Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

I have a bad feeling something might go wrong for Justin, I hope I'm wrong. You really have me gripped in this brilliant story.

Author's Response:
Maybe something will go wrong, but as he knows what happened before he might be able to fix it.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2020 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

You know... I always thought Mikey should have been glad and grateful he was wanted to be picked up...

I really like how you're able to come up with scenarios for Justin to find out things. It takes Brian being a little more open and accepting of Justin... but hey... that's a good thing!

I'm anxiously waiting for immigration to knock on Lindsay's door... isn't it past time for her and Gui's wedding? Hehe... maybe they secretly went through with it.

HUGS ~Cathy

Author's Response:
Anything is possible. I know I did something about this but I don't remember what chapter it was in. Just remember the government works slowly.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

I want more and more and more and... More!!!

Author's Response:
Don't worry. I do have more and I hope you continue to want to read.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

It's difficult for Justin to fix things when he doesn't know what happened the first time, but he does very well. Are you going to tell us what happened to Lindsay?

Author's Response:
Yes. It turns up in the next few chapters. But like with Mikey she can't simply disappear.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

So hard at times for Justin to navigate history when he didn’t know what was going on at times. You do a great job running different scenarios to meet the outcomes

Author's Response:
I try my best.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2020 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

Great update. Love This Time better than the original in so many ways. Wonderful writing.

Author's Response:
Glad you are liking my changes. It's something I've wanted to do for awhile.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2020 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 18-Episode 18(Surprise Kill)

thanks for update

Author's Response:
You're welcome.

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