Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2021 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

Interesting.  I just hope Wyld is ok.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2021 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 8

Interesting.  Boy Brian quickly agreed to the "boyfriend" demand when he was told Justin wasn't going to have sex with him.  I love it!  

Author's Response:

Brian isn't the inpentratable wall yet, so he is a little easier to bend to my will here. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2021 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 8

Will the Hardy boys be able to solve the murder mystery? Boyfriends? Michael and David? So many questions. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

The real question will be if they should solve the mystery and bring skeletons out in public. I wanted them to have a teenage romance and boyfriends fit. Thank you so much for commenting. I'm so happy you are liking the story. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2021 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh this is taking a nice twist, a problem to solve

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm hoping people like the old mystery to it. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2021 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Justin suggested that Brian go on a date with him, Michael and David.   He and Brian need to get back in the same orbit again, and Brian obviously wasn't going to make the first move.

Author's Response:

Yes, Brian and Justin need to be together and Brian is so stubborn. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2021 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 6

Boy Justin can't keep his mouth shut can he? Ranting to Lindsay.  Brian yelling at Emmett and Mel.  Ha what a crock, when he's treating Justin no better than they did.

OK Dr. Dave shows up and gives me the creeps already. No Justin won't get bashed, but good old Dave may try and make a move on him.

If not Mel,  who else would Lindsay be going after?


Author's Response:

Justin is a bit more not as love struck with Brian in this. I loved how the orig was but I wanted Justin a little more alright with being alone. Dave's actions become clear in the new chapter. I haven't worked out who Lindsay could be with, but Mel is always end game. Hopefully without all the cheating on both sides. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2021 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 5

I didn't think it was very nice of Mel and Emmett to just abandon Justin like that.   Besides the fact that he doesn't know anybody and they are in a gay bar and people are hitting on him, it was very rude on their part.

Author's Response:

It wasn't nice of them and they will be hearing about it from Brian and someone else too. 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2021 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 5

I see Brian is acting true to form.  Love how all the show's characters are woven into the story.

Author's Response:

Yep Brian's Brian. Thank you so much I'm trying to make sure everyone has a storyline.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2021 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

Wow what they go through.

Yay Blake and Ted are togther again. Like that. I always felt they'd be good together.

Brian better get his nerve up or he'll lose Justin to the fiddler. You bought everyone into the story didn't you. Ha! Dijon, Cynthia, Rodney.  Only ones missing are Dr. Dave and Kiki. Thought Dave would be in it since Ted's accident was on Cameron Rd. If he doesn't show up, no big deal.

This is great.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I like Ted and Blake together too. Brian's going to show a little interest in the next chapter when he finds out Emmett and Mel took Justin to a place an hour away and then just abandoned him. He's not going to be a happy camper. David will be in it, I have plans for him too. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2021 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

Mother's love everywhere. Sweet chapter.

She had to warn him, but I can't really see Jack come looking for him. At least I hope not. Why wouldn't Joan ask Brian if he would have liked to move with her. Oh well, one miracle at a time. 

Brian has to get over this thing about the coach. He was a pedophile  from the get go. Brian didn't cause it. Brian, you're not to blame. And, no regrets about Justin. You'll see for yourself that he's the best thing for you. 

Author's Response:

She didn't ask him because she didn't think he would want to come with her. The Brian and coach story always made me feel very sick. So I wanted him to get what was coming to him. As for Justin and Brian, you know there is going to be bite back from Brian. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2021 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is a very unique story! I am really enjoying all the character dynamics in this AU. Will be looking forward to reading the rest of this! Thank you for posting this here. ~Kim

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you. I'm trying to make them all have their own storylines like the show and follow through with that. 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2021 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

Joan seems a little more human in this story.

I hope Brian isnt going to be a jerk to Justin now that they slept together.  But then again Brian will be Brian.

Author's Response:

In the show you could just tell he wanted his parents to love him, even after all the hurt and abuse they gave him. I just wanted to make it a little better on him here. Brian going to bite back a little because he is Brian.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2021 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 3

Well that was interesting!  Cody sure was thorough.

Author's Response:

Thank you. He really was. A very angry boy. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2021 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh poor Teddy. The scar and that bastard Mr. Bell, daily reminders.

We all know Brian will see things differently than he dies now. Justin will make him see and do what needs to be done.

Can see all of them being friends still when they're older.

Man, love this story.

Author's Response:

Yes, Brian will see things differently after a bit but he'll still be Brian. Thank you so much. I'm so happy you love the story. 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2021 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

It just keeps getting better!!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad so many people like it. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2021 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 2

Psycho fits Cody well. I don't know is Jen and Craig know about Justin yet but being new to school keeps him out of whatever Cody had planned.

Guess I was wrong about Brian's parents. Bummer.

Author's Response:

Yes, Jen and Craig know about Justin in this story. Sorry about Brian's parents but redemption may happen for one of them. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2021 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Teenage Brian... is just a peek at what's to come.

I love how you wrote everyone. Ted the nebish one, Em our auntie, Mel the short angry girl. Lindsay Miss Privileged and little Mikey. Can't wait for them to hit Slaters. What hoot that will be.

Is Justin's family life going to be different now than it was in canon? Brian? Hope so. I do like it sometimes when things OOC  and Jack is a good guy.

Author's Response:

Craig will be OOC but as you read, yeah, Brian's will be the same. But since he is so young in this story, one of his parents will have a chance at redemption. 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2021 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

I see Cody is a tool in this story.  At least he isn't after Justin yet.  Glad he is leaving for NY.  

Author's Response:

Yep, he is how he was there. I think the only reason he had any control over Justin is because Justin wanted revenage, after it left a bad taste in his mouth, he saw Cody for who he really was. Thank you so much for commenting. 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2021 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

This just gets better...love the Cody angle. 1996 was a very good year...my son was born. Looking forward to another chapter tomorrow!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Had to us Cody, when I started I didn't know how but it kind of fell into place. He was so intense is a nice way to say it. 

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2021 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start! Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I can't wait for people to see what happens in the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2021 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start.  I love it already!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. The next chapter will be up bright and early tomorrow. I'm so happy people are liking it. 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2021 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter. Can’t wait to read more. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. The new chapter is all ready, just waiting for tomorrow to come so I can post it. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2021 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good start to the story!!  I'm looking forward to seeing this one continue.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I have the second chapter ready to be posted tomorrow. I hope it's as well liked as this one. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2021 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to Midnight Whispers!  We are thrilled to have you posting your story on here. I am really enjoying it so far. I like AU and 'teenage' Brian & Justin stories, and I'm glad to see that all the main players will apparently be involved with this one.

Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for posting this on here. ~Kim

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting me join. I love AU's too because you can do so much with them. I like teen Brian and Justin too. I'm going to try and add as many characters from the show as possible. I have the next chapter ready, just waiting for tomorrow to post it. 

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