Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2020 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 4
Mikey (or Hal) are both the most unsexy thing i can think of!
Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
This is one of my favorite stories!!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2015 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 13.3: Dirty Dancing
I'm sorry, but "I's"...not a word.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2014 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 13.2: Did aliens invade?
I love the way that Brian takes care of Justin. So sweet!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking the dynamic :-)
Reviewer: rhond (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2014 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
i love this story ,you even managed to mkae me hate mickey less , lol
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
Didn't realize that was the end of the story. It started with Mikey and ended with Mikey. Now I'm off to start on part II
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
Interesting look at it from Mikey's point of view.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 31: Circling the Wagons, Take Two
Sounds like a plan to me.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
Wow, that was some scene. Mikey is an idiot. Ben is brave. The cop was doing okay considering. Mel was fantastic. Hope she's okay.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 11
OMG! What a cliff hanger you left us with!!!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 10
Who knew Truth or Dare could be so entertaining.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 9
I smell trouble from Mikey and possibly Mel. Ben and Emmett will probably support them.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 8
They must have been a little louder than they thought if Mikey heard the Master comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 7
Funny!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 6
Ok, I think that answered my last question.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 4
One day Justin's going to go too far.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 3
Odd how your mind plays tricks on you. I had to go back to the last chapter, though I'd just read it, to check what Justin had decided to wear.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 2
They do love their games.
Author's Response: I do, that's for sure :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 1
It appears that Brian does watch soaps, if he knows what the characters look like.
Author's Response: Good catch! He tried to pretend he'd just heard about them :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 28: Aftershocks, Part 1
How long ago was that?
Author's Response: That is an excellent question. My pacing on this one was jerk-y...I'd spend 5 updates on one day and then jump ahead days or weeks. Months ago.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 5
What with everyone there I hope they closed all those shutters.
Author's Response: ha ha
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 4
Who knew Mikey was into water sports. But the truth shall set you free.
Author's Response: Indeed :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 3
Maybe now even Mikey will understand that Brian loves Justin, needs him in his life, his loft, his bed. Then again, maybe not.
Author's Response: one can hope :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 2
That's a scary thought - Justin giving Mikey a blowjob!
Author's Response: Terrifying!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 1
Truth or Dare, who would have thought. I don't blame Daph for picking Ben, anyone with brains would.
Author's Response: (nodding)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 26: From Bad to Worse, Part 2
It's nice that Mel is going after the judge and Carl is supplying man power, but will it be enough. Brian's going to be broke.
Author's Response: Good point...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 26: From Bad to Worse, Part 1
Let me guess. The judge that let Hobbs loss in the first place?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 25: Getting Back to 'Normal,' Part 2
Brian's planning a little afternoon delight and Daphne's moving in? Good thing she had to go to class.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 25: Getting Back to 'Normal,' Part 1
Darn that PIFA. Mel will take care of them I'm sure.
Author's Response: definitely going to try :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 6 of 6)
Taking in a business meeting and having fun, Brian admitted they are monogamous! Will surprises never cease.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 5 of 6)
Wow, when you do evil you do it up good. So Sap is in the mix! At least you have a witness who will testify if he knows whats good for him.
Author's Response: Yes...when I am sweet, I am really, really sweet. And when I am evil, I'm really, really evil :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 4 of 6)
Now that's what I call a picnic!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 3 of 6)
Now that's what I call a date!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 2 of 6)
Daphne took that rather well. And she got to see that Brian means it. I wonder when Justin got so well versed in bondage?
Author's Response: An afternoon (or less) on the interwebs is enough. that's how I did it :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 1)
That's a big step. I can only image how the family will take it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 23: Entering subspace
Very detailed. Master and Angel work well together.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 22: What are best friends for? (take three)
Just when things are going well Mikey has to say something to upset Brian. At least Justin handled it right.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: Brian freaks out; really, really freaks out
Emmett's welcomed at my house at any time of crisis. You can never be too harsh with Mikey, Deb, or Jen. How does Jen think she could keep Justin safe? She would have sent him off to Ethan with a cake thinking, 'He's such a nice boy and more Justin's age'. Don't even get me started on Mikey. Ben's the best! Ted is well Ted.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: Nobody puts Baby in the corner
Haha. Love Carl. Justin almost took care of Ethan, where Brian managed to control himself. Bet you Mikey is fuming because Brian turned to Ben and not him.
