Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For This Time
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2020 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 31 Episode 31(Accentuate the Positive)

Lol this is so much fun

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2020 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 31 Episode 31(Accentuate the Positive)

I like this twist again. Ben doesn't need Michael, he can do much better. Too bad Michael did not understand that he will not interfere in Brian's decisions especially with regard to Kinnetik. I love how Justin finds the baths for Kinnetik.

Author's Response:

Knowing that the baths had been Kinnetik made finding things easier.  I always felt sorry for Ben but liked him enough to keep him around.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2020 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 31 Episode 31(Accentuate the Positive)

Good for Ben, anyone is better than Mikey.

Author's Response:

True, now who to pair him up with.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2020 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 31 Episode 31(Accentuate the Positive)

Great chapter. Terrific writing.



Author's Response:

You make me blush.  Thank you.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2020 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 31 Episode 31(Accentuate the Positive)

I love how Brian tells Ben that Michael doesn't get to tell him how to run his business.  This is a Brian who seems less influenced by Mikey and Lindsay-  better situation for everyone involved.  Love that Justin found the building for Kinnetik.



Author's Response:

For someone as smart as Brian is he let himself be influenced by some idiots.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2020 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 31 Episode 31(Accentuate the Positive)

Loved this. Brian was so cute with Gus and Gus giggling Justin was so sweet. Michael makes your insides knot along with Melanie they give me piles lol. Justin and Daphne finding that building that way was brilliant . I seriously cannot wait for more x



Author's Response:

Looking at pics of Brian with Gus you can't help but think them cute.  The building was important to the storyline so having Justin and Daphne find it was important.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 30-Episode 30 (Love for Sale)

Michael chest her makes me gag.  The should shaved it at the show

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 30-Episode 30 (Love for Sale)

That was great, everyone turning up and dressed to impress. I hope those Brian invited and turned up sign up with him in his new business. I hope Deb says sorry to Brian for showing him up like she did. As for Michael I need to wash my brain out from the images he put there lol. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

That's awesome that they are going to the grand reopening instead they will have so much fun. Vic getting that place to stay of his own and free is just so heartwarming. A fantastic chapter x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Episode 28 (Mixed Blessings)

Awe Brian you are so sweet I'm glad zucchini man didn't go with Brian this time x

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 27-Episode 27(Wherever That Dream May Lead You)

I really hate Lindsey and Mel, they should just sail away and leave Gus with the boys so we don't have to be in pain listening to them lol. Brian is so good helping his friend even if it is Mickey. I love Justin buying that painting I wish he had a way to tell Lindsey to well I won't use bad language lol. 

 

Fantastic work as always xx



Author's Response:

Yes, it would be nice for Mel and Lindsay to do that.  Justin is so busy this time he doesn't have time to keep up with what's going on with them, but he does have time for Gus.  Brian was always good even when he shouldn't have.  When Justin saw Adrienne he turned it around so that Lindsay couldn't use it as especially since he wasn't damaged this time.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

Omg how could Jennifer do that to her son. That is just grrrr right. So many emotions for Emmet on losing his friend I wanted so badly to hug him tight. Can you hug him for me plz. Superb chapter xx



Author's Response:

When Jennifer first showed up she wasn't very supportive.  I just decide to keep her that way.  Don't worry Emmett will always come out okay.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

I wonder will Justin win that prize it would be so cool if he did. I hated that Bullwesther guy in the show and I love what you did with him here. Awe I'm so thrilled that a Justin was there to see Gus's first steps. Incredible work x



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I may have to rewrite my rewrite.  Thanks to reviews I'm catching things I missed.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Episode 24(All Better Now)

Awe Brian that was so sweet and I can see the smile on Justin's face when he did that. You melted my heart when Gus asked good Justin when he got upset it shows how much means to him. Mickey as usual needs to grow up and grow a pair. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 30-Episode 30 (Love for Sale)

I love Brian here he looks so comfortable with his feelings for Justin. Good time.

