Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Tainted Dreams
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2019 10:30 AM · On: Busted


Daphne will woop his ass too for sure. Poor Justin xD

Author's Response:

Lol, I agree.  Poor Justin.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 01:15 AM · On: The End of the Road

good one

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2015 10:50 AM · On: Reality Bites

Bless Brian, he's already looking after Sunshine :)

Author's Response:

Of course, he is!  Thank you for the review.  :)

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 06:57 AM · On: The End of the Road

Beautiful beautiful story I know this late I'm just a newcomer to fanfics

Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment.  :)

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2013 05:23 PM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

My poor baby

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 09:05 PM · On: The Crux of the Problem

I'm just wondering why Justin did not transfer to Daphne's place. Brian, although a very nice man, is still relatively a stranger.  Daphne can definitely put up with him since its temporary.

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Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 09:03 PM · On: Ouch That Hurts

For somebody old enough to know, running away from Justin was immature. Darn, that must have hurt Justin a lot. All his insecurities surfacing.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 08:28 PM · On: Office Meet and Greet

This reminds me so much of Will Smith's "The Pursuit of Happiness". But really, few will pull down a very determined individual.

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Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 08:06 PM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

Oh wow! This is really bad... But while reading, I kept waiting for Justin to be raped. He was at least spared with this. Though I know it is still no consolation if this happened to someone in real life.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 08:04 PM · On: Perchance to Dream

This is really bad, for Justin not to take the offer of Brian. His dad must have really frightened him. But I like the way you portray Justin, you're giving him backbone despite his circumstance and challenges.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 08:02 PM · On: Serendipity

This was really classy of Justin.  He's proven that he is not all about money and can return a good turn with another one.  I am actually surprised that he gave the dog sketch for free.  That really elevated him to Brian's eyes.

Reviewer: Mary (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 10:28 PM · On: Reality Bites

Well, nice story, it is very well-written, with not simple language and expanded descriptions..I like that, especially when the author is admiring Justin=)

However you should admit that the characters are FAR Out of character!!! Except for their affection towards each other, I think they have very little in common with original Brian and Justin. For example, Brian is not even trying to pretend an asshole like he always does, he is just al kind and generous and sweet. 




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Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 11:57 PM · On: The End of the Road

This whole story is very enjoyable Terry,I loved reading it ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 11:54 PM · On: Found Again

I loved this alot ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 11:52 PM · On: Paradise Lost

Yaaay for Brian standing up for sunshine ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 11:35 PM · On: Momentary Bliss

A very great chapter my friend ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 06:11 AM · On: Together at Last

That was hot and I loved thier little declarations there at the end ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 06:03 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

Rip his ass off Brian lol ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 06:00 AM · On: So Close...

Homophobic prick!! I really don't like Craig! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 05:54 AM · On: Within Reach


Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 05:47 AM · On: Painful Disclosure

I love your Brian so much ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 05:40 AM · On: The Real Deal

Loved it! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 05:33 AM · On: The Crux of the Problem

A great update ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 06:02 AM · On: Ouch That Hurts

Darn,things were just hotting up too ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 05:22 AM · On: Mi Casa es Su Casa

I love Brian in this story alot ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Busted

I love a bossy Brian ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:59 AM · On: Office Meet and Greet

Ummm how to proceed...I think a night out at Babylon or Woodys ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:53 AM · On: Taking a Chance

I am so glad he went back home ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:42 AM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

'Damn, why the fuck hadn't he gone with the older man, then none of this would have happened.' I couldn't agree more...poor Justin ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:35 AM · On: Perchance to Dream

Oh no,I didn't like that last line at all!!! 'Unfortunately, he would soon regret that he didn't accept Brian's generous offer' something bad must be coming! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:18 AM · On: Serendipity

I am hooked now,of course I was anyway after the first chapter ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 03:08 AM · On: Reality Bites

Just an after thought...you would think Brian would be a gentle man and give sunshine the bed and he take the couch *THINKS* yea,I can't see that happening either lol ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: Christinalin (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 01:44 AM · On: The End of the Road

That was sweet :) thankmy you for that awsome story :). I enjoyed it. 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting, hon. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2012 01:35 PM · On: The End of the Road

Absolutely loved this story! Please post epilogue! 

Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review. It's still nice to receive comments from new readers. However, the story was posted in its entirety and there won't be a sequel, sorry.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 02:21 AM · On: The End of the Road

This story has been selected to be a Best Fan Fiction Classic on Whispers.

Author's Response:

I just noticed this JT.  For some reason, I am not getting my notifications.  Anyway, I want to thank you and Elsa Rose so much for this honor.  It is my pleasure to be a writer on this wonderful site!

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2011 06:17 PM · On: The End of the Road

Your writing is very amazing. I hope you continue to produce these wonderful stories because I truly love them.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  It's so nice to get feedback like this since I write for the pure enjoyment of it.

Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 01:06 PM · On: The End of the Road

amazing i just read this whole story in about 3 hours it was heart pounding

Author's Response:

It makes me feel great to know that you were so into this story.  Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2011 05:40 PM · On: The End of the Road

Very interesting and amazing story ! And an original plot ! I love it ! I would have just like to know more about the other characters from the gang to J's familly. Everything happens in Kinnetik and there is no Ted !

Can I hope that there will be a sequel soon ?

Author's Response:

Hi, hon.  I wrote this a few years ago.  This is one of my favorite stories that I've written and I'm not planning on doing a sequel.  As a rule, I don't usually do them with one exception (my sequel to Deception).  I feel that they could never be as good as the original story.  I'm pleased that you enjoyed this.  Thanks so much for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2011 06:15 AM · On: The End of the Road

thanks for finishing this wonderful story. i was so excited when i found it today,i just finished reading the whole story again.

Author's Response:

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this story so much that you read it more than once.  Thank you, it means a lot to me to get positive feedback such as yours.

Reviewer: Curious George (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 02:00 AM · On: Reality Bites

Very good story that is begging for a sequel!  Seems there is much more to be told here about the progression of this relationship.


Of course, I'd like to deal with Craig, myself. ;-)


Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support.  I don't think I'll be writing a sequel, but you never know.  ;)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2010 11:34 PM · On: The End of the Road

very good story keep up the good work

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving me a comment and letting me know that you liked the story.  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:26 AM · On: The End of the Road

What a lovely story! Just beautiful :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  It's one of my personal favorites.  Glad it warmed your heart!

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:26 AM · On: The End of the Road

What a lovely story! Just beautiful :)

Reviewer: lougenessis (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 02:55 AM · On: The End of the Road

My heart is so full.  What a beautiful story.  I'm looking forward in reading more of your work.  Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  It's nice to hear that there are still some people who are enjoying it.  I have a lot more stories on here to keep you busy! :)

Reviewer: Shenova (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2008 03:58 AM · On: The End of the Road

I am loving the story poor Justin has been though some much but Brain is there for him now and will help him through everything. Nice to see that Brian had the guts to tell Justin how he felt. Let#s hope they will be happy. I love your writing it's wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Shenova.  It's nice to hear from a new reader.  Brian will always be there for Justin.  They were destined to be together.

Reviewer: Liberty (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 01:07 PM · On: The End of the Road

This was so great hun.


Author's Response: Thanks Keighley.  Coming from a fellow writer, that's a huge compliment.  :)

Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2008 03:34 AM · On: The End of the Road

awwwww I loved reading this story (what a surprise- I love your stories!) It's really great. I was always excited when I saw new update and now it over...

I'm sure I'll reread it sometime in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Magda.  It was nice of you to comment to tell me how much you liked my story.  It feels great to know that my writing is appreciated, and read more than once!  :)

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2008 07:39 AM · On: The End of the Road

  AWW!! Such a sweet ending to a beautiful story!! I loved going on this journey and it was so worth it because Brian finally admitted he loved his Sunshine...(sob)...I will so miss this story!

Author's Response: Hi Jasmine,  Thank you so much for all your support and encouragement.  Kind, wonderful praise such as yours, is what keeps me writing. 

