Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2008 02:58 PM · On: Office Meet and Greet

I hope justin finds a safe place to live soon, its great the job is going well

Author's Response: Yes, Justin has found a job that he can be happy with. (working with Brian every day...what could be better?) Thanks for the review hun!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 07:50 AM · On: Taking a Chance

I think my allergies must have kicked in, I was trying to type " A man needs to know when to ask for help"..LOL!! Anyway, update soon!!!

Author's Response: LOL I knew what you meant. Hope your allergies clear up...sniffle. I'll try to update soon. :)

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 07:46 AM · On: Taking a Chance

Such a great chapter! So gald that Justin had the courage to go to the Pitts, now if only he told the truth about what happen to him in NYC and also let Brian help him with a place to stay.. Aan needs to know when to ask for help are words that Sunshine needs to heed!! Update soon!!

Author's Response: Justin's ordeal prompted him to go to the Pitts into the comfort of Brian's arms. He is being very stubborn about accepting help...perhaps Brian can change that! ;)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2008 10:22 PM · On: Taking a Chance

Great chapter. I wish Justin stop being stubborn and be honest with Brian about what happened to him. Brian has to know that something is up with Justin? I hope soon Justin will let Brian in. Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Brian does know that something's wrong, but he didn't want to pressure Justin into telling him. He figures Justin will confide in him when he's ready. Thanks for the review hun!

Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2008 06:05 PM · On: Taking a Chance

Oh that was so sweet when Brian was holding Justin in his office, it was fucking heartbreaking.
And that he hocked his watch to get to Pittsburgh to see Brian.
Where is he going to stay?? I sure hope his parents don't find him!!
Can't wait for more hon, Emma x

Author's Response: Poor Justin was so traumatized by his ordeal,but I think having Brian's arms around him helped. I know it would have helped me! LOL Thanks so much for reading and commenting Emma! *hugs*

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 09:02 AM · On: Taking a Chance

well at least he made to the pitts in one piece.
"Before he had a chance to ask any questions, the kid was in his arms." right where he belongs. at least he's safe and sound for now.

Author's Response: Now if only he would stop being so stubborn and accept help! ;)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2008 12:51 AM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

Poor Justin. I really do hope now Justin will go to Brian now. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:
Thanks Lynn. Brian is just what Justin needs right now.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2008 05:14 AM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

hopefully they didn't brian's business card. he'll fly back in a minute.
why the fuck hadn't he gone with the older man. my thoughts exactly.

Author's Response: The thieves did not take the business card. You can bet Justin deeply regrets not going with Brian. Maybe a certain hazel eyed man can help him recover. ;)

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2008 12:40 AM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

I just found your new story and boy do you have us on a rollercoaster! This is really powerful and so heartbreaking! I hope that Justin will find the courage to call Brian and tells him that he accepts his offer. I also hope nothing else happens to him. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hi Jasmine! This is a hopefully realistic portrayal of the plight of the homeless. This is will probably be the worst thing that happens to Justin in this story. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2008 10:56 PM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

that was so awful, I hope Justin will call Brian so that this doesnt happen again, Brian will take care of him and Justin deserves to be treated like a prince

Author's Response: Sorry, I know it was pretty brutal, but also very realistic. Don't worry, Brian will be there for Justin.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2008 11:21 PM · On: Perchance to Dream

fPoor Justin. I have a bad feeling that something bad is going to happen to Justin. I really do hope Brian sees Justin again before it is too late. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment hun. Poor Justin will be very deserving of your sympathy, sorry to say. Next chapter coming up soon!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2008 09:39 AM · On: Perchance to Dream

Justin should change his name and appearance then his parents wouldnt find him even if he went back to the pitts

Author's Response: Hmmm....that's an idea. You're right on about Justin being afraid of running into his parents. Thanks for commenting Sara!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2008 08:12 AM · On: Perchance to Dream

OH no that last line has me a bit upset, I am looking forward to the next one but I am also a bit scared for Justin, please put me out of my misery fast.

Author's Response:
You're right to be concerned for Justin. Something will happen in the next chapter, and it's not going to be good. Hopefully, I'll be able to write it quickly, so I can post soon, and put you out of your misery. LOL

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2008 01:37 AM · On: Perchance to Dream

wow, Justin must really be hiding/running from someone. Hopefully he won't get too hurt/ etc before he (someone) calls Brian. Love how Brian is acting, offering advice, a job without sarcasm.
great story

Author's Response: Brian identifies with what Justin has gone through. He's very concerned about him, and wants to get him off the streets. Thanks for the review alys. Keep reading! ;)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2008 01:28 AM · On: Perchance to Dream

oh god... what will happen to sunshine?? please update soon. :-)) rose

Author's Response: Next chapter will reveal what will become of Sunshine. I'll try to update soon! Thanks for reading rose.

Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2008 02:43 AM · On: Serendipity

Excellent chapter thank you

Author's Response: Thank you for reading Shelly. I value the feedback. It inspires me to write! :)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2008 10:49 PM · On: Serendipity

It seems that Brian can't get Justin out of his mind. :) Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Brian's smitten with Justin already. Now he just has to admit it to himself. Thanks for the review, as always Lynn!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2008 05:48 PM · On: Serendipity

This was indeed a meeting that was ment to be. I can't wait for their next meeting.

Author's Response: Our boys are destined to be together, so they always wind up finding each other. Brian's been on his best behavior, but things will get interesting. Thanks for the review gerri. I appreciate your feedback. :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2008 11:36 AM · On: Serendipity

Excellant. Beautiful finding Justin again in the park as an artist. Hopefully Justin is doing well (not tricking).

Author's Response: Must be fate! Justin only tricks when he's absolutely desperate, but things seem to be going fine right now. Thanks for the review alys!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2008 10:40 AM · On: Serendipity

I like how Justin told Gus his real name, I hope if Brian offers Justin a job or help he will accept it, update soon

Author's Response: Justin felt he had to be honest with the little boy, and he would be wise to accept Brian's proposition. Thanks for commenting Sara!

Reviewer: pfltea46 (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Reality Bites

Thanks for sharing. I like your concept for the first time B & J meet. Well written first chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I'll strive to match the quality of all the ensuing chapters with the first. I'm glad my story caught your interest. :)

Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 08:53 PM · On: Reality Bites

I like the premise of this and look forward to hearing of their time together.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Gerri. The next chapter should be finished, and ready to post soon! ;)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 11:18 PM · On: Reality Bites

it sounds like pretty woman.... but I like it. :-)) rose

Author's Response: LOL It does sound that way from the summary. But trust me, it will be very different! ;)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 09:36 PM · On: Reality Bites

poor justin, i hope he stays the night and doesnt run away so brian can take him back to the pitts and help him get a job/go to school, update soon

Author's Response:
Hi Sara. The future holds lots of drama for Brian and Justin. Keep reading!

Reviewer: Alana (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:32 PM · On: Reality Bites

I love this first chapter looking forward to your next one.

Author's Response:
Thanks Alana. So nice to hear from a new reviewer. I'll try to keep it interesting for you!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:12 PM · On: Reality Bites

Hmmm, a twist on our Brian. Caring yet sharp. Can't wait to see how everything happens

Author's Response:
Hey hun. I love protective Brian. There will be more caring moments between him and Sunshine. ;)

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:09 PM · On: Reality Bites

Interesting. Brian is so sweet and caring. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Lorie. Brian has that sweet, caring side that he rarely shows to anyone. Hopefully I'll be updating soon.

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