Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 14: Turning Point

I LOVE this story. Keep writing more!

Author's Response: ThanK U soo much , Sarah.... and I will keep writing.  Stay w/me and hav Fun!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2008 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 14: Turning Point

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thank U so much.  More 2 come.  Continue 2 hav fun!

Reviewer: gerri (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2008 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Tutoring Session Ends

What's fuunny is that Brian went, lol. I would have stayed.

Author's Response: "What's funnny is that Brian went..."  That's because he has too much pride to sleep on the floor in Justin's room or admit how much he wants him.  Both men have too much PRIDE for their own good and always trying to make out like they are having sex for some other reason than the real reason!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2008 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Tutoring Session Ends

When will Brian and Justin stop being stubborn and admit they want each other? Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

"When will Brian and Justin stop being stubborn and admit..."  Doesn't it make you blood boil, LOL!  Hav Fun! Thx... Lynn.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Tutoring Session Ends

both ted and emmett are merciless. going on and on about brian and ben.

michael really should learn not to let his feelings out of his mouth. how could he possibly hurt ted like that.

i don't understand why justin banned brian from his bed. when a whore is paid for the night, they usually wind up sleeping with the trick. what's up justin's sleeve now?



Author's Response:

Ted/Em going on and on about Brian and Ben... I guess for Ted at least it was payback; Em was just being plain ole nosy.

Poor Michael he's going thru all sort of emotional changes... jealous of Justin and then having to learn from him about Brian and Ben's one nighter.  

Brian making the err of telling Justin that the role playing was over got him kicked out of his bed.  Justin is as stubborn as Brian so he's trying not to seems like he likes him (however, he's totally unaware of what he confessed to Brian in the shower.)

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2008 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Tutoring Session Ends

thanks for the update.Really have fun reading this beautiful story of yours.

Michael is really an asshole!!!  



Author's Response: 'beautiful story of yours'  Awwww, that's so sweet!  TU. 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Tutoring Session Ends

Well Justin sure does have Brian's number! He won't any of his crap, period.

Michael is jerk saying something so horrible to Teddy! Teddy who now has visions of Emmett dancing in his head!



Author's Response: LOL, Kat.  Hav Fun.  Justin is a fiety little-one.  He's hardly that naive seventeen year old in the QAF version.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2008 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 12: Rage (Not The Superhero but...)

Hot chapter.....

Love how Justin pissed teased Michael....

Brian and Justin both falling in love with each other.

Thanks and more please.. 



Author's Response: And Thank U, Patheticgal, and there will be more.  Stay w/me  and hav Fun.  Luv entertaining U.  Poor Mikey, Justin's such a little devil.  

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

I just found this today and you had me absolutley laughing my ass off. I was reading stuff out to a friend that wont read WIP. She was like that's as funny as you have to tell when it's done. I still liked it alot when it got serious in the middle and the small funnny moments cracked me up, very good work.

Author's Response: Thank U so much, Gerri, that is so flattering.  I'm so glad 2 learn that U like the story so much and thanks again 4 taking the time to comment.  I'm extra glad it made U laff so hard.  And double thanks 4 the compliment saying it a 'very good work', that's so encouraging.  I tend to update regularly.  Luv entertaining U and above all HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Rage (Not The Superhero but...)

I'm surprised Michael's head didn't explode! But did they give him a show or what!

So now Justin's said those three BIG words. And Brian actually started making love to him. Hmm, wonder how they'll feel in the morning...besides to sore to move.



Author's Response: 'The Morning?  The night's not over yet, LOL!"   Have fun.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Rage (Not The Superhero but...)

you would think they be a bit sore after that romp in bed huh.

what better way to give it to michael than to take what he always wanted.



Author's Response:

They're definitely likely be in the morning.  LOL.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 11: Whore Lesson 101

Bad, bad Justin!!!!

Like the openness of Brian and Justin - and the role playing!!!

Thanks and more to come!! 



Author's Response: Hi, patheticgal, so glad U R still w/me and enjoying the story.  Should update again B4 the wk is out.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 11: Whore Lesson 101

Oh, what is Justin up to!! Loved his teaching lessons to Brian.

Author's Response: Jusitn might teach a few people a lesson or two but he might not have taught Brian all the lesson he thinks he has LOL!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 11: Whore Lesson 101

I am looking forward to what Justin's plan is? Great chapter.

