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Reviews For Red River
Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 06:15 PM · On: Red River

Nice, please make a sequel, like Brian's reaction or the gang.

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 02:24 AM · On: Red River

Thank you for writing this. It is almost a journal of how I was feeling three years ago. I can see something like this happening to Justin and it almost did happen to me. It's a great story.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 05:16 PM · On: Red River

I am not surprised that you of all people could manage such beauty from such sorrow, the words describe the pain so well it hurts. First MCD I have ever read and it will b the last unles you write another, love you.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it Sissie, enough to even read it even though it's out of your genre. I can't say that I will ever write another MCD but obviously I shouldn't say that it will never happen, as I said I would never write one in the first place. lol. Thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Red River

I think this was very well written and so very sad.  I think you captured the feeling of despair brilliantly although you could have maybe made the story a little longer. Good job - thanx.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the story. I was feeling really extreme when I wrote this and I'm glad you got the intense feelings. Writing this wasn't really a plan so I'm sorry it came out so short. Thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Ruby (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2008 09:12 PM · On: Red River

eh, even though justin had feelings of inadequecy i dont think that was enough motivation for him to kill himself.  I dont mind a suicide fic, but it was really ooc and i think justin would need another push for him to go over the edge like that.  also i would have liked it better if you explained the physical pain he was going through, the fic was too short for me to get into it and sympathize for justin.

Author's Response:

Well people get to the place where they would kill themselves over different things. You can't know what would bring someone to that place because everyone is different. I'm glad you gave it a chance even if you didn't like it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2008 06:44 AM · On: Red River

hated it. sorry that it was painful to see brian with another, but that wasn't the answer.

Author's Response: I think you missed the quote at the end,

“Suicide is not chosen;

it happens

when pain exceeds

resources for coping with pain.”


Suicide isn't the right answer to anything but at the time when someone does it, it's the only answer they see. Plus I was just exorcising my demons in Justin. So I don't mind that you hate it.

Reviewer: TayTay4936 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2008 04:13 AM · On: Red River

Wow. You actually wrote a one-shot!!! It was tragically beautiful though. I loved it!

Author's Response: I know, I'm so impressed with myself. hehe Glad you liked it.

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