Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2019 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

 Great ending. Just when people began paying attention to the two patients just what they need-- God's personal joke---- mikey, the poster boy for idiots. He and his interfenring loud mouth ma. Well people shouldn't have that pleasure much less sick ones. With their entitled behavior got them banned from the hospital. Then mikey goes on the war path lying to anyone or anything in hearing distance. Finally in the same room and bed our boys are together, so glad a nurse let it slip that at his bashing Brian was there every night watching over him, liked Debbie calling Jen and tells her all the lies mikey had spread over town and Jen just laughs and hangs up on her, was especially nice when mikey was lying thru his teeth he was called on it making him look stupid. The boys were with Jen and no one knew they could heal, and the duo of ma and the idiot couldn't locate them. Yippee!

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2019 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

still loving the story! I expected Brian or Justin at any time ask: Are you listeninng? I know the hospital meant well and the police was trying to do their job. They asked the questions but nobody was fucking paying attention! talk about frustrating!

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2019 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

I love your story, as I always knew ''Ian'' was pond scum at its worse. To teach Justin to obey him?  Justin should have broken that dreaded violin over his head! "Ian" is very lucky that Brian didn't crush him into dust. Even getting back together had its problems.

 

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2019 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

That was terrific! ♥ Love how Brian finally realized he loves Justin and now can have the happily ever after at least.

I am so glad Ethan is now out of their lives for good.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2019 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

Well... I REALLY have to hand it to you with this one! I read this a couple of nights ago on my granddaughters cell phone! DO YOU KNOW HOW AWFUL AND HARD THAT WAS??? The dang print kept flipping all over the page! I had to have the text so very big so my poor - bifocal needing - eyes could actually see it! Then I had to TRY and keep the laughter down so not to bother everybody else in the room...

So, anyway... in case you didn't get my drift... I LOVED IT!!!

That sniveling asswipe Ethan... I hope he gets put in with Bubba the Abuser. And his talentless hand gets an extra stomp on it.

I hope Michael is too embarrassed to show his face ever again on Liberty Avenue... and if he is dumb enough... I hpe Brian and Justin are sitting there... and Brian gives him a berating before giving him the shaft... and Debbie needs to be told where to go while in the diner.

Hmm... I bet you can't guess who my least favorite people are, can you? I just finished posting my last chapter... ahh... poor Mikey and Debbie!

Are we going to be treated to another chapter of Arrogant, soon? See, give me a bone, and I want the steak!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2019 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

Lol Molly would have got an education had she checked on our frisky boys

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that was Jen's reaction too! Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2019 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

It was so good to see Michael accused of telling all the lies that came out of his poisonous mouth. And Jennifer who puts Debbie in her place! Ethan deserves all that happens to him and maybe the prison will make him think. Brian and Justin together it's just the best. Thank you for this story. Big Hugs Marie-France

Author's Response: Michael deserved so much more. Instead of a verbal smack down, maybe the bear at the end of the bar should have pulled a Debbie, and smacked him up side the head. Debbie deserved her tongue lashing, and Jen was the perfect one to give it to her. Ethan will have a lot of time to think about his behavior, that is when he's not being someone's bitch! Brian and Justin together, yep I'm all about the love. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleeen

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2019 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

oh, and poor itty bitty Ethan, he cwushed his non talented hand, good no more cat screeching, LOL.



Author's Response: Yeah, it's hard to find any sympathy for slimy chin rat. Thankfully the world is saved from hearing his screeching cat serenades. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2019 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

Debbie does like to jump to conclusions doesn't she.  Ethan doesn't realize just how much trouble he's in.  Well, that happens when you do the crime.  I suppose he could plead insanity brought on by the medication they gave him at the hospital.   He and Mikey deserve what they get.



Author's Response: It's so hard for Debbie and Michael not to jump to conclusions, it's the Novotny way. Ethan may not have realized his actions would land him in so much trouble, but he has no one but himself to blame. Although I'm sure he'll try and blame Justin. Once he's in jail he's going to wish for more medication. Ha, ha, ha... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2019 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

I lvoe the humor in the story.  I could see this happening as an alternate canon.  Slime ball Ethan was never any good for Justin.