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2008 06:00 AM · On: The End of the Road

That was good, really good.   Justin was right, there will be difficulties.  Then again,  I guess Brain will simply say  – “So What?”  Hey, Brian

knows, Justin is worth it.


Thanks for writing this and - sharing it with us.  I really enjoyed it.  I certainly  hope you enjoyed writing it as much as we did reading it.



Author's Response: Hi sweetie!  Yes, true love is worth it.  Brian and Justin will be fine because they will face the world together.  And I totally enjoyed writing this.  It was definitely a labor or love. :)  Thanks for your support David!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2008 12:04 AM · On: The End of the Road

Wonderful ending!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Lynn for always being there with an encouraging word.  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2008 06:29 PM · On: The End of the Road

you did a really good job with this story. I loved it so much :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie!  This is one of my personal favorites too. 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:34 PM · On: The End of the Road

Oh yea! Happy ending!! It took for Justin to nearly be out of the door for Brian to finally tell him how he felt. I'm glad he came to his senses before he lost his Sunshine forever.

And I just love what Brian said "I'm not saying it for you.  Well I am, but I'm saying it for me too.  Truth is, I can't imagine my life without you Sunshine.  You're the reason I wake up smiling.  You're the one person who's made me rethink the way I live my life.  So, I'm going to tell you this one more time, because I think you need to hear it loud and clear. I love you, Justin Taylor.  I love the person you were, the person you are right now, and the person you're going to be." 

Now that was ridiculously romantic in every way and I loved it! So sad to see this story come to an end, I loved every bit of it! 

Author's Response: Yes, Brian finally said it!  Just in time.  :)  I'm so happy you enjoyed this story.  I was sorry that it had to end too.  Thank you for all your support!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:09 PM · On: The End of the Road

fantastic ending. good thing brian opened his mouth when he did or he would have lost it all. 

"Justin realized that he had not only fulfilled his dreams, he had surpassed them." i think they both did.

Author's Response: Thanks hun.  I always look forward to your reviews.  I appreciate your support and encouragement.  Hugs~T

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:02 PM · On: The End of the Road

A Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks alys, for your support and kind words!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2008 07:54 AM · On: Found Again

 Yahoo!! Brian found his sunshine!! I can't wait for him to tell Justin that he told that idiot to go to hell!! I just love this story and will hate (sob) to see it end!!! Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: I am sorry to see it end too.  I love Brian's protective side, and he definitely shows it in this story.  Brian will reveal all to his Sunshine in the next (and last) chapter.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:49 AM · On: Found Again

I'm so happy Brian found Justin and that they have begun to talk. I hope Brian tells Justin right away that he told that guy to go to hell!

Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Kat.  There will be a lot of honest feelings shared in this next chapter.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:27 AM · On: Paradise Lost

Poor Justin! If only he had stayed a few seconds longer to hear Brian's answer. I can understand him being so upset about that whole situation.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 10:27 PM · On: Found Again

i would hug him first and then kill him for scaring me like that.

once justin finds out what brian told roddick, he'll know how brian feels about him.

i'm glad he came to his senses and didn't walk to NY. lol

Author's Response:

Yeah, good thing Justin decided against it. LOL  Brian will finally let Justin know how he feels in this last chapter.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Found Again

OMG, why oh why you left us hanging......... please update soon. Thanks

Author's Response:

Was that soon enough? LOL  Hope you like the ending.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 09:17 PM · On: Found Again

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Lynn.  Next chapter is the end.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2008 08:00 AM · On: Paradise Lost

  OH NOOO!! How can you do this...you must update and let Brian admit that he loves Justin and clear up this misunderstanding....Please don't let Justin runaway he's done enough of that!! Update quickly...Just love this story and the suspense (even though it's killin me) LOL

Author's Response: LOL, I'll think about it.  The story will be ending soon, if that gives you any indication of where it's going.  ;)

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:26 PM · On: Paradise Lost

Thanks for a great update can hardly wait for the next chapter please update soon.