Author's Response:

And so he should.  Your reviews make me happy.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 23 Season 2, Episode 23(Home is Where the Ass is)

It must be very strange for Justin to see the things he missed out on the last time. I'm so happy he bought the lower loft that will be so handy. Michael what can you say about him he needs to be put in his playpen if he acts anymore childish to play with his toys. I hope Brian gets custody of his son this time. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Episode 22 (Full Circle)

I am so happy that Justin and Daphne didn't go to the prom. Brian was so good for arranging what he did in Babylon for them. It really touched he did that. I feel so bad for that poor girl at the prom I hope Chris gets jail for what he did the creep. Incredible work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Episode 21(Running to Stand Still)

I do hope that Brian doesn't get the job in NY, his place and heart is in Pittsburgh with Justin. That David gives me the creeps so I'm glad he is out of town. Michael gives me piles lol . Brilliant work x

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 30-Episode 30 (Love for Sale)

love that Brian is telling Justin how he feels. This time around Justin doesn't have to wonder where he stands



Author's Response:

Thank you, that's what I felt was wrong in the series.  Though how to fix it and still keep it from being boring.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

I have always liked Ben and love that you have Justin getting to know him a little.  I like this version of Vic better too.  Vic needed to leave Deb's and be on his own.  Such a little tweak here and there makes a very different story.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 30-Episode 30 (Love for Sale)

Okay... I'm VERY confused... a White Tie was hosted in Brian's loft? with twinkling lights? Michael was in a shirt and tie? Did the other men's tuxedo's have long tails? And the women normally should have worn the old time ball gown with a tight bodice and full skirt. So, with the apparal worn, I'm not even sure that would have been a Black Tie event. Oh well... hopefully none of the anticipated clients will question it...

God, I hated that setting up of Michael getting a dating profile... talk about false info, and ridiculous... nothing like going through a dating service to get a man... especially when there is hordes in Babylon he could meet.

And I loved the touching moment at the end between Brian and Justin.

And YES! I'm all caught up!

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Well, I didn't want Justin going to frat party with Daphne.  Brian having an open house for his new agency, the one that Mikey said he was stupid to do seemed like the answer.  Of course, Brian would do formal and since Mikey didn't get his birthday party the fairy lights were available.  If you saw the episode this was based on the reworking of Mikey's profile was too funny not to include.  This Brian is more available and open to a wiser Justin.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

Wow! Some MAJOR changes...

Too bad, so sad, there is no Ben and Michael... hip, hip, hooray... I could never understand that pairing..

Other changes... I'm very surprised at it being white tie, instead of black. I never pictured Brian as the type to wear long tails and ribbon ties in his patent leather shoes... or having women wear the most elegant of formals and tiaras...

And Ben has AIDS... he's not just HIV positive? What is Vic's status supposed to be?

And no frat party... meaning no Eric! Yay!

And, I absolutely LOVE Vic's new living arrangements... he's out from under Debbie's thumb. Although I have to say, in a place that size, I'm surprised it only has a half-bath. What's he going to do for a shower or tub?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Episode 28 (Mixed Blessings)

Ah, yes... Zucchini Man. I was hoping if Brian brought the ugly sucker home, (And he WAS ugly)... that Justin would have suggested he do zucchini, and Brian do him... It would serve the guy right! LOL... (I'm cruel.)

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 27-Episode 27(Wherever That Dream May Lead You)

Aah... it's catch-up day for me. I'm graually getting some use back in my hand.

Bitch Lindsay strikes... Lord, I hope she goes to Brian and complains about Justin spending "Brian's" money to buy a painting.

It would have been nice to see Mikey not even getting the comic book store... but then I suppose there would be no Ben.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Hope your hand is better.  As for Mikey not getting the comic book store, I wish I'd thought of that, but I think Ben might of shown up anyway.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

Wow lol I can't believe they got David up on that stage. I'm so glad Justin got up there as well and still got the crown. Brian made me smile encouraging him and catching him when he jumped off the stage. Fab work x

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 30-Episode 30 (Love for Sale)

Love this story so much.  THIS TIME is so much better than last time.  Wonderful idea and writing.



Author's Response:

I never tire of hearing that you think it better than last time.  Makes me jump for joy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Wow that was a huge Change I was surprised. That Claire needs a bitch slap for saying that. It was not Brian's fault. Fantastic work. Hope you are well and safe x



Author's Response:

I always wanted to fix that, Mikey and his condisention trying to make himself out to be thoughtful.  What a bunch of bull.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

I have a bad feeling something might go wrong for Justin, I hope I'm wrong. You really have me gripped in this brilliant story. 



