Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2011 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 44: The World Shrinks Even Smaller

Are you ever going to finish this story or has it been abandon?



Author's Response:

You know, Anon, I have several people sending me emails asking me to finish it.  So, I think I've better start thinking about it, especially since I've been recently hit with the 'writing' bug again, lately. 

And, thanks so much for expressing that the story still interests you.   Often when I stop updating a story I usually think no one else cares, until I get a comment like this one.

Thanks again.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2008 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 44: The World Shrinks Even Smaller

welcome back

great as always



Author's Response: Thank U soooo much that is soooo flattering.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 44: The World Shrinks Even Smaller

Oh no! This doesn't sound good! Almost ALL the players are going to end up at the resturant at around the same time! You need to update quick!!

Author's Response:

Nope!  That doesn't sound good at all.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2008 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 44: The World Shrinks Even Smaller

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thx, Lynn, glad 2 C someone's still interested in this one.  I will be updating Cherish III sometime today.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 43: In My Corner?

yaaaay!

Author's Response: Look like Bri got the reals rowing.

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

Oh, sorry about that 'bri and Linz' I tho U were commenting on Bri and Cynthia....  Bri and Linz LOL.

Author's Response: Correcting response to your comment, Carbon69.  I thought U were commenting on the last chapter w/Cyn and Brian.  Brian and Lindz that was funny boy!

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 41: How Was It?

nice touch with bri and linz...

Author's Response: Oh, yeah!!!!  You know when it comes to business Bri got to have his Cynthia w/him.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 43: In My Corner?

Yea, Brian and Cynthia teaming up is always a good thing! And you know Daph will be all over it. What a great plan...hitting that bastard in the place that matters most to him! His WALLET! MWAHAHAHAHA! Love it!

Author's Response:

Hi, Kat, babe.  Brian has a lot more in store for Stockwell than that... THAT'S NOT EVEN THE TIP OF THE ICEBERG (for give the cliche). 

Thank U dear, Luv 2 entertain U.  Stay w/me.... wuldn't B as much FUN w/o U.

Reviewer: lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 43: In My Corner?

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: HI, Lynn, and there will be 'more'.   Continue to enjvy.  HAv Fun... C U later LOL.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 42: Small World

OH SNAP! Hopefully she isn't working for him anymore! Update woman, I need to know what happens! LOL! You know I mean that with the utmost respect! =)

Author's Response:

Hi, there Kat, I should post tomorrow LOL.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 42: Small World

I am looking forward for see what happens next with Brian, now that Jim Stockwell's assistant is at the same place he's in. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I hope to post it tomorrow, enjoy.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 41: How Was It?

Glad to see this story updated! Brian did a great job getting them new identies, hopefully Stockhell doesn't figure it out.

Wow, so Brian and Lindsey tried to make a baby. Glad they got that out of the way, over and done with. =) I hoped she wouldn't be a threat to Ben/Brian's relationship.



Author's Response: LOL, Kat I'm so Luving U.... the FUN is back on again.  Stay/w me.

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2008 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 40: The Devereux Clan Is Born

im glad ur back

update soon

hugs and kisses mary



Author's Response: Thank U, 4 welcoming me back, Mary, and here's chapter 41, for U... hav Fun.  Will be updating again really soon.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 35: Up In Smoke

#@%*~##!

Author's Response:    Didn't know what 2 say 2 that huh!   I know da feeling LOL... rolling on da floor over here!!!!

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 30: On To A New LIfe

Ahhhh....lovely! Thanks.

Author's Response:   U welcome!  HAV FUN

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 38: To Find a Mockingbird

Oh boy! Watch out Lindsay!

Author's Response:   Yeah my girl is in DEEP CRAP....  Stockbastard... I LIKE THAT lol!

Author's Response:   Yeah my girl is in DEEP CRAP....  Stockbastard... I LIKE THAT lol!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 37: Putting The Wheels In Motion

Oh thank goodness Stockbastard didn get to the aunt! I hope he doesn't find out Lindsay knew about him going to see Melanie the day he killed her!

Author's Response:    Don't too much get pass Stkwl.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 23: Justin's Visit (Part III)

Aaaaargghhh!...Nooooooooooo!

Author's Response:   Where U been...? LOL... HAV Fun... glad U'r back.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 36: Brian and Ben Fight

Yea, Ben and Brian made up! Good to see Brian back to himself. He hit rock bottom and the only way for him to go was back up!

Now Stockbasterd is on his way to the Pitts! He better not hurt that woman!



Author's Response:   Looks like the boys were ready 4 him LOL

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 35: Up In Smoke

I don't even know if I can respond! That bastard killed two kids! What a rat bastard, he needs to burn in hell. Poor Mel and her kids. Well hopefully he will get questioned since Lindsey was told that he would be there that night.

AUGH, Michael...what an ass! I hope Ben beats his ass when he finds out that Michael took advantage of Brian and didn't want to stop when Brian told him to.



Author's Response:

  There will be some ass-beating sorry it wasn't Michael's tho. LOL...