Hugs Buffytess 

Author's Response: Thanks Buffy.  I'm happy that you're enjoying the ride.  RL has been quite busy, but I'll try to post something soon!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:15 PM · On: Paradise Lost

'Oh Brian, why can't you admit you love Justin?' And to make it worse, Justin assumes that Brian took Tom's deal of firing Justin to get the account with his cosmetics company. *sighs* I hope Brian finds Justin soon and explain to him what happened and maybe tell Justin that he loves him? Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Brian has always had a hard time talking about his feelings and acting "romantic".  But you're right.  Justin made the wrong assumption.  Hopefully they'll be able to work things out.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 04:53 PM · On: Paradise Lost

oh my god. poor justin. :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Everyone's past has a way of catching up to them.  Justin has to learn to deal with it.  Maybe Brian can help, or maybe he won't want to.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Paradise Lost

Love Brian when he's in white stallion mode.... off to rescue the damsel ;-) Hopefully Justin doesn't see Tom, but B sees J.

Author's Response:

Brian to the rescue!  I like your description, "white stallion mode".  Thanks for commenting alys.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 12:01 PM · On: Paradise Lost

well if that doesn't show justin how brian feels about him, i don't know what will. throwing away a twenty million dollar account just to keep justin close. i'd say that's saying alot. now where has justin gone and can brian find him?

Author's Response: Justin took off too soon.  He didn't get to hear Brian's answer.  It didn't take much for Justin to give up on their relationship. because of his poor self esteem.  Keep reading, everything will get resolved soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:56 AM · On: Paradise Lost

It is getting better and better each time ! I love it !

You manage to make us feel all the emotions related to a new relationship, as well as what can happen when your past collide with your present and affects your future! Update soon... Please ?

Good work, Jersey :))


Author's Response: Thank you so much sweetie!  I try to make my stories true to life.  Relationships are difficult in the first place, and when you throw in some added problems like Brian not being able to talk, and Justin coming from an abusive household, it's almost impossible.  I'll try to update soon, but rl has been quite busy lately.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2008 07:52 AM · On: Momentary Bliss

  ooh!! Such a sweet and wonderful chapter! Why do I get the feeling that Brian and Justin's happiness won't last...These true do deserve the fairytale ending with lots of love and of course hot sex!! LOL. Can't wait for the update and I hope I'm wrong.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 02:35 AM · On: Momentary Bliss

i hope it does, for both their sakes.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2008 06:31 PM · On: Momentary Bliss

Uh oh. I just can't shake this feeling that everything will be crashing down around Brian and Justin, when they are so happy and in love. *sighs* Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: Thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2008 02:37 PM · On: Momentary Bliss

Thanks for the update. Hope everything will be alright with the lovers!!

Reviewer: Elvenfixation (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2008 12:20 PM · On: Momentary Bliss

I haven't reviewed before, but I've been reading this story from the start...I just had to say, it's become one of the few I've been following eagerly. Every time I see a new chapter, I can't wait to read it, and I can't wait to see what happens to Brian and Justin now.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2008 07:02 AM · On: Together at Last

  WOW!! This chapter was scorching!! Sex, violence, and romantic professions of love between our favorite couple. I was so glad that Brian choked the crap out of Craig and told him what would happen if he laid his hands on our sweet Prince!! Whew, and the hot sex between these 2 was well worth the wait...Thank you!! Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks Jasmine.  It took sixteen chapters, but our boys finally got there.  I'm so happy that you hung in there, and that you enjoyed this chapter!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2008 01:20 AM · On: Together at Last

Hot chapter, looking forward for more. *g*

Author's Response: Thanks Lynn.  Glad you enjoyed teh hotness! ;)

Reviewer: maddy_snape (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 02:15 PM · On: Together at Last

Aww!  So sweet!  I'm glad nothing really bad happened with Craig and that Justin intervened.  And such a lovely ending to the chapter!

Author's Response: If Justin had not intervened when he did, Craig would have been in trouble.  I'm happy that you are loving their first time together.  Good things come to those who wait!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 12:32 PM · On: Together at Last

I said Craig was no match for Protective Brian and I was right! I'm glad Justin stopped Brian from really doing something to Craig though. He was just in such a zone!  Brian started pulling out that can of whoop ass and if Justin hadn't stopped him he would have had Craig crying!

