Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Bearing the Burden
Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2008 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice gapfiller. Sweet and well written.



Author's Response: Thank you :D Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was a good story. It was a good interpretation of what he may have been thinking. thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

i loved it. i do like how his brain finally caught up to his heart and remembered why they were together to begin with. even it justin had to keep telling him and telling him. it did after a while it sunk in. and he accepted it.

Author's Response: Brian is a little slow sometimes when it comes to matters of the heart, isn't he? But he gets there eventually. Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it :D

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2008 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this, It wasn't syrupy, it was so Brian and Justin. The final line was great, "At least one of us remembered."  Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I guess there's always a line to toe when it comes to hurt/comfort stuff where Brian's involved, so I'm glad you thought it was "them." Thanks again :D

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2008 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

very touching. Love how they finished each other's sentances. So very Justin to not treat Brian differently, but so very Brian to put up some protest but ultimatley 'allow' Justin to stay.

Author's Response:

Even if poor Brian *does* despise when couples finish each other sentences, lol. Really, though, Brian should have known Justin wouldn't have given up that easily. When has he ever taken no for an answer?

Thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

i totally loved this.  I loved how Brian both wanted him to stay and to go.    Brian can be very stubborn but i love that he knows he can make it with his sunshine.  job well done.

Author's Response:

If anyone can make it, they can. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful. Very powerful.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Lionstar16 (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2008 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good, you've balanced between Brian wanting Justin to leave and him wanting Justin with him. You've captured Brian's stubborness and vulnerability in one fiction.

Well done



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always worried about how I write Brian. He's such a difficult character.

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