Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: addy (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 31

I am really thankful for your story :D really lifted my spirits and made me happy to see them so happy and together. GOD FUCKING FINALLY TOGETHER! I never cared what happened all I wanted to see was justin and brian TOGETHER :) and you made that possible, so thanks.

Reviewer: Marchwarden (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 12

I hardly leave reviews as I am lazy, but I just want to mention Lindsay is  bit of a twat. If you write her being slapped or being put in her place, I would be okay with this. Also fantastic story and writing style.

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing first chapter!  I loved the analogy of the doors of the loft closing like The sheilds around Brian's heart.

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2012 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 31

I've just read your whole story, almost only not reading it when sleeping. I love it! The way you write is perfection and the relationship between Brian amd Justin is so full of love and trust! And the sex 'scenes' are flawless! This is probably the best QAF fanfic I've read! I love it! If there was a season 6, this would be it:) I'd LOVE a sequal:)

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 31

I just read the BEST B&J ff I have have ever read.What a great story.And all in character.You got Brian down pat.A lot of the stories dont get that but yours did.Thankyou so much.It was great reading.While I did get the ending of QAF I always felt we were left hanging.Now I have my happy ending.Once again I thank you.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 24

I am so enjoying this.You go from soft to hot and from tense to scary all in one chapter.Keeping me hooked.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

NOW my housework is suffering cos I cant stop reading your story.I am really enjoying this.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

This chapter is great.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

HOT!!!!!

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Yay!! Still good.Loving this story.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

At last!! This first chapter actually has the ring of these two in it.Unlike some stories that are just so un B&J.Well done.Feels like I've picked up a QAF book.Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 31

i just read this whole story again! It's at least the 3rd or maybe 4th time through! I loved every word, again!

Hugs, Cindy

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2012 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 31

I think this is the best ff story ive ever read. I really loved it. I did not want it to end!

Reviewer: lvsHP23 (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2012 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 31

After reading this for at least the third time...I realized I'd never left a review! Brilliant...that's all I can say. As for your writing...love the story development, the plot, I thought you did a great job keeping the characters "in character". As for the story itself...I love all of your originals...adore Megan, would love to find places like Crave and Twin Flames, think Nathan is perfection for Em. Of all the stories I've read..we won't talk about how many...I think yours is the one I keep coming back to as my - this is how it should be - story. Keep doing what you do!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 31

i must say it's a very brilliant storya281;this is exactly what i‘v dreamed about brian&justina281;they’ll always be my favorite partner!

Reviewer: Gretchen (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 31

This was an AMAZING fic and I loved every bit of it! Your characterization of everyone, especially Justin and Brian, was PERFECT. :D

Reviewer: ronistone (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a season 6! Thank you. Beautiful job. I know I'm very, very late to review this, but I'm glad I stumbled across it. Your Brian is so very real! Haughty, sarcastic, callous, untouchable...humble, honest, vulnerable, open. I can now watch the final episode of Season 5 without my heart ripping out through my chest...and for THAT I will be eternally grateful.

Thank you again.

Roni ~~ tolday2001@aol.com

 

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 31

Great story.  True to the characters.  It kept me interested the whole way through.

I write, too, but can't imagine 31 chapters!  Good job.

Jackie Mag

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 31

this is the BEST series i've read so far... and i've read some very good ones...

like pink's song, it's 'fuckin' perfect'.....

thank you sooooo much for writing this!!!

Reviewer: Jack Dorff (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2011 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

I really enjoy this chapter.Very hot

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 31

Such an amzing story. One of the best I have read in a long time. Thanks sooo much!!!

Reviewer: Murgy31 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 31

This story was truly beautiful! I loved every chapter!!!

Reviewer: CJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 31

a beautiful post-season 5 story line!!....keep up the good work..^_^

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 31

Awww!

I like your ending.  It's so true.  Even perfect happiness has a shadow, if only because you fear it will come to an end.  Life is just there and all you can do is prepare yourself to face it, set up cercumstances to celebrate it, make commitments to not to lose it.

You certainly cant predict it.  You have set our beloved B/J up for a wonderful, busy and fulfilling life with great friends and devoted family. 

I only wish there was a sequal.

LOL = and thanks for writing the story, it was awsome!