Author's Response: LOL!  It won't be long now!  Hav Fun Hang N there w/me.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Whore Lesson 101

devious is our littl justin. liked how he laid it all out for brian.

let the games begin.



Author's Response: Our boy Justin is not a one with a sad story.  He definitely pretty sure of himself (Brian is about the only thing that confuses him a little) but overall he can hold his own and have plenty of insight.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

love this justin.

Author's Response: Thank U so much, sjmpet... he does a lot of SPIRIT!

Reviewer: Trenice (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2008 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

You sure the only reason is to spite Michael? I'm really glad you updated to many writers are neglecting their stories. Therefore they are neglecting their fans. *hint hint wink wink*

Author's Response: 'You sure the only reason is to spite Michael?'  Like U Trence I am in TOTAL DOUBT... I think the only one Justin's fooling is himself LOL.... we (all) can C right thru him!   Have fun.

Reviewer: sunny (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2008 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

So happy for the new chapter.  I am looking forward to the next one.  Love the story.

Author's Response: Hi, Sunny thx 4 taking the time 2 comment and 4 hanging in there w/me.  Hav Fun... will update again very soon.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2008 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

Glad to see an update of this. lol. I am looking forward to what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Hi, Lynn dear... have Fun.  Should B updating again B4 the week is over.

Reviewer: kleene87 (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2008 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

I' m soooo happy, that there is a update to this story. It' s a really great chapter!

 



Author's Response: Thx U so much Kleene87 4 taking the time 2 comment.  So glad U are enjoying yourself.  Going away 4 the wk-N... will update next wk.  Bye for now and stay/w me and continue 2 hav fun!

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

you soooo have to  update today ;)
It's an amazing chapter and I can't wait how the bed-sharing works hehe 

Hugs Tina 



Author's Response:

And Hugs back 2 U Tina.  Sorry, sweetie, tho I'm going away 4 the wkend so won't B able 2 update until next wk.  Thx so much 4 commenting.  Hav Fun and C U next wk-N.

 

 

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

LOL Loved this chapter.  Mikey is such a shit.

Author's Response: Hi, Gina Marie, babe.  And thax so much for 'once a whore always a whore' which is ironic... my stuff can full of cliche' I can't believe I 4got that one.  It wouldn't have been the same story without that phrase.  Thx again.  C U next week, going away 4 the weekend.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2008 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

Welcome back!!

Really hate Michael..

Brian in justin's bed, ohohohoh....

Thanks and more  



Author's Response: Thx so much, Patheticgal 4 wc me bak and taking the time 2 comment.  Hav Fun.  Going away 4 the wkend but will update next week when I return.

Reviewer: Rena1 (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2008 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

lol at Justin gloating at Mikey. Justin would have been mad to knock back Brian in his bed, like if you had a choice of those 5 to share your bed as if you would pick anyone but Brian lol



Author's Response: Rena1, gal U R another 1 got me laffing 2 def.  "Justin..mad to knock back Brian in his bed... choice of those 5..." Oh, brother I can't stop laffing enuff 2 update.  LOL.  Hav Fun.  Thax U so much.  Going away 4 the weekend will update next week.  Stay w/me and above all HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Spiteful

Loved the way Justin handled Michael. What an idiot! He should have poured the beer on Michael's head! That whiney brat deserved everything he got from Justin. And I know Brian sharing Justin's bed is gonna kill him.

Author's Response: "And I know Brian sharing Justin's bed is gonna kill him"  You got me laffing 2 def.  Going away 4 the wkend.  C U next wk.

Reviewer: undefine (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

haha...what a persistent brian

Author's Response: Hi, there my dear 4give me 4 taking so long 2 respond but I've been away a while.... I B back full swing in November but until then I'll drop by when I get a moment but I don't see myself updating this story until November.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2008 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

Brian and Justin so want each other. lol. Now that Brian knows that Justin quit being a hustler, now the fun can really begin. Great chapter. Looking forward to when you will update the story. *hugs*

Author's Response: Hi, Lynn... sorry 4 waiting so long 2 respond... been away 4 awhile... I hav a lot 2 do this month.  but I will pop in maybe once in awhile whenever I get a moment.  However, I don't C updating this story until November.  CU then, hugs 2 U 2.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

Brian wants the be the first to see Justin when he comes through the door. Its more than obvious Justin is the reason he is even there.

