Reviews For The Forbidden
Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2017 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 32: Disturbed (everyone, and in every sense of the word)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 32: Disturbed (everyone, and in every sense of the word)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 31: The Temple
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 27: Lindsay's and Jennifer's Story, Part 3
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Lines Are Drawn
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 25: The King and His Consort, Part 2 (and the Queen and Hers)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: Lines Are Drawn
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 26: Lines Are Drawn
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 25: The King and His Consort, Part 2 (and the Queen and Hers)
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 24: The King and His Consort, Part 1
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 24: The King and His Consort, Part 1
Nicely done here. Looking forward to cave smut soon complete with magic gifts to accent the acts.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 23: Going and Coming
Thanks for the update. I lile this story very much.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 23: Going and Coming
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 22: Luna
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 22: Luna
Bravo! Excellent chapter. This universe is evolving perfectly.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 21: Nearly Everyone's Perspective Shifts
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: Nearly Everyone's Perspective Shifts
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 21: Nearly Everyone's Perspective Shifts
Glad to see an update to this story.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: Debbie's Story of Suzanne, Shiraq, and Cahya
You have created an excellent AU. I'm very much looking forward to your update.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: Debbie and Michael
Prince and the pauper B/J style. What a delicious story.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch
Great chapter and visuals. Your details are delicious.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: A New Mystery
A mystery about Ted huh? Darn i wish you wrote bigger chapters. Your chapters are like some of my paragraphs in my stories. Great story though.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: And Then They Were Four...
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 15: A New Member of the Party
Third wheel now.....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Brian's Light, Part 3
EVil cliffie huh?
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Brian's Light, Part 2
Moving on, not much to say for a short chapter.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Brian's Light, Part 1
Great story here; I'm so glad I'm reading it.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2
Bring on the Ziti!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: Well Met, Part 1
Bout time Auntie Em showed up. A holy one; on really!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3
Great development of the story. You have a wonderful imagination.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 8: In the Dark of Night, Part 2
This is so intense!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 7: In the Dark of Night, Part 1
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 7: In the Dark of Night, Part 1
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 6: In the Light of Day, Part 2
hum... got to see how this turns out.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day
Sweet stuff here. I love your love writiing. You give good fluff.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability
Good angst here and gladly ended on a positive note.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss
I loved this chapter. A perfect forbidden romance blooms so well.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: A Little History
Beautiful. The verbal reach across social boundries was romantic yet simple. That was genius.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
Excellent beginning chapter. The universe is well established, and the plot moves quickly calling me to read on.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 20: Debbie's Story of Suzanne, Shiraq, and Cahya
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 19: Debbie and Michael
Oh my god! I loved that chapter. I can't wait to find out what he's a king of. I look forward to the next chapter! You never disappoint me girl.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch
NICE!! It was time for them to be together again!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch
Even though Ted was enjoying watching he also took care of them.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 18: First Watch
Wow! That was flippin awesome. I can't wait to read more. Did bright light flash at the time of orgasm or what? Do Brian and Justin have any powers? I'm a little confused about this but I am totally loving this story. MORE MORE MORE. When you get a chance of course!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: A New Mystery
Teddy is so mysterious, I hope he can be trusted.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 17: A New Mystery
Excellent chapter! I can't wait to read more of this story. Keep up the excellent work!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 16: And Then They Were Four...
Love that Brian and Justin can mentally speak to each other in their own language. The previews sound exciting!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 15: A New Member of the Party
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: A New Member of the Party
Daphne will just have to get over it and the three must stay out of harms way.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 14: Brian's Light, Part 3
Uh-oh! I wonder who is out there! I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Brian's Light, Part 3
Oh thats not fair, I wonder who is watching them?
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 13: Brian's Light, Part 2
Thanks for the updates =)
Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2
his is getting better and better! I can'twait for the next chapter! Please don't be late!!!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2
The magic of this one is simplistically beautiful.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 11: Well Met, Part 2
Great chapter. Obviously those two have a rough road ahead of them.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: Well Met, Part 1
Emmett!! Love it! Em's flame burns bright in this one too huh!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3
I missed this one, but not now, all caught up. Love the waterfall.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3
I just love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: In the Dark of Night, Part 3
So glad that they got away. That Justin is a clever little duck!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: In the Dark of Night, Part 2
Take your time it is worth the wait.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: In the Dark of Night, Part 1
What a sweet exchange between Brian and Justin, but thank goodness Daphne came when she did. I hope those two will be ok.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 6: In the Light of Day, Part 2
I'm glad they finally made love and I hope the guard doesn't do anything to Justin. Maybe he'll actually have a heart and understand how Brian feels about Justin...seeing as though he has feelings for Brian's mother.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 6: In the Light of Day, Part 2
It was great for them to have such a wonderful first time together.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day
I am so happy for them.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2008 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day
Glad they worked that out, they are too cute!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day
I was so excited to see an update, Justin and Brian are so adorable I luv it. I do hope Brian can help Justin find a safe place to live (like Brians bedroom) lol
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Light of Day
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability
I only started this today and am really enjoying it. I love the context, so creative, and new. I can't wait to see how you develop their relationship, well done!
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2008 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability
Im really likeing this story I cant wait to see how it all plays out!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability
I loved the beautiful banner too
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability
Brian really queened out lol. I loved this chapter, very hot and the sweetness between them is great
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vulnerability
Yea, crisis handled! Guess this Brian does jealousy.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss
they are just so cute together its wonderful. Brian not knowing anything is so adorable
Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: First Kiss
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: A Little History
ooh good. off on the right foot. justin didn't run.
Reviewer: Allie (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
I am absolutely in love with this story! Can't wait for more...
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
Yep, I want to see more of it!!!
Reviewer: QaITFan (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
I think Brian will be tasting a blonde rabble very soon lol
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Warm Summer Night
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