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2008 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 38: To Find a Mockingbird

Uh oh. I hope Brian and Ben are not in the house, when Stockwell enters it. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:   Oh, NO!  They're no where near Canada.... that's Lindsay's house... let's hope she's nowhere near there when he enters LOL.  Would he hesitate 2 do to her what he did to Mel and her kids, ummm?

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 38: To Find a Mockingbird

Great chapter again.  Man i love reading this story.

Author's Response:    I g-gal so glad U still like the story.  Hav Fun

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2008 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 37: Putting The Wheels In Motion

I hope Stockwell doesn't figure out where Ben, Brian and Claire is moving to. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Ty.. more coming right up!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 37: Putting The Wheels In Motion

Loved it

 Please update soon i'm dying to know where they end up.



Author's Response:   Update coming up soon.  Hav Fun.  Luv entertaining U.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 34: The King of Babylon Slash (/) Whore

Brian is so hurt and angry right now. I hope Ben is able to get through to him at some point. And Michael is a jerk, but what else is new. Ben would have 100 freak outs if Brian and Michael got together!

Author's Response:   Ben wouldn't be the only one FREAKING OUT... Someone would have to put me in a straitjacket after I wrote the act.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 36: Brian and Ben Fight

this is good i cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thank You so much... I'm so glad U R enjoying it.... more 2 come.... stay w/me  Glad 2 hav U aboard... HAV FUN!!!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2008 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 36: Brian and Ben Fight

Man that stockwell is a crazy fuck.   I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Yes, Stockwell's WHACK!  He's OUT THERE! SCARY!@

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2008 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

Oh, sorry Anon... but the answer to the last part of your question... "Is there going to be a sequel?"  No not for either of the stories mentioned here.

Author's Response:

!@##$%%^

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2008 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

I mean it WOULDN'T  be more than 10 chapters. 

Author's Response: However if you were referring to the   At the hop the Ben/Jus story... and this point I'm not sure how many chapters that is liable to be.  There's a lot going on in that story it could be a long one maybe 20 to 35 chaps maybe... but its too early to tell at this juncture.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2008 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

hi

just curious if u dont mind me asking how long is this going to be and if ur going to do a sequel i know im a bit ahead but im dying to kno and also da same goes 4 ur b/j story



Author's Response: I can see this being approx. 45 to 50 chaps.  The b/j story?   is that Ben/Justin or Brian/Justin  I assume U talking about (Bri/Jus) Cherished sequel:  that one is going to be short.  I wouldn't say it would be more than 10 chaps.   Ty U so much 4 taking the time to comment and I hope U stayed entertained to the end.  HAV FUN above all things... Love 2 entertain U.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 35: Up In Smoke

that bastard killed mel and the twins wow this keep getting better each chapter lol i hope u make him suffer when u killed him a very long painful death worst justins death alot worst make him wish he was never born that fucking bastard i hate himmm soo mush

sry i got carriy away

i love it

 



Author's Response: Don't U dare apologize... THE MORE CARRIED AWAY U GET.... the happier I get.  Hav Fun... lots more 2 come.  Love 2 entertain U.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 34: The King of Babylon Slash (/) Whore

Poor Brian. So broken and confused. *sighs* I hope everything works out for him, Ben and Claire. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Ty U Lynn, I'm so glad U're stay w/me thru-out this story.  Thanks again.  Hav Fun! 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 33: You Don't Own Me Ben

Oooh! Brian took Eeeeeee! He needs to be careful or he'll say something he shouldn't.

Now Michael has taken a liking to Brian and is being a prick. So unlike him! =) Looks like Ben may have to reign in Brian a bit there. I feel an argument coming maybe?  



Author's Response: "I feel an argument coming maybe?".... a lot more than that, Ben ain't Justin LOL!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 33: You Don't Own Me Ben

oh man that was a good chapter.  I'll be awaiting the next.

Author's Response:   glad U like it... I plan to add more chaps tomorrow... good nite 4 now.

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

I meant 'P' not pee.... see how excited I got LOL>

Author's Response:

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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 33: You Don't Own Me Ben

ohh my dis is greatttttttttt thank u 4 updating i thought u forgot about dis one

keep up the good work

love ya

hugs and kisses



Author's Response: OMG!  I'm so glad U enjoying it .... don't worry tho.... this ONE IS MY PET PEE... wouldn't dare let this one fall to the waste side LOL.  Thx U love 2 entertain U.  hav fun.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

Hiur doing a b/b and a b/j story at the same time so I don’t kno which story 2 tell u 2 update sooner they r both fantastic really good ideas that most be hard 2 do wit the pressure of the readers on u 2 update the stories soon so yea im one of does readers annoying the hell out of u and 2 tell u 2 plz update soon BUT NOT JUST ONE BUT THE 2 STORIESThanksLove ya hug and kisses

Author's Response:

  Don't worry about it... I want these story as bad as U do!  4 a couple of years I did nothing but read here but then all the stories started sounding too much alike, and I started searching 4 something different.  There was some  that was a little different from the others.  But it seemed no one was willing to move too far from the norm... no one willing to take the RISK. 

But I wanted something different so badly I thought I'd take a crack at writing it myself.  I got some hassle at first for daring to pair Brian with someone othe than Justin but I thought what the hell, if I did a good enough story maybe I'd get 1 or 2 readers interested. 

