Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2019 06:20 PM · On: A New Family
great story, crazy but great
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 03:50 PM · On: A New Family
Lovely feel-good QAF, a la Overboard, story. Well done! If the urge to write more in the QAF verse strikes, a sequel would be welcome.
Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2015 09:29 PM · On: A New Family
This was soooo nice! Thank you very much! So sweet and funny, thanks again!
Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2015 08:08 PM · On: A New Relationship
Go, Jay, go! This ist cool! Love ist :-) Of to read the next chapter ...
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 02:14 PM · On: A New Family
Awesome! I liked the movie... at least, it had it's moments. Although she had it coming... and the ending was fast, here and the movie. I thought it was great and I would be more than happy if you ever did a sequel.
I kind of remember reading this story before, I think, but it was a long time ago when I first discovered MW... so if you find I've reviewed this before, then you'll know I liked it twice as much. :)
Cheers, Laura ;)
Author's Response: Howdy Laura!
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story. Overboard was a great movie and I loved writing Duplicity, so thank you for reminding me. *grins* I read all your reviews and wanted to send you a hug for all your kind words.
Hugs!
Rena
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:55 PM · On: A New Surprise
That makes more sense. I kind of figured something like that... but wasn't sure. I think I can see what's coming, but I have to keep reading cause I don't care how it gets there, I have to know how it ends and where you take us on this incredible journey. :)
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:15 PM · On: A New Relationship
Okay, first I feel really bad for Justin, and Brian is an idiot and asshole. However, no matter what the story is like we all know that Brian has a heart of gold and he was meant to be with Justin. Finding out the background story on Justin will be interesting, so I'll definitely keep reading. But I gotta say that Justin's dealing with Brian being out when they should be married... I love it! No matter the circumstances I could totally see Justin doing that! And he would be an absolute natural with kids, especially boys. I love it and I look forward to reading more.
Cheers, Laura :)
Reviewer: valell50 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 01:30 PM · On: A New Family
Your amazing stories have given me joy and hope during a very difficult time of my life. Thank you so very much!
My mom’s death was very hard then I was struck by a car on June 4th of 2008 which led to multiple surgeries but resulting in my not being able to return to work. Then August of 2009 I end up having chest pains and had 2 stents put in. Now I am looking at by-pass surgery.
I discovered Queer as Folk that summer of 2008 and have read QAF fanfiction while mostly bed-bound. I just discovered your amazing BDSM based and other stories. They have given me smiles, out loud laughter, tears and hope. I hope you continue to share the beauty of your QAF worlds with those of us who love it so!
Thank you for helping me escape and survive with your writing filled with love!
Valerie Shoucair
Author's Response: I am glad you have enjoyed my stories and it is nice to hear that reading them has provided you with some respite during difficult times. Thank you for your words and I hope your situation improves.
Hugs!
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 10:59 PM · On: A New Family
Such a sweet story, I really enoyed it! Thanks for sharing :D
Author's Response: Thanks, hugs Rena.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2010 08:11 AM · On: A New Family
What a wonderful story. Not too much angst, happiness instead of hate...very refreshing and a true pleasure to read. I really, really enjoyed and it was well written. Thanks for sharing this!
