Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 13
This was terrific! I am looking forward to the next verse to this series.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I am planning on at least one more in that series. The next (and maybe last) will be A Father's Regret.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2021 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 13
Such a perfect end to an amazing story. Gus is such a happy loving child. The boys really enjoyed their Christmas through his eyes didn't they. There is a lot of love in that house so I hope someday they do add to that family. Those boys needed that getaway just the two of them after everything they went through taking time out for themselves was the right thing to do. I was shocked at what Joan did but happy hopefully it touched apart of Brian that he needed. Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2021 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh Joan good on you
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2021 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 13
Merry holidays were had by all. Joan missed out on it all.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2021 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 12
What a full chapter and a brilliant one at that. I could feel all the emotions that ran through that house. My heart was going hammer and tongs. It was great seeing Tracey smile with Mark she needs a good man in her life. I won't give it away but my π’ for certain people. I love Gus that boys heart is pure gold I swear he never gives up trying to break the armour that surrounds Joans heart. Man oh man this was fantastic.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2021 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow! Such a lot has happened. This chapter couldn't have turned out better. Now Brian needs to meet his father.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2021 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh dear Tracy being in a DV relationship is so dangerous and now we can see the danger.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2021 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh holy heck π± that was oh my. Tracey Ex is nuts.
Fr Tom really enjoyed his time with Gus and the family. I can see him leave the church to try and have a family of his own.
I sorta felt sorry for Joan, she really is a lonely woman isn't she.
Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2021 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 11
Another cliff hanger! You've found a way to keep our attention. Great chapter.
Author's Response: This story just seems to lend itself to the cliffhanger.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2021 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 11
Another cliff hanger! You've found a way to keep our attention. Great chapter.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love how together Brian and Justin are and you can see the strong bond Brian has by the way he is looking after him. That doctor I would have kicked his ass out of the room and reported him. Thank goodness his actual doctor is lovely. My heart broke for James thinking Brian hated him and Gus on how worried and upset he was. Thank goodness Justin got out and home to be with his family. I can't wait for more. Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see how Thanksgiving goes.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see how Thanksgiving goes.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
Omg poor Justin. See I knew I didn't trust him π€¬. My heart goes out to them all. Gus is such a strong and loving boy. I have a feeling poor Brian is going to need all the love and help in the world. What an incredible chapter x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
Poor Gus. It's a good thing Justin didn't take him up to the studio. Just when things are going good, Len tries to do away with Justin. You've given us some cliff hanger here so we'll want more. It's working.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh no poor Justin and Brian
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2021 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 8
Argh I donβt like Len either
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2021 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
I was glad to see that Tom got out to the house to visit and I loved how he was with Gus. I think he is lonely and needs family and friends. It's good to know he knows Joan isn't a pleasant woman. I hope he visits again. That Len is giving me the shivers. I'm scared he might do something awful. Fantastic work can't wait for more.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love how Tom couldn't deal with Joanie either. She's a piece of work. Len is trouble. He's going to end up in jail is my guess. So Brian is a Taylor, does that make them Taylor-Taylor?
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
Can't wait till the next chapter. Please keep writing.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I don't see that happening any time soon. I've got an addiction. My house shows it. It needs love and care but writing is much more fun.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2021 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 7
#1. Justin do not let Len alone with James.
#2. Can Joan be shown the damage she did to her children by being a selfish bitch?
Author's Response: James is not the one that you have to worry about.
Author's Response: James is not the one that you have to worry about.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2021 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 7
Holy moly there was so much to take in π±. I want to know who Kevin is and I hope we find out. I was sucked right into this. You seriously did an incredible job with it. I didn't want it to end.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2021 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 6
Holy shit, what a chapter. First off I wanna take that Tracey down so badly she is trouble. I think Ronni will rip her to shreds if she does anything. As for Claire grrrr just like her mother. I feel for Peter. I think he would do well without his mother and to be with his uncle. Then you go and leave us with that ending of this chapter π±. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
Da dum!! So we have another father out there hmm interesting story arc. Omg Tracy get a life and go away!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wait until Father Tom finds out that Joanie had a child by someone not her husband. She has a lot of nerve talking about Claire's boyfriend the way she did. Can't wait to find out more about Joan's sister.
Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2021 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
just keeps getting better and better
Author's Response: Glad you think so. Have some ideas where we are going but it surprises me too.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2021 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
Really good chapter as we learn more about Joanie's past.
Author's Response: Need to keep up the mystery.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2021 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
This was such a powerful chapter. So much moved me that words aren't enough to describe how much. I hope Brian gets his answers about his mother. I hope Gus gets to talk to her some more see if he can touch her heart if she has one. I don't trust Tracey at all. Amazing work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2021 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
I hope Joanie is sitting all alone wishing she'd been invited to the party and knowing why she wasn't.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
Brian is so sweet with the kids and in that you can see his venerability. His mother has a lot to answer for. I'm glad what happened with Gus and her he is such a happy child. I didn't say what happened so there are no spoilers.
Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
what made that woman thd way she is? some people are just happy that way. cant believe ronni was pushing for justin to let joan come., but now seeing what joan is like. eagerly awaiting another chapter.
Author's Response: Some people just don't know how to be happy but I think we will be exploring a little of what caused her to be this way.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2021 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
It's good that James and Emmett have each other. I never realized how jealous Em can get. Perhaps Father Tom could come and be there while Brian has his little chat with the she devil?
Author's Response: Not sure he will show up but I might bring him up. LOL
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2021 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
I hope Brian can keep his Justin armour on facing the crone and his ghastly sister
Author's Response: Brian will eventually realize he has the family he needs.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2021 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
My heart is in bits poor Brian he really did turn into a little boy and all the hurts hitting him at once. I could feel every bit of it. Thank you for this incredible chapter x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2021 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
I can't blame Brian's reaction I would have blown up as well. I also can feel the pressure poor Justin is under. Joan is temperamental. I can't wait to see where this goes. Brilliant work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2021 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 2
Joanie will be very unhappy because that is her nature. Can't wait to find out what you have planned for her.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2021 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Looks like Joanie will be moving in. I can just see Ronnie telling her off. This is going to be fun.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2021 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Another amazing story from you and what a perfect first chapter. Brian really cares for his family and you can see the love pour out of him. You really captured it. I pray he gets on well with his trip for work and omg what a cliffhanger. Fantastic work x
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