Author's Response: He is fuming. Carl is pretty cool here :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 19: The blame game
I like how you use Ben as a support system. That seems to me totally in Ben's character. As for Jen, she never sat right for me because she told Craig after promising she wouldn't. While it's nice that Brian says Justin wasn't at fault, Justin was right to admit to all the things that might have gotten him to this point. Something they didn't do in the show.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you're enjoying Ben/Brian!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 18: The shit hits the fan
Funny how it's not Brian's 'best friend' who gives comfort, but his 'best friend's' husband. I don't think Mikey would have been as sensitive.
Author's Response: I agree. Mikey cares too much about reputation and appearances.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: Raw
This was really HOT. I can't help but wonder how Daphne is going to take this.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 16: Angel
So now we're into bondage. Not sure how that'll go. What will Daphne say when she finds out?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 15: I need you to want me
Before they get to it, could you have them clean up the mess with the glass?
Author's Response: ha ha :-D
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 14: Uncontrollable innuendoes
Brian is actually being sensible and sweet.
Author's Response: Brian really shines in this fic...love really does bring out the best in people. well eventually :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 13.3: Dirty Dancing
Now that Daphne knows, what's she going to do?
Author's Response: I hope you are not disappointed that she didn't go on a butt-kicking spree...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 13.2: Did aliens invade?
Gotta agree with Daph. At least Justin isn't cringing or acting defeated.
Author's Response: yeah...his trauma messes with his head in other ways
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 13.1: I'm not going anywhere
That was some dream.
Author's Response: yeah...it's no wonder he woke up crying.
that actually happens some times...shocked me
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 12.2: Circling the wagons
Once Daphne finds out, Ethan will be dead meat.
Author's Response: ...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 12.1: Protecting Justin’s health
That was very smart of Brian. I hope he left a note. I'd hate to think of Justin waking up and finding himself alone.
Author's Response: yeah. that would be bad.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 11.2: Just as beautiful
Justin has got to know, deep down, that Ethan was involved. He was the last person Justin was with.
Author's Response: He knows. He just hopes it's not true.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 11: The intrepid twink who could
Sadly everything you wrote is true. Hopefully this will work out differently.
Author's Response: Yeah :-( :-( :-(
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: Brian does the unthinkable
Justin was so stupid to meet with Ethan and eat a meal with him. The police need to be involved as much as it might hurt Brian and Justin.
Author's Response: Brian will get Justin there.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 9: The twink and the sex god
You evil person. You would have to stop it there! Who would have thought that Ethan would have the balls to do whatever it is he's done
Author's Response: I have gotten pretty evil with cliffhangers...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 8.2: Round one
Ethan is sooooo delusional. Yay Emmett for helping Brian out.
Author's Response: I hate Ethan so much...I always take the bad qualities from canon and amplify them in my writing...just a warning. My Ethans are always very very dark. and stupid.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 8.1: Morning musings
So much for the game plan.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 7.6: The loft (aka truth or dare)
Love this game of truth or dare. Love the explaintion about Hobbs.
Author's Response: You will see this twice more...I decided, I, too, loved truth or dare (as a story mechanism) and cause it's soooo much fun
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 7.5: The diner
Love the way this chapter came out.
Author's Response: :D :-D :-D
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 7.4: The jeep
At least this time Mikey didn't swerve the car.
Author's Response: Well after going to all the trouble to reunite them, that would have been silly :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 7.3: The alley
What? Babylon doesn't have bathrooms?
Author's Response: I just laughed out loud :-D
Too much sex everywhere. No room for actual bathroom going :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 7.2: The stage
Now that I would have loved to see on the screen.
Author's Response: me too!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 7.1: The backroom
What a thank you. lol. I forgot to say that the letterman jacket in the last chapter was a nice touch.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that (still makes me giggle)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 6.2: Wanna go steady?
