Hi! Thank you for this beautiful story. Very well written and a real good characterisation of those two. What I particularly love is that despite the amnesia, Brian immediately feels attracted to Justin again in some way. As I said, Thanks for this wonderful story!

Author's Response:

Hi my friend! :) I've had quite the annoying Monday but your kind words made it so much better. I'm happy you enjoyed this story! Thank you for the beautiful comment :).

Enjoyed this! Thank you!

Hey there :) I'd like to read more of these forgotten stories, if you still have any :) They have a unique atmosphere and I love the fact that Justin really is "ubiquitous" in that hospital ;) I also believe he was sleeping there probably.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm happy you liked this one :). I have my eye on one more old story, but let me see if I can fix it to more readible condition.

I'm positive Justin might have been sleeping some nights in the hospital, worried sick about Brian but he knew from experience that Brian would be just fine :).

Thank you for the comment!

 

That was great ! How Brian remembers Justin by his smell and then his touch : loved it.

Thanks for sharing with us !

 

Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this one :). Thank you for the comment!

Beautiful story. Brian who recognizes Justin by his smell, wonderful and moving. Michael and Lindsay not talking about Justin to Brian but about Ben and Hunter because they're shitty friends I get it. But I have lots of questions about Justin and especially one, where is he? he's in the cafeteria at night, he's there when Brian has a nightmare, is he sleeping in the hallway? Maybe I missed something? In any case you can get out all the stories you have in your files!!

Author's Response:

Thank you :). 

Actually Michael and Lindsay not saying anything about Justin was doctor's orders. Justin hinted it when Brian finally remembered who he was. I refuse to write the gang members as hateful. That's just not for me.

And Justin was loitering around just like Brian was after the bashing, watching over him and subtly trying to trigger Brian's memory.

I'm happy you liked this story. Thank you for the comment :).

A great story, but unfortunately much too short vor me ðŸ˜� I would have liked to read more, you always write so well. I especially liked the way you described Justin himself and how Brian remembers fragments of him, just from his smell alone - wonderful ðŸ˜�(Actually, I would have liked to know how the accident happened and why Micheal lied about what happened. And why did he and Lindsay hide something as important as Justin's existence but mention Ben and Hunter. I always trust the two that they are capable of any intrigue 😎) But whatever, thanks and I hope you find more such treasures in your archive. 

Author's Response:

Hah some stories just are way too short, I can relate to your feeling :D.

I didn't give Brian's accident any details because it was just a fall, everyone knows basics of that :D. Michael didn't actually lie, the trauma he experienced affected his memory too. I personally have seen someone fall down in a very bad manner and let me tell you, that is one scary experience, so yeah, I don't blame Mikey for mixing up his memories.

Psst, Justin himself explained Brian why no one told about him to Brian ;). That happened when Brian finally remembered Justin. Justin is someone who was really close to Brian, more than Hunter or Ben and letting Brian remember him on his own could help the recovery and it did in this case. So there was no foul play from the gang, it was doctor's orders :). I definitely should have explained amnesia better in this story and how memory works, so sorry for that, I sometimes forget that normal people don't know the details behind amnesia. I clearly need to work on explaining things better (which I already knew but I'm doing my best. You have no idea how hard that is because I get someone elses opinion on my stories only after posting and then it's too late to change anything. Everything is always very clear in my head and the answers can be found from my mind if that helps any :'D. Ah, the struggles of an unpaid writer :D)

I'm happy you enjoyed this one, thank you for the lovely comment, you are always so kind :).