Author's Response: Thanks, I had fun writing it. Ethan has always made my skin crawl, he's such a step down from Brian. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2019 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

Debbie is just as irrational as her son. Great that Mikey got shown up as a liar.  Really enjoyed this story!!!   Bill



Author's Response: Yes, both mother and son always jump to the wrong conclusions, and they end up putting their foot in their mouth. I'm so glad you liked this one. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2019 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

It's good that Justin and Brian were able to give their version of what happened. Ethan is an idiot and Michael too. Ted is really the best friend and luckily Brian has changed his POA. I laughed when Carl pulled Michael out by the ear like a brat! Thank you Darling for the update.

Author's Response: Now that Carl knows the truth he'll be able to arrest Ethan, and who knows maybe Michel too... Brian's lucky to have become better friends with Ted, they really do look out for one another. More coming soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Love Carl in this story.  Debbie is almost as annoying as Michael. Hope Brian is OK.  Thanks for the update!!  Bill



Author's Response: Yeah, Carl doesn't have a problem putting everyone in their place. Michael and Debbie, my ears are bleeding... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Well, Ethan pretty much admitted to beating up Justin.  Even Carl should see that in the notes.  He's the one who should be arrested.  I think after all this, they should let Brian and Justin see each other.   I think it would do them both a world of good to be in the same space.   And Michael and Deb should both be kicked out of the hospital, with the way they are acting.   Thank goodness Brian has Justin as his POA instead of Michael.   Smart move buddy!!



Author's Response: In Ethan's drug induced brain he owed up to his abusive behavior, even if he didn't realize it at the time. Not to worry though, Carl has a pair of bracelets with his name on them. Michael and Deb won't be visiting Brian anytime soon, no one wants to hear them whine. Our boys will be back together soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

I don't like the people at the hospital just assuming Brian and Justin fought each other.   They should try and talk with Justin to get the full story instead of just thinking the worst automatically... 



Author's Response: Yeah, they should have just jumped to conclusions. Thankfully Justin set them straight, and the blame has landed right where it belongs. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Oh this just keeps getting better and better 



Author's Response: Squeals! Thanks so much! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Love how Brian is worried about Justin and Jusstin is worried about Brian and only Ted accepts that as fact.  Do we get to see Michael carted off to jail? 



Author's Response: Ted can see how much they need each other, thank goodness they've finally realized it themselves. "Do we get to see Michael carted off to jail?" Well... No, but you do get to see Ethan carted off to jail if that helps... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Poor whittle Michael, LOL!!  Ooh, did someone attack Brian, interesting!!



Author's Response: Michael really is a whinny bitch in this one... "Did someone attack Brian?" Yes, I believe his name was Jim Beam... Ha, ha, ha... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Very nice start. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2019 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Wow, what a beginning.  Can't wait for more.  Bill



Author's Response: Thanks Bill! More coming soon. Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2019 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

t's a pretty scary start. I hope that Brian will not be accused of domestic violence that Justin will accuse Ethan as he should. I'm so happy that Brian says "I love you" to Justin that will change things. Thank you for this new story I can not wait to read more.

Author's Response: It is pretty scary, but thankfully Brian's injury isn't as bad as it could have been. Not to worry, Justin sets the record straight. Squeals! "I love you!" Yes it's true, he said it! Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2019 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

talk about people not listening



Author's Response: When has Michael ever listened? Except of course when Brian said, always have, always will... Will not! Sorry Michael, no not sorry... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2019 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Brian cares.  He actually said so. Shame he was to wasted and fell against the coffee table.  Now they're both in trouble.  Looking forward to future tables that will either make things better or worse.



Author's Response: Yes, he actually said it! Now will he remember once he wakes up? Ha, ha, ha... Just kidding... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

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