Now that was the best prom night ever. Loved it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 6.1: My Justin
Thank goodness. Now don't mess it up, Brian!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 12:23 AM · On: Pre-Chapter 6 Interlude
This might be short, but they're in the same room, lying together. That's major.
Author's Response: :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2014 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 5: The best laid plans
Wish I knew why Brian always goes out of his way to be difficult?
Author's Response: Answer that, you have the secret of the universe :-)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2014 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
Running off to start part 2... Loving this story...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: :-) :-) :-)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2014 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 11
Oh noooo... Damn that Chris Hobbs...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: :-(
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2014 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 4: My Brian
Amazing how different what Justin did with Ethan is from what he did with Brian. So much more sexual with Brian. I wonder what Brian would say if Justin told him that Mikey had an intervention to get them together. Heartattach much?
Author's Response: From my perspective, the difference lies, partly, in the fact that Justin and Brian spoke through sex. Before Brian could say what he felt, he showed Justin (and vice versa). Also...I think that Ethan was somehow demanding (in canon). He had expectations and was trying to possess Justin in ways Brian didn't. It always felt oppressive to me (as a viewer). Brian was always the breath of fresh air...love without expectation, freedom
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2014 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 2: What are best friends for? (take two)
I always thought it was wrong that nobody told Justin about the little things he knew nothing about.
Author's Response: That was actually the reason I started this one. I thought it was completely unfair.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2014 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: What are best friends for?
I love Ben. He's the one making all the sense. Hopefully this will work and Justin will finally see all the pieces to Brian's puzzle.
Author's Response: I always loved Ben (and you'll see that in this fic...)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2014 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 2
Oh I love this little game...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: He just gets better and better :-)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2014 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 25: Getting Back to 'Normal,' Part 2
I'm so loving this story...
~ Kathleen ; )
Author's Response: Yay!
Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2014 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
I made a mistake to read second part before first, but I love this one anyway. It's even better, couse I knew there will be happy ending ;).
And I'm sure I fall for Truth and dare chapters :). They were brilliant and sooo realistic. I mean... realistic for canon of course.
Thank you for this story. Now I'll be waiting for the rest cchapters of II part :).
xo
Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying this one :-)
Especially happy you found the Truth or Dare chapters aligned with canon...I try to be as realistic as possible (considering my overarching desire is to impose my will on Brian---well, and play around with B/J in wildly different contexts).
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 16: Angel
And so it begins...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
; )
Author's Response: Indeed!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2014 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
wow! I never expected a response so many years later, but am so very thrilled to hear that you are going to finish some of your WIPs!!!
Do you know whats funny? I have also taken a hiatus READING B/J fanfic and have recently been wanting to reread some of the old favorites. Your reply to an old comment is so perfect! I hope to be following along on these updates as they happen and cheer you on.
Author's Response: Serendipity :-)
I would love that!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Brian does the unthinkable
So sad... I hate that chin-rat...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Me, too...he's the villain in so many of my stories for that reason.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 7.2: The stage
Okay now that was Hot... Just like the crowd I want more...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: :-)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 6.2: Wanna go steady?
I can't get that ridiculous grin off my face either...
Loving it... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: This part was a LOT of fun to write. I'm so glad you liked it (and didn't think it was too cheesy)
Author's Response: This part was a LOT of fun to write. I'm so glad you liked it (and didn't think it was too cheesy)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
I just reread .ome of your stories, and had a few good laughs. You write comedy extremely well. I think you and Brian share the same sense of humor or are channelling him and the other characters, lol.
I reread this story because I haven't yet started reading Pieces II, I haven't really wanted to. Im scared of WIPs when they involve topics I know little about, BDsM. I dont want to start and get all wound up and confused then be left waiting for an update. I hope you update soon, because you have already written several chapters and I cant resist temptation any longer. LOL.
And just so you know (and perhaps are pursuaded *nagged* to update) I have reread your MPreg - Little Ray of Sunshine, and I think poor Justin needs to deliver soon. He's been carrying Cleo for a very long time, lol.
