Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For This Time
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2020 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 33 Episode 33 (The Wedding)

Haha, Lindsay! Brian giving the tickets to Melanie first, so Mel was aware of it! IF Brian took the tickets back, HOW would Lindsay have explained that she gave up a trip to Miami to spend with her - WIFE - preferring that Brian go instead?

Then her simpering: "Justin, dear, this is between Brian and me," almost had me wanting to strangle her! But, oh how perfect it would have been if Brian grabbed the tickets back from her, saying, "You'e right, Linds. You and Melanie can not go on a honeymoon, instead staying home and taking care of Gus. I'll take Justin instead!"

Could you just SEE her face? And yeah, I think Melanie just MIGHT have canceled the wedding!

I know Mysterious Marilyn was around during that time in canon, but the fact she pointed out to Justin that he had a double life-line, I'm wondering if my thoughts on this whole "This Time" ... might just happen to be right.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Lindsay always seemed to discount Justin.  Not going to work this time.  What are your thoughts, so I can tell you whether you're right?

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2020 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 33 Episode 33 (The Wedding)

I could feel Justin’s panic when Mysterious Marilyn began to read him he didn't want things to go to wild. I'm so glad Brian made the choice he did and Justin’s smile as his reaction was so perfect. It made me smile. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Your thoughts on this chapter make me happy.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2020 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 33 Episode 33 (The Wedding)

I love Brian's solution of watching Gus.  Mel and LInds really should never have gotten married-  they like the idea better than the reality



Author's Response:

You're so right.  The only problem is if they didn't get married this story would be so much shorter.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2020 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 33 Episode 33 (The Wedding)

That sounds a easier time for the girls and the fact that Lindsay was snookered made me laugh

Author's Response:

There are easier times and then reality.  Glad it made you laugh.  I try so hard.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2020 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 33 Episode 33 (The Wedding)

It's so much better that Brian stayed firm on the tickets so they had a great time with Gus. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

They did have a good time with Gus, much better then going to the White Party even if he went with Justin.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2020 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 33 Episode 33 (The Wedding)

thanks for updates



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  You make me happy reading this.

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