Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Dying Inside
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2008 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just reread this story. Really like how they are apparently online friends. How did they meet? Will they meet soon face to face?

More please, this is such a great story line.

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like this story... Are you going to write some more?

Reviewer: gerri (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2008 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

For some reason I have only just come across this and I am glad I found it. The pain is so visable ad feels so strong, but the hope is there also, I am looking forward to this journey.

Reviewer: Edela (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

OMG...Pick up your phone Justin...!

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2008 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 2

Very good...I'm looking forward to an update...Hope Brian called in time.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

cutter stories are always making me sad. they king of hurt me but this story got me hooked, especially because it is a AU story and no post513. :-)) rose

Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh shit! What the fuck are you trying to do to me? *sobs quitely into my teddy bear*

Is Justin okay? Will he be okay? Can Brian save him? Oh fuck!!

Poor Brian, his leg, he won't be able to get to Justin in time, will he?

You see what you do when you worry me?? I'm not emotionally stable at the moment so I have to find out what's going on! AGH!

I do love it, but COME ON! Eeek!

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2008 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

*sigh*

It's so sad but I like it!

 

xma

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2008 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter. The pain Justin is feeling is huge... Can Brian find him, help him, not be a jerk.... sounds like he's a friend..... can't wait for more

Reviewer: good neighbor (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2008 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

I wonder if you could somehow put your (very nice, artistic) picture under some kind of "LJ Cut" type thing, someone walked by and had a minor melt-down because it was "triggering"

truthfully I had only glanced at it myself and had thought is was some sort of abstract type paint and design thing-y until they mentioned it

thanks

Author's Response:

Sorry, but I won't take down the pic, or put it under a "LJ Cut". The story is about Justin having problems, and that's what the banner shows. It's my way to show the reader what the story is about without writing a summary that, in the end, won't tell anything. I'm sorry that it triggered something by one of your friends, but I won't take down it, because if I would do this, I would have to take the story down as well.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2008 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yaih you've posted it here ^^ Hurry up with the next Chapter doll ;) *kiss*

Author's Response: You know, if you would check my community you would have known that I already posted it there, as I always do. Doll... at least you didn't call me "Binchen" again. Talk to you later, and keep on writing as well ;)

Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2008 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Intense... wow. I really like this idea and I'm intrigued as to what the outcome of this will be.

Plus I can't wait for Brian's POV, to find out what kind of person can bring Justin out of the depression he is in.

Later hon, Emma x



Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review Emma, and yes, I wanted it to be this intense. It wouldn't be good to have the situation without all the emotion that goes with it. Maybe Brian won't even be the key to Justins helplessness, maybe he will. We'll see. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Kristina (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2008 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow, this is deep and I can completely relate.

Author's Response: Thank you Kristina, I tried to write down everything I felt when I thought of it, and as an artist myself I had to describe it like I did. Hope you will read the other chapters as well.

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is so incredibly tragic. Will be interested to see where it leads.  I don't do Justin/victim/tragic well but I'll keep reading.



Author's Response: Hey there Big J, normally I wouldn't write it as well, but life got me to the point were I had to write something like this, and thank you so much for reading the story anyway. It means really much to me.

Reviewer: Syd (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2008 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!!! So sad I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.

Author's Response: Hopefully you'll like what happens next.

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