Author's Response: Hey Bigdog! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was really fun for me to write. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 01:12 AM · On: A New Family
I absolutely loved this story. It was completely perfect. I haven't checked if you did a sequel yet, I'll be doing that next. But if you did=YAY!!!, if you didn't=Please do! lol! anyway, fabulous job and great writing! :)
Alyse
Author's Response: No sequel to date. I'm not gonna promise to do one, but I might...just depends on when the muse strikes. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for reviewing. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 09:56 PM · On: A New Relationship
You tell him Daddy J! You are a spectacular writer. I'm enjoying myself immensely. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry I was so long in responding. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 01:20 AM · On: A New Family
Glad the family stayed together!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the story, Kat. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2008 09:31 PM · On: A New Family
Perfect! God, what a great chapter and a smashing ending! I loved it! I loved how they had a fun Christmas morning with the boys and went off on a romantic New Years Eve together. Slow dancing to a faster beat, so romantic. “Hey, Ethan.” BAM – That was perfect! HA! I love that part, and the way Justin went off on them both. So richly deserved! Glad Mr. Mathews was keeping an eye on Ethan, just in case and that he cared so much about Jay er Justin he’d help him face his feelings for Brian. “Good, because I’ve already started legal proceedings against Mr. Kinney.” Yikes, heart attack time! This chapter sure packed some emotional punch, including the dramatic way Brian barged in when Justin was so devastated - Great stuff. You did Annie and Dean proud. Thank you so much Rena for creating this jewel of a story and sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Hey Armand! I'm glad you liked the way I ended this one. I was really trying to capture the feelings I was left with as I watched the ending of the movie. Thank you for all your wonderful comments! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2008 05:42 AM · On: A New Past
Loved overboard! Great story! I really enjoyed reading your imagination. Keep writing! Shelly
Author's Response: Thanks Shelly, I have a few stories I'm working on at the moment. I hope to hear what you think of those. *grins* Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: trenice (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2008 04:04 AM · On: A New Past
That was more than a little rushed. You don't get to have your life size chocolate chip cookie if you don't make a sequel. Now go to your room because you are grounded until you update. ^_^
Author's Response: Hey trenice! I realize this was rushed, but as I said so was the movie ending. It's so much harder to write something out when you're going for a movie effect. *grins* I'll think about doing a sequel at some point as I loved this universe myself. I've got a lot on my plate right now, but we'll see what we can do, so keep my cookie safe. *winks* Thank you so much for commenting...it really means a lot. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 04:07 PM · On: A New Family
sequel, sequel, sequel please. such a lovely and beautiful story. thanks
Author's Response: Hey thess, I'll think about it, but the movie didn't have a sequel...hehehe. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2008 04:44 AM · On: A New Memory
Woo hoo! What a hot Christmas Eve!
Author's Response: Thanks Armand. Glad you enjoyed. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 09:35 PM · On: A New Memory
I just adore this story! Brian and Justin are just so happy right now. I wonder how Justin is going to react when he finds out he's a puppet in his life, with others pulling the strings. I can't imagine he'll be happy about it. I do have to admit that I appreciate his lawyer looking out for his best interests. Knowing that Ethan is a scumbag and gold digger. Loved how Brian came to have all those kids and learning about his history. Looking forward to the next update!!
Author's Response: Hey Kat! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I was worried that I wouldn't be able to pull this off. Thanks for leaving a comment. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 02:07 PM · On: A New Memory
They are so cute together...and hot. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie! I'm glad you liked this chapter. I really loved writing it. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 09:48 AM · On: A New Memory
wonderful chapter. how slick of brian, "I’ll have you know that I could have had this thing assembled hours ago. I was just waiting so we could do it together.”
brian topping him was so hot. it was about time.
Author's Response: Hey sjmpets! I knew people would like Brian being on top. *grins* I'm glad you liked this chapter and thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 09:08 AM · On: A New Memory
Hi. first: I love so much the story. second: is great have brian be bottom for justin for so long jijiji I have to say in the begining I thought that brian did is realy selfish but then when jstin became so close to the kids and so happy with his "family" just nothing seem wrong to me anymore. I love his lawyer because he hate ethan jiji and is realy nice of him to let him be happy with brian I hope that justin dont be so mad with brian when he know the truth. kisses
Author's Response: Hey kayitt! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. I have loved writing every word of it. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 07:41 AM · On: A New Memory
So sweet and romantic. Thanks and please update soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thess. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 05:01 AM · On: A New Relationship
LOL! Brian surely didn't know he brought a tiger home! He thought Justin was just gonna play Susie Homemaker...think again big guy!
Author's Response: You're right Kat. He thought he was getting cheap labor...hehehe. thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 04:43 AM · On: A New Home
Oh man! What a thing for Brian to do to Justin! Question: How did Brian know Justin was gay? I know he was found in an ally, was it on Liberty Avenue?
