Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

So much happening and I pray all the changes are for the better. I honestly hope Justin can convince Brian not to give up his rights to his son this time. I'm seriously loving this xx



Author's Response:

It was a tough call.  I hope I went with the right choice.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

A much older and wiser Justin is filled with lots of good ideas.  



Author's Response:

Yet he still looks so young. Haha!

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

Aargh... I just lost my review...

I'm so happy that Brian decided to start his own agency - even a few years early... and asked Justin to join him... that should chap Mikey's ass.

I was a little confused:

"He actually admitted lying to me!"  Brian growled.

It came out of the blue... no precursor as to who lied or about what... and then nothing reiterated after that. (Did Kip maybe admit Ryder didn't ask him to sit in on the meeting?) But, why would Brian be mad at Ryder for that?

Trouble's brewing at Chez Muncher's. Gui... Parental Rights...

Justin needs to figure out how to bite this in the bud. (This was when Melanie cheated - right?)

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Thanks to your review I added a bit more hopefully making it clearer. 

Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2020 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

Brian is so much more open and I love it. They are so close. You can feel more trust from Brian. Brian and Justin forever <3 You write so beautifully! Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Now that was very nice of you to say.  Michael has less say in how Brian should live his life has left Brian being more open.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2019 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

I am all for Brian starting his agency now vs. later.  And I definitely hope Justin is able to somehow stop Brian from giving up his rights to Gus, even if Melanie and Lindsay stay together.   I never liked that he did that.     



Author's Response:

I never liked it either.  That and the fact that Lindsay almost got away with an illegallity.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2019 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

Great twist I did wonder how you would spin this good job

Author's Response:

The twists will be coming soon in the next few chapters.  Hope you like them.



Author's Response:

The twists will be coming soon in the next few chapters.  Hope you like them.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2019 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

It was great and Brian is going to set up his agency. I can't wait to see how you're going to prevent Brian from losing his rights to Gus because of the French.guy.

Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy what I have planned for the French guy.  

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2019 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 13- Episode 13 (Very Stupid People)

Oh, this is so good.  You are great a rewriting the original scenes.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you, your comment makes me happy.

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