Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Taylor
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2016 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 41: Doubts

Such a weird story but in a fantastic way. Love how you flipped the script on this one. Young Brian was so sweet! Please update this one! 

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 41: Doubts

I love this story. Really truly hope you will continue writing on this one!!

Reviewer: Sharon buckney (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2015 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 41: Doubts

Love this story so much.... Can't wait for it to b finished 😊

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2014 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 41: Doubts

All that work, for what?  They smell just as bad.  Hahaha.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2014 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 41: Doubts

Very interesting chapter my friend...but I must admit to dreading what's to come.

Author's Response:

Have a little faith in me :-) I feel sure you won't be disappointed.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2014 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 40: Brian and Nevan Take a Walk

Can you fix it?  Nevan's broken heart?



Author's Response:

(ahem)

 

That is a distinct possibility :-)

 

After some more pain, of course. The only way out is through, as they say ...

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2014 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Brian's first time (Part 1)

:(....

Author's Response:

I know...just have a little faith. change can be awesome :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2014 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 40: Brian and Nevan Take a Walk

Hmmmm...now that Dan is coming back into the picture, will Nevan still want to go through with Justin's plan? I guess the bigger question still remains, what is Brian going to do...I hope he makes the right choice.

Author's Response:

Fair warning. Brian will probably not make the right choice (what you would consider the right choice).

 

Nevan is nervous about making a major change in the get-Boystown-back plan, but he likes the idea of Dan's being able to come home. If he thinks they can pull it off, he's highly motivated to try.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 39: An Idea So Crazy...

I agree with Nevan.  It...just might work...



Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2014 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 39: An Idea So Crazy...

Wow Justin, I'm impressed...but what if the plan doesn't work...where does that leave our boys?

Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

 

Good question..it's a bold, but risky move.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2014 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 38: A New Day Dawns

Don't walk away from anything Brian...you can have your career and Taylor/Justin it's all a matter of balancing things out.

Author's Response:

This is just one story among many ... I know how opposed you are to Brian's making major life changes ... but if any of the Brian incarnations would do it, this one would ... might be interesting to see it play out :-) 

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2014 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: Brian's first time (Part 1)

Well your weird mind is AWESOME 



Author's Response:

Awww...you're sweet :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2014 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 38: A New Day Dawns

What will he do next!



Author's Response:

GOOD question :-)

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2014 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 37: K-I-S-S-I-N-G

Im so In love with this story keep up the awesome work. The first time I read this I was amazed I don't know how you come up this kind of story



Author's Response:

That's music to my ears! I have a weird mind, I guess :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2014 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 37: K-I-S-S-I-N-G

Amazing...

Author's Response:

Yay!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2014 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 37: K-I-S-S-I-N-G

Sometimes the only way to tell if this is past or present is to look how you address Justin - Taylor is past and Justin is present.  Very, very HOT!  I'm not sure why more people don't review.  Maybe they are sneaking a read while at work?  But I bet if you check the numbers you'll find a lot of people are reading.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you found this chapter so (hot). That's what I was going for :-)

I'm sure you are right...still, it's hard to know if readers are liking where I take the story without more feedback...which makes me worry. Doesn't help that this one by its nature is very strange...

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2014 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 37: K-I-S-S-I-N-G

I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy reading this story.

It is such a creative idea and I don't know how you ever came up with it!

Smokin' hot chapter ;)

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled that you're enjoying this one :-)

 

Actually Taylor initially came from a sleepover challenge...and I was wondering what it would be like if Justin was Brian's first...I tried to make that a 'reality' without changing their ages (which required weird things ...like time travel) and Taylor was born.

 

I worry a lot that this one is too weird. But I like writing it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 36: Brian and Taylor Sitting in a Tree

What an intersting look into the Brian of yesteryear.



Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 36: Brian and Taylor Sitting in a Tree

*gush* what a sweet and very pleasant surprise!

Author's Response:

I love this response!

