Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2021 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

Love these series so much. Please hurry with the next one.

* hugs *

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2021 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh wow that was such a perfect last chapter. That trip back to the cabin was fantastic. I loved how JR felt like family that poor boy needed that and I hope he opens up more to Ted and Victor I think he needs to. I could feel the shock on everyone's face when Aiden did what he did. I can't wait to see what kind of cabin the guys build. We definitely need tons more of these guys. Incredible work as always x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2021 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 12

Back to the cabin they go, but if Aiden thinks for one moment that his dads will let him out of their sight, he is gravely mistaken.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2021 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 12

That was so good, I'm glad Gus is getting on well at his cooking class and making a new friend already. Maybe Gus will realise something about himself with him. Ted and Victor are so incredible for doing that for JR I think this will give him a new lease on life. I felt sorry for Aiden when Justin reacted how he did but understood why he did. I am looking forward to seeing how they get on at the cabin. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2021 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

Looks like the boys are both being helped.  Shame Aiden is sooo tired.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2021 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

That was brilliant. I'm so proud of Gus on how he stood up to his mums they needed that. As for Gus and the boys, Ted and Victor looking after JR was amazing it moved me so much. I think JR should move in with one of them. Victor what a man offering that opportunity to JRs Mum. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

Gus is back home and he cares for Aiden but hasn't realized that Aiden will be the one to help him continue to see Cass.  Give them three more years and I see them getting back together.  How will the fight between Mel and Lindz turn out.  Mel is certainly vindictive.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 10

I loved every bit of this. I could feel Gus's pain jump off the page. Justin was so fantastic with him and their talk was a fatherly one to the fullest and Gus knew that. I hope Gus chooses a hobby that will be fun for him and maybe he will meet a girl there. Aiden melted my heart once again that child has such a huge heart. As for the twits at the party I swear they need to grow up. I have a feeling Brian has a taxi called as he marched over to them. 

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 9

Gus blew it.  He started acting like a kid which he is.  Cass working for Justin to help with Aiden will make a perfect time to spend together.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

Ted is my hero.  Without him and Victor things would have been so much harder.  Aiden has a lot of adventures to tell.



Author's Response:

Can you tell I have a crush on Ted?

 



Author's Response:

Can you tell I have a crush on Ted?

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 7

You do like to leave us with a cliff hanger.  I was on the edge of my chair the whole chapter.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

Will Mel and Lindsay ever get their act together?

Great chapter!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 6

Poor Gus.  He never intended to lose Aiden.  But two days?  Wasn't that a bit much?

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 10

Will Mel and Lindsay ever get their act together?

Great chapter!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 10

Omg never a dull moment at a Kinney Taylor party! Gus is trying to survive the pain of the teens and we all know how hard our lost first love is.
Gus is actually being more responsible than his so called mothers!

Author's Response:

Yes, oh those horrible teen years.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Could it be that Mel or Lindsay might be jealous and make a play for Cassie?  At least the Kinney-Taylor's had a great day visiting a treehouse and going down in a rollercoaster.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 4

Gus needs Aiden to keep him on the straight and narrow.  Love the cabin, though leaving one cabin for a smaller one seems a little strange.



Author's Response:

Their cabin is really a vacation home. The cabin they are going to is much more rustic. Kind of like taking a day trip when you stay at a resort.



Author's Response:

Their cabin is really a vacation home. The cabin they are going to is much more rustic. Kind of like taking a day trip when you stay at a resort.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

Aiden is a good little brother.  Gus is a different boy when dealing with him.  The thought of a getaway for Gus is interesting.  But Brian's question was shocking.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 2

Aiden seems more grown up than Gus.  Goes for the girls too.



Author's Response:

Gus is at that age where he thinks he knows everything but needs help with everything.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

My how time flies.  Adien in kindergarden.  Gus is certainly having problems.  Will Brian and Justin be able to get him back on track?  Mel and Linz are in denial.  Is JR in this tale?



Author's Response:

JR is not in this one.  This is slightly off Canon as Brian and Justin didn't meet until after Justin was out of highschool.

 



Author's Response:

JR is not in this one.  This is slightly off Canon as Brian and Justin didn't meet until after Justin was out of highschool.

 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2021 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 9

I think Cass is being smart.  Gus is too young and immature for her at this point.  Perhaps in the future things could work.  Gus needs to get on the right track and living with Brian and Justin will make the difference.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2021 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 9

I think Cass is being smart.  Gus is too young and immature for her at this point.  Perhaps in the future things could work.  Gus needs to get on the right track and living with Brian and Justin will make the difference.



Author's Response:

Yes, even though Gus is a Kinney, he is too young to be with a woman out of college.  Cass is going to stay in the story line.  I like her character.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2021 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh dear Gus is putting Cass at risk he is being a entitled little shit

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2021 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 9

Poor Gus really is falling apart and his mother's just can't see it. Thank goodness for his dads and Cass and of course Aiden. He needs to go back to his dads place and make nee friends. Cass is the perfect girl for him I'm gutted their age difference makes it impossible. This chapter really grabbed my heart.

