Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2021 05:51 PM · On: Prologue to The Man I Hate? 5 Tragedy to Triumph
Aggrrr I thought I was reading a happy ending of a beautiful story, but ... *sigh* poor Gus. But I also make a happy dance, now you will continue this lovely story.
I think at the end Gus and Cass will be a couple, I hope.
* hugs *
Author's Response: If it had been a character that we had all learned to love, I wouldn't have done that but the story came to me and I had to put it down. I hope you enjoy it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2021 09:15 AM · On: Prologue to The Man I Hate? 5 Tragedy to Triumph
Wow so many emotions in this my heart went all over the place. This has really set us for what's to come in the next part of the series. You did an incredible job with this.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2021 12:43 AM · On: Prologue to The Man I Hate? 5 Tragedy to Triumph
Looking forward to this new part of the continuing story.
Things going so good the other shoe had to drop and drop it did. All at the cost of heartbreak.
Author's Response: I was going to stop at the end of that one but it was like an idea came into my head and I had to write it.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2021 11:43 PM · On: Prologue to The Man I Hate? 5 Tragedy to Triumph
Oh wow I was reading the epilogue and assuming all the loose ends would be happy endings. Then wow Cass in DV then OMG Gus and Marley. So does this mean we have another series yay
Author's Response: There will be one more story in this series. One more story for this crew popped into my head so I am writing it.
Reviewer: CdnFotoGirl (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2021 07:20 PM · On: Prologue to The Man I Hate? 5 Tragedy to Triumph
I have really enjoyed this series. I have my suspicions about what is going to happen next...it will involve his first love.
in this chapter you stated that Gas changed his last name to Kinney when he turned 18 but in the last sentence you call him Gus Marcus?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know that. I made a change and forgot to change it there.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2021 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
This was an incredible story from beginning to end. I felt for Justin feeling that way is horrible and hitting out at those you love makes you feel even worse, I felt for Brian as well knowing nothing you were doing was helping. Gus meeting that girl is like fate I hope it goes somewhere. There time up in the cabin all of them was like magic. I'm sad this bit is over but I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2021 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 11
That was amazing as always. I'm worried for Justin that kind of pain is like death it's horrible. My heart went out to Gus he knows what he wants for his future and yet they bloody Mel sticks her ore in. I'm loving this so much.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2021 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
I'm so over the moon to see Raymond get comfortable with the boys that brought a tear to my eye. Poor Aiden hurting his ankle and Gus getting a fright over it. Gus is an incredible friend to JR. I wish Gus was gay as they would make a wonderful couple and good dads in the future. Brilliant work
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2021 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 9
I smiled from ear to ear reading this chapter. Aiden was so amazing with spotting that boat and what came from doing that filled my heart with joy. I think this will be the start of something incredible for Gus. I want to be friends with this family so much. Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2021 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 9
Lovely chapter, thanks.
* hugs *
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2021 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
My heart really got a workout reading this chapter. Aiden was amazing in this as was Gus. They were so strong. Brian and Justin held it together so well. I would have been a mess through all that. I think I need a lie down now. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2021 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 7
Gosh that creep and the even creeper creep in a suit with him. They better back off back Seattle. I'm dying to find out what Cal found out. You left us hanging lol. Brilliant work x
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2021 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 7
Agrrr I need the next chapter NOW. Please. I also want to hear it too what Cal discovered.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I am working on it. I'm over half done with it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2021 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
Gus' birthday was a good one and we got to see what Deb is up to.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 6
Gosh I hope Cal can find the dirt on that scum bag to help the boys. Gus's reaction to his gift was incredible and it shows how good a young man he is. Plus having his friend ask him what he did shows the trust and bond they have. Fantastic work
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 5
I do hope the transfusion does not get used against them.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 5
I do hope the transfusion does not get used against them.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 5
I do hope the transfusion does not get used against them.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2021 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 5
Amazing chapter. With Mel's help Dakin doesn't stand a chance.
Author's Response: I seem to have to have something exciting going on at all times. LOL
Author's Response: I seem to have to have something exciting going on at all times. LOL
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2021 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 5
Another incredible chapter of this story. What could Dalkin possibly have on them my heart is pounding for them. I'm sure though that Mel can pull off this and win. Gus is such an amazing big brother to Aiden. Go Victor, I pray what he did works out. Fantastic work can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2021 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 4
Still loving these series so much. I often read MW in bed before going to sleep. Then I'm too tired to leave a review. But keep on writing.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I enjoy writing them so I am glad people seem to enjoy them. I try to add a bit every night and try to post as often as possible.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2021 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 4
You will find a way to spike whatever plans Daklin might have. It's great that JR and Raymond have Ted and Vic. It will be enjoyable to see them going back to where this all started for the holidays.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2021 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 4
Gus is such an amazing friend to JR and that I'm sure helped more than they both even realise. Aiden with Ray as well is so sweet and that friendship will blossom. The few days the boys had on their own from the kids was very sexy and comforting and that poured off the page. You did a fantastic job with this. Plus Ted and Victor wowed me.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2021 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
I am so jealous. I would love a spa day.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2021 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
Fantastic work Ray is such a wonderful child looking out for his friend like he did. They will definitely be forever best friends. Gus and those at the office were fantastic at setting up that spa day for the guys, they truly needed that time together.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2021 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
Looks like Ray has a good friend in Aiden. Glad Justin foot is better.
Author's Response: I figured it would be fun for both boys to have a buddy.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2021 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
Gus is such a wonderful big brother to Aiden and good friend to JR. Will they end up boyfriends? I hope so. I can feel the anxiety Justin is feeling over the situation and I'm worried for the whole family. I want to jump in and support them all. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2021 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. What an eventful chapter. I hope things work out for Little Ray. Aiden will enjoy a new friend.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2021 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
Such a fantastic start to this next bit of the story. Brian was either brave or stupid for doing what he did but I think meeting that police officer might help his case. Those kids are amazing and I love how much they care for each other. My heart is going out to JR over his brother I pray what he is thinking didn't happen. I can't wait for more.
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