please....

Brian can't hide his true feelings to Justin.. 



Author's Response: Hi, Thess, thx 4 commenting.  Another update in a couple of days.  So glad U R still w/me.... continue 2 enjoy plz.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

I am happy to see an update of this story. *g* Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thax so much, Lynn.  Looking 4wrd 2 giving U more.  Hav Fun!

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

Hope everything will be ok with Justin, now that Brian knows some of Justin's past....

Thanks and more update.... 



Author's Response: Thx 4 joining me again and taking the time 2 comment 2 let me know you're on aboard.  Plz, Hav Fun!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

Beautiful. Brian is so Brian, sneaking around to call Daph. Glad Daph and Brian really talked.

Author's Response: Hi, alys.. thanks 4 taking the time 2 comment.  So glad U on board this one.  Hav Fun!

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

I'm sooooooo happy that you make a sequel, and look great.

I read the two first, and I love them.

 kisses



Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kayitt.  Enjoy!  I love entertaining you.  And hugs and kisses to you too.  Have Fun.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

Yea!! A sequel!! Welcome back hun!!!!

I'm glad Justin let Brian take him to the ER to take care of his arm.

Was it in Brian's dream that he was there the night Justin was bashed or was he really there? I think I remember reading it in your previous stories. Its good he spoke to Daphne about Justin. 

Back to the loft...can't wait!! BTW are you on lj?

Author's Response:

Hi, Kat, thx so much 4 commenting. 

The answer to your question:  Brian did not dream anything about the bashing incident nor was he there.  Justin never mentioned it to him during his visits in the hospital.  He did tell Brian about the hand job though but he may or may not have mentioned Chris Hobbs but he told him nothing of the bashing.   The bashing is totally new to Brian, what Daphne told him is the first he's hearing of it.  Brian's dreams were influenced by things that Justin was saying to him while comatose as well as his own consciousness.

Brian just felt so emotional about Daphne's telling of the event that he feels like he almost lived it himself.

 

Reviewer: kleene87 (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: What He Didn't Tell Him...

I 'm happy to see you back and working on one of my favorite stories. :)

Author's Response: Awwww, thank U so much ... U just made me just as happy with that compliment.  Enjoy!

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