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment! If my sense of humor is at all like Brian's I count myself truly lucky :-)
I'm actually a million years later finishing my WIPs. July and August is all about Justin's Secret, Pieces II, and Friendship or Foreplay. September I'll start updating Taylor, Buttercup and Enigma, and either Little Ray or How Sweet It Is.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 1
Everyone but Justin gaped. They probably assumed I hadn’t done that since I was a teenager (I had to admit that this 'truth' thing, in general, was a drug all its own; making confessions that, to most, seemed completely out of character for me was a new way to shock people, and I really got off on shocking people).
This is a discovery I seriously wish Brian would make! :o)
Im just re-reading...again, lol.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
Glad Ethan and Chris got exactly what they deserved! Actually like Michal's pov and the way he came to terms with the fact that Brian does and always has loved Justin. Can't wait to see Deb's reaction to the collaring ceremony!
Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 32: Coming Back Around
Excellent summation chapter! Your writing talent really shone through...I hope you keep your implied promise and write the sequel - - Ive been following this story for a LONG time an cant wait to learn more about Ds lifestyles and how Brian and Justin remain themselves while becoming something so foreign to me, lol.
Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
Fascinating chapters on Truth or Dare & the responses of the characters to the shooters. I am enjoying this quite a bit.
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
ohhh.... wow. I could actually see all that playing out in my head. Very powerful. :)
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
Damm you go Brian, he ready love his Justin boo and by the way Chris asshole Hobb entered uninvited into Brian loft. Brian had every right to kick his ass because he fear for his life and the others.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
Wow, Brian completely snapped! Can't say I blame him, but I know how much he was afraid to become Jack. I'm just glad everyone is ok...well except Chris who got the crap beat out of him. I hope Brian doesn't get into trouble for that, it was self defense and he thought Chris shot Justin.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
ooohh noooo i want to read MORE so please update soon.
Hugs Buffytess
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
mikie holding ben back.... tripping ben.... mel out cold... LOL
glad justin is unhurt, hope brian doesn't have repercussions for beating hobbs.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 30: Face Off
wooow go brian
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 11
OMG I love this. I can't wait for the next chapter <3 soon I hope?
Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 11
What? How can you stop there? I can't stand it! Update soon please.
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 11
Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh - Evil EVIL cliffie! Naughty author :(
Please PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 11
Crap! Please update soon!!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 10
I love when they play Truth or Dare while on something. Brian messing up names is hilarious.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 9
I can just imagine the look on Michael's face!! I love Daphne's tell all description of Brian and Justin's relationship.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 8
LOL!! Well, I guess they thought they were whispering!!
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 10
I love love love your truth or dare scenes!! More soon, please!
Reviewer: LORI (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 10
Love this story. Can not wait for the next chapter. Please let it be soon lol
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 10
hilarious
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 10
Oh my god! This chapter was both hilarious and romantic. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: What are best friends for?
EEEK! Im so happy! I just finished painting my livingroom, shoving the furniture back in place and was looking for a suitable reward: and here was all your updates! ALL of your stories that I am so eagerly following have been updated recently!!!!YAY!
These last so eagarly awaited chapters are so awesome and funny and sweet! I like little vignettes of the Lives of The Wickedly Hot and Horny, (aka J&B of course!) Of the last chapter, parts had me laughing out loud:
"Mikey cried out, “Oh fuck! They’re here. Hide!” Then he ran behind the chaise and hunched down. I rolled my eyes...
...Mikey poked his head out from behind the chaise, and then, after a moment’s hesitation, he crawled back over to Ben. Ben smiled. “I was wondering where you disappeared to.” I shook my head. Acid is the great equalizer. Ben pulled Mikey into his lap and wrapped his arms around him. Mikey snuggled deeper into his embrace."
Mikey is SUCH a dork.
And other parts made me go AWWWWWW:
Then in an awed whisper, she continued, “And, you know what it says on the inside part?”
She waited a few seconds for impact, and then, still in that awed whisper, she said, “Angel, Angel’s what Brian calls Justin, ‘Angel, my heart beats only for you.’
Emmy Lou and even Linds awwed. Mel still seemed leery, but she looked less hostile, and Mikey looked so jealous; he was glaring at Justin. I turned and kissed Justin softly on the lips. Daphne sighed, “Shit if that’s what it’s like, I’d love for some hot guy to collar me!”