I think what happened was one reviewer cursed me out so badly, that other readers start reading my stuff just because they felt sorry for me, and then later decided they actually like my stuff.  At first they kept saying 'it's different'.  Then I guess I roped them in with a little humor and suspense.  Well, anyway that's my story. 

 I should be rolling out updates for both stories arond about the same time.  Maybe late to day or early tomorrow.  Have fun, and thanks so much 4 taking the time to comment.  Luv 2 enterain U.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 32: Clairbria (The Brat From Hell!)

Shoes, freaking shoes betrayed Brian and Claire! I wonder how that bastard is going to use those shoes to get Brian and Claire back? Why won't he just die already!

Author's Response:

"Why don't he just die already!".... Nawwww, we got 2 give Ben or Brian (or both) the pleasure of KILLING/TORTURING  THAT DEGENERATE (putting it nicely).

 

Thx Kate,hav fun!

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2008 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 32: Clairbria (The Brat From Hell!)

Lady, do me a favor. In the movie when Julia Roberts husband found her she shot him, so when stockie finds Brian please let him beat the hell out of stockie before he kills him. Please.

Author's Response:

   Jerri U  R a woman after my own heart.... LOL... Now think about it what is Brian liable 2 do to the man WHO KILLED JUSTIN!!!!!  And to think in the manner it is believed he killed him.  Remember, Stockwell strangled Justin.  However, if you recall, he made it look like Justin's death was ten times worst, with all the many cuts, he had Rocco carve into Justin's dead body.  At this point I can't (even) imagine the fate ahead of Stockwell.

 

 

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 32: Clairbria (The Brat From Hell!)

DAMN THAT DOLL

 this was great.



Author's Response:

   Ty.... I think I'm gonna get out of town for a little while... post again 4 u guys when I return.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2008 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 32: Clairbria (The Brat From Hell!)

jesus, fucking shoes they couldnt be found in a worst time ever

great chap im loving it

hugs and kisses



Author's Response:   Ty U so much.  Hav fun enjoy and hug/kisses 2 u too.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 31: How He loved Him

Wow, Stockwell is losing what little mind he already had! Sounds like he can implode any minute now! I thought he was beyond insane before, he's losing all emotional, mental and physical control thinking Brian is dead.

OK, post the next one now =) 



Author's Response:     How, Kat, R we having fun or what?!@ Enjoy, dear.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 31: How He loved Him

OH man that was great.  I'm craving an update but i've decided that i can wait patiently.  I CAN.  No i can't please update soon.  I can tell this is going to be a long one and i'm loving every minute of it.



Author's Response:    Hi, g-gal, so glad U still having fun w/ the story... such a great audience U r.  Thx 4 everything.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 31: How He loved Him

i really like the shockwell peeing himself thing it was funny lol great work 



Author's Response:   Thanks but he'd get a lot worst in the next chapter... if You thought that was funny... U'd rofl at this one.  Luv entertaining U... stay w/me.... and Ty so much for taking the moment to comment.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 31: How He loved Him

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:    Glad U like it.  Have Fun I'm probably going out of town today... so that's probably all the update for today.  Hav a good day and ty so much for staying with me on this one.  Luv 2 entertain U.  Bye for now.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 30: On To A New LIfe

dis chap is interesting im kinda speechless bout da whole b/b fuking part sry i dont mean to sound rude i love da story and i knew.... ayyy dont listen 2 me its really early here i woke up to read dis lol im still asleep

i like it

hugs and kisses



Author's Response:    Stop apologizing I can't express how much U're making my day... love entertaining U... Have fun!  Ty 4 taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 30: On To A New LIfe

Good to see that they are safe for now. Glad they were able to find that doll and I hope the shoes won't be an issue, they've dealt enough with having to go back to Canada just to find the doll.

So, I'm assuming Stockwell's reaction to the plane blowing up comes soon?? 



Author's Response:    U're all so right... Stockwell reaction's coming up (and then some).... enjoy ty 4 always commenting.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 30: On To A New LIfe

LIKE OH MY GAWD BRIAN BOTTOMED FOR BEN.  

 I loved that.  cause in reality if it came down to brian's ass and ben's ass then yes he would be the bottom.  can't wait for the next update u rock.



Author's Response: OHHHHH, I'm soooooo glad U liked it.   Hav Fun!  U've been a great audience.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 29: Find That Doll

As they say the devil is in the details, darn that brat doll. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

       Hey! alys... don't knock that 'bratty' doll... they're would be dead if it wasn't because of that litle brat, lol. 

      I can related to your aggravation tho... she can still be the death of them.  how ironical would that b?

        

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 29: Find That Doll

MAN

THIS WAS SHORT AND THAT'S NOT FAIR.

 IT SHOULD'VE BEEN LONGER AND I NEED MORE.....I'M WAITING!!!!

 okay there's always tomorrow.  Great chapter as always.



Author's Response:          You Go, Gal... you are flattery even when you complaintng (laughter).  Another chap coming up in minutes. LOL>

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 29: Find That Doll

omg i knew that thing was ganna be trouble damn they cant go back that stockwell will be there in killed them all ohhhh now i scary for our boys and clair

great chap

im loving it soo much

 



Author's Response:

Hi, darling... thx so 4 taking the time to comment.  And esp. say ... i loving it soo much....  

