Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2023 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 11

So glad to see an update to this. Justin's heart isn't the only one breaking here! This part was superbly written; so emotional and heart wrenching. To think everyone thinks Justin's the one in serious condition when it's apparently Brian who is in jeopardy. You have portrayed their love for each other so well. Story is hard to read, but it's so well-written that I can't stop. Looking forward to reading more. Thank you for the update. ~Kim

Author's Response:

And I'm really glad to know you're still enjoying this story and thank you so much for your comment. I will do my best to update soon.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2023 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh, my. Beautifully written once more but so sad knowing how this is going to turn out. Now I'm really curious as to how Brian dies. I am assuming he is more badly injured than he is letting on or is not aware of it (?).  I am glad that both men had a chance to express their love to each other, though. 


I had a suspicion Brian would die as a result of saving those he loved. I see this very much in character for him.  Looking forward to the rest of this.  Great job writing this heartwrenching story.  ~Kim

Author's Response:

You will get your answers soon. And as always thank you for your comment, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2023 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh my god !!!

Author's Response:

Sorry!! Please don't hate me... :D

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2023 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 9

Hello, there - this is understandably a difficult read, especially knowing what is to come. But you have written this chapter beautifully and given us a glimpse into how happy B and J were before tragedy struck.  I am glad that Justin will have some happy memories to hold onto once he is able to work through his grief.  This is a heartwrenching but well-written story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I will be along until the ride is over. ~Kim

Author's Response:

I know, I didn't even realize how hard this would actually be to read when I started writing it. And I know people like happy stories with happy endings more (I do too!!)... but I think some part of me just likes torturing people from time to time (myself included :D) But anyway, I'm happy you liked this chapter and thank you for leaving a comment... it really means a lot!

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2023 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is tough. It's already going to be bad. It has me at the edge of my seat. Ahhhh. I'm so terrified at how that ended. Ahhhh. I need my asthma pump and a Xanax and God knows what else.

Author's Response:

Haha, this made me laugh! But I know this is a tough read… so thanks for sticking with me! And for the comment, of course!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2023 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ugh! Those nasty cliffhangers - lol. We are getting ever so close to the accident details. You are doing a masterful job of building the suspense! Difficult to read major character deaths, but you are writing this in such a way that I can't help reading it. Looking forward to the rest.  ~Kim

Author's Response:

I really appreciate your comment! I know it's a hard story to read and it breaks my own heart to have to kill Brian here, but I still enjoy writing it... so thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2023 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'm still with you.

I'm glad Justin is talking, but agggr ...  You can't finish this chapter at this point. Need an update now!!


* hugs *

Author's Response:

Happy to know that!

And sorry for that... I just really love cliffhangers as you can see, and I can't promise you it will get better but hopefully you still enjoy it :) Will try to update soon!

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2022 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 6

I am where Justin was. I don't want to even know. I don't think I want to know. I can live in that moment in their office forever. Ahhhhhh.

Author's Response:

I can't promise that the next chapters will be easy, but I still hope you enjoy reading them. And yeah, I could live in that moment too... :D

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2022 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am crying like a little girl here. This chapter really got me in the end. I can see the horror that Justin is living in. I can't cope either. He needs to be able to move on, it's so hard. *Bawling* at this point. This cuts deep, it is soooooo good. These are the stories you never forget.

Author's Response:

That means so much to me and I am really happy you're enjoying this story even though it's sad... 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2022 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hello, there - still reading and enjoying this bittersweet story.  I think this chapter was my favorite.  I know a lot of readers tend to be anti-Michael, but I liked the interaction between Justin and Michael, and I would like to hope that Michael would have supported and responded to Justin exactly like you wrote it.  This one was the most emotional chapter of all to me.  Definitely interested and anxiously waiting for more.  Keep writing!  ~Kim

Author's Response:

I don't know, I've always liked Michael and I know he can be whiny sometimes and stuff, but I never tend to hate him or anything. Anyway, thanks for your comment, glad to know you enjoyed this chapter!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2022 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is a very engrossing story. I can feel Justin's emotions and pain so well here. I'm still dying to know exactly what happened,  but I'm sure we will know in time. Looking forward to Gus and Justin's conversation, too. Keep writing this, please.  It's not everyone's cup of tea, but even with Brian gone, I can still clearly feel the love between them. ~Kim

Author's Response:

You will, it may take a while but you definitely will... so thank you for your patience. I know, I know, it's probably hard to read (just like it's hard for me to write it) but I hope people are at least somehow enjoying it... and of course I'll keep writing! Thank you for the comment Kim! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2022 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm still reading and enjoying your story. Intrigued with the small details that are creeping into the storyline to give the readers an idea of what happened when Brian died.  I think I read in one of the chapters that he died saving Justin's life.  I could definitely see Brian or Justin doing that for the other because of how much they loved each other.

I think you nailed how Gus as a teenager might have reacted.  LOL.  Definitely not what Justin was dreading.  I hope he and Gus, though, are able to have a meaningful conversation, even though no one seems to blame Justin for what happened. 

I'm sure the visit to the grave will be a very difficult one for Justin in particular.  Love the snippets with him and Brian (in imaginary/ghost form).  Looking forward to the next chapter.  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply, but I really appreciate your comment and I'm so glad you like this story :) New chapter hopefully coming soon!

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2022 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm dead in the inside. Just so you know.

Author's Response:

Sorry! But thank you for reading... πŸ™ˆ

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2022 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

Such a poignant and sad chapter!  I loved the conversation between Justin and Debbie, though.  And I like the 'imaginary' scenes between B and J, although it's sad to think of Justin using them to assuage his grief.  Still can't wait to find out exactly what happened!  Thanks for continuing this story. While I am not fond of B or J dying, I find this story intriguing. :)  ~Kim

Author's Response:

I'm really happy you're enjoying this even though it's a sad story. Thank you for reading and your comment :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2022 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm so intrigued about what happened to Brian!  Still engrossed in this and will continue to read. I am glad you decided to continue it. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. :)  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2022 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

Painfull to read, but wonderful written.

But what happened? Think I'm gonna ask this question many times.

Next chapter please.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Thank you, that means a lot! 

Oh yeah, you probably will because I'm gonna torture you for a little while... but I promise that eventually there will be a chapter with every little detail of what happened... and until then there will at least be hints!


Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2022 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm just weeping. Shouldn't have come and started reading this.

Author's Response:

I know, it's a really tough story... sorry!😭

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2022 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

OMG what happened?

Next chapter please.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Don't worry, you will find out eventually... it's just going take a little while :) Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2022 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Normally I don't read the "Death of the major character" stories but as I really like your stories, I'll read this one when it's finished to cry a good shot and I'll leave you a comment surely very wet !!!

Author's Response:

That means a lot! I really appreciate it and thank you... I hope you will like the story when you read it :)

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2022 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'll be reading...even if it breaks my heart😒

Author's Response:

Thank you and I'm sorry about that! :(

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2022 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, there! Well, I admit I'm usually not a fan of B or J dying, but you have me intrigued. What in the world happened, and why are Ben and Michael having marital issues? And I always find stories with angst very interesting. I definitely would keep reading this. Hope you continue.

P.S. Thank you for all the stories you have been posting on MW. We appreciate it. :)


Author's Response:

I'm not a fan either, but for some reason I've decided to write this, god πŸ™ˆ Anyway thank you for your interest and for your comment I hope you will like the rest of this story :)

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

I got to hold myself down from killing you. You're hurting me! Ahhhhhh. But, still it was good and I want to find out what happened. Ahhhh. The pain in my heart you f..klj iejiojgijskjf. You!!!

Author's Response:

Oh my god, I'm so sorry... I'm just the worst, I know πŸ™ˆ but thank you for your interest!

Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2022 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Excuse me? now im curious please go on please 

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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