Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2023 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
I am very sad that this wonderful story will not continue. I liked reading and I would have been curious to see how the fate of the boys and girls would turn out. Will Brian and Justin have a future together? So now I can only rely on my imagination. You are a very good writer, I like reading your works. Thank You so much.
Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
Please finish this wonderful story please
Reviewer: dchewey (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2016 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
I really wish you would come back and finish it.
So interesting and different.
It's refreshing!
Regardless if you finish it or not thx so much for sharing!
Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2015 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE COME BACK and FInish This Please!
Reviewer: onlytime (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2015 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
Hi!
Ilove this story. I haven't read the first post but Ilike absolutely the way you write this one!!! So are you going to update the others chapters, because it's very frustating to read entirely a story unfinished. I hope that you're going to read this review and thank you so much to share Brian and Justin love story with us.
See your update very soon I hope................................................ Please!!!!!
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2014 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
The plot sounds interesting - will there be an update?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2014 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
I remember reading this on the original post and must say, it did seem a bit hurried up. But I liked how the story came out, even if it was a little rushed. But since you are redoing it, do you plan on making any major changes in what happened before, or simply adding more detail to the same story?
Author's Response: Hi, and thanks so much for commenting, and you are 100% correct - the conclusion I posted before the site crash was quite rushed, and I addressed that here inside a response to one of the earlier reviews, and I admitted it was quite rushed.
Also, I stated the reason(s) why I had rushed it. In addtion, I stated I was trying to remedy the situation. So, I guess my answer to you is: I don't really plan to make any major changes to the ending simply because I was quite satifsfied with the conclusion overall.
However, I will be adding more detail to the story so it won't be seemed so rushed this time around, and the ending will flow better.
If you recall the Ben/Mike thing - that was terribly rushed to the point it didn't seem as credible as it could or should have been. No doubt, I definitley will improve the Mike/Ben aspect the story this time around. Readers might have noticed that I'm trying to keep a light and comic flaire about the story, but I don't want to make it totally laudable though. The Michael/Ben thing almost seemed quite laughable the way it unfolded when I posted the story in its entirety the first time. So, I'm in the process of cleaning up, and several other thinigs to give the story a much better read.
I hope to do a good enough job that readers who read the first posting and therefore know how this story concludes, will still stick around and reading the unrushed and improved version and still get a good read from it (even to the point it seems almost like a different story but yet the outcome remains the same ).
Thanks again, Anon... and I'm so glad U posted this comment and gave me the opportunity to address this issue. I'm sure other readers (like yourself) were wondering and concerned as well. Much appreciated. - Sincerely, Delores -a/k/a brianawriter.
Reviewer: biffle (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2014 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
I like the way you have changed the histories of the players to match this situation. It is very likely Brian would have married Lindsay had he decided to pretend to be straight. Same with Daphnee and Justin. Also like how you changed Michael's history to stay with David much longer, as he may have done without Brian to come home to. Well thought out on these and other characters.
Author's Response: WOW!!! What a GREAT review. Hi, Biffle. Thanks so much for leaving such a Fabulous review. Hopefully I'll be able to update again by Sunday of this weekend. Later now, and thanks again for taking the time to read and review this story.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2014 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 31: I Think He Is In Love, But...
Poor Michael.
Author's Response: Poor, Michael... YeS1 You can say that again LOL! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment - very much appreciated. Hope to update by Sunday of this weekend.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2014 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 26: More Than Just a Fantasy
Somehow I find this very sweet.
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so much for that. I hope U continue to return and enjvy the story. Thanks for commenting - sincerely.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2014 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 26: More Than Just a Fantasy
Nooooooo....Justin don't be an asshole to Brian. Let's not forget that you were very willing.
