Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 05:25 PM · On: Everybody

This was a great story!!  And I'm glad that Brian and Justin just did what they wanted to do and got married.   I'm hopeful that after them tellling everybody how it is, they will finally get a clue, but I highly doubt it.   I think the next thing on their agenga should be to get the locks changed at the loft, and only have a key for the two of them. 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 09:53 PM · On: Everybody

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 09:53 PM · On: Everybody

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 09:53 PM · On: Everybody

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 08:53 AM · On: Everybody

Fucking Lindsey.  I would change the locks and give nobody a key

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 08:22 AM · On: Michael

Just love it, LOL, Michael listing to them.  Great

Reviewer: gaarainolove666 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2018 06:44 PM · On: Michael

very entertaining story. Good Job

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2017 03:23 AM · On: Michael

Great story, really enjoyable read.  Will Michael and Lindsay ever get a clue? Too much to hope for, I guess!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:43 PM · On: Everybody

  I couldn't believe how all those people just walked right in the loft! Debbie and her son have no sense of boundries and then acted rude that guys were fucking--you just don't invade a person's privacy

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:36 PM · On: Gus and Ben

 Wish I could have slapped mikey's face, how dare he upset Gus and make tear up that daddy Justin wasn't his daddy and was so glad when Mel told the jackass to shut up. If Brian thought Justin wouldn't be there Gus he would have let Gus call him daddy Justin

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:29 PM · On: Jennifer and Molly

 I've always loved Jen, she and Molly both love Brian. He is seen by them as loving and devoted to Justin in much the same way as Justin is to Brian. I like the Brian lets Justin have his moments to shine instead of Brian being the big deal

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:23 PM · On: Ted and Cynthia

Of all their friends I think Ted and Cynthia know Brian and Justin best, it's not just sex between them they connect on a much higer level

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:13 PM · On: Melanie and Lindsay

I like Mel she is straight foreward, sorry Lindsay has been and always be a cunt, she wants what she wants and she will say or do anything to get her way,regardless who it hurts. Mel at least knows that Gus loves and is loved by Brian and Justn 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:07 PM · On: Debbie and Emmett

I think Em always knew about Brian and Justin he has certainly went to bat for them with mikey, as for Deb she believes every word that mikey utters which is usually a lie.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:02 PM · On: Michael

I have read this story so many times but failed to review, but it is such a good story I felt I should.Chapter one on mikey, if you ever wanted to meet a village idiot mikey's your man,- why couldn't he sleep on the sofa at his mothers or at Ems.Because he lives to see Brian nude, he had no idea that Justin would be there (dense) or that Justin would make love to Brian he is such a tool he does'nt even think that Brian has his life and doesn't intend to explain his actions. loved it

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:18 PM · On: Everybody

Carl is the smart one of the crowd.  At least Deb, Carl, Emmett, Jennifer and Molly are happy for them.  I imagine Ted is too.  Melanie seems aware that it's none of their business.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:11 PM · On: Gus and Ben

Love Ben's POV.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:07 PM · On: Jennifer and Molly

Can you imagine what would have happened if Mikey had been there?  He would have been snotty to Tiffany just because she fawned over Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:02 PM · On: Ted and Cynthia

Ted and Cynthia in total agreement.  I like that.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:58 PM · On: Melanie and Lindsay

Love how Melanie thinks.  Lindsay doesn't seem to have a clue.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:37 PM · On: Debbie and Emmett

I think since Mikey doesn't give any financial support that Brian is the better dad.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:17 PM · On: Michael

Even after learning the truth, he still can't accept it.

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 02:27 PM · On: Everybody

Great story.

Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:33 AM · On: Everybody

Yay they got married! Come on Jen think before you speak.. the door was locked!!! They really don't care about B/J's privacy



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Gus and Ben

Aw daddy Justin!! Sometimes I don't know how Ben can live with Michael.. Great chapter



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Jennifer and Molly

:)



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Ted and Cynthia

I love how Brian and Justin work together



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:20 AM · On: Melanie and Lindsay

Ahh I think Lindsay is jealous!... Brians reaction is great



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Debbie and Emmett

so cute.. :)



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Michael

Ah stupid Michael.. he just don't get a hint.. Nice chapter



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Reviewer: LumCheng (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Michael

oh, LOL!

that was funny XD I wish I would've been Mikey :P

Naw, but I liked it a lot, that they acted like they've been living together for a lifetime and feel so comfy around each other.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.

They have been living together a lot over the years. THey know each other very well.

Thank you :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Michael

Double checked this AM- the Story Table doesn't list chapter 7 and neither does the drop down menu. And I can't access it using the NEXT and PREVIOUS functions from ch 6 or ch 8.

 

Weird. :)



Author's Response:

There is no chapter 8 :D That must be the mistake, I'll take a look.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Everybody

Love this series & was re-reading it... um, chapter 7 seems to have mysteriously vanished :(

 

Oh, well... off to re-read the sequel!



Author's Response:

THank you so much.

That's weird, I can see chapter 7, have you tried again?

Reviewer: Bliss (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Michael

This is like the 10th time I've read this story. I love outside POV-fics. And this is a really good one(love the first chapters of the sequel too.)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so happy you like it.

I plan to do some more outside POV on the sequel too.

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 06:33 AM · On: Everybody

I don't get better that this.  I loved your story, will make it my business the read more of your work.  Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you'll enjoy my other stories too.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 01:18 AM · On: Everybody

This was such a great story. I loved everyone's pov and how some people actually, finally "got" Brian and Justin.

Michael is a bratty, delusional spiteful little man and Lindsay is just a plain bitch.