 

I'm very happy you liked Brian's surprise :-) 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2014 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: Brian's first time (Part 1)

My bad...Justin is thinking of leaving again or I guess it would make more sense to say staying put and urging Brian to go back to the Pitts alone?

Author's Response:

He's just enjoying the break from life ... and the way he and Brian are together away from home. He doesn't want Brian to go back alone, but he couldn't exactly ask him to stay, not at first. Brian has a career to worry about, a kid, friends, a loft. He was happy and relieved when Brian agreed to stay a few more days :-) Justin has no idea what he wants, but he knows that he prefers how they are away from home. He's going to need to deal with that. Brian has become aware of the same problem. After everything they've been through, past and present, their dynamic can't stay the same, but the people in the Pitts are kind of obstacles to that. They have to find a solution that doesn't blow up Brian's life (too much).

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2014 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 35: Drinking the Kool-Aid, Part 2

All I can say is WHAT??? Not again.

Author's Response:

I'm not sure what you're responding to...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2014 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 35: Drinking the Kool-Aid, Part 2

Amazing chapter.  A lot of answers.  Hope you manage to shut down the bad guys.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I'm really happy you enjoyed this one :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 34: Drinking the Kool-Aid, Part 1

Now you get to the important questions?  I happen to agree that Nevan and them are doing important stuff.  How do you manage to keep all your on going stories straight?  I'm impressed!!!



Author's Response:

I know, I'm slow :-)

 

Awww...thanks! I don't know...my memory sucks with other things. But stories (mine and other people's) I remember.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 34: Drinking the Kool-Aid, Part 1

That last question is a good one. But I truly hope that Brian doesn't throw away everything he has worked so hard for because his childhood friends inadvertently laid a sort of guilt trip on him...he would be doing him and Justin a great disservice by doing that.

Author's Response:

He's not going to throw anything away, but he might make some changes :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 33: Robin Hood and His Merry Band of Outlaws

It's nice to know that the guys haven't just been sitting around twiddling their thumbs.  Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

I thought I was the only who used that expression ("twiddling their thumbs"). I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 33: Robin Hood and His Merry Band of Outlaws

Oh my friend we definitely need more!

Author's Response:

I guess that means you liked it...?

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2014 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 33: Robin Hood and His Merry Band of Outlaws

Wait, doesn't nevan notice/realise that 12 years later, Justin still looks 18?



Author's Response:

Yes. They all do. But they're a little preoccupied by the death threats. And it's kind of a weird question to ask in front of everyone.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2014 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 32: An 'Experience' in St. Louis

The boys little cross country adventure is starting to get a bit disconcerting.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2014 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 32: An 'Experience' in St. Louis

This is definitely my favourite story of yours! Really love the young Taylor and Brian moment, and the other friends are also full of characters which make the story interesting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2014 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 32: An 'Experience' in St. Louis

Well that was some adventure.

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2014 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 31: All My Hustlers Redux

Such a great story! I just found it and wait eager for more chapters to read.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're enjoying the story :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 31: All My Hustlers Redux

I forgot to tell you all I liked in this last chapter.  I liked the length.  And how you've brought us up on several characters and what they are up to.  I also like the fuji fighting sequence.  So cool.  While the past was nice, the future verson gets us into what's happening.  There's been a nice improvement in your writing style from where you started this story.  It's especially noticable in your lastest chapter.  I'm in this til the end.



Author's Response:

That's such a great compliment! I feel like I'm a much better writer now than I was a few years ago. It's nice that you noticed :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 31: All My Hustlers Redux

Finally caught up on this story.  When do the loose ends get tied up?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 31: All My Hustlers Redux

Fresh biscuits, I'm assuming Mary.  So is Sam going to switch sides?  And where are Stephen and ?.  They haven't been in this story in so long I've forgotten the names.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 30: The Rogue Element

Why am I not surprised. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 29B: Discovered?