Author's Response: Hi, Jazz... you're comment got me something of rolling on the floor, because it seems kind of ironic, because I'm thinking: If Justin constantly lay back and consistently give up his asshole to Brian all their problems would be resolved, lOL!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2014 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 25: Point of No Return
Point of no return indeed my friend ;)
Author's Response: OH, I'm so glad U liked it, LOL! Before the crashed I had published this in it's entirety, but I had kind of rushed it because of problems I was having with my computer due to bad storms in my area, but now I'm reposting and I taking my time and trying to improve upon it, so some chapters are going to be quite different as well as a few extra chapters added that was not in the original finished version. I hope YOU and everyone else like the changes. Thanks again, Jazzepoet, for taking the time to comment. I'm eating it up really big time, and it is so encouraging as well.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2014 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 24: Small Bed (Move In Closer)
Oh wow...point of no return huh??? Damn what I wouldn't give to be a fly on that wall ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Jazz..., and in the next chapter we will ALL be flies on the wall; and there will be pictures too - HOPE I DON'T GET BANNED from the site, (ha-ha-ha)!!! Well, crap I did rate this NC-18.... didn't I? LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2014 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 23: The Quality Inn
OMG Delores what happened to all my hilarious reviews. I can say they were hilarious as they are gone and nobody can prove me wrong. LOL I can't believe you added pictures of the un-Quality Inn; it was bad enough reading about it. At least you didn't show the rug.
I am sorry you lost your reviews.
Cheers
Author's Response: Awwwww, Flossee, why did you have to tell me about the halarious reviews... you know how much I LOVE and look forward to your WITTY reviews, now I'm going to be always wondering what you said, LOL! I'm in tears, LOL!
Well, any old way, here's chapter 24, for you. I changed it a slight bit as well as added a picture.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2014 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 23: The Quality Inn
Omg I can't believe I was able to get caught up :) Now with the change in weather and two broken down vehicles, Brian and Justin are stranded together and Daphne has another reason to get her dander up...can't wait to see how it all turns out.
Author's Response: Hi, Jazz... so glad U R still with me. Hav fun.... here's the next chapter. thanks so much.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2014 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 17: Battle Up!
Lol haven't you already finished this story did it get deleted when midnight whisper was down
Author's Response: Yes, you're right chapters from 19 - the end was deleted because of the virus, so I'm reposting the additional chapters, as well as I adding graphics to make it a lot more intersting, as well as editing out a lot of typos that was caused because of problem I had with my Internet due to a bad storm in my area. After posting this chapter, I went back and read it and had a million and one errors in this chapter alone that I had to fixed after posting.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2014 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: Battle Up!
Hey, where is the rest of this chapter? I've looked everywhere and I can't find it. I've even looked behind my computer screen. LOL Daphne better not drive Brian in to Michaels bed. If she does you will need to sic Dathan's fiancée on to her. Please Delores, may I have some more.
Cheers
Author's Response: "... drive Brian to Michael's bed?" Really? Do you think someone tells Brian to battle up (literally challenging him to a dare), that he'd just turn around and walk away with his tail between his legs. I think readers at this site will cut my head off if I wrote Brian that way.
Challenging Brian like that is probably the worst thing Daphne could have ever done, LOL! And, that's why that chapter was so short, because Daphne telling Brian to battle up is saying a helluva lot in itself LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2014 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 16: How Long? Too Long!
All I can say is thank you for not writing a Justin and Daphne sex scene. Yuck. I did have the bucket ready just in case you went there. LOL Justin seems to think Daphne should do all the work in their relationship. What's wrong with him paying an account or topping up the liquor cabinet? What era did this Justin come from? Is he a time traveller from the 50's? LOL Too funny, Daphne is really having a bad day, she got busted by Dathan's fiancée, lost her job, told off by Sheryl and Justin blamed her for not paying the water account. It's time for her to go back to bed and get out on the other side. LOL Two chapters, yay and thank you.
Cheers
Author's Response: The problem is actually that Daphne doesn't do crap. Justin, has always done his share and her's because she spend too much time fooling around with Dathan on the side.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2014 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: Battle Up!
