Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2020 02:01 PM · On: Problems Persist

dont know if you are still around - but I sure hope that this story gets finished...I am left wanting so much more! love this story-arc - thanks for sharing your talent...

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2018 08:39 PM · On: Problems Persist

Please update

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2018 05:57 PM · On: Problems Persist

please update

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2015 01:32 PM · On: Problems Persist

No, it can't end here! This is an amazing sequel and I am hooked.  Please please update soon:-(

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2015 06:07 AM · On: Problems Persist

Oh no! I was so enjoying this sequel but it has just stopped. So sadt hat no updates have been posted for so many years. This is such an enthralling series- please please update.

Reviewer: Cari (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 12:15 AM · On: Problems Persist

I love all your stories, I cant wait for you to post a new chapter for them.  I keep rereading them  until you add a new chapter, I hope you wirte something soon.  please.

Reviewer: YPing (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2014 05:45 PM · On: Problems Persist

Hi Jessica,

Completed both the 1st installment A Precious Secret and the sequel. Nice story for both series and please continue with the sequel.

Please dun stop here. Please..

 

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 10:32 PM · On: Problems Persist

Please finish this story .... 

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2012 06:51 AM · On: Problems Persist

Poor Gus! They're so involved with their daughter they haven't even spent any time with him. 

Maybe they should actually spend time with Brian's son. Or get off their asses and get custody over Gus. I love how Justin loves to think as Arionna and Brian as the two most important people, obviously their daughter overshadows Gus. And the same goes for Brian. He completely forgot about Gus.

Maybe you could make a play on Gus feeling extremely neglected by Brian and Justin, and he tries to run away or hides somewhere and they can't find him for many days? So many people just blow off Gus when they have Britin have other kids whether through a surrogate or mpreg. And it's sad. God I feel like crying for him so bad. He need big time attention since he is barely mentioned. 

Sorry if this sounds like a flame, it's not. I just noticed we don't see any scenes with them with Gus or making an effort to spend time with him. 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2011 08:50 PM · On: Problems Persist

Please please please finish this story.... I want to know why Brian didn't get Justin off?.... When is Ethan going to make his move?.... Will Brian and Justin make it in the end?... Will they have another child?... and I don't mean a child that is Justin and Ethan's I mean another biological child for Brian and Justin

Reviewer: vampgirl (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Problems Persist

loved both stories but please update soon its been 2 years. as for the stalker i'm thinking ted or ethan. but who knows even michael a crazy possibility

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Problems Persist

You have a terrific story here. I hope my few reviews can spark your muse to return to this wonderful plot. The mixture of canon, family, baby, mental Brian, and the staker's treat is a delicious read.

I'll be watching for an update hoping you can find it within yourself to raise this great piece of work from the bins of time.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Telling The Truth

You write this story so well; great development, character growth, and gripping plotline.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Trouble In Paradise

Very curious about the stroller.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Private Eye

Love the family inneraction; the gift is an interesting twist. I would feel better if Justin had protection however.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:01 PM · On: A Realized Poblem

Oh this is way too creepy. I hope Justin tells Brian at once.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Pictures of You

This is an incredible plot idea.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:35 PM · On: You Tell Me

Oh wow! What is going on here?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:24 PM · On: You Tell Me

I'm sad to see this story isn't completed or added to for over a year. That said; I have to how far you got with it.

Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Problems Persist

I like your story pls write more

Reviewer: Peggy (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2009 10:54 PM · On: You Tell Me

I certainly hope that you find the time to finish this.  So many questions that need answers.  Take care.

Reviewer: sunshineface (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Problems Persist

I'm looking forward the rest of the story~

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Problems Persist

That's a first! Brian's never let Justin not finish like that. He has to have something else in mind, that is just so not like him.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review...maybe it was an accident??? *looks innocent*

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Problems Persist

soooooooo hot!!!! can't wait for more, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks............ 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Problems Persist

why would brian do that? does he have something else planned? brian was never one to get off without his partner doing so also.

this stalker of justin's, why do i get the feeling it's chris?



Author's Response:

*whistles* I don't know what you're talking about, Brian could have done that accidentally *looks around innocently* I guess we will have to see. I will be doing another Poll on my LJ the closer I get revealing the identity of the stalker so we can see what everyone thinks

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Anonymous Sister of the Author (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Telling The Truth

crazy person...who is it? and i hope that he won't hurt justin...

ASOTA



Author's Response: Hehe Anonymous Sister of the Author, what??? Hehe I'm so not telling. Thanks for the review though.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Telling The Truth

so much tension and angst. he finally got the secret off his chest and he didn't lose justin. he's one lucky sucker.

when will the watcher make himself known? he's really scaring me.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you liked it. The stalker is about to do something big, I think it's not the next chapter but the one after that.

Later. Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Telling The Truth

I'm glad Brian and Justin were able to at least start working things out. How heartbreaking for Justin to learn he can't have anymore kids. Was this discussed in the last story? I can't remember.

