Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2020 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Well... I've been sitting here for a few minutes in utter shock after reading this last chapter. (And now I'm at a loss for words as to what to say.)

Well, let's start with the women... I would presume Lindsay will have to be checked into a psyche ward, because how to you come back mentally after sawing someone's hand off?

That said, I don't see how Melanie's hand will be able to be saved. My husband got his gloved fingers caught in the sawmill chain, and two of the tips were sawed off, and even though the tips of his fingers were still encased in the glove, and put in a baggie with ice, they couldn't do replantation, because of the damage to the tendons. He was told by the surgeon that rarely are they able to replant a whole thumb, so I just can't see where they will be able to replant a whole hand. WAY too much nerve and tendon damage. And with one of the main arteries being severed, I'm not sure how she didn't bleed out before help got there. On the flip side, as far as my husband's accident ... it gave him great pleasure telling all ten grandkids that he lost them wrestling with a bear. I think some of the younger ones still believe that.

On to Michael... yeah, the crazy mother... when Michael attacked Justin with a lamp in my story, Blinded, he ended up in a padded cell in straight-jacket. LOL... So, I'm really curious what the outcome will be to all of this. Will a miracle surgery happen? Will Lindsay say, oh well, she didn't need the hand after all?  Will Michael plead temporary insanity, and get off? Maybe Deb can hand out sexual favors to bribe the judge.... (Yeah, I'm LMAO here!)

So, all-in-all, I don't know if I should be horrified at this turn of events, or continue laughing thinking about all the scenarios you could come up with.

Great Job!

Hugs ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

I'm definately going to have to reread Blinded.  I always enjoy your stories.  Mine don't always make sense since I don't always know where I'm going and my weird sense of humor comes in at the strangest times.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Twists and more twists-  Melanie in the hospital with hand cut off and Micahel trying to bash Justin.  Hopefully, whoever was hit with the lamp was not seriously hurt.  Michael needs help-  lots of it and Brian would do good to steer really far away from him.



Author's Response:

Some days you gotta love making things worse.  

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Please don't keep us waiting to long to read what happens next. I just discovered your story and could not stop until I had gone through all the chapters. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  My problem is when others post I HAVE to read their stories making posting mine take a little longer.

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Not fair leaving such a cliffhanger!  You should be punished!

Now we have to wait a week to see what happens to Mikey the Moron!!!

Ta

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Cliffhangers.  Well, I had to stop somewhere.  Sorry.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

I'm so enjoying this story. It makes my day when I see new chapters posted :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  You've made my day by saying this.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

OMG what is happening?

Lindsay cut Mel's hand off? Weren't they watching the how to videos starring the lady with the pearl necklace? Ha! Is Leda going to make her appearence to help out with the renovations and whatever else?

Michael  Michael Michael.

Stealing Ted's keys and making a copy was bad enough. Ignoring Brian's request for him to give it back and then attacking Justin in his own home, trying to attack him while he was holding Gus. What a stupid ass. Like Brian would now be willing to help him out of this jam or help with anything else.

Stupid stupid stupid

Someone better press charges.



Author's Response:

I think they must have been watching while trying to do it and that was the problem.  Yes Leda will make an appearance but since Justin wasn't aware of the threesome during the first time even if it repeats itself he might not know.  Michael got so carried away with being stupid, but I think Deb is going to outdo him.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Wow that's crazy, will Mel be ok. I do hope the boys get custody of Gus. As for Mikey he is crazy I was so shocked. Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Sorry about that, but I couldn't resist.  I know in real life Mel would have difficulties I can only say it probably wasn't as bad as it seemed.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Oh yes please take out the best friend who steals and attacks to make his way where he is not wanted! I hope the girls will be able to move forward and forgive themselves.

Author's Response:

When I wrote this chapter it went a little into left field.  For some reason the girls fixing up their attic shifted and Mikey went skitso.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Oh my god! Michael has finally lost his mind and hopefully his friends and freedom. What a wonderful surprise.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Omg cliff hanger grrr

Author's Response:

Sorry about that.  ; )

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