So we're back to where we started seven chapters ago.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 29A: Nexus

Promises, promises.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 28D/E: Visions/Love is fear

Justin fades in and out and goes back to the present?  I know they made it to Mexico. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 28C: Playing Chicken

Oddly Justin almost mixed his past with his present or is it present with his past.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 28B: How Raf Got His Name

Now this is what I call one sweet chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 28A: The Best Day

He still needs to work on his fierceness.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 27B: Death and Sex

Could it be Gabe, Raf, and Mary?  Hopefully?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 27A: The Lucky Penny

A lot of years have past.  Can they all get together in the now?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 26B: The Search for Gabe

Oh shit.  Sam is a bigger asshole then Brian.  Tell me he isn't the mob guy that's behind this whole mess.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 26A: The Past and Present Intersect (Again)

Heading to see if they find Gabe.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 25: Sam's Out (Forest Park, St Louis)

How cruel. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 24B: All My Hustlers (Heading to St. Louis), Part 2

Okay, weren't there more people on this journey?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 24A: All My Hustlers (Heading to St. Louis), Part 1

This is so fucked up.  You do fix it I hope.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23D: Oh F***! (Chicago), Part 4

Does that mean that Taylor was responsible for Brian closing himself off?



Author's Response:

Yes. Did I just blow your mind? :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 23C: Oh F***! (Chicago), Part 3

Yes, please get Justin to open the box.  I'm dying of curiousity.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 23B: Oh F***! (Chicago), Part 2

Let's hope the doc is okay with this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 23A: Oh F***! (Chicago), Part 1

Now that was totally not fair.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 22B: Making a Break for It, Part 2 (Chicago)

If I had to wait a week for another chapter I'd go crazy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 22A: Making a Break for It, Part 1 (Chicago)

You keep teasing us and I'm wanting to know how they get out of this mess.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 21B: The Waitress, Part 2 (Chicago)

What did she tell Brian?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 21A: The Waitress, Part 1 (Chicago)

Okay, you are being mysterious and I have a feeling that the mob is involved.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 20B: On the Road Again (Part 2)

I'm like Gabe, glad that Raf made it onto the train.  Good teamwork.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 20A: On the Road Again (Part 1)

Come on, you can't just leave us like this.  Thank goodness it's already written.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 19D: Boystown (Part 16)

Tripping!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 19C: Boystown (Part 16)

Isn't that just what Sunshine did?  And it paid off. 



Author's Response:

Indeed it was...and it did :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 19B: Boystown (Part 16)

What an amazing snozzle Justin has.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 19A: Boystown (Part 16)

They are in for a wild time.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 18C: Boystown (Part 15)

They should never flirt while driving.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 18B: Boystown (Part 15)

I'm glad they found Billy, but what happens now?

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 18A: Boystown (Part 15)

Do they all end up going?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 17: Boystown (Part 14)

I hope everything works out for those involved.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 16: Boystown (Part 13), Gabe and Rafael

That was so sweet.  I felt like crying.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so. My allergies started acting up while I wrote that part.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 15: Boystown (Part 12)

Now we're getting somewhere.  Tell me you work it out so no one gets hurt.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 14: Boystown (Part 11)

Is this Hubie the right Hubie?  Though how many men are named Hubie?



Author's Response:

Not many, that's for sure :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 13: Boystown (Part 10)

So they found the right judge, now they need to find Mary.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Boystown (Part 9)

This getting better and better.  Jussy!  haha.



Author's Response:

I had TONS of fun writing this part :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 11: Boystown (Part 8)

As much as I enjoy reading about their past, I really want to know what's happening in the present.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 10: Boystown (Part 7)

Well, we know that Brian is protective of Justin and was even back then.



Author's Response:

One of my favorite of Brian's qualities :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Boystown (Part 6)

What an interesting story and slight parallel with Debbie.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 8: Boystown (Part 5)

Delightful.  Brian's accepted that Justin and Taylor are his one love.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Brian's first time (Part 1)

It's definitely HOLY SHIT! good lol. But like you, I need more ;)

Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 31: All My Hustlers Redux

So....I'm finally all caught up and all I have to say is HOLY SHIT! But, whatever happened to Dan and Mary? And why does the Mob want Gabe and Billy so badly?