I with Ben though... that can't ignore that the doll is out there, what other choice do they have.  If it just that crazy pyscho behind them maybe Ben and Brian together can handle him but like Ben said he can get Federal Agents on Brian for the kidnapping, and then the fact that he took her ovr border lines (btwn U.S & Canada). 

Have Fun dear, and stay w/me... love to entertain U.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 28: On The Run (Are We Free Yet???)

yesssssssssssss finally we see ben taking control (at least) for a little bit i love how in suspends you have kept us its exciting and scary at the same time i was sad and angry that stockwell killed justin but i guess it was neccessary for this story to work for u i dont know but it doesnt matter cuz i totally loveeeeeeeeee it im not a big fan of brian/others fanfic but u have written this so good that u have me hooked thank you for taking the time to dhared ur talent with us we have great writers in this site and we keep coming back to this sites cuz of all the amazing stories you people write for us well any thanks again i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it

 

hug and kisses

4rm mari



Author's Response:

Thank U so much that is such a beautiful commendation:  that is saying my story was exciting and scary at the same time...).  Also that although U r not a B/other fan you're are hooked on my story regardless... NOW THAT IS ONE OF THE BEST COMPLIMENTS EVER... that's the type of comment I live for (or write for).

 Regarding killing off Justin:  I cried the whole time I wrote it (tears, tears, tears).  However, J.T. death was nessary if for no other reasion but to ignite the killer instinct in Brian (if the story decides to go that route)... Brian's the good guy, and for the good guy to kill you have to have hit him pretty dern hard,

The only other person he could have killed to ignite the killer in Brian was Claire but she's more useful in other aspects to Stkwl...  like Brian said Skwl does want ever is in best interest of attaining his ambitions.

R Thx U for taking the time to comment, mush appreciated.

 

 

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 28: On The Run (Are We Free Yet???)

God this story is heating up.

 I knew it was going to be something like that with the plan but i had to read it to know because i knew tiw as going to happen and i loved the way that you put it in.   Although they are gonna get caught cause claire left the big eyed doll in the cab god i hate those dolls and this one is going to be the begining on the end.

 I love that everytime i come to this site you have updated this wonderful story.   Anywhoo keep it up cause i can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, g-gal sweetie.  Love ur comment.

 

YSp tru about the doll... like i noted in an earlier respone she's may or may not always be in B/C best interest.

And ty so much for continuing expressing U how much U like my story.  And that brings me to your story While You Were.... I've been reading evry update but 4 some reason it won't let me comment... I mean I leave a comment all the time but I check and it's not there, and the one that is there there's a lot of space behind it... which looks like U might not be able to respond to my comment.   But anyway, I really enjoy the story and have read all the updates... keeping it coming.  Great JOb.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 28: On The Run (Are We Free Yet???)

OK, I know that Stockwell planned that bombing! He was so adament about Brian being on that exact flight and not having Claire with him.

Thank goodness Ben showed up when he did and now run away people, run far far away! So glad to see these updates today!



Author's Response:

STkwl has no incentive to bomb the plane.... or kill Brian.  It really isn't Stockwell's style such an act would be HEAVY law enforcement down on him... Stkwl does what he thinks he can easily get away with... taking hundreds of people out in a plane is not an easy thing to get away with... it's almot like the LAW is going to find U.  Taking  out an indiviudal here and there like Ben or Justin is much easily to get away with, the case can go on for years before a finger is pointed at anyone.

 Alos wouldn't stockwell want brian and claire dead?  Why keep Claire alive?  She's only useful if Brian's alive.  Remember Claire is Stkwl palm against Brian.... she's a catalyst to say.... the control switch. 

Brian's been more defiant than ever since Justin's death, Stkwl may have been adamant about Brian getting on the plane without Claire just to show Brian how much power and contol he has over Brian's life.  Turing up the volume.  Watch you step Brian, I hard all the cards!

 

 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 28: On The Run (Are We Free Yet???)

I hope Brian, Ben, and Claire can get away from Stockwell in time! Great chapter.

Author's Response:

At this moment the world (incl. Stkwl) belives B/C are dead (casualties of the plane blowing up).  Just as long as STkwl believes they're DEAD.... they're HOME FREE!  Pretty much like the Julia R. version.... she was alright until her hubby suspected she was alive (same case here with Brian and Claire.... as long as Stkwl believes they're okay)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 28: On The Run (Are We Free Yet???)