Author's Response: Yeah he was found on Liberty Avenue. *grins*
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 01:05 AM · On: A New Memory
oK, That was hot! More please.
Author's Response: Thanks Gina! Hugs!
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 05:54 AM · On: A New Surprise
I love their “tra-gitions!” Poor Brian, feeling guilty because Justin may have a family that is missing him. (You should have thought of that when you started this, Mister! -No, I can’t be mad at him because this has been so great for Justin and shudder ETHAN shudder was the alternative.) “I just want to make sure that I’m doing the right thing by keeping Mr. Taylor out of New York and away from Mr. Gold.” You so are Mr. Mathews! You so are!
Author's Response: Hey Armand! I'm happy to see that you agree with Mr. Mathews. It seems that Jay has lots of people making decisions for him...I hope he handles that news well. *grin* Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:57 AM · On: A New Surprise
I wonder what Brian's reaction is going to be once he finds about Justin. That's going to be shock. Justin's lawyer is doing him a favor by keeping him away from Ethan, what a greedy slime. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie, I hope you like what happens next. I really appreciate all your comments. Thanks. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 06:06 AM · On: A New Surprise
Well that was a turn of events that i didn't expect. I really hope for a happy ending! poor Gus, he's been tramatised by people coming in and out of his life. I hope he gets to keep his 'daddy J'.
Author's Response: Hey Ashley! I hope you like how I'm dealing with all that. Thank you for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 05:40 AM · On: A New Past
thanks for the update and more please. Interesting!
Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for your encouraging comment, Thess. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 03:02 AM · On: A New Surprise
Ahhh the plot thickens! Excellent chapter! Of course I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey Gina! We're getting close to the end here. *grins* Thanks for all your comments. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2008 04:59 AM · On: A New Development
Nice save by Brian about the old pictures! I'm glad he didn't leave Justin thinking he had done something to cause their break up.
Author's Response: Well, he knows this is his mess and he's not trying to totally fuck up Jay...hehehe. Glad you liked this chapter, Armand. thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 01:14 PM · On: A New Development
Gregor is not good. They've formed a real family. It's great to see they progress. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Hey Jackie! Don't worry about Gregor. *grins* Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 09:06 PM · On: A New Past
Sounds like Gregor will be trouble, might even have an inkling who Jay is. So great the parts were Brian really is trying suggesting the photo, 'confessing' he destroyed photos, bottoming again. Great that Brian is really talking, except it is based on a lie
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I really appreciate your comment. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 08:49 PM · On: A New Development
Uh oh, Gregor is going to be trouble! I know this sounds selfish, but I don't want 'Jay' gettting his memory back! The family is working so well together! Great chapter Gina Marie
Author's Response: Hey Gina! I know how you feel, but all will work out. I hope. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 05:29 PM · On: A New Development
Brian is so evil and that was a close call. I'm still reading this and still feel sorry for Jay. I keep waiting for the bubble to burst but so far so good.
Author's Response: LOL Big J. I am going to try to make it believable...we'll see if I can or not. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2008 02:36 AM · On: A New Assignation
I'd can't wait to see Kinney dig himself out of this hole! I love how your changing things from the movie and really making it your own. One thing i'd really like to see is more of the kids. In the movie there wasn't enough about them. I think it would be neat if you had them in the story more.