Author's Response:

Is this "Holy Shit" good? You gotta give me a little more...pretty please (with sugar on top). You'll find out about Dan, Mary, Dennis, and Stephen later. Hubie is wanted because they need Hubie to make favorable rulings for them. This is especially desperate a need since the hustlers (Raf etc.) have secretly been feeding the cops info on the mob's activities in Boystown. Billy they want to control Hubie (plus he's a witness to their extortion operation).

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2014 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 31: All My Hustlers Redux

Yay this story just gets more and more interesting!! Can't wait to see how it goes. Also love the old and present Brian-Justin moments,super sweet.



Author's Response:

I can't tell you how wonderful that is to hear! I'm happy there's still enough B/J sweetness -- I was afraid there was too much of other characters in the last couple of chapters -- in future chapters there will be more B/J. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 7: Boystown (Part 4)

Oh joy!  They may not be dead after all.  Love how different Brian is in the before segment.



Author's Response:

I also love young!Brian :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 6: Boystown (Part 3)

How interest to find that Justin is the one to introduce Brian to ectasy!



Author's Response:

Yes...as well as his cherry popper --Just like Brian is to Justin in the present. There's a beautiful symmetry.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2014 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 5: Boystown (Part 2)

How sad, that Stephen and Dennis are dead. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2014 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Boystown (Part 1)

I'm glad to see that Brian realizes that he can't leave things this way.  The whole thing was a bit of a shock though, wasn't it.



Author's Response:

Yes, most definitely a shock. Once I started writing this, I realized that (if such a thing were possible) this would be the perfect explanation for all of Brian's subsequent behavior.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2014 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 3: On the road

Would Brian even be able to find Justin at the moment.  I wonder what would have happened if Justin went by his old house and saw himself.  He would have been around 6?



Author's Response:

Indeed. That would have had interesting consequences...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2014 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brian's first time (Part 2)

Brian is piecing things together.  But where is Justin in the future?  We know that he was around in the past for a while, judging by the memory of a trip to Mexico.



Author's Response:

For Justin in the past, the trip lasted more than a week ... in the present, 8 hours passed with him sleeping. Then he woke up and remembered.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2014 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Brian's first time (Part 1)

Interesting premise.  Justin finally meets the Brian he's always wanted.  How will this change things for the two of them?



Author's Response:

That's a different way to put it...honestly, I just wanted to see what it would be like for Justin to have been able to pop Brian's cherry. But you're right...and there are really interesting consequences.

Reviewer: NENA (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Brian's first time (Part 1)

THANK YOU for resuming this wonderful story! I'll wait to read it again till you finish it because I have a lot of issues about reading wip but ..........this is one of my favourite soooooo HUGS, KISSES AND KEEP ON WRITING!!! ;-)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 29A: Nexus

OH MY GOD, I want to know who the shooter is. I've been following this story from the beginning, It's a work of true genius. Keep it coming. Thanks!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 28C: Playing Chicken

i like them like this. so young, not so innocent.

what's scaring the boys? hope to find out soon.



Author's Response:

That's a great way to describe them :) I'm happy you liked the new chapters.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 27A: The Lucky Penny

A link from the past, very cool!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 26B: The Search for Gabe

I'm so glad they found Gabe and that Rafe was able to talk him into going back with them.

I'm curious as to how Justin ended up there at that time when Brian was younger as well.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 22A: Making a Break for It, Part 1 (Chicago)

I'm so glad Brian made it back ok. That was so nerve wrecking!

Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 21B: The Waitress, Part 2 (Chicago)

Holy Shit! This... is absolutely breathe takingly intense! *shiver* I love it! Especially how you flawlessly flow back and fourth through time. I SOOOOO can't wait to see what happens next! More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 21B: The Waitress, Part 2 (Chicago)

I love all the twists and turns.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 21B: The Waitress, Part 2 (Chicago)

I wonder who killed Joanie! I'm glad Brian didn't get hurt and I hope he gets back to Justin quickly!

I forgot about that box, can't wait to find out what's in it!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 21A: The Waitress, Part 1 (Chicago)

I hope this clears some stuff up for them.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 21A: The Waitress, Part 1 (Chicago)

Brian, such the charmer! I wonder what happened to Mary! Update soon!!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 20B: On the Road Again (Part 2)

I'm so eager to see what is going to happen to the past and present Brian and Justin and their friends.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 20B: On the Road Again (Part 2)

I really want to know how this all pans out and where will Justin end up/

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 19D: Boystown (Part 16)

Great chapter, so intense!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 19C: Boystown (Part 16)

“I’d pursue you as long as it took. I’d even stalk you if I had to. I’d make you see that my feelings were genuine and unwavering, and you’d be so touched that you would begin to take me seriously, really see me, and realize that we were meant to be together.”

I am shocked to say the least. I ask softly, “You’d open yourself up to who knows how much rejection and humiliation…for me?”

Taylor smiles and answers brightly, “Without hesitation.”

No truer words have been said! 

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 19D: Boystown (Part 16)

Niether did I, lol, great update.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 19C: Boystown (Part 16)

Yes I did read the whole thing in one sitting so being able to read this today was great. To be fare though I was up till 3:30am even though yours was not my last fic for the night. I get so absorbed there's no way I can stop. When it's a good fic, sleep seems so uneccesary. LOL!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 19B: Boystown (Part 16)

I have just read all of this and was shocked to see this is the last chapter after becoming so engrossed. I can't wait to see how they deal with thier high and the ongoing mysteries.

Author's Response:

Did you read the whole story in one sitting? I'm impressed (if you did).

:) :) :)

I'm almost done with the next update (work interrupted), but I should post it by the afternoon.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 19B: Boystown (Part 16)

That was a really cute chapter! Loved Justin being so intent on finding that aroma! LOL!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed it :) :) :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 19A: Boystown (Part 16)

Uh-oh! Doing acid...yikes!

Author's Response: It's all good :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 18C: Boystown (Part 15)

HA HA HA!! I was wondering who was supposed to be driving! So glad to see these updates!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed the updates, and especially the last part; I have no idea where that came from :D :D :D

Sorry about the long delay. Work was insane from Thanksgiving to Christmas. Thankfully, it's slowed down, so I'm back to regularly updating my fics :) 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 17: Boystown (Part 14)

Sounds like a love triangle between Sam/Dan/Nevan.

I hope Justin/Brian and Hubie are able to find Billy and get him to a safe place.



Author's Response:

The hustlers' relationships with one another are definitely tangled and complex :D

I'm so glad that you are stilling enjoying the Hubie/Billy plot :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 16: Boystown (Part 13), Gabe and Rafael

odd chapter. gabe's problem is more than shyness? what happened?

justin as a voyuer. interesting. brian will certainly benefit from that.



Author's Response: I assumed people would want to learn more about the new characters. Sorry if you thought this chapter didn't fit with the rest.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 16: Boystown (Part 13), Gabe and Rafael

Wow, what's going on with Gabe? It's obvious he love Rafeal. What a moment for Justin to witness.

Author's Response:

He does indeed :)

I'm so happy you found the chapter interesting :D 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 15: Boystown (Part 12)

I'm glad they found the right guy and was able to warn him. What a terrible situation to be in.

Author's Response: Indeed. You're damned if you do and damned if you don't :(

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: Boystown (Part 12)

poor billy, I hope that they can help him.

I love the way that brian is rigth now, is so sweet with justin.

 kisses



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are getting into the Hubie/Billy plot and that you are enjoying this version of Brian :) :) :)

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 14: Boystown (Part 11)

Ooh, so Hubie has arrived. Looking forward to seeing how that turns out.