Author's Response: Lol, all so-so-so true.  Having fun, Kat.  Stay w/me.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

rofl I couldn't stop laughing when I read about their accident xD These two are fighting aaaaall the time aren't they ;) hehe

And now Brian knows about Justin quitting. The fun can begin hehe
Did you think about getting a beta?
Hugs Tina



Author's Response:

Thanks Sling, glad U're having fun.   However, the forever haunting 'beta' question.  I tried several... and ran into several problems to the point it took the fun out of writing and posting the story.   So I said never mind.... and decided to not lose sight of what I'm here for and that's too JUST HAV FUN!

Thanks tho for being concerned; I get that question a lot.  But I'm just having fun. 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

if these two ever get together and have a nice word for each other, i'll be amazed. i do like how they fight though. now brian's at the poker game so he can see when justin comes home. there's bound to be some excitement at emmett's tonight. whoo hoo.

Author's Response: Thx, Sjmpets3, darling... Brian's is just too funny, trying to pretend to be all discreet and nonchalant but Emmett's onto him 100%.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

Great chapter.  So now Brian is starting to see Justin as something more than a 'whore'.  He's a student working himself through college. That's something Brian can respect.  It's obvious he's got it bad for Justin!  Can't wait to see what happens next!

 

PS - though this is (I think) chapter 10, you have it listed as chapter 9 again.

 



Author's Response: Thanks,  hi, GM, hav Fun... the site is stalling a bit that's how I ended up with chapter 9, actually had it on about 4 times but before I remove the last one it stalled again.  I'm just getting back in.  Enjoy.

Reviewer: Rena1 (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

Emmett is so great, nothing gets passed him lol. Brian is acting so adorable hes almost being a stalker asking all this info on Justin and going where he knows he will be, its great

Author's Response: Hi, Rena1, dear I'm soooo glad 2 c your comment.  Thank U soooo much, darling.  STay w/me and above all HAV FUN!  Luv entertaining U.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

Great chapter. Love George the original and your character.

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much, alys, that's very flattery... hav fun... Luv entertaining U.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

Now, Brian and Justin need to honest with each other. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: "Now, Brian and Justin need to be honest with each other".... Now, Lynn dear, U know me by now, would I make it that easy lol... Hav Fun, darling.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

that was a sweet chapter. now he can give up whoring and go after brian. that should be fun.

Author's Response:

"... that should be fun."  LOL, let's hav some fun!

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

Hey hon ;) Great chapter I liked how George helped Justin with the money

Now Justin can be just a student without fucking for money and Brian can finally get over his assholeness xD
Kiss



Author's Response: Thx, Sling, glad U R till w/me  HAV FUN... hav 2 go out 4 the rest of the day... might update again 2morrow.  Ty again! C U later.

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

Gina-M, I was so excited 2 C U, I comment B4 reading yur comment.  I jus read what U wrote:

Forget Brian and go 4 George... U got me laffing out my stitches... AND I DON'T EVEN HAVE STITCHES.



Author's Response: ****^^^&^%%%%

Reviewer: Rena (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

No I didnt read those other stories you mentioned, next time I review I will call myself Rena1 so you know its me lol. I havent had problems before with leaving concrit but I will definately take your comments on board as I definately do not want to offend, I know how much time writers put into their stories. Thankyou.



Author's Response:

Thank U, Rena, so much and I'm sure we didn't mean to offend each other.  Hopefully we both have learned from each other.  I learned that not everyone named 'Rena' is the same person.  And I hope I help you learned how to start constr. criticism with a positive note.  I'm so glad 2 learn that you're not that Rena or those Renas if they indeed were 2 different people. 

With that said let's bury the hachet and let's have fun. 

However, re the chapter with Justin and George, I tried to establish the relationship between the old man and young man of one love on some level when I wrote.... that when George and Justin talk Justin tells him almost everything but his name and address (that was an indication to the reader that George and Justin were somethng more to each other than just a prostitute and a john).   

Also, George asked Justin there that night to have sex with him which Justin didn't at first because he couldn't get Brian off his mind (a clear indication he's in love with Brian... only Justin doesn't know yet... he didn't know until George told him so.)  Also Justin didn't realized that George is also in love with him until that moment... he realized it when George told him he looked in his wallet for his name.  He had just told Justin that Brian wanted to know his name because he loves him, so Justin concluded that George wanted to know for the same reason.

There's two types of love (loving a person) and (being in love with a person).  And making love has many definitions, it can mean having sex with a person while experiencing a WORLD of emotions.  It can also mean just having SEX that is slow and gentle... in the case of George, Justin had sex with him that was slower and gentler than usual and for the exception of allowing George to top him he did things to him he doesn't usually.  As for when he was with Brian he felt the EMOTION. 