Author's Response:

Maybe something will go wrong, but as he knows what happened before he might be able to fix it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Michael should be ashamed of himself, how could he do that to his mother. He needs a good telling off. I seriously hope Justin can convince Brian not to give up his rights to his son. I love how much closer Brian is to Justin this time. Fabulous work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Episode 16 (French Fried)

GUI is just odd and I hope that the guys can stop this and that Brian doesn't give up his rights like he did the last time. I'm very worried things might go bad. Justin to the rescue I hope. Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Gui was odd.  So many have written stories about what he reasons were.  Hopefully mine was different.  Things might change this time.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

Brian is so cute with Gus and the idea Justin gave him for the new agency is fantastic. Gosh I hope Mel goes away and never comes back x Brilliant work c



Author's Response:

Wouldn't that be nice.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)

Way to go George, that really stuck it to Craig that made my day. Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

I would get so angry about Craig's attitude that I had to give him an attitude adjustment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

So much happening and I pray all the changes are for the better. I honestly hope Justin can convince Brian not to give up his rights to his son this time. I'm seriously loving this xx



Author's Response:

It was a tough call.  I hope I went with the right choice.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 12-Episode 12 (Move It or Lose It)

I'm so happy Brian wasn't upset with Justin taking on Mickey. Mickey does need to be put in his place. I do hope Justin can help Emmet he doesn't need to go through that again. Brilliant work xx



Author's Response:

Justin is mentally older then Mikey.  So taking him on was something that had to happen.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Episode 11 (Surprise!)

That was a good thing that Justin changed even though I don't like Mickey.  



Author's Response:

Yeah it is, isn't it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Episode 10 (Queens of the Road)

I so wanna smack Mickey he is a horrible person. I'm so intrigued as to what is going to happen next. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 9 Episode 9-(Daddy Dearest(Sonny Boy)

Justin was good to try and help Michael even though he didn't deserve it for the way he treats him. I do hope this time Brian never signs his rights away or let's them take his son to Canada. Excellent work x



Author's Response:

We have a long time before we find out about Canada.  Justin has a saying 'fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me'.  No second chances for Mikey.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 Episode 7 (Smells like Codependence)

I could really feel Justin’s anger at his sister for telling his dad about him. He should have been able to trust his sister. Michael is driving me nuts as is Mel and Deb. I hope good things are coming x



Author's Response:

Michael always drove me nuts.  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)

I hope things aren't going to differently that it would ruin things for Justin and Brian. This is such a gripping story. 



Author's Response:

Their only problems this time will be Mikey and the Girls.  Also Justin's parents.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)

I'm glad Justin was more mature with his mother at the therapist I do hope it helps makes things better. I don't like the way Deb still is with Justin, why is she like this.

 

this is brilliant work xx



Author's Response:

Deb has always been team Michael and Michael doesn't like Justin.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)

I don't like how Deb is treating Justin, he did nothing to her. Maybe Micheal is talking behind his back or something. I think Justin handles Gus perfectly when Mel started mouthing off. I really hate her so much. Can't wait for more x



Author's Response:

I have to agree with everything you said.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)

I was giddy with excitement reading this chapter. One of the best parts was Justin getting on Michaels nerves lol. I loved how Brian was in this it was seriously amazing. 



Author's Response:

Your review made me so happy!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

Lol Justin is loving this and I'm so happy he annoyed Michael. Gosh I hope this brings him and Brian even closer together. 



Author's Response:

Me too.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 -Season 1 - Episode 1(Premiere)

This is brilliant, I hope Justin takes down Michael early. I'm loving this already. Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Justin does his best to ignore Mikey.

Reviewer: Sid401k (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2020 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Well, now, that's an interesting development! My guess is advanced cirrhosis of the liver.



Author's Response:

Actually I think it was an anerouisum.  The shock of meeting Justin?

Reviewer: Sid401k (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2020 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)

So if Brian didn't go to the bris at all, then Gus got circumsized this time 'round. Maybe that will diminish some of Melanie's hostility going forward?