Daphane the BITCH
Author's Response: Hi, Tash. I'm so excited to here for someone new for the first time. So, belated Happy New Year to you. I'm glad U join this one and I hope U enjvy 2 the very N.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Later.
Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2014 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
This is such a funny story. Like revolving doors! I liked it when you first wrote it then it stopped. I hope you carry on now!! It's refreshing and nice to read something lighthearted from time to time (mine is so heavy!!)
Lisa xx
Author's Response: Wow! His, Silverfish, Happy belated New Year to you! I believe this is the first time I'm hearing from you ever! And what I great reveiw - eat it up TENFOLD! And, yes, I'm carrying on. Here's two more chapters for your 16 & 17 and I hope you continue to enjvy, LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 15: He's Out Of My Life?
Will Brian leave Lindsay? Will Justin leave Daphne? Will Brian hook up with Michael? What has Melanie got up her skirt? Will Deanna ever look like Justin? These questions-and many others-will be answered in the next episode of...TMOAC.
Again I blame you for this Delores as I just can't get the music out of my head. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: will Deanna ever look like Justin? Now that's the funnies one! thanks for the laff... always such a pleasure.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: It Was Really Good Seeing Your Again
Oh yuck, I can't stand Michael and Brian being all touchy feely. Yuck. LOL I was hoping one of the pool balls, or was it Billiard balls, would jump off the table and hit Michael in the face or Brian in the balls. So many balls in this review; at least there were no glass slippers.
Cheers
Author's Response: Glass slipper, LOL! I'm sure if it was one you would have suggested breaking it over Michael's head LOL!
Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
I love it so much. update your story faster because I want more. it is the awesome story that I've read in a really long time.
Author's Response: WOW!!!!! What a compliment!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2014 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Hardly Are We Fourteen Anymore!
Oh Delores, you brought Michael in to share Emmett's apartment. I wanted Brian and Justin to leave their wives and share the room and the bed (a girl can dream). Don't make me get that bucket out again, please tell me Brian will not sleep with Michael. Okay, now I've had my say I will sit back and wait to see where you take us as it's always a fun ride. Hurry back please.
Cheers
Author's Response: Oh, I promise you won't have to do any barfing this time - not on the account of Michael at least, and here's chapter 14. Plz enjvy, Flossee. Hav fun and thank you SO MUCH, LOL! Always a pleasure.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 12: Where Did You Sleep Last Night? You Stink
more, more, and so much more. Love it
Author's Response: Well, here's certainly more for you, Chapter 13.... I hope U like it, LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: Where Did You Sleep Last Night? You Stink
To funny; Lindsay stinks and Daphne showered. Both obvious giveaways ladies. Where is Justin going with Daphne's car? He can't drive two cars home. Maybe he is checking the GPS tracker. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: No, I really think Justin wants that liquor cabinet full for more reasons than one now. He's really is going after the liquor.... he can go back to Woody's and retrieve his car just about any time! The holy-water is the first thing on his agenda that morning.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: Whom Are You Kidding?
NO, NO, NO Delores, Brian and Justin have to sleep together. LOL Let's hope a mutual loathing of their spouses actions pushes them into each other arms. I love this Brian he's quite sweet.
Cheers
Author's Response: "Oh, you think, Brian's quite sweet, huh, LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: So, What Do You Think?
I was hoping Brian and Justin would bump into each other, but I didn't think it would be back at Woody's. I like the way your mind works. LOL Melanie's trouble, still she always was the thorn in Brian's side. Maybe she can take Lindsay off his hands; fingers crossed that happens. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: Hmm, 'Maybe she can take Lindz for Brian's hands... she sure taking a crack at it, LOL!
Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Where Did You Sleep Last Night? You Stink
I love this story. It is so funny. Everybody is cheating on each other.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, and some point I was afraid I would get lots of criticism from readers making both Brian and Justin straight as well married to women, but it's nice to see many readers taking it with a sense of humor. LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 9: Three Months Later (Don't Get Chopped)
To funny Delores, making Brian Justin's boss again. I hope Brian isn't out clubbing. You are such a tease not telling us. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: Oh yeah, I'm sure working UNDER Brian again, is going to be quite the experience to Justin.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Yearning! Let's Make A Deal (Bedroom Style)
Love the sex requests. That's just two funny that they both make deals like that; but will it alleviate that yearning. I hope not. Such wicked fun.
Cheers
Author's Response: wicked or sad, lol.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: The Greatest Sin!
Lindsay go away things were just heating up. LOL "kiss your ass" great line to say out loud Justin. I would say that was a Freudian slip.
Cheers
Author's Response: Freudian slip.... agree 100% that's exactly what I was going from in that chapter.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 6: Guess Who's Coming To The Baby Shower!
I should have read the name of this chapter before I wrote my last review, sorry. LOL Great suggestion Brian, you and Justin in the basement, I can see that going well. Actually I can't remember what happens; which just means more excitement for me. Yay.
Cheers
Author's Response: You crack me up, you asked guess who's coming to dinner, and the next title is guess who's coming to the baby shower? LOL! Where I thought they both were already in the closet, so why not put them in the basement instead, LOL.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Nothing But Happy Baby Thoughts!
I love how you have Lindsay holding the baby shower for Nurse Daphne Taylor. LOL Guess Who's Coming to Dinner. Sidney Poitier; NO. Although he is almost as hot as Brian and Justin. The excitement is too much, but I have a strong heart. I think. Hopefully. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: Hmm, if the wives only knew LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: Late Night
Yep, I think that is the best chapter ever in fiction. Neither man would admit they liked it and Justin had the balls to leave. I'm glad there is no pining Justin in this fic. Emmett's hilarious just leaving his guests while he goes to Babylon; classic.
Cheers
Author's Response: Emmett was a riot in this chapter? Did anyone (who really knows Em) really think he really was on his way to the supermarket, LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Two Men On A Couch
Gay porn, yay. I'm for it. LOL It did sound rather sweet, and it made our two supposedly hetro men hard. The next chapter is the one I remember most. Does that say I'm a perv? LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: "does that say I'm a perv?' Join the club, it the thing that is most memorable about this story to me too LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 2: Meet My Best Friend
Brian Kinney wanting out of a gay bar. Classic. My best friend Emmett, OMG I had forgotten that. This is like have a brand new fic. Loving it. Oh, I would comment on Brian not going back to the hospital, but I don't care about Lindsay as I do remember what happens at Emmett's. I have to read on. Excitement plus, yay.
Cheers
Author's Response: 'Brian Kinney wanting out of a gay bar" Hilarious isn't it, lol!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
I can't wait to catch up on the new chapters.*Happy Dance* I read this before I started leaving reviews so I will read and review from the beginning. I had forgotten this started with Lindsey have Gus. Brian and Justin married to women and I still love the fic. xD Delores you have some imagination. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: Glad U discovered the updates, Flossee. And thanks for the compliment about my imagination... I try not to make all the stories the same. LOl!
Reviewer: javitxu (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
It is such a wonderful surprise to have a new chapter, I really like this story so please keep writing. All your stories are amaizing. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Myriam
Author's Response: Wow! This year is starting out just right with new people commenting on my stories for the first time. So, glad you are so pleased, and yes I will continue wirting this one. However, my eyes are kind of tired so I need to give them a break from the computer screen for a while. So, it might be a few days before you see the next update. However, thanks again for taking the time to inspire me.
Later now.