WOW! Perfect how Ben shows up, but also he know about stockwell. Now hopefully they'll get away. Will the cops be able to pin the plane bomb on stockwell? Hopefully stockwell won't think that Brian is still alive.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Alys, glad U comment... ty.  Hav Fun

Everyone, re the bomb:  Stockwell did not bomb the plane ( if the plane was even bomb, could very well be another reason the plane blew up)

1.  It wouldn't make sense for Stockwell to set a bomb for severals reasons:
1 In his own distorted way he's in love w/Brian  (poor Brian)
2 Stockwell might only kill Brian if he left him (like the case is now.  if stkwl ever find out B/C are alive he'd want the dead now, however he had no reason to want them dead before)
3 Had Stockwell bombed the plane wuldn't he had wanted Brian and Claire on the plane (What use is Claire to him w/outBrian... Claire is only a catalyst to control Brian. If Brian's dead... Stkwl has no use for Claire)

2. So now you ask why was Stkwl so adamant about Brian being on the plane and leaving Claire behind:

 1 Sinces Justin's death, Brian has become more defiant than ever, so stkwl feels he's got to turn the heat on Brian (show him
  who's the boss so to speak... what better way then to dispay to him that he can separate Brian and Claire any time he so pleases, and for any reason.


2 Stkwl's HORNY as Hell... He hasn't had sex with Brian since the day Justin's body was found. it's been weeks.  You may be inclinded to think because Stkwl is so evil he cheats (may have been the case w/ex-lovers) but there's no indication that he cheats on Brian.  Bottomline: Stkwl is obsessed with Brian.   Recall Ben told Brian that all his other boyfriend when they decided they wanted go, Stkwl just let them go.  But he cant  seem to do the same with Brian (he keep referring to Brian as his property).

3. Stkwl may or may not suspect Brian thinks he killed Justin but if he thinks Brian suspects, they wuld be another reason why he would want to sep. B/C to say what I did to Justin I could very well do to Claire if you get out of line.
       

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 25: Wake

YAY

 HE'S GONNA RUN.  Will it be like in the movie.  That doll is getting on my nerves but you say it's a big part.  what will he do.  will he leave the doll and that will be proof of claire's death because she never goes anywhere without that doll.  that's what i would do.  well can't wait.  i love that you update regurlary.  so i'll be sitting here by the screen waiting to see what happens next.

keep it up love the chapter.



Author's Response: "Will he leave the doll and that will be proof of claire's death .... Gal.... I'm insulted (LOL).... DO YOU THINK I WOULD BE THAT PREDICTABLE!  Naw, you are way off.   Looks like someone is going to be Surprized!   HAV FUN I am loving U so much rite now!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: Wake

So Brian figures that Stockwell killed Justin. I'm glad he realizes just how crazy and dangerous that beast is.

And what a twist, Ben dated Stockwell when he was a teen! So he knows very well how much of a maniac Stockwell is. I wonder if he will try to help Brian and Claire get away. 

Great updates! 



Author's Response: Stay tuned.  Ty 4 always Being such a great sport.... more updates 2morrow.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 23: Justin's Visit (Part III)

Oh no! That bastard hurt my Justin! I had a feeling he would do something like that, but its still hard to see. Brian needs to get away from that animal now!

Author's Response: Kat, I cried while I wrote it. 

Reviewer: Henny71 (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 23: Justin's Visit (Part III)

You have got to update.  How is Brian going to react when Stockwell tells him.

Author's Response: Coming right  up!  OH, and ty U so much 4 taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 23: Justin's Visit (Part III)

oh shit!! adore this story, please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Oh My God!  I don't know what kind of reviews to expect now lOL... ty 4 commenting...

Sicnerely, that hurt me a lot more than it hurt you (tears, tears, tears,)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 21: Justin's Visit (Part 1)

Uh oh. Brian and Justin better be careful. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

I think we all should be praying right about now!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 21: Justin's Visit (Part 1)

omg wat a fucking bitch i hate her how is she going to snoop like that i loveeeeeeeeeee this , im sooo excited lol

great job



Author's Response: Thank U so much esp. 4 taking time to comment.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: Justin's Visit (Part 1)

That Bit&%! What a cow that Ellen is. To save her own ass she rats out Brian. I hope nothing happens to Justin!

I'm glad Justin figured out that those letters were fakes. All hell is gonna break loose when that fool gets back from his business trip! 



Author's Response:

"All is gonna break looose.... U can say that again.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: Here's In Your Eye!

My jaw was on the ground practically the enitire time I read this. I was so happy when Brian and Claire ran away and then bam they got caught! Poor Brian!

Author's Response: Maybe there's a great escape somewhere in there future LOL!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 21: Justin's Visit (Part 1)

Damn that Ellen.   Why did she have call stockwell and Brian didn't even tell she was sick.  Such a bitch.  I'm glad Justin's there but i get a feeling that he might get his ass kicked right along with Brian.

Author's Response:

Poor Boys!

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2008 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 21: Justin's Visit (Part 1)

Sense this is a Ben/Brian story and major character death, may I assume that Justin is the one that dies.

Author's Response: Aww... you have 2 hang in there and find out LOL!  Have Fun... Stay w/me LOL.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2008 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 19: Iron Wall (Stockwell's Mansion of Horrors)

HI

IM NOT A FAN OF A BRIAN AND OTHERS FANFIC,BUT SOMEHOW YOU HAVE ME HOOKED ON THIS. GREAT WORK, LOVE IT



Author's Response:

YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY!!!!! MORE CHAPS COMING UP SOON!  (TODAY)  LOL!   ONE MILLION HUGS AND KISSES 2 U.  HAV FUN.

