Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 20

What a great ending!! It made me do the happy dance..so romantic! I wish you would write a sequel, but if you don't I'll treasure this story.

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2008 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

It would be helpful for you to have a beta. Problems with tense and dialogue make the story difficult to read.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2008 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 19

great and sweet story :-)) rose

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

leave it to good old joan to help get some memories back.
now that the guys know about justin they can help brian find him. yay

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2008 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 17

I can't take it..Brian & Justin need to be together!!!! Also I again love this story and can't believe this is your first one.

Author's Response: thanks alot

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

will they meet again at the diner? i sure as hell hope that wherever it will be, it will be soon.

Author's Response:
they might get back together in 2 more chapters.

Author's Response:
they might get back together in 2 more chapters.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2008 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 15

This is so sad! Please bring some happiness to both Brian and Justin.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2008 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 15

Sad chapter...
Hope Justin will again see Brian!!! Thanks and more please

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 15

poor justin, living with unwarrented guilt.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 14

what a bitch. her son doesn't remember her and that's hoe she treats him?
WTF justin? molly tells him she's going to have a baby and he ignores it? and molly's just as bad. he tells her he's in love and she complains about being his only family. doesn't she want him to be happy?
however will they get back together?

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2008 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 13

Claire bing nice and picking up Brian...what is going on!! I think once he meets therest of the "family" Brian will run back to Justin...lol...Please update!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 13

will justin ever see his lover again? will brian run back to him once he gets enough of michael's whining? lol

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 12

where's he going to go? what did justin get so upset about? did he think he could take the place of everything in brian's life?

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 11

I love this story!!!

Author's Response: thank you very much

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2008 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 11

intriguing???! what is the past of Brian and hope he'll not forget Justin...
Thanks and more please

Reviewer: LJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

OMG...haha, dirty, i see....lol, i liked it, you know who this is...
-LJ from QCC
p.s. props to you babe

Author's Response: love ya thanks

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 10

damn! i'm glad brian is enjoying this new life of his, but isn't anyone back home missing him?

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 9

they finally got together. yay.

Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 8

I really like the way you are writing this! Great job; keep going honey ^_^
Helen

Author's Response: thanks very much

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 8

how sad, "they just said accidents happen."
funny how he got brian into the water.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

Is Brian going to help Justin open the restaurant???? Ok, i'll just wait *smile*)
Thanks and more please

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

so a little bit of the old brian is coming back to him.
"......put on a pair of black sweat pants and a black tank top. He stared at himself in the mirror and was playing around with his hair. Brian liked what he finally saw and walked out of the bedroom and into the kitchen."
did he run from the kiss or from justin trying to top? does brian even remember he's gay?

Author's Response: have to wait for the end

Reviewer: kleene87 (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2008 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

You are so evil! How can you just stop here? I'm waiting impatiently for more. :)

Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2008 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love the way they interact with each other ^^ great job

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

good chapter.
brian, an accountant? haha

Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2008 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 5

looking forward for more ;)

Author's Response: thank you very much im working on writing the 6th chapter just been really busy lately

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 5

now once he get settles the fun can begin.

Author's Response: got to wait a little more but thank you for your comments

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2008 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

I don't understand - the chapters here don't seem to follow the chapters posted on BJFic on LJ.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

i don't know if it's a good idea or not. will have to see what happens. is this story posted somewhere else besides here? i feel like i'm the only one reading it.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 3

good update.
maybe justin telling him about the liberty diner will spark a memory.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2008 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

I've seen the movie also, although some the acting was a bit amatuerish it was a good premise. I also like your story and I hope that you update soon! I

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

sweet.

Reviewer: eleni (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2008 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

I've seen the movie and I liked it a lot. I didn't really like the guy that played the forest ranger. I'd love to see more of your story if you keep on posting it. Justin is definitely hotter than the actor!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

why would brian want to die? this can be very interesting. i'd like to read more.

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