Loved the ending and how they all litterally got the shocks of their lives. Finding out Brian and Justin got married and seeing them do what they do naturally. LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Michael is an idiot, I have always thought so. Lindsay can be a bitch.

There is a sequel, I have only written one chapter so far, but hope my muse will get back to it soon.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 04:15 PM · On: Everybody

These were so great I love the way you look at both of them ...thx

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Mia

Reviewer: lorie (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Everybody

Beautiful.  Loved the ending.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 02:28 AM · On: Everybody

boo hoo. sob sob. sniff sniff.

loved it all.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm contemplating a sequel.

Mia

Reviewer: balki85 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 01:33 AM · On: Gus and Ben

Awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Mia

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 01:05 AM · On: Gus and Ben

that friggin' idiot. as sad as ben is right now, think how happy he would be if he came to his senses.

i love gus and daddy justin together. yeah you can throw daddy brian into it too.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm sitting here grinning like an idiot :-)

Mia

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 12:59 AM · On: Jennifer and Molly

i was worried that i was too pushy because i don't want these to end. i like jennifer's take on the two of them. "not everything with my son and his partner is as it seems." perfect. 

Author's Response:

Thank you sjmpets. I really like this story and i hadn't thought about Gus so you weren't to pushy.

Mia

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2008 03:27 PM · On: Jennifer and Molly

Love how everyone gets to see what Justin see's all the time ... thx

Author's Response:

That's the point of the story :-)

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2008 10:20 AM · On: Jennifer and Molly

loved this chapter, molly and tiffany were so funny, it was perfect thats exactly what you would think looking at brian 'wow'

Author's Response: I think 'wow' all the time when I see him. :-)

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2008 06:18 AM · On: Ted and Cynthia

Thank you another great chapter ...Hugs

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Ted and Cynthia

just don't forget we have to hear form jennifer and molly, maybe gus and then maybe the guys themselves okay.

Author's Response:

You're right. Maybe I'll do a few more chapters :-)

Mia

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2008 06:58 PM · On: Ted and Cynthia

funny how she can tell how well things are going with brian and justin just by brian's moods. nobody picked that up in the show. they were like that before and after the king of babylon contest.

 i know this is almost over and i'm going to miss it.



Author's Response:

Cynthia has worked closely with Brian for years. She sees things that no one else is alowed to see.

I'm happy that you like this little series but seeing as there really isn't anybody else o get an eye-opening experience it has a natural end.

Mia

Reviewer: Lilith (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2008 04:59 PM · On: Ted and Cynthia

Thank you for the update...

Author's Response: You're welcome.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2008 05:09 AM · On: Melanie and Lindsay

"until she gets a clue." understatement of the year.

Author's Response: I know. Mel is fun.

Reviewer: Kimmy (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2008 03:41 AM · On: Melanie and Lindsay

I loved all 3 chapters, update soon

Author's Response: I will. Ted and Cynthia is next.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2008 02:09 AM · On: Melanie and Lindsay

Last 2 chapters were grate thank you....

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2008 01:12 AM · On: Melanie and Lindsay

Lindsay's a cunt and Michael's a cunt... I hate cunts! :D But seriously, I can't believe how shitty Lindsay was to Justin and Brian, bitch!

Can't wait for more... your sex scenes are yummy! Later, Emma xx



Author's Response: I know, Mel was less of a cunt for once. I actually like Mel. I'm glad you like my sex scenes, they are the ones I have the most trouble writing (being a straight woman)

Reviewer: Maya (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 02:51 AM · On: Debbie and Emmett

I liked this chapter alot, more soon

Author's Response: I promise.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 07:31 PM · On: Debbie and Emmett

sweet. i always liked a more mature brian.

Author's Response: Thank you sjmpets.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Michael

michael is such an ass.

brian and justin are a couple as he said and it's what couples do. not their fault that michael isn't as coordinated with ben as they are with each other.



Author's Response: I know. They have even been together longer (minus the Ethan periode).

Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2008 08:11 AM · On: Michael

can anyone say delusional to mikey lol, he would be the only one that could hear them going at it and not love it lol

Author's Response:

That's kinda why I let him be the one to hear it, not only the sex but Justin topping. I'm evil, I know.

Mia

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 02:54 AM · On: Michael

Some people will just never get a clue...thanks

Author's Response:

I know, it's amazing. Thank you.

 Mia

Reviewer: nazdre (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2008 11:38 PM · On: Michael

God, could Mikey be any more dense? I mean Brian actually told him off, and he still believes Brian is Peter Pan? That man really needs to get a life and realize that Brian and Justin have more of a relationship than the rest of them. I can't wait to see what happens with the rest of the gang, and if they side with Mikey or the boys. Great first chapter!

Author's Response:

I think he only sees what he wants to see. His world can't contain a Brian in love if it's not with him.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Mia

Reviewer: shinigamiisjustice (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 11:29 PM · On: Michael

This was a great chapter! I cannot wait for more. The Liberty gang is always underestimating Brian and Justin's relationship. I like how you brought out their domesticated side in this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. This was actually a challenge on bjfic.net and I liked the idea.

Mia

Reviewer: Hobbitstown (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Michael

I like the start of this story.  Please keep writing.

Thanks, Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you I will.

Mia

Reviewer: anjul02 (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 06:25 PM · On: Michael

Great start...that was really Michey aaallll the waaayyy...always denying that BJ are for real.

 

Tough...he and the others will apparantly have to get used to it!

 

Can't wait for the eye-opening of the others! *wink*

 

lol

Anja 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I have always thought that Michael was kind of clueless where our favourite couple is concerned.

Mia

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