Author's Response: Hey Ashley, I'll see what I can do about the boys. I'm loving watching Brian try to dig himself out too...hehehe. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 01:15 PM · On: A New Assignation
Oh Justin forget the about you forget trust me you can't do any better then what you got now really ....You have Brian any time you want .... f*** the memories they can be overrated some times.....Later
Author's Response: Hey Kaylin, LOL. I was thinking the same thing, but it would be hard not to remember your past, so I guess Jay needs a little slack...hehehe. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2008 02:01 AM · On: A New Assignation
Ooo what a chapter. Hopefully Justin doesn't get way to mad when he gets his memory back. I feel a little bad for Brian even though it's all his fault.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie, I hope I can handle this in a believable fashion. We'll see, huh? Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 11:38 PM · On: A New Assignation
ohhhhh! So loving this story! brian's falling in love, and when jay gets his memory back he's going to feel betrayed. Hopefully by then he'll be totally in love with brian. He's already in love with the kdis. such a good feel story! Thanks
Author's Response: Hey Gina! I'm glad you're enjoying this one. It is a bit different from what I generally write, but I've been trying to break out and try new things. Thanks for all your support and comments. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 09:18 PM · On: A New Past
hi rena im loving ur story so mush plz update soon hugs
Author's Response: Hey Mary! I'm so glad you're reading and enjoying this little fic. Thank you for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 09:11 PM · On: A New Assignation
more, more, more please..... thanks
Author's Response: Soon, soon, soon promise...you're welcome. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 09:00 PM · On: A New Assignation
Heya honey, I had missed some of the chapters but just got caught up, and I'm so glad I did... that was hot! I hope that when, or if, Justin remembers his life before, he won't hurt Brian or the boys to much, although Brian sure deserves it! Loved it, can't wait for more. Emma
Author's Response: Thanks Emma. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I can't believe I'm having so much fun writing it. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 08:19 PM · On: A New Assignation
“I knew there had to be something that drove us apart and that would do it.” I can see how that would be a convincing answer to that question. “I think we should start over. We’ll consider today to be our first time together and go from there.” Hehehe, if he only knew! “Brian felt the burn of guilt ripping through him. He had just compounded the problem by having sex with Jay, and sooner or later things would come out.” Luscious! He knew this wouldn’t last, but for the first time in his life, he wanted a stable relationship. “If Jay got his memories back, he’d deal with the consequences of his actions, but until then, he planned on living each day to the fullest.” Yay! Great stuff!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it Armand. Thanks for commenting...it means the world to me. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 08:04 PM · On: All New Rules
I can't help to comment even though I am not finish reading all the chapters posted. I wanted to tell you, that I like the story, I love how Justin cared for his new found sons!!! Please update ASAP. And I hope everything will be alright. Thanks
Author's Response: Hey thess! I try my best to update every Friday, but sometimes I'm late and can't do it until Saturday. If you have an LJ, I post there on Thursdays. Thanks for commenting, it means a lot. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: LPR (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 04:28 PM · On: A New Past
Another great chapter in another great story!!!! Keep up the good work, I always look forward to your stories and your updates. Did you ever write a fantasy story about Brian and Justin on an island lost in time?? I thought you had but maybe I"m thinking of something else. Anywho, good job.
Author's Response: Hey LPR! No, I never wrote a story like that, but it would be something I'd write...hehehe. If you remember who wrote it let me know as I would love to read it. There is another writer by the name of Rena and she writes some really great stuff, but that's not me. She was here first, so I had to go by elyxer. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you're enjoying my stories. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 02:58 PM · On: A New Assignation
WOW! That was awesome. I liked how Brian was backed into a corner with top/bottom conversation. Hee Hee. Very clever. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Well I couldn't help myself. I just had to give it to Brian a little. *grins* Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 06:20 PM · On: A New Plan
WOW!!! Gulp, eeeep! WOW!!! I think this ep could have been titled Brian's revenge or Elyxer gives readers heart attack!!! That was amazingly hot!!! Poor Justin . . .er lucky Justin!!! More please swoon!! :)
Author's Response: LOL dphysh! I didn't mean to give you a heart attack, but I loved that pic! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 02:09 PM · On: A New Plan
Oh snap....that picture really helped form a very nice visual. Things are really getting interesting. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie! I loved that pic...hehehe. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Tiff (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 11:01 AM · On: A New Plan
I'm loving this story :) Though I'm worried to see what happens when Daddy J finds out whats been going on?? btw the pic included in this chapter = NICE... very very NICE!
Author's Response: Hey Tiff! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I loved that pic! Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:36 AM · On: A New Plan
Well, Justin will be kinda confused when he starts thinking with his OTHER head! Maybe he'll realize that he is an amazing artist yet the house has no art supplise. I love it. Your updates can't come fast enough!