Author's Response:

I hadn't thought about that.  You could be right.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2020 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

Another good twist. I am happy for Vic he deserves to leave Deb quickly she infantilizes him and Ben deserves better than Michael.

Author's Response:

I agree.  This time I think Ben sees Mikey for who he really is.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2020 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

I love all these changes. Poor little m
Mikey is feeling left out. Ha ha

Author's Response:

Mikey needs an attitude adjust men.  Maybe I'll write something based on just him and correct all the times he erked me.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2020 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

Wow, great chapter.  Love this time so much more than the original.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you, making changes feels great.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2020 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

Again a lovely twist I am so enjoying this fic

Author's Response:

Glad to know.

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2020 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

Oh dear, Debs will not be pleased.  Can hear the screeching from here!

Thanks for update, take care.

Deb L.



Author's Response:

She deserves not to be happy.  She took Vic for granted.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2020 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

Love the update.

Happy Easter and stay save



Author's Response:

I miss going to the store to buy Easter candy.  Ordering online isn't the same.  Hope your Easter was enjoyable.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

Pride. I liked some of your changes. If Michael was only aware it was Justin's suggestion he dress like Godiva, you know he never would have done it.

Jennifer is a downright bitch in this story. But, WHY does she need Justin to finance her leaving Craig? She was awarded $100,000 at the reading of the will. So, I'm REALLY cofused about that.

And they still danced...

HUGS  ~Cathy

BTW... it's Porgy and Bess... not Porky and Bess. That was a fantastic black movie in the late 50s, with the great Sidney Poitier and Sammy Davis Jr. along with the beautiful Diahann Carroll.



Author's Response:

Justin was already aware that Mikey had done it before so he had no trouble suggesting it.  This Jennifer isn't very bright.  Craig suggests that she hit Justin up for more money while he uses the money she was left and she buys it!  

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

Well, I've been recording my reviews, and since my hand has a LITTLE feeling today, I'm going to try and get some posted.

I enjoyed this. I hope we hear how the comic drawing award goes. I know Justin will win hands down.I can just imagine what a trip to LA for Brian and Justin would be like. Just so Mikey doesn't get any idea about drawing a comic from that.

I could just hear the petulance in Michael's voice when he asked why Justin was at the Comic-Con. Good for Brian bringing him along.

HUGS  ~Cathy

 



Author's Response:

Hope your hand is much better.  I'll have to check and see what I wrote for the comic drawing award, but I know that Justin won I just may have not included it into the story.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2020 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Episode 28 (Mixed Blessings)

thanks for update

stay save

Angelika



Author's Response:

Hope your family is safe.  At least reading helps.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2020 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Episode 28 (Mixed Blessings)

It was calm this time. No drama it feels good.

Author's Response:

Can't have drama all the time.  I'm hoping to fix some of the drama with my changes.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2020 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Episode 28 (Mixed Blessings)

Great chapter.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I try.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2020 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 27-Episode 27(Wherever That Dream May Lead You)

I don't really like this episode in the series but your twist makes it better, especially with Adrienne. Lindsay is still a bitch but can't take all the credit. Someone paid the deposit? How can she be there?

Author's Response:

What deposit?  Are you talking about Daphne or Lindsay?  

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2020 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 27-Episode 27(Wherever That Dream May Lead You)

Great chapter. As I have said loved this version.  Wonderful writiing.



Author's Response:

You say the sweetest things.  

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2020 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 27-Episode 27(Wherever That Dream May Lead You)

thanks for update



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2020 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

Thank you for the update. Justin's money change all. And his relationship with Brian is better. I love your little twists that make such a difference

Author's Response:

Thank you!  This review makes me very happy.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2020 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

I'm enjoying Brian being the supportive Boyfriend in this universe. And Justin having money is a great twist. He doesn't have to ask for help and he doesn't need to feel that Brian is doing things for him because he needs money.  I can't wait to see the next twist in the story.



Author's Response:

Mikey's constant harping about Justin only being with Brian for his money had me wishing to change that.  So I did!

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2020 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

Great update.  Wonderful writing.  Good luck with the ceiling.  I have popcorn where I live and it is in good shape and I actually like it.  Hope all is well with you.



