Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 04:53 AM · On: Startling Revelations
poor brian
Author's Response: Good thing it doesn't really end there and that there is a sequel. Lol
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 04:43 AM · On: Startling Revelations
Oh nooo... i hope they will get back together.
Author's Response: There's a sequel I wrote to this called Redemption. If you read it you'll get your answer as to whether or not they wind up together. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shell Scott (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2016 03:38 AM · On: Startling Revelations
why did it stop there???? 😫
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I wrote a sequel to this story, which is on the site. It's called Redemption.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 06:31 PM · On: Startling Revelations
Interesting premise for this story. I like that everything wasn't simply resolved in the last chapter and that there's an admission of culpability on both sides.
We readers know Justin will get his man. He is, after all, a stalker extraordinaire. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Glad you find it interesting.
Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:44 AM · On: Startling Revelations
Very original and bitter sweet ! The lemons were awesome !!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, dear. Your feedback is very much appreciated! :)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Startling Revelations
Awe sweet, sad and romantic... On to the next part...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback, Kathleen. Glad you liked it, hon.
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2008 03:20 AM · On: Target Engaged
Great story...but please look up the definitions of expound and regale as they were misused.
Author's Response: First of all thank you for complimenting my story. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. As for the definitions, I try to do my best, but unfortunately did not have a beta for this story. While I agree about my use of the word regale (I've changed it), I think that expound is within the realm of the context I was using it for. "To set forth" is one of the definitions, and that is how I meant to use it in that sentence. I appreciate the constructive criticism though, and hope you'll go on to read more of my stories. ~T
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2008 02:53 PM · On: Startling Revelations
uuuh this sounds like there's gonna be a sequel ^^ yaih! Loved this story Thanks for sharing ;) Hugs Tina
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting Tina! I'm thrilled to receive a compliment from a fellow writer. Hugs~T
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 10:46 PM · On: Startling Revelations
ooh there has to be a sequel and a happy ending where Justin wins Brian's love and respect!! SEQUEL!! Please!!!
Author's Response: I aim to please. Guess I'm going to have to write that sequel! ;)
Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 05:38 PM · On: Startling Revelations
I so love this fic. Please tell me that is going to be a sequel or a epilogue, I really need they happy and together. Thanks so much for this fic.
Author's Response: Thanks hun! Although I normally don't do sequels, I'm thinking of making an exception. (especially since everyone seems to expect/demand one) LOL
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 08:06 AM · On: Startling Revelations
go justin, get your man...:-)) rose
Author's Response: Hi rose, Don't worry, Justin will see this through. There might be a sequel. The ending sort of lends itself to one. ;)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2008 04:46 AM · On: Startling Revelations
Oh this sooo screams for a sequel! Great job. I totally enjoyed this story!
Author's Response: You're right Gina Marie. I am considering doing a sequel. Thank you for you support and encouragement! I'm loving your sequel at the moment. You're a very talented writer. So, I'm pleased that you enjoyed this story. Thanks again for commenting. :)
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 03:41 AM · On: Target Engaged
sequel????? thanks and hope you'll write SOON. thanks!!!
Author's Response: I'm thinking about it thess! Thank you for your encouragement. It helped motivate me to write!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 03:09 AM · On: Startling Revelations
I liked despite them not being together for now. Soooo I suspect a sequel is brewing.... how does Justin get back w Bri..... does he become an ad man, start a business...... can't wait...... please.....
Author's Response: I don/t normally do sequels because I'm afraid it won't live up to the original story. However, I might make an exception, just this once. Thank you for the feedback!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 03:02 AM · On: Startling Revelations
sequel or epilogue please?
Author's Response: Hi Sara, This story does seem to be begging for one of those. I'm toying with the idea of a short sequel. Thanks for your support, I appreciate it !
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2008 02:41 AM · On: Target Engaged
Hope there is a sequel...you can't leave it like this...can you? good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment hun. As for a sequel, I'm seriously thinking about it. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story!
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 02:38 AM · On: Startling Revelations
Good story, thanks for writing it and sharing with us. I enjoyed reading it. The ending? It was fine. I can understand Brian's thinking. But I know, as Justin knows it's only a matter of time when they get together again. Thanks again for the story. DavidR
Author's Response: So nice to hear from you again David! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Brian's been hurt and betrayed, so it's going to take a while for him to trust Justin again. But you're right, Justin is very determined to get his man. They will be together some day! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2008 02:25 AM · On: Startling Revelations
ok babe, bring on the sequel. understandably brian is hurt, but as someone just said,"you never know."
Author's Response: I'm seriously thinking of doing one, although I usually try to stay away from them. Thank you dear, for being such a faithful reader and commenter. It's what gives me the incentive to keep writing! ♥
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 01:02 AM · On: No More Lies
ooh great chapter but that was just plain evil to leave us hanging like that....update soon!! I mean ASAP!!!!!
Author's Response: Just posted the last chapter. Was that soon enough??
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 04:47 AM · On: No More Lies
Yea honesty. Sooooo what's Brian say. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment alys! As for what Brian will say...sorry, but you'll have to read the next chapter to find out. *evil smirk*
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 03:46 AM · On: Target Engaged
please update soon........ thanks
Author's Response: Was that soon enough?? LOL
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 02:51 AM · On: No More Lies
what will Brian say?!?!, update soon
Author's Response: My lips are sealed. I'll try to update ASAP.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2008 01:01 AM · On: No More Lies
ooh. so what to hear what brian has to say. will justin like what he hears? is he really ready for it? i hope whatever it is that brian says won't crush justin too much. amnd yay for justin for putting it all out there. it took guts that's for sure.
Author's Response: Yep, it took a lot of courage for Justin to fess up to everything. Next is Brian's reaction. Hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 11:46 PM · On: No More Lies
I really want to know what brian has to say... please update soon :-)) rose
Author's Response: I promise to try to have the next chapter up soon. But first I have to write it! LOL
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2008 05:27 PM · On: Target Engaged
Next chapter ready yet? This is a great story...well done!
Author's Response: Next chapter is going to take a little while as I am very busy at work right now. Thanks for your kind praise!
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