Author's Response: Hey Ashley! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: deb (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:03 AM · On: A New Plan
great story. i loved the movie ' overboard '. this is so well done. more please.
Author's Response: Thank you, Deb! I'm so glad you're enjoying my version. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 04:55 AM · On: A New Plan
That picture was hot, Brian was hot, and now I am horny. Thats all I have to say.
Author's Response: Hey Jerri! Thank you so much. That's definitely high praise. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 04:35 AM · On: A New Plan
Yep...I'd fuck him too!
Author's Response: Me too, Sarah! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 03:18 AM · On: A New Plan
omg its great i love it
Author's Response: Thank you! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: vanilla18@hotmail.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 02:02 AM · On: A New Plan
you bad bad girl how could you leave it like that i can't wait until friday i am loving this story
Author's Response: Hey vanilla! I have to do a cliffie every once in awhile...hehehe. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: trenice (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 01:55 AM · On: A New Past
I like the story but I want to know more about the life before the story. Who was Brian and 'Jay' before this? And who is the kids mother or whatever.
Author's Response: Hey trenice! I'm not sure I'll answer all those questions. I mean there are little hints, but the movie didn't go into great detail, so I don't think I will either. Who knows...maybe a sequel...LOL. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 01:10 AM · On: A New Plan
I can see how that picture was inspirational, (I mean that even looks like him... It's not like the lost Aztek commercial is it? 8D) but what you did with this - WOW! It was smokin' What a perfect summer fantasy!
Author's Response: Thanks Armand! I found the pic online and I'm not exactly sure what it was from. I just cropped and doctored it a bit. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 12:30 AM · On: A New Plan
I love this fic!!!! keep up the good work. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thanks Buffy! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 10:49 PM · On: A New Plan
OH OH OH MY!!!! Whew, I need a hose down now! GREAT chapte! LOVE the pic! How'd you do it? This story is fun, and enthralling, and just, woo hooo!!!! LOL Loving every word!
Author's Response: Hey Gina! I found the pic online and doctored it up a bit. I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 09:45 PM · On: A New Plan
Naughty Brian ;-) Love the pic.
Author's Response: Thanks Alys! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: mouse (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2008 06:12 PM · On: A New Past
Squeeeeee! Love it! You're doing a fantastic job spining it from the movie! Please update soon! I'm so excited to read more! You rock!
Author's Response: Hey mouse! Thank you so much! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: mari (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 04:26 PM · On: A New Attitude
That last line...heeheehee! It's funny. I can't wait for chapter, um six I think? anyway i can't wait for the next chapte!
Author's Response: Hey mari! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2008 01:22 AM · On: A New Attitude
I love how well things are running with Justin. Brian's jealousy is too funny. "He’d unwittingly created a monster." That's right! The thought of Brian suggesting Chuck E. Cheese, what a hoot!
Author's Response: Hey Armand! I was writing and I thought..."What would be the place that would drive Brian out of his mind?" Well, there you go. *winks* Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 07:07 PM · On: A New Attitude
Uh oh I smell fireworks in the offing! But I love the way Justin is handling this and really want to box Brian's ears, he's acting more like a spoiled little boy than any of his kids! Another great ep! More please soon! :)
Author's Response: Hey dphysh! Yeah, Brian is coming across as a brat, but I hope it works for the story. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 12:31 PM · On: A New Attitude
I really hope Brian isn't going to do something stupid...but knowing Brian, he is ;) I really love this story, update soon! hopefully sooner than usual?
Author's Response: Hey Ashley, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I promise to try and keep Brian under control. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 10:34 AM · On: A New Attitude
Oh Brian...don't be too jealous. You did do it. Great chapter. I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie! I think Brian will be fine. *winks* Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 03:08 AM · On: A New Attitude
Ohhh! This story is incredibly wonderful to read dear Elyxer !!! Little Sunshine has the upper hand right now, isnt"it ??? he he ;)) ... Come on, Brian, bring it on and spice things up biiig time ! *grins* Just hope it wont mess everything for the kids and the family unit that start to be build around Justin... Update soon, pleeease !!! Good work! See ya, Jersey :))
Author's Response: Hey Jersey! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I certainly hope I spice things up. *winks* Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 11:06 PM · On: A New Attitude
Love, Love LOVE this story! More please!