Also, you say authors don't need to use sex to express the feelings between to people.  In the case of my story, Justin and George were already in bed together, and they are men (it would have been only natural that they would express their love this way).

Thanks again Rena, and I hope there's not bad feelings and that you will stay with the story.  I value your readership.  Thank U. I don't like having one unhappy reader.  I know I can't please everyone and I don't try to but it's so much fun when we all learn to get alone.  Hav Fun whether U stay w/the story or not.  Thank U for your time. 

 

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

OMG That's so sweet!  I can't believe I'm going to say this, but fuck Brian~!  Go for George!  LOL

Seriously, I hope Brian gets past his pride and opens up to Justin, especially now that Justin is a 'rich' man.  I wonder how Brian will handl that.

Though it's often said, 'once a whore, always a whore'. I hope  Brian doesn't use that on Justin. We know how cruel he can be.

Looking forward to an update.

 



Author's Response: Gina-M, gal, soooooooo glad 2 hear from U.  It's been a long, long time.  Hav fun and I'm so glad U R aboard this one.

Reviewer: undefine (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

this is really good... love the fighting of brian and justin and the hot sex scenes here.

Author's Response: Thank U sooo much, Undefine for taking the time to comment, it is greatly appreciated.  Hav Fun... love entertaining U.

Reviewer: Rena (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

I just read all 8 chapters now thats why I hadnt previously left a comment, I always leave a comment if I read something I feel thats the least I can do when a writer has spent the time to write their story, and the comment was meant as concrit and the reason I felt I needed to make it was because I did enjoy the first 7 chapters and then the last chapter just seemed so left of field and almost seemed to contradict what you had wrote in previous chapters, I didnt say your story was cheap I was saying that in general (and I wasnt just talking about this story) was that many writers seem to feel that to show the characters caring about each other they have them sleep with them and that cheapens the story, as previously said it was concrit and is just something to keep in mind to improve if you dont want to take comments on board thats completely fine but alot of writers say in the notes that concrit is welcome as they want to improve it really wasnt made to upset or offend

Author's Response:

Hi, Rena, thank U 4 getting back to me.  I don't like to jump to conclusions, "Rena" is sort of a common name I suppose.  However, two times in the past (and it could be a coincidence) but a Rena have left with very HARSH reviews.  The first time was for a story called Penetrate where she said my story made her 'SICK TO THE STOMACH' that was only one of the harsh things she had to say about that story (that was after she read about 10 or so chapter... had nothing nice to say prior). 

Secondly, a reviewer named "Rena" reviewed my story 'Runaway a Lover' and after reading 41 chapters I only heard from her when she read the last chapter, chapter 42 (where she thrashed my story and then said she will never read another one of my stories and she also lied in her review saying all my stories begin and end the same (unless she was referring to the fact they all end with the phrase .... The end but the beginning of something special' she was totally inaccurate and very unfair to me.)  But that could be a coincidence.

And if it is I deeply apologize.  And as far as giving constructive criticism, there is an art to doing it.  You usually start out saying something nice to the person, for instance how much you liked something about them and then add a 'but'.  It let's the person know right off the back you mean well, and prevents misunderstandings.  I have people leave me constructive criticism all the time and I don't get bend out of shape.  It just too many people named "Rena" has mistreatment me in past.  Again, if this is three differently Renas please accept my apologies. 

Reviewer: Rena (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

Brian was so mean giving Justin 5 dollars and 50 cents - bad Brian! and you can fuck lots of people but you dont make love to more than 1 person or it just cheapens it and makes it not mean as much so Justin doesnt love Brian or he wouldnt of made love to George, and to make love to someone you have to love them him making love to George really wasnt needed. So many writers seem to feel that they need to have characters sleeping together to show them how much they care for them and it just cheapens the story and can almost seem like a crackfic because in reality you dont have to sleep with everyone you care about to prove or show that you care, just a thought

Author's Response:

Thanks Rena for commenting.  For one, I keep seeing that term lately 'crackfic' I have no idea what that means?

Two, You are so wrong about the love then and why I put it here!  You can love more than one person at a time on different levels (or even the same level).  Justin does love George in away, and also he didn't let George top him (because although he loves him he doesn't love him in the same way that he loves Brian... Brian is the only one he'd make love to that way).  So my story is not cheapened because Justin made love to George.  And not only that George is no stranger to Justin, he's a client and a mentor.  So my story is not cheap. 