Michelle

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 28

Gotta adore Cynthia!  The bite behind the Top Dog's growl.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 27

Wow, tense.   I am glad he is dead.  Anything less would have left me uneasy.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 24

Brian's fear is pure agony.  Excellent scene.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 22

As I pulled out into traffic I stole a glance at him, “Besides…it’s our family…not my family. You do realize Deb has adopted you right? Sorry to say this, Nate, but you’re in. No turning back now.” I teased.

He smiled, “I’m honored.”

“That won’t last.”

So very Brian!  Considerate and sweet, teasing, with a hint of sarcasm.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 21

Squeee!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 20

Crazy funny sad scene with Emmett - I could imagine it all.

I love the raw fantasies.  Mmmmm

OMG, Em!

You've got me tense, horny, angry, frustrated, sad......thats really good for one chapter!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

I like the club, great idea, lets our boys be bad without compromising their ability to go raw.

Im excited for justin about getting promotors and cant wait to see what that will lead us to.

Oh damn.  Em will be fine.  Em will be fine.  Em will be fine.......

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 16

Why didnt they think that Gus was missing his father?  Poor little boy. 

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 12

Aaaaaarg!  Lindsay is sooooooo not cool.  I'll leave it at that.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 10

"It's a gift, you open it." I whispered.  He chuckled and gingerly pulled at the paper.  I rolled my eyes and smiled.  He opened presents like he was diffusing a bomb.  Christmas and birthdays could be the longest days of my life.

Its lines like this that make me really like a story and a writer.  It is clever and funny and warm and is weighted in a history they share.  It tells me a bit about each of them that a conversation could never convey.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 9

7 years!  OMG.  OMG.

And he was still acting like an ass?  Throwing punches at Justin!?!  How freaking deluded, self centered, homophobic, weak weak weak can a man be?

His son is out and PROUD.  Justin only deserves respect from a little weasel like Craig.  Him still calling Brian names?  WTF.

I tell you what though, I kinda like Daniel.  When he told Craig to find another "client" I ached for him.  Although, after 7 years he should have been long gone!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

YAY.  Them working together is probably my favorite AU plots.  Megan seems amazing.  The offer seems amazing.  I hope you will finally reveal what's on Brian's mind!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

HA!  Nice twist with Craig. 

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

I sat, amazed at my confessions, my anger at Lindsay.  She was supposed to be my friend, the mother of my child and… my Wendy.  But she refused to let Peter grow up.  Instead she robbed me of my Lost Boy then took my son and headed for Canada.  She had left me with nothing and I was fucking furious that I had allowed it.

Its about effing time Brian finally saw what Lindsay was doing.  I dont know if the writers of QAF meant for her to be a coniving bitch or shortsighted and concerned.  What I do know,  is that Brain allowed her too much influence.  Brian doesnt have a lot of friends, and the closest ones aren't very good ones. 

Cynthia and Ted have his back as much as Justin does.

"So, let's look at this from a different perspective, Brian. Have you ever wondered why you didn’t go with him?" he asked calmly.

Lines like this convince me of Ted's sincere concern for Brian;c and growing awareness of how to support Brian.   He's been there for Brian with his sound Business sense and accounting, then covering for him physically, and now he is stepping up "poking the tiger" and trying to help Brian emotionally.  I think Ted is quite brave.  And a true friend.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 4

I sure as hell hope Megan is trustworthy, and that nothing happens to Justin at work, or while he travels to and from work.

This Brian is, as Daphne put it, to die for!  The intamacy and sensuality is amazingly written.

I actually thought I had read this story before, but there is no way I would have forgotten this.  Even this early in the story I feel your love of B/J and know you will take care of them. 

I think I am as protective them as Brian is for Justin.  LOL

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

I heard Cyntha laugh in the background and blushed.  There weren't many people Brian allowed to hear our private exchanges.  Cynthia had been around for everything.  Seen every thing, heard everything.  Brian trusted her. Sometimes I wonder if she isn't taking notes and plotting a torrid gay romance novel based on the roller coaster that is Brian and Justin.

Oh, how I wish I had the kind of view into the B/J love affair that Cynthia no doubt has!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

As much as I sincerly believe Justin needed to grow up a bit more, take a true chance on his art, and know what it was like to be fully independant === just like any other young person leaving home for the first time, it hurts so much to actually see him go.

Brian's description of the state of his heart - in a ziplock with Justin in NY - feels so achingly painful.  Really well done.