Author's Response: Thanks Gina! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2008 09:26 PM · On: A New Attitude
I can just see Brian in big Q shopping for jeans HAHAHAH Excellant chapter. Now this little 'fight' Brian has going on inside him should be funny how he 'combats' Jay.
Author's Response: Hey alys! I know...I was trying to torture Brian...hehehe. I'm glad you liked it. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 05:32 PM · On: A New Attitude
Uhh oh..."Hang it up, Sunshine…Poppa’s got a brand new bag"...sounds ominous. I really like that Bri realizes that he hasn't played the "father" role like he should have. I like the jealousy. Are you going to address how Brian ended up with so many children? Was he always single?
Author's Response: Hey sarahrei, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I don't think I'll go into a lot of details, but there are subtle hints. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:11 PM · On: A New Past
WOW! I love how strong Jay is. He puts Bri in his place. I guess you can understand how Bri feels (needs a break from the kids) but I think of it this way...why do you have all of those children if you are going to ignore them and dump them on someone else - especially his first night there. Christ, he was asking for it! I can't wait to see what is coming next. Are you planning to stick to the overboard theme/plot (or as close as you can) or are you going to change it up some?
Author's Response: Hey sarahrei! I agree with you about the kids, but you know how it is...people want something, but don't realize the responsible that goes along with it. Brian just doesn't know how to be a father, so I wanted Jay to show him. I am sticking with the movie plot on some things, but I'm changing it a bit. Thanks so much for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Tiff (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2008 06:55 AM · On: A New Relationship
This fic is great :) Kept a smile on my face the entire 4 chpts so far. The kids are absolutely adorable. More soon plz :)
Author's Response: Thanks Tiff! That's very high praise. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2008 06:39 AM · On: A New Relationship
I enjoyed seeing how strong willed Justin is by the way he laid things out for Brian. That was a great dressing down, really spot on, “I’m not the little woman. I won’t be your free childcare service, and I certainly won’t be your maid.” (Well, there goes that plan, HA!) I especially loved that he said he would take the boys with him. That had to shock Brian. LOL
Nice bit of reasoning with Chad, “Would you prefer that I let Nathan pick what we do? I mean, if he picks something that’s inappropriate for you, then you’ll just be left out along with Gus.” The guy’s a natural at this parenting thing!
Author's Response: Thanks Armand! I wanted Justin to be strong and have skills that Brian didn't have. I didn't want him to come across as a lost little victim. I love Brian as you know, but I really wanted him to be the one in the dark. *grins* I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Nikita (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2008 02:19 AM · On: A New Relationship
This is great!
Author's Response: Thanks Nikita! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 12:21 AM · On: A New Past
Wow this is really interesting!!! I remember the film and that was great :) I'm loving your version, can wait for another part.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying my version. I stayed with the movie on some points, but changed a lot. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Lilly (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2008 01:50 PM · On: A New Relationship
I love it! It's even better than the movie! I can't wait for the next chapter...soon I hope!
Author's Response: Hey Lilly! Thank you for that great compliment and for commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 12:33 PM · On: A New Relationship
YAY!!! I love this Justin and he is just what Brian and the kids need! So loving this fic and you for writing it!! More please soon! :)
Author's Response: Hey dphysh! I'm glad you're enjoying this one. I really look forward to your comments. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Belle (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2008 07:55 AM · On: A New Past
I am such a dope! I,ve been reading this fic all along loving it and finally it dawned on me why... RENA wrote it!! Now it makes sense. Kudos on you new story. I love the change from your usual style. Can't wait for this to unfold and watch the fireworks!
