Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Forbidden
Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2017 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

You torture me with your unfinished stories. They're all magnificent. I hope you can see your way to finishing them.

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 32: Disturbed (everyone, and in every sense of the word)

wawwwwwww ...


love it...


i,m still at the begining but i wanted to say hi...


so... hi...


love

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 32: Disturbed (everyone, and in every sense of the word)

markus better take what debbie says to heart if he wants to live a happy life.

justin's fears are going to drive brian crazy. especially if he keeps his friends around him. brian will find it hard to sleep tonight i'm sure.



Author's Response:

Indeed he'd better

Don't worry...B/J have no problem having sex with other people sleeping in the same room (or near vicinity, anyway)

:) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 31: The Temple

they're underground? justin the son of a god? brian and justin save their world? like it.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are liking the turns the story is taking :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 27: Lindsay's and Jennifer's Story, Part 3

What an interesting back story about Justin and Jennifer!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Lines Are Drawn

Excellent plot development; you should have more confidence in your work.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 25: The King and His Consort, Part 2 (and the Queen and Hers)

I needed fresh undies after this chapter. Markus is something else.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: Lines Are Drawn

Just caught up on the last 8 chapters!! This is such amazing journey for them.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 26: Lines Are Drawn

Hi!

Just found this story and find it quite fascinating! I look forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 25: The King and His Consort, Part 2 (and the Queen and Hers)

Great job! I eagerly await the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 24: The King and His Consort, Part 1

Oh my god! I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read more!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 24: The King and His Consort, Part 1

Nicely done here. Looking forward to cave smut soon complete with magic gifts to accent the acts.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 23: Going and Coming

Thanks for the update. I lile this story very much.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 23: Going and Coming

Love it! I can't wait to read the next parts. You never disappoint me.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 22: Luna

Oh my god! I love it. MORE MORE MORE. Whenever you can of course.

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 22: Luna

Bravo! Excellent chapter. This universe is evolving perfectly.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 21: Nearly Everyone's Perspective Shifts

Awesome, can't wait for the next part. Keep up the excellent work!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Awww...thanks :) :) :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: Nearly Everyone's Perspective Shifts

debbie the seer, love legends and lore type stories.

 



Author's Response: Me, too (I love legends and fantasy stories)! I'm so happy you are liking this one :D :D :D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 21: Nearly Everyone's Perspective Shifts

Glad to see an update to this story.

Author's Response: That's nice to hear. The next part will be ginormous :) and I'm actually planning to update it again (after the part later today) a few days after that. I've neglected this one too long.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: Debbie's Story of Suzanne, Shiraq, and Cahya

You have created an excellent AU. I'm very much looking forward to your update.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: Debbie and Michael

Prince and the pauper B/J style. What a delicious story.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

Great chapter and visuals. Your details are delicious.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: A New Mystery

A mystery about Ted huh? Darn i wish you wrote bigger chapters. Your chapters are like some of my paragraphs in my stories. Great story though.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: And Then They Were Four...

Fabulous! I love the direction were going in now. Me love magic!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 15: A New Member of the Party

Third wheel now.....

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Brian's Light, Part 3

EVil cliffie huh?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Brian's Light, Part 2

Moving on, not much to say for a short chapter.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Brian's Light, Part 1

Great story here; I'm so glad I'm reading it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2

Bring on the Ziti!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: Well Met, Part 1

Bout time Auntie Em showed up. A holy one; on really!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3

Great development of the story. You have a wonderful imagination.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 8: In the Dark of Night, Part 2

This is so intense!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 7: In the Dark of Night, Part 1

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Damn I'm hooked now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 7: In the Dark of Night, Part 1

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Damn I'm hooked now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 6: In the Light of Day, Part 2

hum... got to see how this turns out.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day

Sweet stuff here. I love your love writiing. You give good fluff.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability

Good angst here and gladly ended on a positive note.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss

I loved this chapter. A perfect forbidden romance blooms so well.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: A Little History

Beautiful. The verbal reach across social boundries was romantic yet simple. That was genius.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

Excellent beginning chapter. The universe is well established, and the plot moves quickly calling me to read on.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 20: Debbie's Story of Suzanne, Shiraq, and Cahya

Oh my god! MORE MORE MORE. I can't wait to read the new chapter. You never disappoint me girl! Keep up the excellent work!

XOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part! Thanks so much for the compliment!

:D :D :D

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 19: Debbie and Michael

Oh my god! I loved that chapter. I can't wait to find out what he's a king of. I look forward to the next chapter! You never disappoint me girl.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

NICE!! It was time for them to be together again!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

Even though Ted was enjoying watching he also took care of them.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch

Wow! That was flippin awesome. I can't wait to read more. Did bright light flash at the time of orgasm or what? Do Brian and Justin have any powers? I'm a little confused about this but I am totally loving this story. MORE MORE MORE. When you get a chance of course!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this part (and that you are enjoying the story overall) :) :) :)

The flash of light did occur at the moment of their orgasm. I rewrote that part. I hope it's a little clearer now. Brian and Justin do possess magic, but you won't know anything more than that until they meet Deb (next time).

