Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Thorne Saga
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2019 02:25 AM · On: Reunited In The Suite

very cute

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 09:51 AM · On: Reunited In The Suite

Really enjoyed reading this. Good job

 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 08:59 AM · On: Presents And Nightcaps

The kids are so cute with the puppy as is Brian. Who knew !

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 08:36 AM · On: Thorne Makes An Appearance

Brian is a sucker, so sweet

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 08:28 AM · On: And It Continues

Here it goes !

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 07:41 AM · On: More Surprises For Brian

Justin's birthday Brian's hell  

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 07:35 AM · On: Crisis Averted

Gonna be fun

 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:52 AM · On: And In Cincinnati

Kidnapping   What next   LOL

 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:25 AM · On: A Curious Moment

Crap

 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:23 AM · On: Breakfast At The Plaza

Drinking always helps

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:20 AM · On: Partners Continued

I wonder if everyone is going to be in trouble with Brian

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:15 AM · On: Arrival In New York

Think I understand your banner    Duh !

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:13 AM · On: The EU Pet Project

Oh No   Brian's not going to be happy

 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:11 AM · On: And It Begins In Milan

Looking good so far

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 06:41 AM · On: Reunited In The Suite

Cute!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Reunited In The Suite

Entertaining read; now I can catch up on part 2 currently being updated.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Sightseeing Adventure

A toy store for the rich and famous? Interesting.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Justin's Plans

Let the adventures begin.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:09 PM · On: The Next Morning

The ad campaign is a good idea.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Presents And Nightcaps

How cute it all was. Fun read.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:56 PM · On: The Evening Continues

I can see Gus and Nicky wanting a dog now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Let Them Eat Cake

Choke choke...*(blows globs of fluff from his mouth and nose)*

:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:39 PM · On: The Festivities Continue

So where are the male strippers for the brithday boy? Just kidding.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Thorne Makes An Appearance

I was hoping Brian would be good about this.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:26 PM · On: And It Continues

Enter Thorne to the celebration I assume.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:21 PM · On: A Challenge Of Blades

I'm choking on the fluff over here. Fun chapter however.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:11 PM · On: It takes A Moment

That is so unlike Craig to do.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:07 PM · On: More Surprises For Brian

Short chapters have the advantage of feeling like you're getting the story quickly.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Crisis Averted

Nicky sounds like a hand full.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Just Checking

Three chapters this time?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:59 PM · On: First Surprises For Justin

I'm curious how Thorne will be revealed.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:51 PM · On: The Note

Reading on for more.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:49 PM · On: There's More

Justin will be so surprised, and Brian, well, I just have to read and find out.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:44 PM · On: And In Cincinnati

I saw that coming when Fran left a note.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:31 PM · On: A Curious Moment

Now Brian has reason to be concerned.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Breakfast At The Plaza

Brian doesn't like Cristina; that is established.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Partners Continued

Reading on for next; wondering where this is going.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:21 PM · On: A Partner In Crime

Wondering the relationship of Spyder and Justin.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Arrival In New York

Thorne has a double meaning no doubt; a thorn for Brian too.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:16 PM · On: The EU Pet Project

So the little dog must be the special present for Justin. Don't bother answering all my comments; I'm just giving you the hits.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:14 PM · On: And It Begins In Milan

I'll begin this saga at the start. Interesting first chapter.

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:56 PM · On: And It Begins In Milan

Uh oh, LOL! Poor Brian is about to be rewarded with something very annoying that Justin will adore. ;) I can see it now that he will be wigging out over the poor lil pup.

Perfect line: “You heard Brian say that he and I have agreed to bury the stiletto between us.”

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Reunited In The Suite

I love this series.  Thank you for writing them....

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you enjoyed this series. Take a look at Thorne II which has began posting.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 01:31 PM · On: Reunited In The Suite

Wonderful arc I really enjoy the daily lives of our boys. Brian's constant sigh's that he is much out upon lol he has much to bear with his sunshine's devious ways.