Author's Response: Hey Belle! I'm glad you're enjoying this story. I thought I'd try something different for a change. *grins* Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2008 07:24 AM · On: A New Relationship
LOVIN this story. Hilarious chapter, ok when Jay gives Brian both barrels ;-) Love how Jay talked with the boys and played.
Author's Response: Hey alys! I wanted Jay to have a little control over things. I'm glad you liked it. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2008 04:35 AM · On: A New Relationship
Oh snap! Go Jay. This family is really going to change. Great chapter. I really can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie! Oh yeah things are definitely gonna change. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 03:16 AM · On: A New Relationship
Ha hahaha!!! LOVED it! This story keeps getting better and better!
Author's Response: Hey Gina! I'm glad you're enjoying my version of things. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 03:08 PM · On: All New Rules
Really like this even though it is very different to your usual style! Would you believe this was on late night tv last week?! Love it already beautifully crafted! More please soon! :)
Author's Response: Hey dphysh! You know me...I'm always playing around with different styles, story lines, plot twists, etc. For me, that's the joy in writing. I push myself to see what I can accomplish. I'm glad you're reading this one. Thanks so much for all your support. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: S (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 11:25 AM · On: All New Rules
What a wonderful story. Please update asap Can't wait for more. Love reading all your stories. Such a wonderful treat, absolutely delightful. Thank you
Author's Response: Awww Thank you so much. I'm just glad people enjoy reading my stuff. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 07:08 AM · On: All New Rules
This is a greaat story! I can't wait for you to update it. I am wondering how Mikey and the others on Liberty will be involved. These kids are adorable. Update soon!
Author's Response: Hey Sarah, I didn't involve Mikey in this one. Just a couple of guest appearances by Emmett and Ted. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: QaITFan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2008 05:28 PM · On: All New Rules
...just another superb chapter! Looking forward to your next update..please ASAP!! A smile. T.
Author's Response: Hey T! Thanks so much for your kind words of support. I'm glad you're enjoying the ride. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2008 02:10 AM · On: All New Rules
Goldie ala Justin.... lovin it!
Author's Response: LOL alys! I think it fits...*winks* Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2008 01:15 AM · On: All New Rules
Jay is perfect with the kids. Just great for them. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie, Yeah Jay is a natural. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2008 12:49 AM · On: All New Rules
What a sweet chapter! Daddy J is a natural with the kids. I love how he is creating a system that gives them order in their lives. Can’t wait til Brian gets home!
Author's Response: Hey Armand! I thought it would be nice if Jay took over. Poor Brian...hehehe. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 11:51 PM · On: All New Rules
I can't tell you how much I"m loving this story! I'm falling in love with the boys! I can't wait to see where you take this story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks Gina, I'm glad you're enjoying what I'm doing. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: kaylee (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2008 10:40 PM · On: All New Rules
I love this story! I avoided reading it for a wile after i saw it because it didn't sound like something id like but Im glad i finally did it's a great story. I can't wait for more chapters! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Hey kaylee, I'm glad you decided to give this a try. It's not exactly like the movie, but I think it still makes a very nice story. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2008 12:29 AM · On: A New Home
Oops that was me, sorry!
Author's Response: Thanks for telling Armand. I'm glad you're still reading. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2008 12:27 AM · On: A New Home
All that cleaning, blek! I can just imagine the smells that would reside in their refrigerator. LOL Gotta feel for him, since he knows he is accustom to things being immaculate. “Something was desperately wrong here.” That would be a scary feeling. My heart just melted when the twins told Daddy J their problem. I love how he got the principle apologizing. “I’m glad I’m home too.” (Now I have the lump!)
Author's Response: Awwww I'm glad you liked that. I was trying to stay with the movie on the cleaning part, but I wanted the kids to bond with Justin immediately. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: QaITFan (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 10:24 PM · On: A New Home
Rena..this story is just "genius"..really I can't wait to read more of it..btw, I wrote you 2 msgs form the site..tell me if you receive them. Ciao T.