Author's Response:

I'm retired so things are the same as before here.  We have one more room with popcorn and all the time in the world to remove it.  Hope everyone is doing okay during these trying times.  Thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2020 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

Thanks for this chapter.  I am really loving this story.  Are you still going to post this on KD?

Deb L



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're loving this story!  I only have 16 reviews so I pulled it from KD until later.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2020 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

thanks for update



Author's Response:

You're very welcome.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2020 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

Well, it was nice to see Howard get his comeuppance.   He always seemed like he was better than everyone else when he was actually promoting everything he himself was against.   



Author's Response:

Amazing how two face he was.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2020 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Episode 24(All Better Now)

Great chapter!!!   How sweet is it that Gus loves Justin?   

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2020 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

Lol yay up yours Bellweather good job Justin

Author's Response:

Oddly enough Justin wasn't aware of Bellweather's behavior last Time.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2020 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

I like this one. Bellweather deserved it. Thank you

Author's Response:

Once Ted and Michael found out about Bellweather, letting him get away with it seemed unfair.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2020 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

Love the backdrop of Bellweather-  I'm loving this series.  Very intersting seeing how things are panning out with Justin's information.



Author's Response:

Hindsight is great.  Of course, some of it Justin didn't know about.

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2020 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

Still loving this!

Deb L



Author's Response:

Glad to know.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2020 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

Great update.  Didn't like Bedwetter as someone called him.  Terrific writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Your comment is very uplifting.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2020 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

thanks for update.  you are a tease-have wait again for a whole week



Author's Response:

I know. : (

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2020 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Episode 22 (Full Circle)

Brian taking Justin and Daphne out of town-  how sweet-  but loved the prom at Babylon.  So glad that Justin didn't get bashed, but feel badly for the girl that Hobbes raped.  Hopefully they will find a good lawyer.



Author's Response:

They did find a good lawyer and it wasn't Melanie.  I wish I could have found another way for Hobbes to get his, but I couldn't.  Glad you enjoyed this, at least I hope so.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2020 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Episode 24(All Better Now)

I KNOW this is fanfiction... but I just have to say...

HOW THE HELL IS LINDSAY RELEASED???

She should have had a 5 year senence and $250,000 fine. (I've been researching crime punishments for my own story.) WOW!

(I know, I know, she has scenes coming up.) But, the courts should have removed her rights... she was after-all, using Gus in a federal lie.

What a whiny, immature baby Michael is... let's crash Lynette's wedding... what an A-Hole. Then he's all woe is me... I'm being left behind!

I really hope he doesn't get the money for the comic shop, although if there is no RAGE, his shop just might go belly-up.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Melanie is not the brightest when it comes to Lindsay.  Justin isn't going to make waves about it espicially if he's not told what's happening.  Michael will always be Michael.  I have to reread what I've written to see what changes I've made.  LOL.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2020 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 23 Season 2, Episode 23(Home is Where the Ass is)

This was good. Yay... the conniving bitch went to jail. She was warned and warned. But, oh no, Lindsay knew best. It serves her right.

How much time did she get??? Did she get a hefty fine too? (evil grin.)

Ah, yes... coming back from Portland... Go home, Michael. Go home. (I love that little saying.) So, every time when he shows up at the loft when they are working:

Go home, Michael. Go home. LOL...

Hallelujah... Hobbs is in prison... couldn't happen to a nicer guy. (Don't drop the soap!)

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Yes, Lindsay did go to jail, but Justin wasn't really involved except for making sure she didn't get away with her plan.  He's more or less decided to ignor Michael as much as possible for Brian's sake.  Hobbs needed to not get away with what he'd done.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2020 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Episode 24(All Better Now)

As usual a wonderful recreation of the events with a great twists

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Find something you dislike and rework it is my motto.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2020 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Episode 24(All Better Now)

Oh yes it's all better! Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

LOL.  Their title for the episode worked out.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2020 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Episode 24(All Better Now)

thanks for update



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  : )

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2020 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Episode 24(All Better Now)

Great chapter.  I loved the scene of Brian trying to put the swing set together.  He was so handsome.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

I like Justin being there and suggesting they hire someone to put the swing set together.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2020 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 23 Season 2, Episode 23(Home is Where the Ass is)

Yeah, I think with Michael being away, the gang pretty much grew up.   Now that Michael has returned, they are starting to see things pretty clearly and realizing that he is pretty much an overgrown child.   