Now boys, its just like any pair of sweethearts watching a loved one going to an  out of state college.  Time will pass, holidays will occur, reading breaks will come regularily, computer cams are immediate, and Thank God Brian has the cash to fly them to each other regularily!

But it still hurts.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 31

I am in love with this story. I love b/j stories when they work it out, but i must say my favorite person on qaf was emmett, he's just like my best friend so out, proud, brave and a little tacky with his fashion sense.  So i loved to read a story that showed how important he is to the family.  Thanks for the ride i really appreciated it

Reviewer: Riggershh6 (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 31

Well i spent the last three days off and on(mostly on) reading through this wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us/me. It was so great to read. I come onto this site wayyyyy to often and am happy to say that this was a treat. I am glad that I found it and was able to read it all at once.

Wish that it had made it to the screen as another season, I know that I have always felt cheated that we were left the way that we were. Our boys deserved so much more!!!

I loved your characters. The love/hate with the munchers was wonderful. I have to tell you that I feared that you were going to have one of the girls abusing Gus, but what you did was so much more realistic. Children react horribly to losing those they love, even if it just a temporary thing, and you expressed this very well. Congrats for not making them villians, but just parents.

Ok the sex was hot!!! Thanks for that, and B/J oh to be a fly in that room/house.

Loved the descriptions of the windows in the studio an the kitchen plans that I know were in the works! Oh to live like the rich.

 Thank you again for sharing this wonderful story. I hope that you know that your talent is appreciated.

 

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 31

perfect!! thank you very much.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 31

Fantastic ending......  too bad the QAF writers didn't end the show as good ..... Thanks.... 

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 31

this was perfect, loved it...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 27

I am thrilled that Emmett finally realizied that he and Nathan can be more than friends... and that Psycho Adam is dead.......

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 24

OMG... that Adam Stevens is one sick  S.O.B.... I wish Brian gets to have five minutes alone with him..before they lock him up... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 16

Alright!!!!!  Melanie finally did the right thing...she realized what Lindsay was trying to do..and how much Brian has changed..... and gave him joint custody... Fantastic....  

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

I have always hated that phrase ... "It's Only Time".......  if you think about it... Time is the only thing that there NEVER... is enough of for any of us.... it's the "thing" that matters MOST....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 12

Lindsay is such a selfish  BITCH.... she wants to ruin Brian and Justin's relationship.. just so she can manipulate Brian into doing whatever she wants....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

WOW.... Craig has known he was gay for seven years!!!!!!!!  at least the poor asshole he was with had enough sense to finally leave the bastard... seven years ???  OMG....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG.... that homophobic... S.O.B... Craig is in the closet????  after all the grief he gave Justin about being gay!!! what a fucking hypocrite..... I wonder who the stupid bastard is that he's involved with... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am so glad that Brian finally got mad at what Lindsay did.... she made sure Justin and Brian were apart and then took Gus to Canada!!! Lindsay got exactly what she wanted and left Brian alone and miserable.....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

it's absolutely true.... they are soul mates....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG.... I can't believe that Justin and Brian let Lindsay talk them into leaving each other...especially since Justin realized he was living her dream..and that he would be happy anywhere as long as he was with Brian... I never understood why they let her get away with doing that.....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

I totally agree with Ted... why couldn't Justin paint in the Pitts instead of NY?? if you're good it doesn't matter where you paint.... but... leave it to Lindsay to "decide" NY was best for Justin.... her and Melanie were my least favorite characters on QAF.... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I waited till this was complete to read.... and I love it already!!!  Season 5 was sooo bad..I still get flashbacks from the "Finale"... lol.... on to the next chapter.......

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 28

I am really excited and greatful that you have continued with this story! I have been hanging out for a new chapter for months, and I was sooooo excited to see the new installments today.

great story and have loved the progression of the plot.

Thanks

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't read WIPs, so was pleased to see this story was completed.  And, boy, was it worth the wait!  Definitely one of my favorite fixes for the disastrous CowLip version of Season 5.

Those episodes left such a bad taste in my mouth that I've never been able to watch the reruns; once was definitely more than enough.  So, I'm always excited to read a nice, long 'fix', and I've read many good ones.  With its elements of mystery, romance, and growth, this story is absolutely one of the best.  Thank you for writing and sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the awesome review. This story has certainly been a labor of love. It's good to know people are enjoying it. The characters deserved more than CowLip gave them. I hope I did them justice.

