Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2013 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

will not

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

I think Mel will end up with a boy this time since Brian will be the father of this baby as well. Michael's known family(Danny, his real dad, Uncle Vic, Debbie, and then another aunt from Vic and Debbie) has an equal amount of both genders. Whereas, the Kinney line seems to have more males. Jack, Brian, Gus, John, and Peter. I know John and Peter are Claire's sons, but they do have Kinney blood on from Claire's side. And we don't know much about Mel's side of the family. Other than she's Jewish and that she has a dad, mom, and a female cousin named Rita(though we don't know if it's by blood or just marriage). So, I think Brian and Mel will have a son. Maybe a nice Irish and Jewish name? Oh and maybe Linds/Mel can grant another thing for Brian and change Gus last name to Kinney and also the new baby as well?

Brian and Justin do need help. Brian should tell Justin about the hustler he hired and how he glued the judge's toilet seat. Justin should tell Brian about Kip Thomas. 

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

Will it have a next chapter soon? Is it abandonned for good?

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2011 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

Really love your story. It is amazing and would love to read more about them starting Kinnetic and getting help. Could you please update?

Reviewer: Charlie (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

So... I know it's been awhile since you've written this, but I'm all for continuing it. :D Pretty please?

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

Just found this story and I really like the premise and the fact that our boys are finally working TOGETHER in this undefined, non-conventional relationship :)

Here's hoping the new year will re-inspire your muses and/or give you time to work on this :D

Reviewer: Bessie (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

Wow!! Loved this chapter and this whole story. Finally B&J are talking about stuff, which is where I think all their problems originated. Loved how you captures their characters and motivations!! Please update soon.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

they're talking, but not really listening to the other. baby steps, that what they need to take, baby steps. it will work out.

the beginning of kinnetik, whoo hoo.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 10 First Things First

It's so great to see an update to this one.

Great chapter. I hope you'll update again soon.

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 9 Moving Together

I'm really enjoying where this story is going.  It is certainly fixing a few things that really frustrated me with QAF. 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 9 Moving Together

openness, a rarity in their relationship concerning their feelings. i loved it. they are fighting to get it right. good for them.

this chapter was a good one, have no fear of that.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 9 Moving Together

I'm glad Brian and Justin talked about Justin's reasons for not wanting to move back into the loft.

Reviewer: Poppieshaze (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 Moving Together

I really like your fic, especially the fact that Brian doesn't turn into a lesbian after seeing a shrink! Good luck on updating.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 Moving Together

Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter. This is really great.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 8 One Year

that little grease rat. what was he trying to do? first he sends the package and then goes to talk to him. did he think that he think justin would fall into his arms because of it? what a friggin' pig.

poor brian living it all over again. good think justin was there to help him forget. i hope now that they both talked about how they felt about the bashing they can get on with the loving and being back together.

Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 One Year

I have to say I am absolutely loving your version...way better than original. I like the idea that there is still the Ethan issue but it is handled WAY better. I also like that Brian backed out of the Stockwell campaign due to his influence over J's bashing rather than the backrooms were closed down. I love the therapist and I'm glad both J and B are going. You totally floored me on Ethan being the one who sent the bat...I NEVER expected that.

Update SOON.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 8 One Year

That was so good. The fiddler is an idiot.

More soon please.

Reviewer: Jess (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2008 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 8 One Year

Loved it! Please update soon!

Reviewer: aimear7 (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2008 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 7 Baseball, Bats and Boyfriends

It's so good Justin is beginning to remember, just wish it wasn't promted by such a disturbing gift :( But I love your Mel and how she gets on with Brian, and the present they gave Brian was brillaint, especially as he had finally opened up about his feelings. Can't wait for you to update this again!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2008 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 7 Baseball, Bats and Boyfriends

Wonderful about the girls and Brian. Loved the birthday party, even Ted was fun. Glad Daph has such a good head on her shoulders. Hopefully more memories will surface if our boys spend the next days together.

