Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 10:12 PM · On: One Starry Night
This story really put me through the wringer but I loved it anyway. I hope things improve for the guys in the sequel because I am getting ready to dive into it in three, two, one...
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 11:48 PM · On: One Starry Night
love it
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 09:29 AM · On: New Club
I loved this story even with the somewhat sad ending. Looking forward to starting the sequel.
Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2017 10:51 PM · On: One Starry Night
LOVEEEEEE!!!!
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2014 07:10 PM · On: Why Now?
Again, for the umpteenth time I read this story. Always going to read just the start, they can be reminded what the contents and then again engages. Thank you very much! You're a really talented writer.
Orhida
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2014 03:10 PM · On: One Starry Night
Will I ever get enough of this story ..
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:07 PM · On: The Fairy Theory
I am definately going to read this story again!
Author's Response: Someone has been extremely busy. nosleep sounds about right, hehe. it's amazing that you have taken the time to write so many reviews for me. It's not often that I am graced with such a wonderful person like you. Thank you so much and I really hope you enjoy it as much the second time around.......SATURN
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Why Now?
"'That’s alright sweety. Maybe next time.' he says as he rubs my arm. See touching again."
I lived the whole dynamics of Justin and Brian initial and following meetings. Emmett in the mix was hilarious.
Author's Response: I loved writing this dynamic. In almost all of my stories- I think- this three way interaction is probably my second favorite to write. Brian and Justin fighting will always have to be my number one favorite though. thank you again for reviewing it means so much to me........SATURN
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:01 PM · On: New Club
LOVED JUSTIN IN THIS STORY!!!
Author's Response: Me Too, Me Too!! Thanks.......SATURN
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 10:11 AM · On: One Starry Night
This beautifully written and painfully sad to read.
It took me all day to read this and it was time well spent!
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am so happy to hear that it was worth your time. It means alot that you thought it was gem. I enjoyed that very much..........SATURN
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 06:23 AM · On: Secret's
I'm in the middle of this lovely story and I'm anxious to read more. It's nice to find such a gem. Your Justin is strong and independent, just the way I like him.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 07:07 PM · On: One Starry Night
Oh goody, I just saw that there is a sequel! I'm going to read it now.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 07:04 PM · On: One Starry Night
Such a sad, bittersweet ending. The reader walks away with the feeling that anything can happen, but also a knowing feeling that they won't be together.
I really enjoyed reading this fic, very well done. The reader is able to emotionally connect with the characters.
I wish this had a sequel...Anyway, again, well done.
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much. I am so glad to hear you could connect with the characters. That's probably the best thing to tell me. I am also glad you found the sequel I hope you don't hte me for it.........SATURN
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Why Now?
I am trying to get into your story, however the mispellings and homophones jerk me out of it every time.
Waste - a failure to use something wisely, properly, fully, or to good effect
Waist - body area between ribs and hips
those, not though's
phrases, not fraise’s
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that. Thank you for the tips, but this is something that I finished years ago and is no longer a problem in my current works. However I won't be going through any of the older things to make changes. There is no time for such an undertaking.......SATURN
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:18 PM · On: One Starry Night
Great story!! Gonna read the next one now!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. I wish that you enjoyed everything else as well. Later..........SATURN
Reviewer: lori r (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Tight Spots
i love your story so please don't take my tips wrong. you're the creator, i'm the grammar nerd. it is.....it is i THREW the ball and just go THROUGH the door. godspeed...
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your kind words and constructive critisism. Those things are no longer a problem in my later works. This is a story that I started and fnished years ago. But I thank you anyways........SATURN
Reviewer: lori r (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Tight Spots
loving this story still. besides my passion for good b/j stories, i have been a big city journalist all my life. another tip...it is, please stand over THERE, do you think THEY'RE coming....this is THEIR home we're visiting. keep the fandom kcking...
Reviewer: lori r. (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Why Now?
i'm a first time fan and love your story lines, especially the emotions you convey and the b/j dynamic. one mistake you might correct....when you write those feelings or those pretty eyes, it's THOSE, not THOUGHS. keep up the good work.
Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:27 PM · On: One Starry Night
That was amazing!!!! I've read all the 11 chaps together and it's an amazing story!!! Great job! I hope that you'll write a sequel =) it would be great!
Author's Response: The sequel is already up but not finished I am still working on the last chapter for that, but in the mean time it's called Kinnetically Charged Original. I hope you like it as much as liked this one. I really appreciate the review for this was very nice of you take the time out to do so. I wish you'll let me know your thoughts on teh sequel if you end up reading it. Thanks again........SATURN
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2008 11:08 AM · On: New Club
You really are a good writer...I enjoyed this very much as I do all your stories...glad you are doing a sequel. thanx.
Author's Response: Sorry I am just getting back to you. I really suck, I know this. But I thank you for the compliments they really are so appreciated. I wish you are enjoying the sequel and am sorry that it is takibngme so long to get that done as well. But really thank you and sorry again.........SATURN
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2008 04:27 PM · On: One Starry Night
I really liked the concept of this AU story ... I never knew which way it was going to twist and turn! :) I like Justin trying to take care of himself ... he seems stronger and more assertive. But ... but ... I hope in the sequel Justin and Brian find a way to work things out . I loved your story!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear I kept you guessing. These days with so many stories it's hard to find a new way to do things. Justin in this story I was determined to keep him strong. I wanted a more character like story and I think as Justin got older he got stronger and in this story he had to be as strong as possible. I really love the way he's written in this story, and I'm really glad you did too. As for the sequel it's not done yet there is still one more chapter that I need to write but it'll get there, and this is very important, there will be a happy ending. I swear it will. Thank you for this review it was really very nice, it put a smile on my face and everything, hehehe. I hope you'll let me know how you feel about the sequels.................SATURN
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2008 06:50 AM · On: One Starry Night
damn - you ended it here? I stayed up for hours reading and you end it here? Arrrrgggghh Good story
Author's Response: Ah geeze, I know it's a horrible place to end it but it just seemed like such a good place cause when you go to the sequel (and if you do read it, read Kinnetically Charged) you'll see that I jumped months into the future and started a whole new path for them. I'm working on the next chapter for KC and I hope it'll be out soon. I'm so excited that you liked it you just have no idea how much that, that means to me. I am sorry though that you got stuck with the ending you did after staying up so late. I hope the sequel makes up for it a bit. Thanks again...............Alicia.................SATURN
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