Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Derailed
Reviewer: starbaby (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2021 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

are you going to finish this?



Author's Response:

Chapter 9 is up now!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2020 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

So, the incident with Louisa in the kitchen... yeah, she's hurting too. But a bitch is a bitch is a bitch. But in a weird way she got Brian to act like Brian - when she told her to Fuck off!

I'm glad Brian and Justin went off together, even if not much talking got done. Baby steps.

Yay for Gus and Hunter with the reporters! 

Oh, poor Lily... what did she see????



Author's Response:

Louisa is definitely being a bitch. Of course she's hurting and everyone understands that, but Brian just lost his husband and the father of his child and unborn child. It isn't her place to say something like that. 

Brian and Justin just needed to get away and breathe. They will probably talk more later. 

Lol, yes. Violence might not be the answer, but that reporter deserved to get punched.

And yes, poor Lily. :( She saw what we all hoped she wouldn't see.

Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2020 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

Justin was so good to get Brian out of the apartment.  Molly definitely has a way with children.  I can't imagine what it would be like to see your parent shot.  Both children need someone to talk to ( professional)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian definitely needed to get out of the house and breathe for a few. Molly is great with kids! Lily and Duncan are very lucky to have her, as are the future kids coming into this universe. Both definitely need to talk to someone :( Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2020 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

Molly is a lifesaver.  It's so nice that Brian and Lily have made up.  Wish there was some way that Lily could have gone to the funeral if only for closure.  Times are going to be tough.  Eric's mom is not taking Lily, no way.



Author's Response:

Molly is wonderful! :) Brian and Lily were going to get there, Lily just needed time to process and figure out why she was so angry. She might not know why she is lashing out, but she knows it isn't her dad that she's mad at. It would have been nice if she could have gone :( And yeah, Louisa needs to figure that out fast and understand her place in Lily's life (which can be a good and positive one if she grows and owns up to her mistakes). Chapter 9 is up now!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2020 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 8

At least Lily was able to lift Brian's spirits.  Hunter and Gus were great with the reporter.  Brian does have a strong support system with Justin leading the pack. 



Author's Response:

Absolutely! Brian really needed that from her specifically. That reporter got what was coming to him. Brian really does have a strong and devoted support system. Chapter 9 is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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