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: A New Mystery

Teddy is so mysterious, I hope he can be trusted.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 17: A New Mystery

Excellent chapter! I can't wait to read more of this story. Keep up the excellent work!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 16: And Then They Were Four...

Love that Brian and Justin can mentally speak to each other in their own language. The previews sound exciting!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 15: A New Member of the Party

What a relief...for now!



Author's Response: Indeed :)

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: A New Member of the Party

Daphne will just have to get over it and the three must stay out of harms way.

Author's Response:

Yes...poor Daphne :(

But lucky us :) (I love jealous!Brian)

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 14: Brian's Light, Part 3

Uh-oh! I wonder who is out there! I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Brian's Light, Part 3

Oh thats not fair, I wonder who is watching them?

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 13: Brian's Light, Part 2

Thanks for the updates =)

Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2

his is getting better and better! I can'twait for the next chapter! Please don't be late!!!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2

The magic of this one is simplistically beautiful.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2

So the magic begins!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the update 



Author's Response:

Yes it does :D

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2

Great chapter. Obviously those two have a rough road ahead of them.

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it! Yes, a long rough road...

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: Well Met, Part 1

Emmett!! Love it! Em's flame burns bright in this one too huh!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this part! Yes, his flame burns bright here, too :)

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3

I missed this one, but not now, all caught up. Love the waterfall.

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3

I just love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3

So glad that they got away. That Justin is a clever little duck!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: In the Dark of Night, Part 2

Take your time it is worth the wait.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying so :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: In the Dark of Night, Part 1

What a sweet exchange between Brian and Justin, but thank goodness Daphne came when she did. I hope those two will be ok.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 6: In the Light of Day, Part 2

I'm glad they finally made love and I hope the guard doesn't do anything to Justin. Maybe he'll actually have a heart and understand how Brian feels about Justin...seeing as though he has feelings for Brian's mother.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 6: In the Light of Day, Part 2

It was great for them to have such a wonderful first time together.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day

I am so happy for them.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2008 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day

Really glad for your update!!!

I just read it today, coz of RL issues in my life!!!

What will happen when Justin learned that Brian is from upper class???

Thanks and more to come... 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day

Glad they worked that out, they are too cute!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day

I was so excited to see an update, Justin and Brian are so adorable I luv it. I do hope Brian can help Justin find a safe place to live (like Brians bedroom) lol

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day

Sweet. Like how Brian recovered from the sugar question, not embarrassing Justin, and figuring out Justin's probable circumstances. When do Justin's circumstances really occur to Brian, ie: how it will affect their relationship in society. How will Brian's  parents react... will they research Justin and figure out his genealogy?

Can't wait to read more. Great story. Great chapter.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability

I only started this today and am really enjoying it. I love the context, so creative, and new. I can't wait to see how you develop their relationship, well done!

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2008 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability

Im really likeing this story I cant wait to see how it all plays out!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability

I loved the beautiful banner too

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability

love this chapter, so sweet of Brian and Justin and educational too...

learned new words, thanks

more please 

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability

Brian really queened out lol. I loved this chapter, very hot and the sweetness between them is great

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability

Yea, crisis handled! Guess this Brian does jealousy.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss

they are just so cute together its wonderful. Brian not knowing anything is so adorable

Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss

This is so sweet!!! And so... new. Brian didn't now how to kiss? That's definitelt new, lol!
Great chapter honey ^_^

 Helen

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss

thanks for the update and more please

what an adventure for Brian.... 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss

Love this smart, strong, savvy and street wise Justin. So sad to see how long he has been on his own.

Well he and Brian are cute, trying to communicate with one another. And they hit it off pretty well I would say. Attraction was there from jump.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: A Little History

ooh good. off on the right foot. justin didn't run.

Author's Response:

How could he (in any universe)?

:D :D :D 

Reviewer: Allie (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

I am absolutely in love with this story! Can't wait for more...

Author's Response: That's so great to hear! Hope you enjoy the newest part :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

So I take it Brian will be participating in the rabble rumble with Justin soon? =)

Great start! Love this!



Author's Response:

Indeed, I think he will :D

I'm so glad you are liking this one. I know it's a little weird :)

Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

Yep, I want to see more of it!!!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you are enjoying this fic so far :)

Reviewer: QaITFan (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

Very intriguing start. I cant wait for the next to follow!

Ciao

T.



Author's Response: I'm so happy you are liking the story so far :)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

I think Brian will be tasting a blonde rabble very soon lol

Author's Response: Indeed, I think he will :D

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night

woman, where do you come up with these great stories?

Author's Response: Don't ask me :) :) :)

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