And B/J's first time was all I imagined it to be. It was sweet, hot, sexy and loving. I'm glad those two finally got together. 

Author's Response: You're right!  Justin was the only reason he didn't do more to Craig.  Brian was crazed, and being very protective of Justin.  And as for the first time sex, I'm happy you liked it.  Thanks for the review hun!

Reviewer: Thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2008 09:44 AM · On: Together at Last

Thanks for an early update. Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Thess.  I'm glad you hung in there, and that you enjoyed their first time. :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 09:16 AM · On: Together at Last

bravo. he was so close to losing it with craig. only justin could stop him. and they finally had sex. whoo hoo. loved it.

Author's Response: Exactly right.  Brian wanted to do more to Craig, and would have, had it not been for Justin's plea.  I'm glad you enjoyed the hotness of our boys! 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2008 08:00 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

  Great chapter!! Woohoo!! It's Brian to the rescue of his prince!! Can't wait for the much needed showdown between Brian and ass-face, I mean Craig! LOL...Will wait patiently for your update.

Author's Response: Yes, Brian is coming to his Prince's defense, as always.  Brian and Craig will come face to face, and have their "discussion".  Thanks for reading Jasmine!

Reviewer: Thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2008 05:44 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

Thanks for the early update. Love every chapter of the story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Thess.  I love to get reviews like yours, so keep them coming! :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2008 03:59 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

Drat, Justin stay put, don't follow Brian..... or yes have that showdown... it'll be interesting your next chapter.

Like how Brian is confindently caring and loving to Justin.

Author's Response: Don't worry Brian will get to Craig before Justin does.  Next chapter will definitely be interesting.  Hope you like it!

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2008 03:16 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

i love this fic please update soon again

hugs Buffytess 

Author's Response: Hi Buffytess.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  I'm cranking out the chapters fairly quickly.  Enjoy!

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2008 02:27 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

Dear, WSweet angel,

I didn"t have time to leave a review before, but I look almost everyday to see if there is an update from you and this story !

I love it (I have a thing for hurt/comfort fics) and yours is a pleasure to read!

I wonder what will happen now ???

See ya !!! Jersey :))   

Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting honey.  I'm so thrilled that you're enjoying this story.  It shows Brian's protective, sweet side.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 02:01 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

brian is a gem. knew exactly what had to be sone for justin and didn't let anything get in the way of calming him down. even put the thought of having sex (finally) off for the night.

i hope he get to craig's way before justin does and that he gives it to him good. let justin walk in on the end of the conversation. then he see how much brian really cares and know for a fact that craig doesn't and never will again.

Author's Response: Brian absolutely has Justin's best interest at heart.  He so cares about him!  Brian will definitely confront Craig.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2008 01:30 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

Uh oh. I know that Brian wants to protect Justin at all costs but, meeting with his father Craig is a very bad idea. *sighs* I am looking forward in what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Meeting with Craig might go better than you thought.  Thanks for all your support Lynn,

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 12:32 AM · On: The Calm Before The Storm

Woo hoo! Brian on a mission, watch out Craig! He is no match for protective Brian.

I'm glad Brian was able to help Justin through his panic attack, but the poor kid has suffered so much.

I can't wait to see what happens when Craig is face to face with Brian! Another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks hun.  Craig is going to get his, and Brian is the one who's going to give it to him.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2008 07:39 AM · On: So Close...

  Such a good chapter!! I hate Craig and hope that he gets what he deserves!! Poor Justin at least he made it back to the loft!! Bo, hiss, hiss to the evil homophobic Craig for hurting our boy!! Hurry and update!!

Author's Response: Thank you Jasmine!  Justin ran to the only person he knew would understand and help.  Brian is not going to be happy when he finds out what happened,.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 03:39 AM · On: So Close...

Dang it Craig! Why did he have to say anything to Justin. He was making such progress and now hopefully Craig didn't mess that up.

Brian knows how to help Justin through his panic attack and I hope that Justin will tell him about seeing his dad.

Author's Response:

Poor Justin had quite a fright with Craig in his face.  Don't worry, the boys will cope with this together!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2008 03:01 AM · On: So Close...