Author's Response:

Now if Michael could only see that.  I could change it, but I love anti-Michael too much.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2020 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 23 Season 2, Episode 23(Home is Where the Ass is)

Always Michael wanting to be the center of the world and who doesn't understand that people change. Great update.

Author's Response:

The story changes but Michael stays the same.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2020 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 23 Season 2, Episode 23(Home is Where the Ass is)

Great update.  Love this story.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

I will never tire of reading reviews like this.  Thank you.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2020 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 23 Season 2, Episode 23(Home is Where the Ass is)

Just read the last 2 chapters. Emmett's 'prom' was great - much better than the original. Glad that Hobbs was convicted - hate it when lawyers turn on the true victim - happens far too often in reality - espiecially rape cases. Michael - as always - is a dick...



Author's Response:

Well this chapter was all about corrections and Hobbs was not going to get away with his dispicable act.  Not this time. 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2020 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 23 Season 2, Episode 23(Home is Where the Ass is)

thanks for update, love it



Author's Response:

Glad to know that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Episode 22 (Full Circle)

Why should Brian weigh in on this, it was Michael's life... because Michael has a pea brain that causes him to not be able to think and make a decision for himself????

And you got me with their prom night. I'm a sucker for 'Justin remembering the prom' stories. One of my guilty pleasures. And it choked me up...

But, you just had to throw the Daphne-scenario in there. I felt sick...

Did you ever read butterflytiger's Ruined? I just dread stories like that...

Thank you for making it a memorable night for Justin...

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

I know but I needed something where Hobbs paid for doing wrong.  It's a shame that someone had to suffer though.  At least the victem got justice.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Episode 21(Running to Stand Still)

This was pretty much the standard show episode, but you totally cracked me up at the end: but since he hoped differently... LOL... Good luck with that. David won't want his whiny ass anymore this time, than last.

Good Job!

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Episode 22 (Full Circle)

It's a very good idea for Prom Daphne and Justin had a good time and Hobbs went to jail.

Author's Response:

I always felt that Hobbs shouldn't have gotten off Scot free.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2020 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

Once again, I'm chuckling. Some of your rewrites can do that to a person.

First, just because Justin gave the CROWN to David, JUSTIN still won. So, Justin should get the thousand and the Bahamas trip. I couldn't quite figure that one out.

Well, long and short of it... Michael had to eat his words. Justin didn't make a fool of himself... and David out-danced most of the other guys. (Even at his advanced age.)

I'm sure it was all of Michael's grumbling about Blake that had ticked Ted off that he signed David up. Michael really wasn't a very good friend to any of those guys when it came right down to it. He could have also still been pissy about "their invitations being lost in the mail" for Senator Baxters party.

My Favorite line of this chapter: Brian had gone along because he hadn't wanted people to think he was a kept man.

That is SO CLASSIC Kinney... Touché !!!

In regards to Brian being put on suspension and possibly losing his job... WHY HASN'T HE WRUNG MICHAEL'S NECK - LITERALLY???

But, why is that holding up him opening his own agency? I would think that would push him to get it started.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

It does eventually.  But as alway Michael's comments get in the way, but Mikey's slowly losing control.  Thank you for the lovely comments.

Reviewer: BBQueen (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2020 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 -Season 1 - Episode 1(Premiere)

Love this story.  Cant wait for more.  Michael sucks so much. Love how Brianis so open with him and Justin. Keep up the great work.   



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'll try.

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

Wanted you to know I really love this story. Hope to see you post again soon.  Thank for the good read.



