Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
Way to go George, that really stuck it to Craig that made my day. Fantastic work x
Author's Response: I would get so angry about Craig's attitude that I had to give him an attitude adjustment.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
I like how Justin's uncle was gay and left a hefty inheritance to him. Sneaky Kip, but I did like how Justin tried to trick him inot not getting to Brian. So happy that Brian is accpeting Justin's help.
Author's Response: Justin not having to worry about tuition was a surprise to him and now Kinnetik can get off the ground earlier. I like that Brian didn't diss Justin, but included him when Kip came calling.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
First, thank you for the long chapter, and I have to say, I like and approve of the story arc changes. I like the new character introduction of Mark, and who couldn't love Uncle George... God rest his soul.
I have to wonder what Craig did to George that his hand was severely burned and claw-like.
Jennifer is an ass... and she's wrong... they DO NOT have two hundred thousand dollars... One hundred thousand is Molly's - held in trust by Mark. How does she figure that's theirs? How do they plan to get their hands on it? Jen should take the money and run... Craig will probably burn it up on his whores.
So, Marcus got nothing? I'm assuming Justin received a very nice mansion in the bequeathment. But, I'm a little confused regarding the emancipation. Justin told Ryder he was 18. Eighteen is considered an adult... thus no reason to file emancipation, and Craig would have had no right to Justin's money.
Will Brian agree to live in Justin's new mansion? It has to be a mansion if Uncle George had that much money.
Well, screw Ryder and Kip. Ryder should have been informed that Kip made a play for Brian and was rebuffed... thus the act of getting Justin fired. Well, with Brian quitting, maybe he can clue Marty in. I hope Ryder goes bankrupt, and Kip will lose his job. I REALLY hope Brian and Justin run into Kip, and Brian tells the sniveling baby to go screw someone who wants him... oh yeah... he's ugly... and probably can't find anyone. But Brian needs to humiliate him publicly.
Kiki needs to pull Brian aside and tell him what Debbie was doing to Justin. Hmm... maybe Justin and Brian can boycott the diner. What a witch!
And KINNETIK is born!!! At least with this change of events, Michael can't ever accuse Justin of being with Brian for his money... or using him.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: While Craig would have no rights to Justin's money, he would try to get it anyway. With the emancipation whether Justin needed it or not, it did block Craig. There's lots more coming, twist and turns I hope will surprise you.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2020 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
Well, sorry to hear about Justin's Uncle George passing, but what an amazing turn of events. Now Justin won't have to work at the diner with Deb anymore, who by the way, I'm really waiting for someone (Brian would be great) to knock her down a few pegs. And Kip, while he thought he was accomplishing something by getting Justin fired, basically just got his by Brian getting ready to quit and start his own agency. Loved it!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this. Justin needed to have money and so Uncle George was born.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
thanks for update
Author's Response: You're very much welcome.
Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
Oh yes, I forgot about Debbie. She steals Justin's tips?
Author's Response: Debbie was getting sneaky, much to Kiki's disappointment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
It was so good. Justin can help Brian make Kinnetic. it was only Kip who still found a way to harm someone. I like the turn that history takes. Debbie's behavior is quite miserable.
Author's Response: Kip's messing with Justin hurts Ryder since he'll no longer have Brian being brilliant. And Brian doesn't miss out on his trip to the Bahamas.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
Woohoo this is so much fun reviewing the series and putting little twists on them.
Yay money for the new agency and Justin did not have to suck weasel Kips dick!
Author's Response: Kip didn't get a chance to try to mess with Brian thanks to Justin.
Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
OMG! What a strong chapter. Kip the rat is an idiot. Craigs brother knew him well, I hope Jennifer can it see it too. Soon! Brian gets the money he need. I'm happy for him. Justin deserves some relaxation. Thank you!
Author's Response: In looking for ways to make things go better for Brian with Justin's help I had to give another character that wasn't there a way to be of help.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
Debbie stealing tips??? Her whole attitude is very suspicious - makes me wonder what she knows and what she's up to... Kip is a slimball - as always... Love the new twist... Some heads are going to expode - looking forward to it - you know Debbie...Michael...Ryder...
Author's Response: When you really look back Deb wasn't as supportive as she claimed to be. Sometimes writing a certain scene you can't help but put in twists that hopefully no one would expect.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Episode 14(A Change of Heart)
Wow, this was great. So much better than the original except for adding Kip. What a weasel he is. LOL. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response: Unfortunatly Kip will always come off as bad.
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