Poor Justin. He was doing so well. Craig is such an ass. *shakes head* I hope Brian can get Justin out of his panic attack. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Brian is probably the only one who can help Justin right now.  Hopefully it won't set him back too much!  Thanks for the review hun.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 02:19 PM · On: So Close...

oh no, not craig... poor justin. not only he had to face his dad now he won´t get his prize....:-)) rose

Author's Response: Well, Justin will get his prize, but maybe not just yet.  Have faith...the boys will be together soon!  ;)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2008 11:02 AM · On: So Close...

aaghhh!!!!!!!!! fucking craig. things were going to be so good tonight. all that pent up sexual tension. i could kill him. brian will not be a happy camper when he finds out the cause of the attack.

more soon please.

Author's Response: Craig really knows how to ruin our boys' good time!   Brian is not going to take this well.  *heads back to room to write the next chapter*

Reviewer: maddy_snape (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2008 10:14 AM · On: So Close...

Doh!  As you titles it So Close!  Poor Justin, I guess this is going to set back his recovery a bit...

Author's Response: Brian helps Justin get through this.  Never fear, the boys will get together one of these days...maybe even sooner than you think.  Thanks for the review maddy!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 07:59 AM · On: So Close...

oh man, pure evil, cliffer hanger... yucky villian father.... panic attack Justin 

Great chapter... now hurry please. Ya know, cuddling is great for panic attacks, which could lead to..... ;-)

Author's Response: Craig is the perfect villain.  Brian and Justin are so close.  It will happen soon...hang in there!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 07:31 AM · On: So Close...

Wow...can't anything go as planned for Justin? Finally gets things together with one thing and then a new problem. You are doing very well at keeping the story exciting, great work. I love your story so far, and can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Author's Response: Yes, our boys have not had an easy time of it.  But that's what will make it all the more joyous when they finally do get together.  Thanks so much for following the story.  I'm happy it's kept you entertained!

Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 06:22 AM · On: So Close...

No!!!  Oh my goodness, I was so jazzed for the steamy scene.  But on the other hand I do looove hurt/comfort. Can't wait for the update!!!

Author's Response: I'm a tease, I know.  Glad you're enjoying the story Cait.  Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 04:56 AM · On: So Close...

poor justin, craig is such a jerk

Author's Response: Craig really knows how to screw up Justin's life! 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 01:09 AM · On: Within Reach

Now that Brian and Justin know the truth about each other's true feelings. Will they finally act on them? Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Hmmm...that is the million dollar question.  To be answered soon!  Thanks Lynn. :)

Reviewer: tHESS (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 04:07 PM · On: Within Reach

Thanks for the update and waiting for more!!! Now, they know their true feelings for each other!!

Author's Response: Yes, finally the cat is out of the bag so to speak.  More is already posted. ;)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Within Reach

do it an be done with it.... my go... they are so frustrating...:-)) rose

Author's Response: Urgh!  Yes, very frustrating.  I promise the hotness in the near future.  Thanks for reading rose!

Reviewer: Alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 07:46 AM · On: Within Reach

Brian sure can be dense sometimes, but then so can Justin. Hmmm, thinking ravishment soon ;-)



Author's Response: You're right Alys.  Both of them can be so pig headed.  Ravishing...maybe not the next chapter but soon!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 07:17 AM · On: Within Reach

Well, at least they're communicating, maybe they can finally work some stuff out. I can't wait to see what you have planned next. :)

Author's Response: Working things out.  Something is definitely "worked out" in the next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Rachelle (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 06:53 AM · On: Within Reach

Justin has been through so much and he has devolped such strong feelings for Brian and then to see Brian go off with someone else you can understand why he was so hurt and it made him feel like he wasnt good enough so I think Brian telling him why he hasnt tried anything was so good because it helps Justin to see that the guy at the club meant nothing to Brian but Brian is taking things slow with them because he actually cares about him

Author's Response: You're right on all counts.  He truly cares about Justin, but was acting in typical Kinney fashion.  Thanks for taking the time to comment Rachelle!