Author's Response:

Thank you, it's nice to know that you are enjoying this.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

I love this story do much. I can't wait for you to post more. I never want it to end. LMAO. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

At this rate it may never end. LOL.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

I'm glad that Justin won again, but thought it was a great gesture to give the crown to David.   It ticked Michael off, so that's always a win-win.    LOL



Author's Response:

Ticking Michael off is so much fun.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

The changes are very subtle but they are there and make everything even better! Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  That's what I was hoping for.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

Lol funny chapter I had actually forgotten all the stuff in that episode

Author's Response:

Some of the stuff in certain episodes are difficult to figure in because Justin wasn't aware but a few changes here and there and it works.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 -Season 1 - Episode 1(Premiere)

I am so loving this story and am especially enjoying some of the subtle little changes and details you are treating us to. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

Still intrigued and looking forward to more subtle changes. I like that Ted entered David into the competition and of course Michael is still a 'pain in the arse'.



Author's Response:

Hehe.  Getting even with Mikey is the main theme here.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2020 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

I like This Time better for this episode.  Your rewriting of each episode is amazing.  What a fantastic idea.



Author's Response:

Thank you a high compliment indeed.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2020 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)

thanks for an ealy update.  now another week wating *sniff*



Author's Response:

Sorry, but life is getting difficult.  Hope you find it worth the wait.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2020 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

I don't know if you intended for the funeral to be a comedy routine, but I about died laughing! (it makes me think of another funeral story, but I can't remember which one.)

Where's Debbie when you need her? With Horvath showing up... Then with her idiot son...

Michael and his BIG MOUTH! Cripes! Because of him, the police are now questioning Brian and telling him not to leave town. Man, I hope Brian wrings his bloody neck! I gather there won't be any scene between Brian and Michael in the loft after the funeral... THANK GOD!!!!

And no Daphne and Justin... another screw-up of Cowlips! (Thank you for all your fixes!)

Are Melanie and Lindsay supposed to be together? Where's Gui? We never heard of him leaving...

So, what is Michael dealing with that Brian is spending so much time with him?

I'm interested in knowing how far into the series you plan to go? Are you going to do all 83 episodes?

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Let me see if I can answer all your questions.  I'm glad you found the funeral fun because I was chuckling the whole time I was writing it.  Deb is still on the outs with Justin and her meeting Horvath early wouldn't help.  Let's face it Michael often said things that had Brian looking bad and weren't even true.  At the moment Justin hasn't had any contact with the two, so we don't know what happened.  If Melanie was smart she wouldn't take Lindsay back, but Mel isn't the most sensible afterall she did pick Michael to father her daughter.  A big mistake in my opinion.  Michael is dealing with David, he does nothing but complain about the man but because he doesn't have anyone courting him he keeps dating him.  I'm trying to do all 83 episodes, but some of the changes make certain episodes redundant.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Well, I certainly didn't expect that!!   Joan finds out Brian is gay, and dies of shock!!   I am just loving the fact that Brian is way more outgoing with Justin this time around, and isn't having any problems with everyone knowing all about the two of them, either!!



Author's Response:

I do feel that Joanie dying saves Brian a whole lot of pain.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

I did not expect that. The autopsy will only reveal the heart attack. I'm glad Justin is with Brian this time Michael is so useless.

Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not.  Mikey was his usual self pointing out what he felt Brian was doing wrong.  Good thing Justin was there to keep things in prospective.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

OK. This was right out of left field. Did not see that happening.

Author's Response:

That's good, right?

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Wow, wasn't expecting that.  Great update.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Surprise!  When I was writing this chapter it just kinda took a twist.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

thanks for update.  Bummer I have to wait a week



Author's Response:

Sorry.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

And the plot thickens. I'm very intrigued. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Yep, of course it does mess with the episodes where Joanie showed up.  No showing up at Brian's office or chocolate, chocolate chip cake.  

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Oh boy.   Horvath can't really believe that Brian killed his mother.



Author's Response:

Horvath doesn't know Brian.  This was before he met Deb which could be a good thing.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2020 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

I was not expecting that at all. Justin should use Jack's dead to get Brian tested for cancer or something. More please!

Author's Response:

That's an idea.  Wish I'd thought of it.  He does eventually get Brian to get tested if that helps.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2020 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Lol another twist excellent great chapter

Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  I enjoyed writing this chapter.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2020 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

You know... I always thought Mikey should have been glad and grateful he was wanted to be picked up...