Love this storyline.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 7 Baseball, Bats and Boyfriends

Great chapter! I'm glad Brian let everyone celebrate his birthday and it was much better than his 30th.

I can't believe Chris would send him that bat and tix to the Pirates game. That is low! It was a good thing Brian was at Daphne's right at the same time Justin was having the nighmare. He really needed Brian at that point.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 Baseball, Bats and Boyfriends

Wow. Intense but very good. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 7 Baseball, Bats and Boyfriends

wow this chapter set up alot of things. there's cynthia's message about brown and ted's looking for a job. one client and an accountant. the beginning of kinnetic. there's the big change in brian that he actually allowed his birthday to be celebrated. he'll father mel's baby and have all parental rights. yay on that. and finally there's justin. back in his arms, body to body. peaceful night sleep for both.

now i don't think chris sent the tickets and bat. i don't know who but i do have an idea.

Reviewer: Jess (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2008 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 6 Prelude to an Anniversary

I'm loving it. Please update :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 Prelude to an Anniversary

I'm glad Brian talked to Chris about everything he was feeling. Hopefully he will take her advice and spend that entire day with Justin.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 6 Prelude to an Anniversary

this was a wonderful chapter. i liked that he left vanguard. surprised that mel asked him to reconsider being a father again. first let him get through the anniversary.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 5 Brian vs. Stockwell

I'm glad to see this updated! I'm going to have to go back and re-read the other chapters to refreash my memory.

Author's Response: sorry for taking so long. I'm on a fairly regular schedule now, so updates should be more regular too.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2008 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 3 Conversations

i like very much.

that stupid shit michael better lose his voice or something because if he doesn't learn to keep his mouth shut i'm gonna ram my fist down his throat till he chokes to death. i hate him. either he's nasty or just palin dumb. can't decide wihich i hate more.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2008 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 Conversations

Nice. I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2008 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 Conversations

I loved how Brian was going to all these people trying to find Justin and having to listen to everyones crap lol, Mikey does need another punch and maybe a push down the stairs just to make sure he gets the message lol

Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 2 Brian vs. Ethan

haha this is going to be interesting!

Reviewer: Lilith (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 2 Brian vs. Ethan

Thank you for the update...I like where you are taking this story looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 2 Brian vs. Ethan

I cant wait to see what Brian says when Justin asks him to therapy and what happens when hes there, can you just imagine what Brians face would have been like if someone asked him if he was bisexual, like he would have been so upset that someone thought he liked pussy lol great chapter

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2008 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 Brian vs. Ethan

he showed no emotion. you could tell being there really bothered him. now she's asking him to do the most impossible thing, bring brian in. *smirk*. this is going to be fun.

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2008 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1-The Beginning

Sara, I don't think anyone ever asked Brian or Mikey why Brian hit him because they knew darn well neither of them would tell them.  At least I see it that way.  I don't see Michael or Brian telling anyone. 

Reviewer: terrillian (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2008 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 1-The Beginning

i like it

Reviewer: Christina (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2008 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1-The Beginning

I loved it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2008 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 1-The Beginning

I like it, I agree with you, I dont think Justin would of hung around and gone back into the closet after everything hes been through, only problem is now Justin wont ever know what a slimebag and cheater Ethan really is. There were quite afew things Justin did and went along with regarding Ethan that I thought were so out of character on the show, one thing that really got to me on the show was when Brian punched Mikey, like everyone knew how Brian grew up being abused by his father so they knew he didnt like violence but yet nobody asked him why he punched Mikey, I thought that was crazy, I look forward to reading more

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2008 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1-The Beginning

pretty interesting so far.

Reviewer: *triXalot* (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2008 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1-The Beginning

...Interesting, interesting. I've always wondered what it would be like if Justin had left Ethan when he asked him to stay in the closet. I can't wait to read more--you've already got me hooked!!

Reviewer: NY Lurker (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1-The Beginning

Interesting storyline.  Waiting to see what happens....

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