Liz

Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 31

Beautiful story, thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so happy that you thought so.

Liz

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 31

Whoo Hoo!!!

I love this story and I am so glad that it's been completed! It was fantastic even as a WIP and these last few chapters were really the icing on an already very tasty cake! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading this. And I'm so excited to have finally completed it. Thanks. =)

Liz

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 27

Yup. Still love it. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. =) I've got the newest chapter in progress....so fingers crossed.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 27

Just re-reading this - such a great story!  Hope your muses inspire you to pick this back up at some point :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 27

You have a very good story here. I'll be looking for your updates. It was  good to make a drama subplot with Emmitt and company. We still want to read about Brian and Justin and their re-union someday hopefully. Great read.



Author's Response:

Thank you! This story has definately been a labor of love. I hated the last episode and writing this was definately cathardic. Working on The Spy Who Loved Me right now but this one is alwys on my mind. Definately a subplot...because I hated the way they ended Emmett's story too. And I want him to have epic love like B/J. =) But this is definately all about Brian and Justin's reunion and future.

Thanks again, Hun. ((hugs))

Liz 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 26

Oh shit!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 25

Brave stupid Justin; good writing though.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 24

OH my God! Super plot here.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

Delicious

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 22

To busy reading this fine story to review; compliment you know.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 21

Another WOW chapter.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wow!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 19

I'm hooked; gotta read on.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 18

Another great chapter. I forgot to say it was good to make the joint custody thing and for Michael to come around.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 17

Suspense now is thick.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great chapter; I don't write much so I can read more.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

I'm always amazed how fanfiction writers insist on condoms for HIV protection and have the characters swallow which is the same exposure if not more so for catching HIV. Artistic liscense beyond medical facts I suppose.

Glad to see Linda got dumped. Gotta read more; staying up all night for your story.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

Calvin is interesting and perhaps not so honest. Very interesting story you have here.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

Linda is such a cunt; I enjoyed Justin's intervention of the situation.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 12

I love how the dykes are the bad guys in your story. They deserve it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 11

I enjoy your writing style very much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 10

You really know how to drag out the drama. Gotta read more now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wonderful chapter; I didn't like the attack on Justin but it turned out ok; I would have liked for Brian stomping Craig's ass into the ground. But that's me!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

You write very well.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 7

OH my God! Craig is a puffer! What a plot twist.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hehe....the angst of getting Justin home is overwhelming here. Bringing back Babylon is a plus too. Or will Brian expand Kinnetik to NY? Time to read on.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter once more. I like how they both want to be together again.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

Very hot sexy chapter; you give good B/J.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

I was so sorry for Lindsay's involvement with Jusitn leaving. Ted is spot on with his analysis of the situation.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

I hated how they ended QAF. I read on hoping you reunite them quickly.

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 27

loved it, loved it, loved it! Adam deserved all he got! B&J hot as usual****

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 27

What a great story!  Looking forward to the rest of it.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 27

Thank goodness Adam is gone! What a terror he was! Now I'm hoping that something will eventually happen with Nathan and Em =)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 26

Crap! That pyscho escaped!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 27

beautiful. love how em and nathan go off to britin together

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 26

I am so happy to have another chapter of this story. I have been looking forward to it for soooo long! Can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story so much because it is so real and true to the characters and a realistic extension of the series. Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 26

Eeep!!!

Reviewer: Blackwell (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 26

Hey! It's great to see this story updated again, I love it :)

It keeps getting better and better, by the way. Please, keep up!

Cheers,

- B.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chapter now. =)

Liz

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 25

Great story. Please continue to update the story.

 

Heather aka vikinglass24

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 25

this story is so amazing

so true to the characters

god it is my fave fanfic ever

is it on hiatus?

i need some more!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Sara. This one is on a small hiatus while I try and finish The Spy Who Loved Me. But I will difinately be back with a new chapter soon. This one is so personal to me. And I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much. =)

Liz

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 25

loved it, loved it, loved it! can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you Thank you Thank you!This one is on a small hiatus now because I'm trying to finish The Spy Who Loved Me. But it is very close to my heart and I will be continuing it. Thank you so much for reading it.