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 06:05 AM · On: Within Reach

well atleast they both got out how they are feeling, there is so much fire between these 2 that even when they fight its hot lol

Author's Response: Yes, the hotness is always there waiting to surface.  Thanks Sara!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 04:46 AM · On: Within Reach

opened his mouth and put his foot right in it. brian was trying to be decent and not take advantage of him. brian has every right to be angry.

Author's Response: They both have a right to be angry for different reasons. Those two will get it right some day.  Thanks for commenting hun.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2008 01:23 AM · On: Within Reach

When those two finally do it, they are going to tear down the walls of the loft. There is so much passion between them. So now the secret is out, they have both admitted how they fell about each other. I'm glad Brian told Justin why he hadn't tried to have sex with him. There is now a new level of understanding between them now. Great chapter!!

Author's Response: Yep it's all out there now.  Thanks for the review Kat. Only a few chapters left!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2008 05:08 PM · On: Painful Disclosure

I am so happy Justin told Brian what happened to him in New York. Now maybe Justin and Brian be able to have relationship now. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Lynn.  Justin should be on the road to recovery.  He's passed a big hurdle, and at least Brian can help him now!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2008 12:55 AM · On: Painful Disclosure

I'm so glad Justin told Brian about what happened! Now Brian can try to help him move on and heal.

Author's Response: Yes, hopefully things will get better, and they can have a healthy relationship! ;)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2008 10:45 PM · On: Painful Disclosure

oh my god...those two are so complicated....:-)) rose

Author's Response: Always!  Things never go smoothly for our boys.  :(

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2008 10:26 PM · On: Painful Disclosure

  What a great chapter (again)...I just love that Daph is back in Justin's life...she just rules!! I love that Justin was finally able to admit to Brian what happen to him in NYC.. Justin's pain is so raw and I'm glad that he's able to trust Brian enough to tell him the painful episode in NYC..Brian is right though, Justin isn't in a good place emotionally right now and he needs time to heal. You are updating so fast that I won't bother to say can't wait for the update...Just love this story!!

Author's Response: Daphne is a great character to write.  Now that Justin finally told Brian about NYC, at least he can help him heal.  Thank you for your wonderful feedback!

Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2008 10:18 PM · On: Painful Disclosure

A beautiful chapter:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Anna.  Justin is finally letting Brian in.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2008 08:31 PM · On: Painful Disclosure

Love how Daph is back in J's life. How Brian is understanding of what J needs at the moment.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I love the relationship between Daph and Justin.  Brian is being very patient and sweet.  Hopefully Justin will respond by trusting him.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 02:53 AM · On: The Real Deal

This is going to be a long journey for both of them, but I know that things will be ok in the end. I'm glad Brian wants to be there for Justin to help him deal with this.

Author's Response: Brian is, and always will be Justin's biggest supporter.  He wants his boy to get better, because of course, he loves him. (which he is just beginning to realize, btw)  Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2008 01:38 AM · On: The Real Deal

'The kid had already gotten under his skin, and there was no turning back now.'

That's right, Brian. There is no turning back. Brian already knows he is falling in love with Justin. I am looking forward as to what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Brian is a goner.  The duo are headed for rough waters.  Stay tuned Lynn!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 01:32 AM · On: The Real Deal

wonderful chapter. so indepth and interesting.

job well done.

Author's Response: Thank you kindly, darling.  This story seems to be taking its own path.  I'm just along for the ride. (and it's leading me to interesting places) ;)

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2008 11:32 PM · On: The Crux of the Problem

  If I haven't told you before, I'll tell you now this is a very good story...You captured Brian perfectly, he hasn't loss his edge..I'm so glad that Justin is seeing a psychiatrist...Poor Justin suffering from PTSD, at least Brian can now take steps to help him. Now, that they no what the problem Justin can begin to heal!! I see you just updated so I'm off to the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Oops!  Sorry I never responded to this review until now.  But thank you Jasmine for your constant support and reviews.  I appreciate you taking the time to always comment and give me feedback!

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2008 07:02 AM · On: The Crux of the Problem


What a fantastic chapter to such a wonderful story.

Love reading all your stories.