Author's Response: Hey T! I did receive two emails and I promise I'll respond to those later today. I'm glad that you're enjoying this story. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2008 12:31 PM · On: A New Home
Really really good. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks Jackie! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2008 09:31 AM · On: A New Home
Hmmm, this is getting more interesting by the minute.
Author's Response: Hey Big J! Woo hoo glad to see you're still reading! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 10:40 PM · On: A New Home
This is definitely going to be a riot LOL!
Author's Response: LOL Briana. I certainly hope it will be. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 10:30 PM · On: A New Past
The pin is '6969' is that's not Brianeques what is?
Author's Response: LOL Briana...that was my thought as well. Thanks! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Ethan (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2008 08:54 PM · On: A New Home
ahhhhhhhhh! *runs around in circles, does a happy dance, then passes out* LOVE!
Author's Response: Hey Ethan! *fans you until you wake up* Take it easy...hehehe. Thanks for the great comment. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 08:28 PM · On: A New Home
Awwww....So loving this story! Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Hey Gina! I'm glad you're reading this one. I love your comments. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 02:34 PM · On: A New Past
This is a great start. Overboard is one of my favorite movies so I am really looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks Shelly. I love the movie too. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Blackwell (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 04:43 AM · On: A New Past
Now, that's a really interesting plot! I can't wait to see how Justin is going to handle all this! lol Just a tiny question (or two, actually, sorry): how did they know his initial was J? Did Justin have his wallet with him when he was found or something like that? And are they going to keep calling him Jay? If these are going to get answered along the way, please, just ignore me :) I'm just too curious for my own good (hehe). Keep up! This looks really good! B.
Author's Response: Hey B...you know I completely forgot to add that into the story. *hangs head in shame* I discussed it with my beta and then didn't go back and fix it. The doctors found a peice of paper in his pocket with the monogram of a J on it. That's how Brian come up with the Jay initial. Sorry about the confusion, but thanks for bringing it to my attention. Yes, they will keep calling him Jay. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 01:39 AM · On: A New Past
AAAAAHH, OVERBOARD!?! I love Overboard! I could probably recite it backwards. I am so excited to see you are writing this! (Can you tell? lol) THis is an excellent beginning. I like how they found "Jay" in an alley. Does this mean he wasn't a boy-debutante bimbo snot to Brian before? I think I'd like it if he is a more sympathetic character right from the start. I am also thrilled that you gave one of the kids my son's name! Thanks for that too! Now go write some more! ...er...please :-)
Author's Response: LOL Armand! What's your son's name? I think you will be surprised with the way I've written this...at least I hope you are...hehehe. I'm writing...I'm writing...boy oh boy am I writing. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2008 09:21 AM · On: A New Past
well obviously it's tooo late for me as I see in your subtitle you put 'overboard' ;-) feeling kinda blonde now..... I can soo totally see Brian in Curt's place and Justin in Goldie's. hahah going to bed now......
Author's Response: LOL...no worries Alys. I'm just happy that you like this one. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2008 09:18 AM · On: A New Past
Hilarious, reminds me of 'overboard' w/ Goldie Hawn & Curt Russel..... can't wait for the next chapters.....
Author's Response: You guessed it! That's the Overboard I was talking about. Glad you're enjoying. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Resist It (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2008 08:48 AM · On: A New Past
OMG... I love this movie! And I really like your first chapter for this. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Good! I certainly hope I don't disappoint you with this fic. I will update at least once a week...more often if I can, but I've got a lot going on at the moment. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2008 08:47 AM · On: A New Past
Very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Jackie, Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you're interested in this one. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2008 08:22 AM · On: A New Past
At first when I read your summary: "Overboard" I asked myself what's that? But now I remember the Goldie Hawn/Kurt Russell movie, LOL. YOu are doing an excellent job on putting Bri/Jus in the roles so far. I'm loving it.
Author's Response: Thanks Briana! I did change a few things from the movie, but I hope I kept the central theme. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: jerri (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2008 07:35 AM · On: A New Past
Love this story already. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Hugs, Rena
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