Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2022 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 14

This was wonderful. My nerves were on edge for J.Jay with his dad coming to his show and I prayed it would go ok. I love watching the whole family our boys have created such a loving and kind one. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2022 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was so powerful. This really moved me on so many accounts,   From how they call felt and the conversations to the result. Incredibly emotional. Fantastic as always xox 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2022 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 12

Brian needs the biggest hug ever doesn't he. He takes to much on his shoulders instead of sharing the load. He is so lucky to have a friend like 'Em.  Justin and Brian will need his help so much over the next few days I'm sure. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2022 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 11

Wow that was intense. Brian really feels things so deeply so much so ar times he reacts before thinking doesn't he. He needs a good honest feel it in your bones hug. I felt Ems shock as well at what happened. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2022 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi I've just caught up wih the whole of his series.  I love your writng, just got behind with it. 

I'm a bit confused.  In A Son's Admiration, B & J get a restraining order against Craig after he hassles them, at Britin, at 3 am but  in Legacy 1 it's impied there is no restraining order.  Also if there was a restraining order, surely he would not be able to be at the laywers office at the same time as them?  Unless it only applies to their property in Pennsylvania and not their persons.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks,

Deb L.

PS  The reason their house is called BRITIN in the series is because Justin thought it was 'cheesy' to have the first 3 letters is Brian's name and the last 3 letters of his name and it stuck, hence, Britin.



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoy my stories.  I may have missed a detail but I am fairly sure the restraining order, if not said was implied, that the restraining order was expired and the fact they were out of state made a difference, too.  I did remember the restraining order so I addressed it in there somewhere.  I never reread my chapters. One of these days I am going to go back to the first story and see what I wrote. LOL  If I'm reading, I'm not writing, and I love writing.  If you ever have a story idea or a plot within a story let me know.  This whole series was started because of plot bunny someone gave me.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2022 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 10

That feckin Craig makes me more and more angry. He is pushing all the buttons he can isn't he. I feel so bad the boys had to cut their trip short over him. Boy oh boy this trial is gonna be intense. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2022 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2022 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

Awe that was so lovely for Brian and Justin. It was funny the kids telling them to go. They really did need that time together. I can't wait for their trip to Ireland. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2022 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

Another amazing chapter of this story. It's so great to see Em

and James meet up the guys with their daughter. It was lovely to hear how Brian feels about Em as well. I really like Sonya and Racheal those two are good eggs so I hope we them stick around. This thing with Craig is ramping up so I'm on edge wondering what's next. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2022 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 7

This was really beautiful a lot of love shown in many ways. Gus's kind and loving nature. Kevin and his huge heart and now this new girl Racheal. Thank you for writing this. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

That girl was crazy wasn't she. It's gonna take time for them all to recover that's for sure. A bit of travel is perfect and what a first stop they have planned. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

Holy moly on a cracker. That girl is so loony and evil not even the  devil would take her. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2022 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh fuck that I totally did not see that ending come in guys find him quick

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2022 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh fuck that I totally did not see that ending come in guys find him quick

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was so good. I'm so happy the girls are having a good time in St John. They really did need that didn't they. I do think it's step one in Sal getting back to herself. Holy god what the heck is that Cora's game. Let me at her , no one messes with our boys. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

Who is this Cora???



Author's Response:

We all know some artsy people are crazy.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2022 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

I think that breakaway for the girls will help them enormously. I feel for them as it's not an easy thing to deal with. That Cora, what is her game. I seriously don't trust her. My bitch slapping hand is ready. I hope J.Jay will be ok after that girl knew who he was. He is lucky to have so many around him that care about him and love him. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2022 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

Gosh J.Jay sure needs all their support and I fear something big is coming. As for Cora yeah I don't trust her either watch out Justin. This is getting better and better.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2022 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

So happy to see more to this series and what an amazing first chapter. Oh my heart is going out to Brandy and Sally I pray with the help of the family they will get through that. Connie seems like a very interesting character, I'm looking forward to getting to know her. As for J.Jay wow that's hard when that's your dad. I'm sure everyone will support him. Fantastic work as always x

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