Reviews For And So It Begins
Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2023 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 27- Moving Day
Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2023 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 27- Moving Day
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2023 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 27- Moving Day
I really liked this story. Witnessing Brian's journey to sobriety through his diary, Justin and Cleo was really interesting. And the evolution of his relationship with Gus too. Thanks for sharing this story.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2023 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 26- Two Men and an Argument
Their first argument was something! Brian has a lot to learn and I think Justin has a lot of patience.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2023 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 25- The Next Step
Brian has changed so much. He talks about his feelings and what he wants without hiding. I'm a little sad that this story is ending but I'm sure they'll get there.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2023 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 24- Lindsay the Inquisitor
I imagine Lindsay pursing her lips so much! She hasn't been able to get near Justin and Molly is probably not going to help her. I think a lot of people see through her game especially the pro- Brian who know him well and know how much Lindsay wants to put a spoke in the wheel for Gus.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2023 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 23- Dinner Prep
The dinner looks very appetizing. Melanie is really a bitch. Gus is a charming boy and his complicity with Emmett is formidable. He has so many questions and Emmett has the cautious but realistic answers.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2023 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 22- Sobriety is Like Relationships
Brian is sure of his feelings for Justin and they are slowly coming to pass. Let's see how the family meal is going to go. I so want Lindsay to get roughed up.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2023 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 21- Assumptions Gone Wrong
Sorry to hear that you brought back the covid from your beautiful trip. I hope you are well now. Brian is really like a teenager in this relationship, luckily Justin is patient with him and explains everything that worries him. Their discussions are so interesting. A few more adjustments and they will be ready to live together. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2023 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 20- Late Night Conversations
I can't wait to read if their first sex party is going to be ruined, I hope not but Justin looks so surprised! Otherwise Gus has completely accepted Justin and is eager to do things with him.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2023 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 19- When are you ready to date?
I really like this chapter where Brian can see that a relationship has good sides and that he appreciates them. I can't wait to read how the family dinner will go.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2023 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 18- Moving Forward Part 2
Another great chapter. It's so nice to see Gus' enthusiasm for his dad and Justin. In addition through his words we can see that his mothers do not facilitate his relationship with his father. I can't wait to see them all reunited with Molly!
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2023 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 17- Moving Forward
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2023 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 17- Moving Forward
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2023 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 17- Moving Forward
I loved this chapter. Together against Lindsay yeah! I can't wait to hear Gus' reaction but I think he's going to love Justin and his dad in a relationship...
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2023 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 17- Moving Forward
Ahhh, I can't wait for more. I finally caught up. I was glued and then it ended. Thanks for writing this wonderful tale. I'll be looking forward for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2023 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls
Lindsay gets me so angry. I'm so happy Brian changed his mind. This is soooo good.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2023 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 16- The Morning After
Lindsey was and will always be a Bitch to me.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2023 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 16- The Morning After
Lindsey was and will always be a Bitch to me.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2022 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 16- The Morning After
Brian enjoyed his morning that's a good thing. Michael made his imagination work but who would have doubted it! Brian's true friends, Ted and Emmett are worried about him and want to help him not judge him. Lindsay really thinks she can influence Justin? That she continues to dream, he knows her well thanks to Brian and he will not let himself be manipulated. It's good that Brian told her four truths! I appreciated that she remained speechless at his words! Go Brian!
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2022 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 15- Decisions and Truths
Their relationship is taking a turn. I like this ! Brian manages to confide in Justin
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2022 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 15- Decisions and Truths
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2022 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 14- The Diner
Cleo to the rescue! He makes Brian understand that his situation is the same as that of a schoolgirl in love since he has never known this feeling.He is making really good progress!
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2022 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 13 Making Plans and Carrying Them Out
Brian is progressing well in his introspection. Michael seemed to me like a demon who wants to hijack Brian, unfortunately nothing new. Fortunately Cleo will come to her rescue.
Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2022 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 13 Making Plans and Carrying Them Out
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2022 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 10- Endorphins
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2022 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 12- History Revealed
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2022 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 12- History Revealed
Brian looks at Justin as if he could guess his thoughts, luckily Gus is more open and asks the question that's been bothering Brian for days. Brian still has a long way to go to open up and say what he thinks or feels. It's good that we learn more about Justin thanks to his meal with his agent. Well, nicer things later will reassure Brian haha!!
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2022 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 11- Serenity
Brian needs to learn to trust his "relationship" with Justin and not imagine the worst. I get it though , it was a little frustrating not having Justin around in this chapter. Happy Holidays
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2022 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 10- Endorphins
Brian is progressing really well in his alcoholic and sexual sobriety. He discovers himself and the new Brian is much improved! His diary is always so constructive and I like to know his thoughts, his questions that help him to move forward in his sobriety. Thanks for the update .
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2022 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 9- Aftermath
Brian went through a lot of emotions and questions in this chapter. Luckily he has Cleo and his dear diary!:
Reviewer: MaggieMay13 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2022 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 8- The Date
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2022 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 8- The Date
What a beautiful date! They are really moving slowly. I don't know if you're planning on sharing what Debbie thinks of her son's attitude, but I think Brian has definitely eliminated him. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading Brian's thoughts of all that's happening in his diary. I love this story.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2022 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 7 Feelings and Emotions
Cleo knows how to press where it hurts to move Brian forward.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2022 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 6- The Fear of Dates
Lindsay is still a bitch! I can't wait to see how the date goes. I still love Brian and his diary so much. All his feelings and all his questions are there
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2022 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 6- The Fear of Dates
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2022 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 Childhood Memories
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2022 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 5 Childhood Memories
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2022 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 5 Childhood Memories
It's so touching how the three of them behave. jI think they are moving in the right direction. Slowly but surely .
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2022 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 Childhood Memories
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2022 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 4- Remaking a Life
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2022 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 4- Remaking a Life
I like Cleo. He makes Brian think a lot about what his life was like with alcohol.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2022 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 3- Is Talking Over Rated?
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2022 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 3- Is Talking Over Rated?
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2022 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 3- Is Talking Over Rated?
What a great conversation. Justin really wants to explore every angle of their relationship
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2022 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 2- Being in Control
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2022 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 2- Being in Control
Thanks for this chapter. This new Brian is really interesting. He doesn't hesitate to talk to Ted and Justin who are good advice about Lindsay. I also really like his diary, he says so much. We know him better and better.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2022 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2022 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2022 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls
Glad to see the sequel. Brian and Justin really take it slow and ask good questions. Luckily Brian is calm, he could strangle Lindsay who is still looking for a way to control him or make him appear unconscious. Gus and him have a good relationship, they talk a lot and so he knew that nothing was planned for the holidays by his mothers. Anyway, since they want Brian to pay for the smallest thing, they would make him pay through the nose for an expensive vacation. I guess Lindsay is pissed because it's not at her request so she can't pressure her. Thanks for the new story. Oh beautiful banner!! |
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