 

Thanks again for the constant updates and I hope you move onto more arc's in this AU. :)Chris



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Brian has been doing a lot of sighing. Life is so rough once you agree to carry around a six week old puppy around until he's stable on all fours. but somewhere in all this, Brian, like Gus and Nicky, seem to be having the time of his life. (smile) I'm glad that you like this story, and thanks for letting me know that you like the daily updates too.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 12:05 PM · On: Reunited In The Suite

Very cute! Brian, Justin and Thorne live happily ever after =)

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Yep, Brian, Justin, and Thorne live happily ever after....as Thorne helps his humans learn to cater to him properly. (smile)

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Reunited In The Suite

Thanks for another chapter of Brian and Justin life - with Thorne!

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. We all need a little Thorne in our lives. I'm glad that you liked the story.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 10:11 AM · On: Reunited In The Suite

this was great. will there be more of when they get home?

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Okay, I finally decided to begin posting Part II of the Thorne Saga. I hope that you like it as much as you liked Part I.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 12:40 PM · On: Mischief Planning

That Justin is a clever one isn't he! I'll have to go back and read that other story! I want Justin to take me to FAO Shwartz to get a few things.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 10:24 AM · On: Mischief Planning

just a bit spoiled i would say.

i thought thorne was for justin. was he for justin to keep brian occupied lol?

i remember hotlanta. can't wait to see what happens when they get home.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Thorne seems to have attached himself to Brian, Gus, and Nicky as well as Justin. (smile) But believe me, he knows to whom he belongs. I'm glad that you remember Hotlanta that was mentioned in Lois' story. Let's see what Justin and Jason have in mind for themselves and their partners.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 04:54 AM · On: Sightseeing Adventure

now that's what a dad does while in ny. can't wait to see what a haul they'll be bringing back to the suite.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you can read between the lines and envision Justin and Fran in FAO Schwarz with Nicky and Gus. I'm sure that the kids made a great haul from this one adventure. I suspect that Thorne didn't fare too badly too. (smile)

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2008 12:02 PM · On: The Next Morning

Really nice story.  It could stand alone, but then the dialogue

between characters would not sound as sharp and yet warm and friendly.

 

That’s how I see it.  A group of really wonderful people (characters) that like each other and are there to celebrate.  That is what makes this fun to read.  Happy people, happy to be there celebrating Justin’s birthday, written by an author who sounds like she is enjoying writing this story,  and read by a happy reader (moi).

 

What more can I say?  This is fun to read.  So, thanks for the story or for the aside or whatever you call this.  I am having a real good time reading it.

 

I know, I know – we will soon  go back to the rest of the story, which

may contain – um..well – an issue or two.  But for now, this will do just fine.  

Thanks again.

DavidR

 

PS:  Michael who????



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked Thorne and this crazy story. I'm glad that you had fun. (smile) And I guess you didn't miss Michael too much. LOL

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 10:50 AM · On: The Next Morning

No, we have no problem with more chapters with this crew!

Thorne is already a star and he's only six weeks old. Yea, he's totally Brian and Justin's dog! 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:43 AM · On: Presents And Nightcaps

I just love this story! Its so cute and funny, very light hearted. Brian just looooooves that dog! Love at first sight, just like with Justin.

I can't wait to see what this meeting is about! 



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm so glad that you love this story. Brian took one look at the blond hair and blue eyes...and I agree with you...it was love at first sight. Of course, the fact that Brian needs to carry Thorne around for two weeks should be interesting. Usually six week old puppies are with their mothers and their litter mates. But I'm sure that Thorne will manage somehow. (smile)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:20 AM · On: Presents And Nightcaps

super cute. love the tshirts from pittsburg ;-) now about that meeting tomorrow..... love this story!!!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:18 AM · On: Presents And Nightcaps

i don't blame justin for wanting to open the gift from craig without anyone else being there. but, i wnat to know what it is.

doesn't brian know yet that kids and puppies have a way of always finding each other. even in the dark? brian is smitten you know.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. The contents for the gift and the card from Craig were revealed by Molly in Chapter 16. Molly knew all the pertinent information because Craig consulted with her. And as for Brian, this whole puppy thing is still kind of new to him. I'm sure that in subsequent chapters, Gus and Nicky will explain the fact of kids and puppies to him. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 04:28 AM · On: The Evening Continues

this is such a happy-go-lucky story. just what we need sometimes. thank you for it.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 12:38 PM · On: The Evening Continues

