Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Unexpected
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2019 12:11 AM · On: Epilogue

I enjoyed the way you had the guys re-connect after the two year separation. And the friendship between Justin and Ben was icing on the cake. That nutjob Mark got exactly what he deserved. In my opiion, some people need killing. This story should have gotten two blue ribbons. Great job.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2019 09:33 PM · On: Epilogue

good one

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2018 07:11 PM · On: Ben's Best Friend

Not sure how I have missed reading this before but what a great story.  Disturbing content but I really liked the strength of the characters - supportive Ben and Brian are really an awesome team for Justin.

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 02:54 AM · On: Let's Do Lunch

I would love to see pictures of Justin's home and pool.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:00 PM · On: Epilogue

I cannot believe that I have read this story twice and never reviewed.

It started well with Ben as Justin's friend, unbeknown to the gang, and it took off frbm there. Every chapter held my interest.

GREAT STORY!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you have liked it every time you've read it. And hey I am just happy you decided to review now. Most people wouldn't at all, you know. This story was written so long ago and quite franckly it was badly written. Unfortunately I wasn't very versed in grammar and spelling back then, hehe. I am happy to know though that it is still readable. Thank you for all of your reviews, I have really enjoyed each and evry one of them......SATURN

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Epilogue

Wow, great fic!  I like a strong Justin and a love-struck Brian. 

Sorry, I disagree with some of the other comments, i'm fine with Justin protecting his family.  This was a different story and Mark was not Hobbs.  Mark wasn't going to stop.  I think you handled the drama and trauma well.  Hell, it's your fic, you write what is right for you.  Let others write their own fic.

Very moving, sad, bittersweet at times, but ultimately - pretty cool.  Well done!



Author's Response:

Sorry about just getting back to you, I haven't had internet too often this year. Thank you for reading and reviewing it really does mean alot to me. I completely agree with you on all points. This one was a little weird for me to write. A lot happened that is so outside of my realms but I had thought it was an interesting subject to take on. Plus I love the angst. I just hope I had done it justice. thank you again and sorry for it taking so long to get back to you.........SATURN 

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2008 02:42 PM · On: Ben's Best Friend

I love this and how on earth did I miss it? Love how Brian is now doing the chasing? Onto the next chapter.

Reviewer: mazfitz (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2008 01:37 AM · On: Epilogue

oh my god such a great story all the way through it just never stops being exciting i hope the is a second part to it

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2008 10:58 PM · On: Ben's Best Friend

I loved the whole story and I could empathise with Justin deciding to finally killl Mark...after all he would never have left Justin alone and threatening Brian?...hmm...I know violence is not the answer usually but I think sometimes it can be the only way. I would hope I would never have to be in the situation where I would have to use violence though.thanx for another great story.

Reviewer: QaITFan (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2008 03:38 PM · On: Ben's Best Friend

I enjoyed the story and I was really surprised how Brian here was the one ready to voice his love and intention of relationship with Justin!

But I must admit I was somehow "disturbed" by the self-justice Justin used against Mark and the will to make him die. I perfectly understood the circumstances and everything, as well as the inability of the  law to protect him..Reading those lines I remembered Brian's words at Babylon when Justin was out with a gun and the Pink Posse gang <it's better to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, or take arms and by opposing end them? --- An eye for an eye, or turn the other cheek?>...It's hard to say..but if Justin decided to shoot Chris..what kind of justice would have been..

Anyhow, these are only my general ethical thoughts, maybe if I were the one being raped and threatened I would have reacted the same way, feeling and knowing that the law is not there to protect me!

Hugs

T.



Author's Response:

Thank you for looking at both sides of the table and not just freaking out on me. It was a perfect review for your voice and you still took the time to look at the story and say well you know maybe I would look at it differently if.... and that is huge. Not many people will do that here and I really appreciate your willingness and ability to do so. I know it is harsh and yeah I did use extreme measures to deal with Mark, which in Justin's case maybe he wouldn't have done it (being he didn't kill Chris) but this was just one way to look at it. I'm not sure I would have the ability to hold back from killing a man like that though and so that is how I got to where I was. But then again I'm not as good of a person as Justin is.

 As for Brian being so open and going after what he wants, well that ones easy for me... see this is the second story I ever wrote and I couldn't help but put in my romantic notions of just how things could've been had he just opened up. I read this one or Accomplished Goals and find myself comparing them to all of my others stories and it is amazing just how smooshy I was with his character. I mean I don't know if you have or if you plan on it but if you do read like OMWTG or FY and even SOO you can see the difference, it really is like night and day. But anyways thank you so much for this review it really meant a lot to me that you took the time to read and review something that does go against your moral standards and still manage to look at it from a different angle, you're a great person to do that..................SATURN 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 01:58 PM · On: Epilogue

I love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it, it was a different kind of story for me but fun none the less...........SATURN

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2008 04:17 AM · On: Ben's Best Friend

I love this story. I felt so sorry for Justin and I loved the way Brian decided that he was ready for a relationship.

Author's Response: Yeah this one's pretty harsh. It was hard to write but different in a way that I loved. I'm really happy you liked it. Thanks...............SATURN

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