Author's Response: I'm glad you are excited about the Hubie/Billy plot!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Boystown (Part 10)

They better keep a close eye on some of those boys.

Love how Brian and Taylor are on the same wavelength. Brian is thinking that he wants to show everyone who Taylor belongs to and Taylor just does it.



Author's Response:

Yes...Taylor's definitely coveted :)

I'm glad you are enjoying Brian and Taylor's closeness!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Boystown (Part 10)

i don't know. either there's going to be trouble with sam, and maybe nevan or they're going to be of help.

as for the judge, i hope they found the right one. with their luck though they probably didn't.



Author's Response: I hope you like the new characters :)

Reviewer: Maddy (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2008 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 13: Boystown (Part 10)

Im glad Brian makes sure Stephen knows to keep his hands to himself. Taylor is Brians property lol

Author's Response: Quite willing property :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 12: Boystown (Part 9)

Too funny! I know Justin wanted to scream, he's already got a bubble butt blond sweetie! Very cute seeing Justin get jealous!

Glad that got that info, now its Brian's turn to squirm while Justin tries to get the attention of those judges.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed possessive!Justin! That was lots of fun to write :) :) :)

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 12: Boystown (Part 9)

Tihi, I'm giggling like crazy right now. That was too funny.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed it!

:) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 12: Boystown (Part 9)

;ay on the kinney charm and women fall at his feet. what a life to lead,

cute chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!

Yes, indeed, the Kinney charm is powerful!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 11: Boystown (Part 8)

That was hot! I hope Brian and Justin are able to help that kid out and the Judge. They'll figure it out, they always do.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm obsessed with B/T mirror sex now :D

I'm so happy you liked the update! 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 11: Boystown (Part 8)

brian really won't let justin put himself in any real danger trying to find the judge will he?

that was an amazing sex scene. who would have thought to see from all sides how your lover looks when he's making love to you. and to have him proclaim his love. wonderful.



Author's Response:

Brian's going to do everything in his power to keep Justin safe. But Justin is his own person, and Brian respects that, so there is a limit to what Brian can do. Brian and Justin won't break up, and they won't die, but I can't really give you any more assurances without spoiling the plot...

I'm so happy you enjoyed 'mirror sex, take two.' I'm as obsessed with Brian and Taylor making love in front of mirrors as Taylor is :D 

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 11: Boystown (Part 8)

Very hot. I like the mirrors, naughty.

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed 'mirror sex, take two.' I don't know what possessed me to have them do that in the last chapter, but, since then, I've been thinking how much I liked the idea.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Boystown (Part 7)

Good chapter. I love this story so much. I hope they can help that kid.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much! It's definitely one of my favorites to write:) They're certainly going to try...

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: Boystown (Part 7)

with justin overhearing the hustler, i hope they don't get into trouble like stephen and dennis.

no matter how old these two are, they're sex is always hot.



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin may get into trouble, but this isn't a death fic, so you don't have to worry about that at least :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the mirror lovin :)

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 8: Boystown (Part 5)

Thank God you updated this! I've been having the bad feeling in my gut that the last sentence could have been a closure....

This story is one of my favorits, It's so sweet. (And Sexy as OMG)



Author's Response: yeah, I felt that way about that sentence, too (that it could have been the end), but, no, the boys (young Brian and Taylor) have to get to Texas...I can't end the story until at least then. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: Boystown (Part 6)

Brian showed him that no one messes with his man!

I loved how Brian would keep giving Justin little touches and Justin counting. 

Mary reminds me of someone else who has adopted the boys in her neighborhood. Wonder how Dennis knows her. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Indeed! That guy will certainly remember Brian until his nose heals (and then even after if it's forever changed).

I'm so happy you enjoyed the Mississippis part! It seemed cute in my head, but I wasn't sure if readers would agree.

Yeah, Mary is definitely good people :) 

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