Its gonna be interesting to see what other gifts Justin got. AND to find out his reaction to his dad's gift.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 12:30 PM · On: Let Them Eat Cake

I love everyone's interactions.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 03:17 AM · On: The Festivities Continue

A puppy after Brian's own heart...in Armani! This party is too funny!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 05:10 AM · On: Thorne Makes An Appearance

are you sure that thorne is for justin? it seems that the bonding of him and brian is taking place.

this is an adorable story.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Yes, I'm sure that Thorne belongs to Justin, but Thorne seems to have bonded with quite a few people. I'm sure after Brian carries Thorne around in his Armani carrier, that Brian and Thorne will have a special relationship. I'm glad that you like the story.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 07:51 PM · On: Thorne Makes An Appearance

really cute.... love Thorne!

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm so glad that you liked Thorne.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 01:50 PM · On: Thorne Makes An Appearance

Sooo cute. I think Thorne will end of being Brian's dog, perhaps a hairless cat for Justin next (for Brian's bday)

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I think as this story progresses it may be difficult to figure out to whom Thorne belongs. Fortunately, Brian and Justin know how to share. No..no, I don't think that hairless cat will be necessary. (smile)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2008 11:50 PM · On: And It Continues

so cute, now let thorne out.....

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Thorne has been a really good sport about things. i agree it's time that he gets let out. See the next chapter. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 12:15 PM · On: And It Continues

poor justin, can never eat his dinner alone. lol

uh oh, i guess the smell of the burgers got to thorne and he just couldn't wait to make his appearence.

can't wait for their reactions.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Some things never change as Brian, Gus, and Nicky never fail to help Justin eat whatever is on his plate. And, you're probably right about the smell of those gourmet burgers were probably just enough to suggest to Thorne to make his presence felt. (smile)

Reviewer: jerri (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2008 03:38 AM · On: A Challenge Of Blades

I don't think this chapter is over the top at all. It is perfect just perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter. when will Justin met Thorne.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm so glad that you liked the chapter. After all, Emmett has never been known to make a quiet entrance. (smile)

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 11:58 AM · On: A Challenge Of Blades

Thanks for the update.

Now that everybody is present for the birthday celebration of our beloved Justin, let's the party begin.... with his "famous gift" from Cristina....... 



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. You have to admit that it is an interesting group of people assembled to celebrate Justin's birthday. We're all awaiting for that "famous gift" from Cristina. This should be fun. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 11:19 AM · On: A Challenge Of Blades

this just keeps getting better and better. what fun lies ahead.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm so glad that you like the chapter. I'm glad that you're still reading with me.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 11:03 AM · On: A Challenge Of Blades

Hilarious. So were is Christina and Thorne hiding......



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter...even if it was a bit over the top. Cristina is definitely around, and think that Thorne can't be too far away. (smile)

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 10:52 AM · On: A Challenge Of Blades

Just got caught up on all 17 chapters and I've got to say this story is sooooo much FUN!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that got caught up. I always worry when I post this often that reader's fatigue might just set in. Thank you for telling me this story was fun to read....just a birthday romp for Justin. (smile)

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 10:39 AM · On: A Challenge Of Blades

I am loving this story.   It is really good.  I love the way you have Brian losing control again and again.... 

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm so glad that you like this story. And yes, Brian,who likes to be in control of everything, finds that at the moment he is in control of very little. (smile)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2008 08:58 PM · On: It takes A Moment

Molly is a great kid. Warning Brian and Jen about the present. Love how Brian pinpoints the start of his day turning upside down.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I agree with you that Molly is a great kid. I've always loved her relationship with Brian.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 12:28 PM · On: It takes A Moment

That was a shocker! Craig not only sent Justin a present and nice card, but he was human and decent. He was a father! It was a nice thing to do and I just hope this will be the start of him trying to rebuild his relationship with his child. Can't wait to see how Justin reacts to this.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Craig sent a present to Justin. I agree it was a nice thing for him to do. Who knows anyone does anything. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:44 AM · On: It takes A Moment

w3hat the hell is craig up to now?