I really like how you're able to come up with scenarios for Justin to find out things. It takes Brian being a little more open and accepting of Justin... but hey... that's a good thing!

I'm anxiously waiting for immigration to knock on Lindsay's door... isn't it past time for her and Gui's wedding? Hehe... maybe they secretly went through with it.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Anything is possible.  I know I did something about this but I don't remember what chapter it was in.  Just remember the government works slowly.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

I want more and more and more and... More!!!

Author's Response:

Don't worry.  I do have more and I hope you continue to want to read.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

It's difficult for Justin to fix things when he doesn't know what happened the first time, but he does very well. Are you going to tell us what happened to Lindsay?

Author's Response:

Yes.  It turns up in the next few chapters.  But like with Mikey she can't simply disappear.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

So hard at times for Justin to navigate history when he didn’t know what was going on at times. You do a great job running different scenarios to meet the outcomes

Author's Response:

I try my best.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

Great update.  Love This Time better than the original in so many ways.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Glad you are liking my changes.  It's something I've wanted to do for awhile.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2020 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

thanks for update



Author's Response:

You're welcome.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Great idea to call immigration. I hope Lindsay and Gui will end up in jail. I also hope that in your story Michael will not be forgiven as easily as in the series for his shabby behavior.

Author's Response:

You'll learn more about what happens to Lindsay in later chapters.  Michael won't be forgiven at least not by Justin.  However he does need to be around for bad guy status.  One thing for sure he doesn't get Ben.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

It is so clever how Justin can gently manipulate Brian’s responses to the actions with the power of hindsight

Author's Response:

Hindsight does help. 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

great.  Thanks for update



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  Hope you liked it.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Sneaky Justin.  Good job.  Never liked Gui.



Author's Response:

Yep, Justin can be very sneaky.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

Daycare is a great idea.  Justin continues to remember problems and come up with great solutions.



Author's Response:

It did block Mel and her attitude.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)

I like how Justin's uncle was gay and left a hefty inheritance to him.  Sneaky Kip, but I did like how Justin tried to trick him inot not getting to Brian.  So happy that Brian is accpeting Justin's help.



Author's Response:

Justin not having to worry about tuition was a surprise to him and now Kinnetik can get off the ground earlier.  I like that Brian didn't diss Justin, but included him when Kip came calling.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

A much older and wiser Justin is filled with lots of good ideas.  



Author's Response:

Yet he still looks so young. Haha!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 12-Episode 12 (Move It or Lose It)

Finally had time to catch up on this AU.   I like how Brian is believing Justin that Michael is a pain.   Justin seems to be navigating this new universe pretty well.  Love the rewriting of the script.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  There were certain things I just had to change.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  There were certain things I just had to change.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Wonderful update... totally loved the ending:

The next day Justin made an anonymous call to Immigration. I can hardly wait to see how you play this out. Will they deport Gui earlier than planned (which doesn't seem the way Immigration would handle something like that.) BUT... if Immigration comes knocking on Lindsay's door, Lindsay is bound to get in trouble.

Marriage Fraud is a federal crime; they can be imprisoned for not more than five years, or fined not more than $250,000, or both.

(I highly doubt Brian's got the money to bail out his friend.) hehe...

My big question is: Who is Lindsay going to blame for the leak to Immigration?

I REALLY HOPE Mr. Snob isn't forgiven so easily... yeah Deb will probably allow her baby back in the fold like he didn't rip her heart out... but with Brian and Ted starting Kinnetik, they won't have time to say, "That's okay, Mikey." He spits on them, yet, thinks he should be forgiven.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

What's even worse is that she was involving Gus in a federal crime.  Something Mel should have warned her about.  The question about who Lindsay is going to blame is a good one.  You'll just have to wait and see.  Justin doesn't have time to worry about Mikey.  

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Oh this is getting really good.  Love it.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Thank you for the wonderful review.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Thank you for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Good for Justin. Someone finally used their head.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I like Justin to come out ahead.

Reviewer: BBQueen (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 -Season 1 - Episode 1(Premiere)

Im so glad you updated.  I always wondered why immigration was never called.  Glad justin is doing that...love this story..plz keep going



Author's Response:

Somewhere there was a part where justice was served but I can't seem to find it.

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