 And thank you so much 4 taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2008 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 19: Iron Wall (Stockwell's Mansion of Horrors)

I'm so disgusted! This animal is using a taser and beating Brian so badly he ends up in the hospital. And sending Claire away for two weeks scarying Brian to death. He is really trying to break his spirit, but I hope Brian remains strong and tries to get him and Claire away from that...man doesn't seem to fit Stockwell.

Insane:

Definition:  Afflicted with or exhibiting irrationality and mental unsoundness. Synonyms:  brainsick, crazy, daft, demented, disordered, distraught, dotty, lunatic, mad, maniac, maniacal, mentally ill, moonstruck, off, touched, unbalanced, unsound, wrong Idioms:  

around the bend, crazy as a loon, mad as a hatter, not all there, nutty as a fruitcake, off, off one's rocker, of unsound mind, out of one's mind, sick in the head, stark raving mad

 

Yep, sounds like Stockwell to me! Glad to see so many updates today, I should have been in bed an hour ago! lol!



Author's Response: Sweet dreams... I truly mean that... U such a terrific audience Kat.  Good nite.  More updates tomorrow.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2008 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 18: Trapped

So he's using the threat to send Claire away to keep Brian in line! Poor Brian being cornered like that.

That Stockwell is an animal! He calls Brian worthless, but he is pathetic...only way to find and keep a man is by being a bully.  



Author's Response: My gosh!  Did I write this crap!  Oh bro, I hope I mentally stable LOL!  I think I'm going to take a Valium before I go to sleep tonite.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2008 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 17: Compromise

"I won't settle for you being my Ike and I'm damn sure won't be your Tina"

What a line! Although I wouldn't mind seeing Brian kicking Stockwell's ass like Tina finally did to Ike.

See, the wheels are turning in Brian's head now. That instinct is picking up that all is not right with his situation.

Good for him questioning Stockwell about everything and holding his own against that control freak. I can't believe he said he was uncomfortable with Mel watching Claire because she was a lesbian. That is just how CRAAAAZY that bastard is! 

Aaron seemed like he wanted to admit to Brian about the mail. I know his lying husband won't tell the truth.  



Author's Response: Kat U had me laughing so hard it taking me longer to type this response than typing the whole story.  "Although I wouldn't mind seeing Brian kicking Stockwell's ass like Tina finally did to Ike"... well, if my story ends like the Julia R. version, Brian will do a lot more than that!    ...as for Brian holding his own against Stockwell,  don't forget.... "Claire having her usefulness"

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2008 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 19: Iron Wall (Stockwell's Mansion of Horrors)

I swear that guy is insane.  The guy in the movie was insane but this guy is INSANE.  am i insane cause i'm loving every minute of it.  I so hope that Ben gets him and beats the shit of him.   i can't wait for the next update. 

Author's Response: Is there a condition worst than INSANE because we haven't touched the iceberg yet.  Let's put it this way in the next few chaps... Steven King and Alfred Hitchcock are going to be proud of me.  LOL.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2008 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 19: Iron Wall (Stockwell's Mansion of Horrors)

Poor Brian. I hope he can get out of the situation with Stockwell soon. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Ty, Lynn.  Hav Fun!  Working on the next few chaps as we speak.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2008 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 18: Trapped

OH MY GOD THAT GUY'S CRAZY!!!!

 

i'm so loving this god i can't wait for the next installment you have pulled me in and i can't escape.



Author's Response: Gal, U don't know... I started going back from beginning to current chapter reading this stuff myself... and I'm starting to worry about my own  DEVIANCE... I wrote this CRAP!  Should I worry that I might be a PSYCHO mine ownself... LOL.  Hav Fun!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2008 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 16: Beauty, Meet Your Husband... The Beast!

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Hi, Lynn glad 2 c u r still w/me.... here's 2 more chaps 4 u.  Hav Fun

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 16: Beauty, Meet Your Husband... The Beast!

Wow! You totally caught me off guard with this one! Incredible twist with the sort of "rape".

Stockwell keeps learning that Brian is no one to mess with. And thankfully Brian has finally seen that Beast for what he is and now plans to get away from him.

I felt so horrible for Claire, that man is so nutty having her taken away from Melanie's to be ignored for two weeks.

I hope Brian realizes and starts to piece together that his husband is a total nut job and control freak. Keeping him on a secluded island with no phone, that man is beyond scary.

Thank you for dedicating this chapter to me and you are so welcome for the title, I feel so happy to have made such a contribution! =)



Author's Response:

ty U so much Kat.  I'm glad U were please w/the chapter considering I dedicated it 2 u.  It would be just horible if U didn't like it LOL.  And I figure everyone would think before they read the chap that Stockwell was going to be the rapist (and I sort of fear so people didn't want to read Brian being victimized tht way.. and might not even bothering to read it what less have the chap dedicated to them GLAD THAT WORKED OUT ALL RIGHT.... but U R a superb audience anyway.  I noticed you keep an open mind about things.  I just LUV entertaining U and hope U stay entertained thru out the story.  Hav fun.).

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 16: Beauty, Meet Your Husband... The Beast!

i'll be honest i was well prepared for the raping of Brian.  I'm so happy that was not the case.  I so can't wait for brian and ben to be together.  Boy that stockwell an ass.