great chapter as always.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Craig simply decided to send his son a birthday present. And sometime it is as simple as that. Who knows what makes someone do something. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:24 PM · On: More Surprises For Brian

i am really happy with the frequent updates. i can't wait for the party, and thorne to make his appearence.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. It won't be too much longer now before the festivities began. I promise...(smile)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:42 AM · On: More Surprises For Brian

Will Brian be able to survive Justin's party! LOL! The more he finds out, the more stressed he gets.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I think we should allow Brian to have his one drama queen moment. (smile)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 12:27 PM · On: First Surprises For Justin

They are so cute! Oh just wait until they see what everyone has been up to!

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. It was time for a Brian and Justin moment in the middle of all these swirling plans that they know nothing about....just to let us know the world is okay. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 12:08 PM · On: First Surprises For Justin

are they ever in for a surprise. oh yeah.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Surprises do seem to be everywhere. (smile)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 11:14 PM · On: And In Cincinnati

A trip to the park is an outing, getting on a plan is a voyage! LOL! Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. But please let me set the record straight...a trip to the park is an outing for ordinary people. I just dying to see all the clauses to the Grandmother's Rights that Debbie, and now Fran, enovked. It's hard to know which of them takes things further. Of course, a plane ride to New York City has to be within the acceptable parameters of an outing. (smile)rn

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 10:57 PM · On: The Note

I love this story.

You are definitely a gifted writer.

Please keep up ths saga of Brian and Justin's story.

I am looking for the series to continue.

Thanks!

Have a nice fall!



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you like this story. I will eventually get back to the main series, I haven't forgotten. (smile)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 11:41 AM · On: The Note

Great 2 chapters. Cynthia and Spyder collaberating is hilarious. Gus and Nicky talking w/ Cynthia and Spyder is funny too.

Can't wait to see this party.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapters. The orderly universe of QAF has been tilted a bit with unusual collaborations all around. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:33 PM · On: The Note

oh yeah surprises all around. i can't wait.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I do so love surprises! But, I really must learn not to take so long to tell a story. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:37 AM · On: And In Cincinnati

i'm sorry about getting nicky's name mixed up with another story.

Author's Response: No problem....

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:43 AM · On: And In Cincinnati

good fpr fran and patrick. it's a grandmothers job to make sure her grandchild is happy. being in ny for justin's birthday makes patrick happy.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Oh yes, Nicky and Fran and their little outing to New York. What could be better? (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:41 AM · On: A Curious Moment

brian is certainly not going to be happy when he finds out about thorne, especially after the reporters think he and justin adopted a baby boy. wait till he finds out it's a baby dog. oh boy!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:00 AM · On: And In Cincinnati

LOVE this story. Lil Nicky & ma, Spyder etc.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Have you noticed the number of things that Brian doesn't know about so far? (smile)

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 09:21 PM · On: And It Begins In Milan

Excuse my ignorance but what does the term 'crackfic' mean... I'm starting to see that phrase a lot lately.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. You asked about a crackfic! A crackfic is usually a form of fan fiction in which characters are put in very random, nonsensical situations, and most often the story seem to have been written as if the author was on drugs. It is also used to indicated that a story is a parody of the characters as we know them. Crackfics! are usually very short, one shot stories. Also, the characters that we know and love often step completely out of character as they react to nonsensical situations. Hope this helps.rnrnrnrn

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 08:46 PM · On: Breakfast At The Plaza

this is priceless.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 08:41 PM · On: A Partner In Crime

oh no. *chuckle*

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. So, you too realize that the partnership of Cristina and Spyder is bound to lead to mischief. (smile)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 11:02 AM · On: Arrival In New York

I love the Sivestri family. This interlude story will most certainly be entertaining.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you love the Silvestri family. You have to admit that are always up to something. (smile)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 06:00 AM · On: Arrival In New York

omg she got him a shar pei. brian is going to freak. she is evil. i loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Do I detect a wicked streak? (smile)

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