Liz

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 25

I've read your story, it took a couple of days, but I want to let you know how brilliant you are.  I've enjoyed your story from beginning to where it's ended and I want more.  lol  I laughed, I cried, I imagined, I hoped, I prayed.  I did it all!  You captured the whole gang to a tee and I appreciate that in an author.  The dialog was sexy,funny, heart felt, them. Thank you for letting us all go back and giving us your interpretation of one of the greatest love stories ever told.  I appreciate it and looking forward to reading  more of this story and any more you may've written.  Bravo!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. This story is really close to my heart. I couldn't agree more... best love story ever told. And I really wanted to make sure it continued....I wanted to keep telling it. =) I'm so happy you like it so much. Right now I'm working on the next chapter of The Spy Who Loved Me. But I will definately be back to this one again. Thank you for this encouragement. It means so much.

Liz

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 25

I'm all caught up on all the chapters and am loving this story.

So glad that caught that wack job Adam, sick fucker! I had a feeling when he went into Em's room it was a set up, couldn't stand it if something else happened to my Em.

Good for Em telling Calvin he didn't want to see him again. The guy won't even testify against Adam after all that.

Thankfully Justin is ok! That was such a dangerous thing for him to do, but very much like him. He can't keep doing that to Brian though, not sure how many more times the man can go through being scared for Justin's life.

I hope you update soon, this story is fantastic!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I will definately be updating. I'm just so glad you're enjoying.

 Liz

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 25

Another freaking amazing chapter. please, please, please update soon! I am recommending this fic to all my friends - I love it!



Author's Response:

I just wanted to thank you for reading and commenting. It means so muc that people are enjoying this. I will most definately be continuting this saga. =)

Thanks,

Liz

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 24

OMG I was on edge for like 3/4 of this.

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

August seems so far away! I can't wait either LOL. That was beyond hot.

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 21

You have a knack for covering a full spectrum of emotional scenes : fear and sorrow for Emmett, hot sex, and poignant sweetness. It is such a pleasure to read!

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 19

Ok, I am delurking. I have been reading this almost nonstop - it has kept me up half the night when I need to be at work at 7am! I sincerely thank you for sharing your writing - its brilliant, seductive, hot, tender! 

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 18

I love this fic! LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh no! That bastard hurt Brian's Emmett! (That's his Emmett, although he would never say it out loud!). As soon as he said he had a meeting, I knew it was that nutcase. I hope Em will be ok. I can totally see Nathan nursing him back to health.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 25

great chapter-  thanks for updating so soon-  can't wait for more-  Glad Carl was able to move so quickly and they caught Adam-  that slime ball.  If only it always happened like that.

Author's Response:

Thank you for being patient. =) I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Liz

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2008 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 25

Brian soooo love his Justin! Thanks and more please

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 24

Love this story... always great when I find an update for it posted!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2008 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 24

update soon-  you've got me on the edge of my seat-  at least you let us know that Justin was okay.

Reviewer: db1234 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

I really enjoyed this story so far. Hope you are going to finish it. I am anxious to see where it goes.

denise

Reviewer: JTee (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2008 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

A masterpiece!!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

WHOA! I didn't see that one coming! I thought he would say Chris Hobbs, but his dad! WOW!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

ok, first I need a cold shower! Wow! Great chapter, very hot, and also, very touching.  "home is where you are Brian, only you..."

loved it!

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good chapter. Can't wait for the next one. I hope that sick fuck is cought before anybody else is hurt.

Reviewer: Tina2705 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 21

This story is so amazing...

Please update soon... Tina 

Reviewer: Thess (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2008 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 21

Sooo beautiful! thanks for the update and more to come.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really loving this story, good job, thanx muchly.

Reviewer: dreaminhappy (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

poor emment! Loved the interaction between Brian and Emment and of course Brian and Justin!!

Great as always :)

Reviewer: Blackwell (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 21

What can I say?

Your story is beautiful is every single way :)

- B.

Reviewer: Mia (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow! Your fucking talented.

Reviewer: dreaminhappy (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2008 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 20

I just got done reading all 20 chapters and I love this story...it is so well written in completly in chraracter for all of the boys. amazing storyline and HOTT HOTT HOTT. I am hooked!!

update soon please :)

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2008 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 20

WOW, I love this story and Your writing is just brilliant. Even if it was a long chapter I think I was holding my breath the whole time while I read it.

I`m looking forward to the next one.

Sunny 

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