You and me both, Daph!
Keep 'em coming, every update is excitedly opened and read repeatedly, lol.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 1
Loved Brian and Justin's GH talk!! Too funny!!
Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 4
Four new chapters in two days! Yay. I really like this story and want to see how you cover each day of the week of their schedule...looking forward to a new chapter, soon?
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 4
Oh my god! That was ****ing hot. MORE MORE MORE. You never disappoint me. Another masterpiece. Keep up the great work.
Love ya!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 3
Oh my god girl! This is flippin excellent. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Love ya!
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Reviewer: sandy (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 2
Love it, love it love it!!! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 29: Something or Someone Is Coming, Part 2
Oh my god! I can't wait. I hope Chris and Ethan don't ruin the night. If they do, I hope Brian and the gang kicks their asses before they can do any damage. I've always wanted to see the gang whoop some ass as a group defending their own.
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Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 28: Aftershocks, Part 1
Oh my god! That's so romantic. I love that Brian is no longer afraid to show how much he loves Justin. Keep up the excellent work girl! You never disappoint! XOXOXOXOXOXO
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 5
That was hott!!
Reviewer: nazdre (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 5
OMG, so is there even a chance in hell that no one heard Brian's screams? I mean come on, that's gonna have to come up, right? I love all the recent updates. They made my day!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 5
I loved it! MORE MORE MORE I can't wait to read more. Love ya girl! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 4
Love the confessions! I can imagine the look on Mikey's face when Brian admitted that Justin topped him.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 5
I know I don't sleep and I"m beginning to believe you don't either. How else do we kick out so many chapters? : )
Author's Response: Sleeping's for suckers :D
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 4
I loved it! Keep up the excellent work! Love ya girl! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 3
Oh my god! I loved that! You never disappoint me. MORE MORE MORE By the way, how many chapters do you plan on having with this chapter? Just a matter of curiosity. Love ya girl! XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: That's so wonderful to hear :D :D :D I was going to do just one more part, but I might divide in two (I'm done with the Truth or Dare game; the rest of the chapter is Toppy!Justin). I'm writing pretty slowly tonight :)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 3
Mikey is an ass! Love Brian and Justin setting him straight!
Author's Response: Yes, he is :) I'm happy you liked Brian's response.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 2
Mikey's most embarrassing fantasy was Justin giving him a blow job! LMFAO! I don't doubt it! I always thought when they had fallen asleep he knew that wasn't Ben's butt he had his hand on...only one person had a bubble butt like that =)
Author's Response: Well...Few (if any) are immune to Justin's charms :D :D :D
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 2
Oh my god! I loved that chapter! I started cracking up at the Ben & Daphne kiss and couldn't stop. Keep it up! MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed Justin's wicked sense of humor :) :) :)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 27: Truth or Dare, Revisited, Part 1
Hee, hee, hee! I love when they play games! I can just imagine everyone's faces when Daph mentioned "soon-to-be-spouses"! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Games are certainly fun/interesting to write :D :D :D I'm happy you are liking the way this particular game is going. I'm working on part 2 now :)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 26: From Bad to Worse, Part 2
Sounds like the troops have been rounded up. I hope Chris and Ethan will be caught soon.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 26: From Bad to Worse, Part 2
This is worst to better, Brian will keep him safe...right?
Author's Response: If he doesn't, he'll be wrecked beyond repair, and he knows it. He's going to do whatever it takes.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 26: From Bad to Worse, Part 2
hope Chris and Ethan will not harm Sunshine again............... thanks and more.............
Author's Response: You are very welcome :) Well, Brian and the rest of the gang, but especially Brian, are going to do all they can to keep Justin safe.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 26: From Bad to Worse, Part 1
The judge let them out on bail?! Is he nuts!!!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: From Bad to Worse, Part 1
That is so fucked up. I love how B&J are though, it's just so ....um....right.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 25: Getting Back to 'Normal,' Part 2
thank you so much for this lovely update , I am soo looking forward to the next chapter. Hugs Buffytess
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 25: Getting Back to 'Normal,' Part 2
Well Justin gets a A+! Glad for the update!!
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