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 9: Three Months Later (Don't Get Chopped)
what I had been wishing for so long became true: this wonderful story goes on - can´t wait for more - many many thanks to You!!! Just great
(sorry- my english sucks, I´m not a native spaeker)
Author's Response: Hi, Happy New Year. I don't think I've ever heard from U before, Julia. Well, thank you so much for taking the time to comment for the the first time. I'm so excited and really appreciate it. And, don't worry about your English. It's probably even better than mines, lol,
Also, that's for saying the story is wonderful, and I do plan to add more very soon. Please continue to enjoy, and comment as much as you like.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Yearning! Let's Make A Deal (Bedroom Style)
Ok, I'm going to join Flossee in her attempt to get you to return to this story, I can't believe you've let this gem sit here like an orphan. I think this need some attention now. Oh, don't give us that I have school excuse. College kids can stay up all night and party or they can write for their very happy audience. I think you know where your priority is.
Lori
Author's Response: Oh on! BigPaw, you found this one! Believe it or not I have quite a few additional chapters written (long-hand) inside a prehistoric paper and cardboard notebook. I think it's hidden away inside at trunk inside my house somewhere. Maybe when I have some time during the thanksgiving break, I might take a stab at this one and the other ones at the site I have near finished like the Watcher. I have to do the Watcher next because it only have a few chapters to go and I already promised someone already that I would try finishing that one on the Thanksgiving break.
Howvever, I've been slowed down a bit by a storm in my area. I live in the New York/New Jersey are; and I've been out of power for a few days, I think everyone around the world has probably heard of Miss Sandy by now. Well, she done some damage to my house and kept me in the dark for a few days. However, my neighborhood was lucky. We got very little water (no flooding) in my part of the city; but we got a lot of wind and power outage. She locked shingles off my house, and lots of tree branches fell in the yard. Thank God a tree didn't fall on my house. My next door neighbor, four trees fell in their yard but luckily for them none hit the house (came pretty close though - just within inches).
My neighborrhood was truly blessed. My cousin lives in a place called Union, New Jersey and as of the writing of this note (Oct. 31), he still doesn't have power. My came back on Oct 30. Obama came to New Jersey today. I don't think he went any further than Atlantic City, New Jersey. It was the most badly hit in New Jersey. Looks like New Orleans when Miss Katrina hit them. And, A.C. was my very own personal playground... it's my Babylon... I'm surely going to miss her until they clean her up and get her running again.
However, my prayers go out to all that was killed in this devastations, as well as all who saw their property destroyed and badly damaged. There was so fires as well. Last report I heard 65 people were killed overseas and about 22 here in the U.S. where I live. I they searching for siblings 2 and 4 years old. There mother was escaping the flooded house with them and the current tore them away from her arms and everyone is now looking all over the water trying to find those two poor babies.
Reviewer: Infatuated_BJreader (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Yearning! Let's Make A Deal (Bedroom Style)
It's been amazzing till noww...will be waiting intently for the next update..
Author's Response:
Hi Infatuated_BJreader:
Thanks you so much! As you can see it's been a LONG time since someone's commented on this story and an even longer time since I've updated it. However, unfortunately, I'm in college now and I don't have the time to devote to FANFIC that I used to have. However, during the wiinter break I plan to do a lot of writiing. If all goes well maybe I might get around updating this story.
Thanks again for taking the time to commment.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Yearning! Let's Make A Deal (Bedroom Style)
What a mess! Justin massaging his own prostate, nope...he hadn't been thinking of Brian! ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, this one's a mess! Sorry I can't update as soon as I promised but I'll see you guys as soon as I can. Thanks Kat for so many pleasure moments at this site. Bye for now. Missed U dearly.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Yearning! Let's Make A Deal (Bedroom Style)
March it is, some things are worth wating for.
Author's Response: Hi, gerri. Just dropped in to check reviews. Sorry but I won't be able to update this month after all but I'll try to take care of you guys as soon as i can. Thanks.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Yearning! Let's Make A Deal (Bedroom Style)
It seems that Brian and Justin are more in denial than ever. Great chapter, looking forward for more when you come back in March.
Author's Response: Hi, Lynn. So sorry I won't be updating this month but see you as soon as I can.