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

I just reread my comment for the last chapter.  It must have self-corrected because what I meant it to say was you had ME crying through the whole thing!

I'm really happy you updated so quickly!  This is a great story.



Author's Response:

I knew what you meant. LOL  I am glad you are enjoying the story.  On the weekends I tend to get quite a bit of writing done and then during the week it gets slower, working full time and brain dead when I get home.  My goal is always 2 chapters a week.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

I'm not sure about Cassie yet.  



Author's Response:

I think you'll like her.  I do.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

So emotional, they have all been through so much. Gus is so crushed I wish I could give him a huge hug. Aiden I think will need him nearby so I hope he moves back in. Ted and Victor are truly best friends with the boys and the help they provided showed that. I loved the staff that hospital all hospitals should be like that one. I can't wait for more of this. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2021 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh my.  Great writing!  You had be crying when reading this one!



Author's Response:

I definitely was.  There were several spots that I got choked up.  The next chapter is with the Beta now so should be posted tonight or tomorrow.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2021 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 7

Talk about intense. My heart is going to need a while to recover after reading this chapter. My heart is aching for Gus I can't imagine all that's going through his head. I love the wolves looking after Aiden and then Gus. They are so special aren't they. I'm so thrilled to see Ted and Victor thr guys need all the support they can get right now. Then you go and leave us on a cliffhanger, how could you do that to my heart. 

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2021 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 7

Omg oh no come on Aiden you can beat this

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 6

Omg please get him back to the cabin dear wolves

Author's Response:

I hope I am keeping your interest with this one.



Author's Response:

I hope I am keeping your interest with this one.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

NO! Nooooo! I need to know where they took him!!!!!! Cliffhanger!! REALLY!?!? NOW!!!!

Author's Response:

I hope that is a good NO and not a bad NO.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

The wolf pack saved Aiden!  Love it.  



Author's Response:

Wolves have been known to do that.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2021 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 6

Omg poor Aiden and Gus. I can't imagine the depth of guilt he is feeling right now. He is just a teenager and that has to be crushing his soul. I can't blame Justin's reaction and I'm glad that anger was only brief. My heart is pounding so hard reading this. What is really touching are the Wolves. Animals are so incredible we need to be thankful for them more. 

 

Such an incredible chapter x

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2021 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

Aaagrrr you can't stop writing at this point. Where is Aiden?

Please come back and write some more.

Love this so much.

* hugs *

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2021 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

I read one of your responses to someone about the amount of conversations in this.  I have to say that is one of the things I love about this story. Everyone is being open and discussing issues as well as attempting to solve them.  I really like the closeness between Gus and Justin.  Gus loves his dads and Aiden.  I am interested in how the Cassandra part will work out.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2021 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

Love this story, thanks.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it.  I feel like this one has a lot more conversations than some and that might not be everyone's favorite. I am enjoying this one and trying to add other details to keep people entertained.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2021 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

What an amazing chapter. I love how Gus loves his brother and looks after him so well. Aiden looks after him just as much and that is so heartwarming. I loved their hike and seeing those animals if I could walk that far I'd love that as well. You are really moving me with the conversations between Gus and his dads they move me to tears. I can't blame Gus for being scared of his mamas reaction to his girlfriend I'd be scared to. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2021 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loved this so much. Gus has so much pain inside him. I hope this trip heals him. I can feel the worry of Justin and Brian. I was feeling every emotion in this chapter. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2021 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 3

Omg Brian ease into difficult conversations will you lol I am eager to see if Gus opens up

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2021 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

So Gus has a girlfriend.  Somehow I think he's doing more than drinking, too.  Justin is wonderful with Gus and Gus is a great big brother.  I really enjoy this.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it.  I thought the 10 year age difference is perfect for this kind of relationship.  I hope it continues to hold your attention.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2021 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 3

Such a difficult situation for Brian and Justin with Gus. He needs to be handled in the right way to help with his pain. I love how Gus is with his little brother it's the sweetest moments. They love each other so much. I look forward to seeing lots more of this. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2021 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

Gus really is spiraling fast isn't he. Mel and Lindsay are really not helping him. Plus Justin and Brian getting the caretaker to get them pot isn't very wise a drug free zone might have been better for Gus. Little Aiden is such a sweet child maybe he will be the one to pull Gus out of his trouble. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2021 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 2

Nope! Not me! They wouldn’t be in the girls custody for much longer! Nope!

Author's Response:

We both know Brian and Justin won't let it go too far.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2021 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 2

Nope! Not me! They wouldn’t be in the girls custody for much longer! Nope!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2021 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Gosh, Gus really is going down a wrong and dangerous path. I hope the boys can help him. As for his mum's they are a lost cause. Maybe Aiden will be the one to pull him out of it. Fantastic work x

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