Three, you read eight chapters of my story, to have stayed this long, I feel you probably liked the story.  Why did I only hear from you when you had something negative to say.  That's cheap!

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 7: Beg For It

hot and heavy happened in that bathroom.

i liked the argument, but really loved the way brian left it.



Author's Response: Lol, sjmpets thank U sooo much!  Continue 2 hav fun, dear Luv 2 entertain U.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 7: Beg For It

Very hot chapter. I wish Brian and Justin stop denying their feelings for each other. *sighs* Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: And here's mor e 4 U, dear... U got it!  Enjoy!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 7: Beg For It

Very hot chapter. I wish Brian and Justin stop denying their feelings for each other. *sighs* Looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Crazy in love w/these 2 I guess.  Hav Fun

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 7: Beg For It

Very hot chapter. I wish Brian and Justin stop denying their feelings for each other. *sighs* Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: I guess the steam in that bathroom was coming from more than one source other than the shower.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 6: Wet 'n' Hot

Nooo you can't be serious. This is just too short :P

Author's Response: LOL< this is just too funny... next chapter, here U are... called Beg For it!

Reviewer: Tina (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 6: Wet 'n' Hot

more, more... I want more

Author's Response: Brian and Justin says 'you'd have 2 beg 4 it' LOL.  Here's more for U the next chapter is called:  Beg For It

Reviewer: Britin (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

More please! :)

Author's Response: You guys are to much... ironically enough the next chapter is called 'Beg For it!"

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2008 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 6: Wet 'n' Hot

i not happy this was wayyyyyy to short i want more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzz

lol



Author's Response: That's the reason it was so SHORT... 2 make U beg 4 more.... LOL!  THANK U, THANK U, THANK U.  MOREEEEEEE TO COME, BABE.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 6: Wet 'n' Hot

hahahaha that was grea. but wait, was brian jerking off while he was peeing? omg so funny.

Author's Response: He was not jerking off he was just getting off on the feeliing of the urine running through his piss hole.  Lots of people do that, you know, LOL.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 5: He Has To Pee

loooool xD I just can imagine what happens next muhaha
rrrrr a wet and naked Justin under the shower and Brian's coming inside?!? hehe that sounds like fun I can't wait for the next Chap hon
Hugs tina

Author's Response:

Ahhh! I Let's hav even more fun... stay w/me  Luv entertaining U guys!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: Up In Smoke

aah that's a shame. he'll have to go back to brian?

Author's Response:

You got me ROFL, hav fun sjm...

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 3: Not The Usual Two-Bits Hustler

I am really interested in this new fic of yours. Brian is definitely hooked on Justin. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Hi, Lynn... I know I'm going to have a good time now, esp. when U and Kat join me.  Hav Fun... Luv entertaining U.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Not The Usual Two-Bits Hustler

hehe So did I get it right? Brian normally never bottoms but lets Justin top and Justin normally never bottoms but lets Brian top him? Muhaha

This is going to be fun when both find out ;) I hope you're updating soon again Hugs Tina 



Author's Response: U got it right, LOL!  Ty 4 joining me and plz hav fun!

Reviewer: kleene87 (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 3: Not The Usual Two-Bits Hustler

An awesome story. And the way Brian reacts after finding out about Justins real price is just too funna. I hope you will update soon.

Author's Response: TU, sooo much Kleene87, welcome and enjuy.  Have Fun.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: Not The Usual Two-Bits Hustler

"no-count, two-bits hustler." not at $550 a pop. this is definitely a new take on how our men get together. more please.

Author's Response:

Hi, there.  More to come, here U are.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 2: Swindler

Oh, I'll say Brian just met his match! $2500 and he paid it! I can see Justin is only just starting to drive Brian crazy!

Author's Response: Time 4 some Fun!  Hi, Kat... glad 2 c u joined me on this one.

Reviewer: trenice (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

That was different..........keep 'em coming!

Update



Author's Response: Keeping it coming!  Enjvy... Luv 2 entertain U.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

hehe *grin* I like it ;)
More please ;) when are you updating again???
hugs tina

Author's Response: Like Now!  Enjuy

Reviewer: jerri (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Trick

that was so funny. i am enjoying this story already. hopefully justin will give brian a run for the money.

Author's Response: Thank U, Jerri... let's have FUN now!

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