Reviewer: JERRI (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Yearning! Let's Make A Deal (Bedroom Style)
What the hell do you mean going away fo two months. You can't leave us hanging for two months. This is just cruel woman.
Author's Response: Jerri, Jerri, I'm jetting it out of town tomorrow and I won't have access to a computer. But I'd be back! I mean so,r guys abandon their story forever. And how time FLIES these days! Two months would have passed before we know. Thanks, so that is so Flattering. Sorry, tho, I'm truly am but I will BE BACK! Thanks for being part of a great audience.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: The Greatest Sin!
Great chapter.
Author's Response: thanks, a lot, Lynn, enjvy and hav fun!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 7: The Greatest Sin!
Great timing Lindsey. Wonder how long Brian and Justin are going to keep denying their attraction to each other.
Author's Response: It don't seem like to me that Brian's denying it any. Seems like Justin is though.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 6: Guess Who's Coming To The Baby Shower!
I don't remember if I had read this before or not, but I love it!
Author's Response: Thank You, Kate, but I'm surprise U haven't. It's been sitting at the site for almost a year now as a 4 chapter short. Glad U like it. Thanks alot. here's the next chapter 7 coming right up in a few.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 6: Guess Who's Coming To The Baby Shower!
I am looking forward as to how Brian and Justin will deal with their attraction towards each other. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank U, Lynn. Hav Fun! That should b interesting.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Nothing But Happy Baby Thoughts!
Sometimes things are just mean to be.
Author's Response: Ahhhh! Dear Gerri, very interesting observation LOL! Thank U so much four commenting. Hav Fun! Chapter 6 coming right up.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2008 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
First, I must say this is an outstanding short work of fiction. I absolutely love fiction that is original and not the same B/J story over and over. You really came up with a winner here. Second, I totally agree with the other reviewers on the need for a sequel (or continuation). This is a story that must go on! I also read your responses and the difficulty it would be to write Brian's character, but you can do it...and it will be fantastic. So, PLEASE consider it. Sarah
Author's Response: Hi, Sarah, thx soooo much for not only taking the time to comment again, but also for the vote of confidence in my ability, and expressing you like the story so much, and noting it's originality. Have fun! Enjoy!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2008 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
Great ending. *g* I hope there will be a happy ending for the boys. Brian and Justin are so stubborn and won't admit their true feelings. I hope there will be a sequel to this story.
Author's Response: Thanks again as always for taking time to comment. However, I don't know, Lynn... I sort of think this one works best as it is... however, you never know... if the passion hits me I just mind extend the story. This is a tuff one I'd have to be very careful how I handle this one ... considering both men are married with children LOL. Justin's character might be a new easier to work with than Brian's. We know from the affair Justin had with Ethan and the one-night-stand he had with the virgin that Justin is capable of lieing and cheating. But Brian's is totally honest... I'd have to think long and hard how Brian deals with Lindsay the day after, as for Justin he probably could pretend with Daphne that nothing happened LOL....you see the obstacles I'd run into with this one. But really I think I could handle it but like I said earlier I have to be feeling quite passionate about it to do a believable job LOL.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2008 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
Fixing the Typo.... it hard to let U guys down (not done) sorry about that LOL!
Reviewer: Memo (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2008 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Memo for commenting and one of the best compliments you can pay me... I sooo sooo glad you enjoyed the story. Have Fun, LOL.
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
Perfect Story!! Absolutely loved it! Like all you other storys! Please continue this one. It's too good to end here.
Hugs
Diana
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much, Diana for taking the time to comment. And an extra thanks for liking the stories. HAVE FUN! LOL
Reviewer: Tammy (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2008 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: Bundle of Joy
i personally think that was a very cruel ending. I hope youre planning on a sequel... VERY soon.
Author's Response: Hi, Tammy thanks for taking the time to comment.... Gotcha! Love you guys!
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