Author's Response:

Brian got 'em didn't he LOL~  Forgive me 4 taking so long to responsed.  My monitor died.  I had to wait until my brother got home from his night job to get an old one from him that he don't use any more.

I rufly est. the B/B Union to take place after the next 5 or 6 chaps.  Pretty much it starts around about the time Brian's does the Julia Roberts death thing... but mind U there won't be any water or ships in this narrow escape. 

HINT:  KEEP YOUR EYE ON THE DOLL!

Believe it or not she doesn't keep making her little appearances throughout the story just for "cuteness effect".

She actually serves a purpose (several purposes) that may or may not always be in B/C's best interest.

Stay w/me and have fun.... Oh, and by the way, I'm really enjoy your While U Sleep story.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Honeymoon's Over

Wow!...i am really enjoying this...and i can't wait for Ben and Brian...BRING IT ON ALREADY! heh heh!

Author's Response: T.U. so much... I haven't heard from U in so long... I tho I lost U... glad 2 C U R still w/me  ENJUY... HAV FUN

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Honeymoon's Over

Uh oh. Brian is going to learn that Stockwell is completely different person now. *sighs* Looking forward in finding out what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: thank U so much Lynn... I'm working on it... won't be long now.  Hang in there with me.  Hav fun and ty so much 4 taking the time to comment regularly.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Honeymoon's Over

WHAT

ARE YOU NUTS?

YOU JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!

how did he find out that he was different

what did he do?

how am i to make it thorugh my day without knowing.

update like now. this was fantastic.



Author's Response: Oh, my gal.... I am so LOVING U this moment.  Hang it there w/me.  Coming sometime tomorrow I promise.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Honeymoon's Over

Go right ahead! LOL!

Author's Response:

LOL... that's funny .

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Honeymoon's Over

Beauty meet your husband...the Beast! You are really scaring me with the "but she's useful, and can serve a particular purpose if it ever came to that" sentence!

I just sat here and read all 15 chapters in one sitting. This is such a great story and I'm so anxious to see what happens next! 



Author's Response:

Girl am I loving u R what?.... "Beauty meet your husband... the Beast!.... MIND IF I BURROW THAT loL????

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 13: Always Leaving

You really know how to make my blood boil! LOL! That rat had those schools reject deny Brian's applications! How can he say he loves him with a straight face knowing that he keeps doing things to hurt him. Wait, I know because he's a crazy bastard!

Justin, get out of town soon! If he or Ben are there when One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest returns to town it won't be good! 



Author's Response:

Oh, yeah.... Stockwell's one dangerous (I don't think I can think of a vocabulary word at the moment!.).. Read on  HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: Do You Love Me?

Yes, Brian is picking up on the crazy thing! I really hope that his instincts start to kick in.

That Stockwell is a scary man, so crazy that he would use Claire as levearge to control Brian! 

I don't think my heart can take much more.  



Author's Response: Don't have a heartache on me now!  LOL

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 11: Slow To Move

Stockwell meet Brian Kinney! I'm glad he's still the no b.s. Kinney we all know and love.

I'm so happy this blew up in Stockwell's face and oh wait until he finds out two things he planned didn't go his way that day. 



Author's Response: Oh!  Didn't crap back fired on him TWICE lol.  Read on... hav fun  Thx Kat

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 10: Fallen Valedictorian

I'm so digusted with Stockwell, I can't even say anymore.

 



Author's Response: Ummmmm.... read on. LOL

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 9: Trouble In Paradise

Oooooooooh boy! Here we go!

Author's Response: LOL.... go read on.... HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 7: Don't Do It

That scumbag is up to something. He wants to keep Brian legally attached to him. He knows that once Brian is 18 he won't be able to "keep" him.

Author's Response: Watch out Kat!  One might think deviant minds think alike .... Just joking lOL.... Read on.... hav fun!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 6: Don't Touch Him

That bastard! He's nuts, got jealous of Melanie hugging Brian. Fatal Attraction anyone!

And I know he had something to do with Joan and Jack's death, he has more than enough money to make it happen. Bastard! 



Author's Response:

J/J death... might be the only thing he's innocent of but you can bet he'll work it in his favor tho.   Read on... Hav fun... ty Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 4: All That Your Heart Desires

What is the scum going to do to Claire?! He's so twisted, turned Brian into a Stepford boy.

Yes, that man is obsessed and that never turns into a good thing. Keep the bunny rabbits and boiling pots of water away from him! 



Author's Response: Psycho on the loose... might make the "Kip Thomas" in my previous stories look like the easter bunny.  LOL, read on.... Thx Kat.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Last Delivery of the Day

How sweet is Brian and Claire's relationship in this story!

That Jim Stockwell doesn't waste any time does he. I don't trust that man. 



Author's Response: Ahhh! I love that you're sweet onthe B/C relationship... and such good instincts about Stockwell.  Hav fun,  read on.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

This Stockwell guy sounds like he's gonna be a creep! So there is a major attraction between Brian and Ben, but Michael is in the picture. Hmm...sounds veeeeery interesting!