This stalker is a freak! But I think you put a clue in there...which I'll let everyone else figure out. =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story. The doc told Brian at the end of the last story that Justin wouldn't be able to have more children yes. I would love to hear who you think the stalker is, feel free to email you guess to me.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Telling The Truth

Thanks for the update...........

The stalker/secret admirer of Justin is a big question mark?????? Who he is??????? And hope that everything will be alright with Brian, Justin and Arionna......

Can't wait for the next chapter, please!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, I can't tell who the stalker is but I am leaving hints, subtle ons but hints nonetheless.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: bmyoungs (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Trouble In Paradise

I'm dying to know who this secret admirer is.  I love a jealous Brian.  Hopefully this makes him realize what he can loose.  I hope you update soon. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the chapter. The next chapter is at the beta now and will be posted on Sunday.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: trenice (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Trouble In Paradise

Don't let him off that easy! Sometimes I swear Brian needs to be hit over the head.

Reviewer: Trenice (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Trouble In Paradise

Don't let him off that easy! Sometimes I swear Brian needs to be hit over the head with something.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, that is so true about Brian though.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Trouble In Paradise

this watcher is  giving me the creeps. for some reason i keep thinking the fiddler. or ted. or even michael. ugh!!

i thought brian was over 'walking away' and go into 'pain management' mode. well, at least he was home by three.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I am so not telling who the stalker is though, lol. Brian deff fucked up though.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Trouble In Paradise

How heartbreaking! Can't believe Brian just flew out of the house like that over just the thought of having another kid.

And that stalker is scary, I hope he doesn't do anything to Justin. Still can't figure out who it is.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Brian deff messed up. I will attempt to show more hints as to who the stalker is.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Trouble In Paradise

Thanks for the update.............

Why is Brian so upset if Justin is pregnant again??????

Who is Justin's stalker?

I have so many questions, and can't wait for the next update...... 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you liked it. All questions will be answered in time.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: maddy_snape (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Trouble In Paradise

Talk about overreacting!

I think Justin is much too forgiving - the way he acts at the end is almost telling Brian that he can get away with acting like an asshole.



Author's Response:

Well it is Brian, time for a queen out. I think that Justin needed to be there for his lover, who is, being kind, emotionally damaged.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Private Eye

I´m glad you posted a new chapter of this story. I really liked it and I´m looking forward to the next installment. I also hope you´ll find the time to finish your others WIPs.

Hugs, Sunny 



Author's Response:

Well I will be back to a basically regular schedule of posting now, as I had no time to post with working almost full time and going to school full time but it will be back to normal now. I have another chapter of this and one of Ruined almost done so you guys will get a chapter of something within the next few days.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Asota (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Private Eye

What did Justin buy? Update soon please!



Author's Response:

Hehe, nothing special but I ain't telling, lol. Thanks for the review.

Later,

Jessica

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Private Eye

HOW CAN U END I LIKE THAT? DAMN  YOU!

 

I hope u update soon! 



Author's Response:

Hehe I'm a little evil, you are going to hate me even more when you see what he bought, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Private Eye

thank you for writing:) Looking forward to more

Author's Response:

Thanks you for reading, more is almost finished.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Private Eye

Justin sure does love to torture Brian! =) I wonder what he purchased! Glad to see an update, I've missed this story!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and review. I know it's been forever for updates but with my schedule, well let's just say it wasn't good.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Private Eye

Really glad for your update... Love it when they are so happy family!!

Thanks and more to come.

Happy New Year!!! 



Author's Response:

I know for some reason the interactions with them as a family unit are so cute, it's just working out that way I guess. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 11:24 PM · On: A Realized Poblem

update sssssssssssoon hun

Author's Response:

I"m so glad youliked the chapter. My updates are a little off because of school but I'm trying.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 05:28 AM · On: A Realized Poblem

"When moment I read it I think I realize I might have a problem." might have a problem? if brian sees this he will have a problem. besides the one with his secret admirer.

the family scene was great. once she got up on her feet brian didn't care what a mess she made out of his suit.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Hun. So true, Justin is in deep shit but at least he's getting it. I totally agree with you about the scene with Arionna, she's so cute.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:44 PM · On: A Realized Poblem

This doesn't sound too good. Justin needs to let Brian know right away about this new gift...before he eats the chocolate!!

He has Brian and his daughter to think about first...not his stomach. Justin should be really REALLY nervous now that someone out there knows what he likes, but refuses to show who they are. We know this person is twisted (uh, hello shrine to Justin!) and could potentially be dangerous (I'm guessing from your violence warning). And to have this person proclaim to be his real one true love...He Better Tell Brian! I hope he puts his daughters safety first and does the right thing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I do believe that know Justin realizes that this could be a big problem. Hopefully he will do the real thing, and deff not eat it, as well as going to Brian.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Samantha (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2008 06:55 PM · On: A Realized Poblem

with the way this chapter sounded and the name of the story it makes me think Justin is going to cheat on Brian, but there is no Justin/other in the warnings so that makes me think he doesnt. When Brian and Justin are getting along well with their relationship and they have a little girl if Justin does cheat it will show that they just arent meant to be. If you dont have any problems in your relationship but someone still cheats then you have no relationship. Brian even comes home early from work to be with them so hes giving Justin all he can and his attention and love but then it says Justin likes getting the gifts from the admirer, if you are happy with your partner you dont enjoy getting gifts from admirers.