About time someone show the real Bri. Hate when he is always misunderstood or being treated unfiarly/used/blamed.

I hope both of them can help overcome all the obstacles and get the love, happiness they both deserved very much.

Please update very soon. I was so happy to see updates always.

Thanks again

Take care

Author's Response: Than you so much for your very lovely words of praise.  You're right when you say that Brian was treated unfairly.  I always felt he was never given enough credit for his altruistic actions.  He was generous to a fault with his so called family and friends, and none of them seemed to truly appreciate the man.  As for my story, Brian and Justin have a rough road ahead of them.  Thanks again for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 08:38 PM · On: The Crux of the Problem

he won't tell brian what happened in ny yet he's expected to help him get over it? and all that happened with his family before then? is brian a saint?

Author's Response: Actually Justin is going to be more forthcoming in the following chapters.  He is realizing that he can trust Brian, and that he needs to let others help him to heal.  Thanks for reviewing hun!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2008 05:29 PM · On: The Crux of the Problem

Now that Brian knows what is wrong with Justin, I hope he be able to get Justin to open up to him. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you hun.  Brian is probably the only one who can help Justin.  (if he's willing ride it out)

Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2008 08:33 AM · On: The Crux of the Problem

Thank you for writing:)

Author's Response: And thank you for reading and commenting Anna.  Reviews are always so nice to receive. :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 08:25 AM · On: The Crux of the Problem

I'm glad Brian's been given this info, now he'll hopefully be able to start helping Justin.

Author's Response:

Brian will do anything to help Justin.  He's already taken with him.  (but don't tell him that!)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2008 07:08 AM · On: The Crux of the Problem

'Brian had departed the loft out of self preservation....and it scared the shit out of him.' So Brian leaving because he was scared, but thankfully admitting it to himself.

Like how Justin didn't leave after Brian ran. Also how he allowed the dr to speak w/ Brian.

Great Story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing sweetie.  Justin is scared, and he is finally realizing he can't deal with this alone.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2008 03:23 AM · On: Ouch That Hurts

  Oh, this is such a great chapter!! I so like this Brian! He's thinking with his heart instead of other parts of his anatomy...I'm so glad that he offered to get Justin help...I just know once Justin deals with everything that happen to him not only in NYC but with his parents he will begin to heal...Than watch out because there will be sexual fireworks!! Can't wait for the update!!!


Author's Response: I really appreciate your reviews Jasmine.  They're always so full of enthusiasm.  I love it!  Thank you for reading hun.

Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2008 08:27 PM · On: Ouch That Hurts

I love this story:) ! And what a cliffhanger you got there, I hope you will update soon;)


Author's Response: Thank you sweetie!  If you've read anything I've written, you know that I love cliffhangers.  But I also finish all my stories, and try to update quickly.  In fact, look for the next chapter real soon! :)

Reviewer: maddy_snape (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 10:17 AM · On: Ouch That Hurts

This is my absolute favourite story at the moment!  Keep up the angst!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much!  I love to get feedback from readers I've never heard from before.  And you write yourself, so your compliments are even more valued.  ;)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 07:13 AM · On: Ouch That Hurts

Dang! And the Brian/Justin show begins =) I hope Brian comes back and explains to Justin why he thought they should stop. So happy to see an update on this story!

Author's Response: Thanks for your readership and feedback Kat.  The Brian/Justin connection is a strong one.   Although this Brian is slightly more caring, he's still an ass at times.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2008 06:51 AM · On: Ouch That Hurts

Love this Brian, open and caring not snarky with J. But still not very good at communicating, hopefully he'll turnaround and say something that'll help before he leaves.

Author's Response: Brian is still the asshole we know and love. LOL  There's a bumpy road ahead for the couple.  Thanks for reading alys!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 06:01 AM · On: Ouch That Hurts

found comfort that he offered justin in justin's arms as much as justin did in his. what is he afraid of?

Author's Response: Brian realizes that Justin is in an emotionally fragile state.  He's too needy and insecure.  Brian wants him to get emotionally healthy, since Justin's welfare is always his main concern.  Another complication is that Brian is his boss!  Thanks for the feedback hun.

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