Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Michael should be ashamed of himself, how could he do that to his mother. He needs a good telling off. I seriously hope Justin can convince Brian not to give up his rights to his son. I love how much closer Brian is to Justin this time. Fabulous work x

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Great idea to call immigration. I hope Lindsay and Gui will end up in jail. I also hope that in your story Michael will not be forgiven as easily as in the series for his shabby behavior.

Author's Response:

You'll learn more about what happens to Lindsay in later chapters.  Michael won't be forgiven at least not by Justin.  However he does need to be around for bad guy status.  One thing for sure he doesn't get Ben.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

It is so clever how Justin can gently manipulate Brian’s responses to the actions with the power of hindsight

Author's Response:

Hindsight does help. 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

great.  Thanks for update



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  Hope you liked it.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Sneaky Justin.  Good job.  Never liked Gui.



Author's Response:

Yep, Justin can be very sneaky.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Wonderful update... totally loved the ending:

The next day Justin made an anonymous call to Immigration. I can hardly wait to see how you play this out. Will they deport Gui earlier than planned (which doesn't seem the way Immigration would handle something like that.) BUT... if Immigration comes knocking on Lindsay's door, Lindsay is bound to get in trouble.

Marriage Fraud is a federal crime; they can be imprisoned for not more than five years, or fined not more than $250,000, or both.

(I highly doubt Brian's got the money to bail out his friend.) hehe...

My big question is: Who is Lindsay going to blame for the leak to Immigration?

I REALLY HOPE Mr. Snob isn't forgiven so easily... yeah Deb will probably allow her baby back in the fold like he didn't rip her heart out... but with Brian and Ted starting Kinnetik, they won't have time to say, "That's okay, Mikey." He spits on them, yet, thinks he should be forgiven.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

What's even worse is that she was involving Gus in a federal crime.  Something Mel should have warned her about.  The question about who Lindsay is going to blame is a good one.  You'll just have to wait and see.  Justin doesn't have time to worry about Mikey.  

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Oh this is getting really good.  Love it.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Thank you for the wonderful review.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Thank you for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Episode 17(Solution)

Good for Justin. Someone finally used their head.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I like Justin to come out ahead.

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