Reviewer: Samantha (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2008 06:54 PM · On: A Realized Poblem

with the way this chapter sounded and the name of the story it makes me think Justin is going to cheat on Brian, but there is no Justin/other in the warnings so that makes me think he doesnt. When Brian and Justin are getting along well with their relationship and they have a little girl if Justin does cheat it will show that they just arent meant to be. If you dont have any problems in your relationship but someone still cheats then you have no relationship. Brian even comes home early from work to be with them so hes giving Justin all he can and his attention and love but then it says Justin likes getting the gifts from the admirer, if you are happy with your partner you dont enjoy getting gifts from admirers.

Author's Response:

Okay let me assure you, Justin does not cheat. He is completely not interested in anyone but Brian. On the other hand it is also nice to know people are interested, it's an ego boast for anyone and presents, especially ones that are perfect for you are always loved. This hasn't gone on long enough to be creepy, until now when Justin found the inscription. Thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2008 05:01 PM · On: A Realized Poblem

thanks and more update please.

cute Arionna and love the chocolates! but i hate what will be the outcome of the new gift from Justin's admirer!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. I know isn't Arionna just adorable.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Tammi (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2008 04:58 PM · On: A Realized Poblem

He really shouldnt be eating things from a stranger, who knows what they could have done to it. He needs to tell Brian about it because this person could be dangerous and Brian needs to know if his family could be in danger

Author's Response:

Yeah it probably isn't the smartest move to eat something that came from someone you don't know. That's is the problem with people who think other's are inherently good, they can put themselves in dangerous situations. Thanks for reviewing and sharing your thoughts.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Big J (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 09:20 AM · On: Pictures of You

Hey Jess, this has me intrigued.  Silly Brian thinking that Justin would cheat on him. Who else would give him the hot sex that Brian does?

Author's Response:

Hehe Good point Judy. I'm so glad you're liking the story.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 02:02 AM · On: Pictures of You

Thank goodness the Stubborn Duo finally talked and worked things out. And I still can't figure out who the stalker might be, someone obviously hell bent on having Justin and Arionna to himself.

Its someone who knows where Justin lives and what he likes. Ugh! I was so looking for a clue in the story, but nothing yet. And this person has a shrine to Justin in his closet. Hmm...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story so far. Our boys have issues but at least they're working on them. No hints to the stalkere though, although deff creepy. lol

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2008 06:36 PM · On: Pictures of You

thanks for the update and please more. i hope the stalker will not destroy the relationship of justin and brian.........

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, more will be coming soon hopefully.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Samantha (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2008 03:11 PM · On: Pictures of You

wow gift giver is a real freak. I knw Justin wasnt cheating on Brian and gift giver is delusional if he thinks he can split them up, and material things dont compare to brians love so gift giver can give all he wants it wont be enough

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'm sure our boys will make it through everything just fin, I think. *evil laugh*

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 02:28 PM · On: Pictures of You

well, strained as it was i'm glad the fight and the fear have been dealt with.

the gift giver is creepy. i'm thinking ethan but i have a feeling it's someone closer.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm hoping to be able to pull of the stalker's idenity like I did the plot in Perception but it's a lot harder this time.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: cool beans (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2008 04:00 AM · On: You Tell Me

that's really funny. I'm a bug fan of Utrecht, so bonus points for that.

Author's Response:

Hehe that is funny. I'm so glad you like the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to comment on it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 02:56 PM · On: You Tell Me

Oh, no. Please, my poor heart can't take it.



Author's Response:

Well, please don't have a heart attack lol. I'm glad you're enjoying it though. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 01:49 PM · On: You Tell Me

I'm so giddy and happy that you have started a sequel to one of my all time favorites!! YEAH!!!!!

Ok, love how this is starting off and looking forward to reading more! The way you described everything Brian and Justin have for the baby (classical music, desginer baby clothes) is so them! 

Now, I wonder who sent Justin that gift card? Hmm..... 



Author's Response:

Hey I'm so glad that you're excited about the sequel. I hope this one has as big of an impact on you as the orginal. I really tried to figure out how Brian and Justin would be as a full time parent and that's how I'm potraying them. No hints to who send the card though, lol. Thanks for the review, hearing from my readers means a lot to me.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 01:00 PM · On: You Tell Me

*squeals*

I am so happy you continued this!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter of the sequel. Stay with me, I promise a ride.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 07:13 AM · On: You Tell Me

So happy to see a sequel to this oh boy Who could it be...?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I hope you enjoy the sequel as much as the original. No hints to the secret identity of the antagonist though, lol.

Later, Jessica

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