Author's Response:

HEY! KAT!  I didn't know you were on board, welcome!  Hav Fun as usual.  Read on my dear have fun.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 14: Wedding Day

Oh man do you know what your doing to me?   You an awesome writer and these updates are killing me.   when will ben and brian be together?   oh man is he gonna kill claire.   i can't wait.

Author's Response: LoL, Galesgal... as much as I would like to put you out of your misery... I have to ask U to just hang in there w/me and enjoy the ride (but one hint: I did say in the summary this is a Ben/Brian story LOL!)  Enjoy .... FUN Ahead!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 14: Wedding Day

Uh oh. Stockwell is so scary. Brian better be careful. Looking forward in what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, Lynn... I'm trying to built up the nitty-gritty LOL!  It's getting closer LOL! Have Fun

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 11: Slow To Move

This story is so great.   I can't wait for Ben and Brian to get togehter, they are right?

Author's Response: Hi, Galesgal, I'm so excited U like the story... stay/w me and HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2008 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 11: Slow To Move

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: LOL, hav Fun... don't look like Stockwell will be able to victimized Brian as easily as the guy did to Julia Roberts LOL!  (he's got a real fiesty one on his hands LOL!)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2008 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: Fallen Valedictorian

Jim Stockwell needs to be stop! Oh this is getting good. *g* Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Hav fun!  Next chapter to download in a few minutes.

Reviewer: Chelly (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2008 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 10: Fallen Valedictorian

Wow!  That Jim is one crazy ruthless SOB.  Brian and Claire are in danger.  Brian is going to be so upset about what's about to happen to him regarding school.  I know he's going to use his wits and realize what Jim is really about.  I hope he and Claire can get away from him safely.  Is that what you have planned, BW?  Are they going to fake their deaths like Julia Roberts did in "Sleeping With The Enemy?"  OMG!  I can't wait until U post the next chapter!

Smooches!



Author's Response: Hav Fun there Chelly.... the DEATH THING you're going to be amazed LOL!  It's already written.  The next chapter is being loaded in a few minutes.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 9: Trouble In Paradise

This story is fantastic i can't wait for the next part.  Keep it coming i'm glad that it looks like Brian and Ben are going to be together.  I so see that in my mind alot they both are tall, and handsome, and well on the show they did sleep with eachother.

Author's Response: Well, flatter me.... thank U so much... I'm so glad U are enjoying it.  Hav Fun.. Thanks 4 taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Chelly (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2008 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 9: Trouble In Paradise

This story is so "Off Da Chain!"  I can't wait to read more.  Will U be updating soon?

Smooches!



Author's Response: Ty U so much , Chelly, I'm so glad for readers like yourself who keep such an open-mind when it comes to a story.  AND OH, YEAH, ANOTHER UPDATE WILL BECOME FIRST THING TOMORROW!  Enjoy Hav Fun!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 6: Don't Touch Him

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad U like it thx so much .... hav fun!

Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

Just asking do you think you will ever do a justin and ben story because I do adore ben just not with brian and I personally feel that justin and ben have so much more potential and possibility.

Author's Response:

Hi, Kay.... Justin/Ben????  I'm not sure if I got a J/Ben story in me, other than J/Ben being very close brothers but not lovers.  I'm working on two such stories.  One where although they're brothers they spend a lot of time touching each other, and end up in the same bed together but only platonically.  Like they might sit up in bed talking together, or comforting one another, or something and hugged up while they sleep but no sex between them.   

Also, I have another story where Ben/Jus are stepbrothers and Justin is in love with Ben but Ben won't return the affection and later Justin meets Brian and forgets about Ben but Ben doesn't approve of the relationship between Jus/Bri because he simply thinks Bri is too old for Justin.

At this moment however, I don't have a story in me where Jus/Ben are actually lovers.   However, when I finished the two stories that I'm working on maybe the passion to do a story where they are actually lovers might grow... but so far it's not there... but I wouldn't completely write it off... I try to do a variety of different types of story... I'm not one to write the same story over and over.

Thankyou for asking and I hope the passion hits me one days so I can accomodate you.

Reviewer: Chelly (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 6: Don't Touch Him

Thank U 4 updating so quickly!  This story is getting really interesting.  I love it!

Smooches!



Author's Response: Ty U so much , continued to enjoy and ty again for always taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

Very different, and i like it. as much as i yearn for brian and justin, and cant wait to see where this story goes.  very well written and i like the characters. please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm just loving U guys LOL!  Next update coming soon!

Reviewer: BRIANsGIRL (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2008 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

I love the story. It's different than the usual fics. =) I'm curious when B and B will meet again.

Author's Response: Ty U Brian's Girl... I guess it is more than 2 Ben fans at the site after all.  Hav Fun and Enjoy!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2008 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Old Flames

I like this fic. Looking forward for more. *g*

Author's Response: Hey! Lynn!  Double thx... one for taking the time to check it out, and 2 for liking it.  Hav Fun!  I should be updating Cherished soon.

Reviewer: Chelly (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2008 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy

OMG!!!!  I love this story!  Can U update real soon?

Smooches!



Author's Response: Ty so much.... no one else was commenting so I was so if anyone liked it.  Thx you so much 4 taking the time Chelly.

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