Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2020 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 7

Are you coming? Or are you staying? A play on Brian and Justin's first meeting??? It worked perfectly in that scene.

I'm glad it was Mel who sat with Brian at the end of the funeral. And I'm valso ery glad Jennifer came - both for Justin and for Brian. So much pain. So much (misguided) guilt.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2020 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 7

This chapter is so sad. Having to say good-bye is hard and Lily doesn't even get a chance to do that.  Gus and Emmett have the hardest part.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2020 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

This was very emotional and heartbreaking but written so well.  I'm glad Justin was able to comfort Gus and that Brian showed Gus affection. Brian definitely needs to let his feelings out so he can begin healing.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2020 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Molly got Lily distracted.  It was a great scene between Gus and Justin.  Now that we know Lily saw things on the train, it will be easier for her to start to process it.  I hope she will be able to tell Brian that Eric wanted to come home before he called.  That will lessen the guilt that Brian feels.  Such a great story, even if it is incredibly sad at this point.  Thanks for writing and updating so quickly.

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